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ArHi OneShot |What You Dream Of| (Page 5)

Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Nafisa, that was a brilliant OS - beautifully written dear
Loved it

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IronButterfly IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged
Beautiful is all I can say.
Each emotion and feeling has been captured so well.

Amazing as always.

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Nehasupnfan Goldie
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
And I love it! In fact I was angry at the creatives for never having Arnav go down on his knees and beg Khushi to forgive him!  Because that is what she deserved and what she should have got! She was put through extreme circumstances and he never even apologized to her properly!! I'm glad this OS reflects some of Arnav's inner turmoil! LOVE IT!! Thanks for the PM :) 

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 4:17am | IP Logged
This was another brilliant shot. 
You brought out the fact about Arnav's misdoings so perfectly.
The fact that he let go off Shyam but had her in RM was really very well pointed out.
The emotions, the feelings, the guilt , the remorse, his wish to know what she was dreaming and then the self analysing if he even had that right to question or to know. So very perfect.
Loved every bit of it.

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Javeria3991 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Superb 
Beautifully written

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meem17 Goldie
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 4:34am | IP Logged
Poetic, angast , beautiful
I just cant get enough of ure os
Each time they make me speechless
Makes me go through a roller coaster of emotions
Thanks dear
I lived ipkknd through ure os today
Thank u for this wonderful gift
Was really sad for the past couple of days


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prettyji IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 6:32am | IP Logged
amazing

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avantika_2012 Goldie
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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged

You know what? I love the length! Why? Because it's perfect for what you were attempting to achieve. It is really interesting how you don't mention the exact scenario behind this OS; the situation they are in or what's going on between them...leaving it to the interpretation of the readers and I'm quite sure that different people come up with different interpretations but in spite of it all, you manage to strike a chord with your readers. 

You brought out Arnav's emotions so effectively and gracefully and it just shows how accomplished you are as a writer. 

Wonderfully done. Keep it up :D

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