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ArHi OneShot |What You Dream Of| (Page 8)

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
You weren't kidding when you said it was different from what you usually write. It was written beautifully as always, however. Arnav did need to feel guilty; the endless taunts and mistrust were abundant, and apologies are not nearly enough to make up for them. 

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 2:36pm | IP Logged
well what else did he expect from her
to smile convincingly while being hurt
when the one person who could have made her dreams and wishes come true do this to her
when the one she thought she loved and trusted broke her little by little

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
An amazing and emotional one shot, 

Love the fact it was based on Arnav's point of view and thinking how he has treated Khushi and the guilt and regret finally hitting him.

It was written beautifully and a brilliant read,

Even though I love all the different concepts of your writing, you should definitely write more based on Arnav's guilt, you wrote this perfectly. 

I would love to read a continuation, maybe khushi's point of view or at least Arnav giving Khushi a choice whether she wants to stay with him.

Totally agree with you, did not like Arnav at this stage of the serial, why did he still have the upper hand even after he forced her into the marriage and called her characterless, I will never understand. 

Thanks for the PM xx 


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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 6:08pm | IP Logged
That was brilliantly written, those words were so heartbreaking, especially as they were said after she had risked her life for him.

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
*sigh*

I really have no idea what to say... This one was just beautiful ! Every word, describes Khushi and Arnav's pain too ! Believe me, when many authors here write stories, its usually focussed on the pain of one person. but the way you;ve brought the analogy in Arnav and Khushi's pain through her dream, is just wonderful !

Loved it Nafi ! Hope you;re settling well !

PS : Sorry for the late comment ! Hostel settling happening !

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
I think it is awesome!  Sweet analysis of self realization. You could move the story forward if you wanted. It would be interesting to see where you take it from here for arnav to redeem himself!,

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Posted: 20 August 2013 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Brilliant...Beautifully written as always.

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