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ArHi OneShot |What You Dream Of| (Page 7)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 1:17pm | IP Logged

Very much the Arnav in pain and guilt!!!!!!!1 The realisation was very beautifully portrayed!!!! The last few lines very aptly summed up his actions and words over the past one year n how he is the sole reason for Khushi to age beyond her years; he is the reason for her tears, grief n loneliness!!!!!

A splendid rendition of the remorseful Arnav... Loved ittt!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
beautiful

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
well written..

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Beautifully writtenClap

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Have to agree with Angelteen on this Wink

But it's true - BEAUTIFUL is too small a word to describe what you write.

In this one, u just made me cry. I am not just saying that - there is a big lump in my throat right now that wants to break out but then how can I explain that to my mom? Broken Heart So virtual crying it is Cry

Arnav in this part of the show - I wanted to kick his ass to hell. He had the audacity to tie her to him with those callous words and there was no remorse at all. That was soo not ARNAV actually. They (creatives) just lost track of the show even before that D'oh

But if it were you, we would have got to see these scenes and the show would still be running - AND we would all be glued to the screen as always watching reruns and more Rabba Ves. DAMN! I am crying for lost dreams again Cry

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged
That was beautiful. I wish they had shown some of Arnav's remorse in the show as well.

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Simply superb. Loved the way u put Arnav's thoughts after he hurt Khushi with word and blackmailed her again to stay by reminding of the contract.

Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
This one was beautifully written just like every other piece of your creativitySmile

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