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Swaron OS: No one messes with My Man! (Page 3)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
Awsome OS...
very nicely penned down...ClapClapClap
i hope this happens for real...its high time sharon should know everything

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Amazing OS !!! Smile
Loved the swayam breakdown Smile ... I always end up crying seeing swayam cry Smile ... wish they show something like this in the serial as well...
Thnx fr the PM Smile

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
awesome os..
totally loved it..
how i wish something like this happen in the show..
thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
it was superb
loved it a lot
amazing

i so wish aisa kuch D3 main ho
it would be magical
love your works..
please do write more
and thanks for the PM

p.s.
tanvish
please
please
please
iska next oart hain na..
plz jaldi se post karo
i cant wait

and agar nahi hain toh banao


Edited by -spongy- - 18 August 2013 at 4:31am

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:16am | IP Logged
Nice one
The intensity,frustration and pain were nicely penned down
I really liked swayam's outburst it was very well written
The way sharon comforted him was again amazingly portrayed.
The realization at the end was really awesome and i really want you to continue this one to second part where sharon takes Swayam's mind off the tension and spends some quality time with him and later teaching aadi a lesson pls continue this
Again fab OSClap

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:19am | IP Logged
i really really want this to happen...it is superb piece of writing..so apt and needed for this situation...i just hope that cv's show this...you are an amazing writer i must say that..hats off..:)

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 2:39am | IP Logged
OMG! I love it I love it!
This is the best OS I've read on d current track. I was lucky enough to read dis. You kept everything so perfect.. Swayam's frustration, Sharon's realization both were so matching with the current D3 track!
I so wish to see this on TV!


You made me more demanding LOL

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Please continue!!! Sleepy I wanna read more...from you :D amazing work :)
loved the way you potrayed swayam's feelings...and sharon's.
It was perfect. Clap
 
And I still hate AdityaAngry

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