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ArHi OneShot |What You Dream Of| (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
beautifully os poor arnav realizing his mistake is good but making amends would  be better loved how he was wondering what she was dreaming and what made her happy in it beautifully os thanks for the pm

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
very well written... loved it

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vann Senior Member
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
The man is amazing...the more guilty he is, the more reckless he becomes and aggravates his sins. This part of the show was so unfair to khushi. The silly winning-the-girl-over-making-her-life-difficult track and the easy forgiveness that followed took away all the depth of the story and the two characters. 

But this was Very beautiful. Thanks...ah well, can't resist asking...cul de sac? When?


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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
very soothing and refreshing os...khushi's smile purifies the soul... and this time it was her unsuspecting husband who underwent a change of heart...

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
That was heartbreaking!

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:13pm | IP Logged

I kind of have never managed to forgive Arnav for the way he acted during this stage of the show. Lets call this a little experiment, shall we? :)


^^ And I am right there with you sister, that's why brilliant pieces like this one bring me some relief! That's why I just LOVE LOVE LOVE your two on going FF's that exhibit Arnav's guilt, the guilt and remorse that we never witnessed in the actual show.

Thank you for bringing IPK back ever so brilliantly in this one Shot, as usual a one shot with a strong strong strong impact where one doesn't notice the length of the story because of it's impact.
I was so pissed for the way he didn't apologise for those words he uttered about Khushi being the biggest mistake of his life. He expressed them without even realizing that he is the one who forced her into his life not the other way around. *sighs impressive work as usual particularly the way you set the scene with Khushi happily dreaming and arnav being envious of that smile, the genuine smile he never managed to give her. Loved, loved, loved it! Clap

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Brilliant! Each and every work of your's is more amazing than the last. This was a bit sad, but I'm glad you wrote this one. I couldn't believe Khushi had just so easily forgiven Arnav, it would have been good to see this level of remorse and guilt in the show too. You managed to give us a little bit of that :) Miss your other stories!! Loved this one shot :)

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
Superb OS

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