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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 91)

jas0308 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 22 March 2012
Posts: 17584

Posted: 22 October 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
sorry for the delay nidhi
amazing update
it was emotional,, it was cute.. it was heart breaking too
loved how garima and rakesh's love story is progressing.. they are really very cute couple.. hope they will be together forever
wow.. who thought through arnav and akash is related to rakesh's uncle and it's result will be their meeting.. awesome!!!!
felt bad for khushi.. cant totally understand her pov.. she already had a heart break and is worried to make that mistake again
but why arnav so suddenly wants her?? did he realize his feelings for her??
continue soon

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 August 2012
Posts: 13890

Posted: 22 October 2013 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Loved this story too. Nidhi you are an amazing story teller. Waiting for the next update.

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malfoy Groupbie

Joined: 02 September 2008
Posts: 127

Posted: 22 October 2013 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
Beautiful story. 

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Seethu Goldie

Joined: 23 November 2012
Posts: 924

Posted: 22 October 2013 at 7:20pm | IP Logged

I'm glad that Garima finally met her long lost love ... she deserves to be happy atleast now after all the sacrifices that she had done for her nieces ...

I'm happy that Khushi and Arnav met but I'm even more happy with the fact that she is  not ready to accept him as yet .. Arnav needs to realize his blunder and that he cannot just make decisions and run the show at his will ...
Wonderful update .. loved it :) thank you :)

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FLGirl Goldie

Joined: 08 November 2012
Posts: 1317

Posted: 22 October 2013 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
First of all - so sorry for the late response. Was buried in real life for the last few days. appreciate the PM.

Regarding your note before the update - There is no need for you to apologize. You are one of the most reliable authors of late on the forum. You never make us beg and that is a big deal. An occasional delay is ok.

Now to the update - Of all the updates, this had to be the one I was late to get to. This is one of the most you have written off late. Her realistic problems with plane travel. Missing the moment she so wanted to see - her Buaji reconnecting with Rakesh Uncle. But getting her moment instead - the one she secretly wished for in her mind.

Most of all, I loved Arnav's reactions to her. How he continued to stare at her. How he followed her to the parking lot and took the liberty to wipe her tears and asked her to come back to him. But you know what - if he knew he was wrong, why did he not reach out first? He knew where she lived. Telling her he missed her and leaving her was a mistake when he ran into her accidentally is not acceptable to me :) If I were Kushi, I would have ran back to his arms when he said this but only if he sought me first. Not when he accidentally runs into me in a totally unexpected place. Dont make Kushi forgive easily. Please dont. He did not come for her.

I edited this comment now to tell you that I re-read the update now. I felt goosebumps and a swell in my heart when reading about these two meeting again and their reactions. Had to read it again and experience the emotions one more time :) Also, I was deprived of Arshi for 5 days as I was busy with real life. So this is a special treat.

Edited by FLGirl - 22 October 2013 at 9:06pm

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nnsunn Goldie

Joined: 10 January 2013
Posts: 2234

Posted: 23 October 2013 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Loved how u describe khushi's observations, the way she notices her buaji and rakeshi uncle,and her surroundings. Seems like khushi is protecting herself from a heartbreak. Waiting to see how arnav will bring back her.

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sincereme IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 September 2012
Posts: 4131

Posted: 23 October 2013 at 5:49am | IP Logged

Awesome Part...

Khushi didn't let her fear of flying come in between her responsibility... Buaji sacrificed her happiness for them so it her chance to give her back her happiness... I love khushi and buaji's bond... Khushi was so eager to hear about garima and Rakesh meeting that she totally forgot about her sickness... 

I am looking for to see this new couple...

Khushi felt his presence before Arnav enter the room...  the world is really very small... Who knew that Rakesh connection with Akash bring them face to face again...

Love khushi for standing for herself and her feelings... Arnav can't expect her to accept him with open arms after what he did... But what changed his decision now... Waiting to see what will he do to woo her...

Continue soon...

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kondhili IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 October 2012
Posts: 9965

Posted: 23 October 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
First things first i need to applaud khushi here. Clap
I think i have said this earlier too but this khushi is one of the best khushi's that i have come across in IF. 

Trust me i understand khushi's fear very well. I am just like her when it comes to taking a ride on the jet. But what is commendable is the fact that she overcame this fear and decided to go along with garima who has sacrificed so much for her nieces.  Its good to see that khushi is atleast giving back some of this love back to garima.  

As much as i love Arnav i am not surprised that khushi is mad at him. He deserves this. BAS!
The nerve of him to actually say that he has made a mistake and now he wants khushi back in his life. Really! what the hell was he doing for the last 3 mths and what would he have done if he had not met khushi by chance at the hospital. 
I want see him work hard and earn his forgiveness from khushi for all the pain that he caused her. So i am very happy that khushi didn't forgive him easily this time around.

Needless to say i loved the update nidhi and i am waiting with bated breaths for the next update. 

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