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ArHi OneShot |What You Dream Of| (Page 6)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Amazing os

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Loved how you emoted Arnav's inner
turmoil reagarding Khushi.

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 8:19am | IP Logged
nice os

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS. I agree with you. Everytime Arnav is in trouble, he uses Khushi as his punching bag. People with anger issues are like that, but I also wished that Khushi was more strong and the show had a good redemption track.
 
Thanks for the OS and the PM.

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged
This was so beautiful! I don't have the words...

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 9:28am | IP Logged

I agree with you that however much Arnav apologises, his actions and his verbal assaults are unforgiveable! If he shifted, he might end up casting his shadow over her... He could not afford to cast her in his darkness now... the irony is that he has already done so! The dimples at the corners of her mouth quivered up ever so slightly, the seams of her lips barely parting at all... It was so tender, so fragile-unassumingly innocent... a beautiful image of her delicate smile when it comes straight from her heart... a smile that has long been missing from her life! He was the reason she closeted herself in the kitchen while everyone else gathered for meals. He was the reason she would quietly, unobtrusively slip away when his sister approached him. He was the reason she would spend hours and hours by the poolside, alone, unaccompanied, staring into the water to bide her time... what a world of pain! Arnav has truly made her an outcast in that house [and what was truly galling in the show was that Payal seemed so blind to and uncaring of the situation!] He not only stole her smile but her very soul, too! Arnav not wanting to do anything that would erase the genuine smile playing on Khushi's lips is a poignant moment! However, his guilt and his remorse are too little too late!

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged
it was beautiful the way you described the way he was gazing at her sleeping form...
it was amazingly written the way he feel guilty of what all he did to her...
n the fact that would he ever be able to get her smile for real...
out standing os Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap
update the next soon dearBig smile

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 11:51am | IP Logged
Beautifully put...that was one a my fav scenes in the show...


When he came back and she was about to leave ...went back into memory lane...

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