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Wonderful chapter Nids and so emotional too..!

The whole description of Khushi's travel woes and that indescribable feeling when you emerge from the airport onto the streets of India made me sigh with nostalgia..!

Khushi and Buaji's bond is just so beautiful..! What a wonderful lady she is to have sacrificed her chances of happiness for her orphaned neices..

Yay..Rakesh Uncle is not married...Can we expect some rabbave for them too? Please!!

Their meeting after three months was wonderfully described by you and I could just feel the crackling tension in the room. I'm glad Khushi is acting cold towards him, you can't really unceremoniously walk away from a person's life and then expect to be welcomed with open arms, when you do decide to come back.

Love this self respecting Khushi a lot...

Would love to see Arnav do some serious wooing to win her back..!! 



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I loved it nids, it's like all pieces of the puzzle coming together...I loved that Khushi respects the sacrifice that buaji has made for them and bears her fear of flying. 
Loved how seeing buaji so happy and content she finds everything worth it Finding happiness in buaji and her happiness.you wrote it so beautiful ...loved that unspoken question about Rakesh's marital status...that buaji answers before it has been asked... 
So Dr Akash makes his appearance ...loved it...loved the relationship he shares with Rakesh. He seems so great, warm and friendly a total contrast to his brother...
Loved buaji excitement at seeing Aranv and Khushi's anguish and restlessness ...you wrote her feelings and emotions so perfectly I could feel her heart ache with all the fears and anguish come back to her...I could see her running out and questioning why this is happening and her Realisation that she still feels for him...loved his point of view too...he sees her and she just fills up his senses yet again...he knows he made a mistake ... He wants her back but is it going to be as easy as he imagines...has he underestimated her...
I loved that interaction between them, the way he wipes her tears, the smallest of touch but gave me goosebumps ...
I am glad she resists him and walks away as hard as it must have been for her...and makes him admit his mistake...but I am glad she is not making it easy for him...he has it realise the depth of his actions...truly loved it.!  I loved her silent strength...fighting for herself protecting herself from another heartbreak...

Waiting to see how he redeems himself...he owes it to her...


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Finally after long time 1st page !Embarrassed

Edited :  Wow N , you really are acing up with these complex emotions in this story.
My most favorite part has to be the end where Khushi stood up for herself , no doubts that her insides must be screaming out to cry but still she stayed strong upfront and gave Arnav a good hearing.

To begin with even Garima and Rakesh's bits very sensibly handled ,dealing with mature love stories can be quite a task and their parts were written so damn well.
When the whole knob wala scene came and Akash entered the scene , i was like what the yeh kya googly hai but of course then Arnav followed and everything from their shock on seeing each other to their reactions respectively ...all bang on and perfectly suiting the mood.

And i forgot to mention it was so brave of Khushi to take the flight and come in support of Garima, her fear also excellently etched out.



Edited by _disha_ - 19 October 2013 at 8:47pm

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It's a small world indeed. Rakesh and Akash connection brought Khushi and Arnav back together where they rightfully belong. 

Of course it's another matter that Khushi is royally pissed. Loved it, loved her. I was so proud of the way she played cool in the room and later her thinking in the car park. I especially loved the way she gave what Arnav had coming. 

Don't understand what changed Arnav's mind though...he left her for a reason and now he wants her again. Why? All those reasons he gave are right there. Nothing has changed. I guess they have. Absence has made him realize Khushi's role in his survival. 

So, we have a love story in the making...Rakesh and buaji..Embarrassed Cute. very very cute. 

I have always felt bad for people who find it a problem to fly coz personally I love travelling and this kind of an impediment would restrict travelling. Poor Khushi.

Last but not the least...loved the way you described how Khushi felt seeing India after arrival. So aptly captured. 

Loved it NidsThumbs Up


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Awesome part

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Sorry for late unres

Indeed d world is so small 

Finally dey met and khushi dhak dhak proved right LOLLOL

Khushi travelled for her buaji nt cnsidering her fear while travelling in flights was really caring and sweet of her and also proves her love  towards her buajiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Garima was blushing while talking for rakesh hayeee so sweet 

Rabbbe ve cmng frm rakesh and garima too TongueTongue I loved d way wen rakesh held garima hand and asked her nt to go so soon and she obligedWinkWink

Bfr akash entry khushi dhak dhak strtd EmbarrassedEmbarrassednot only her bt also our waiting for d mann to enter bt u had annother plans u made akash come first and break our sapne CryCry

No worries khushi dhak dhak didnt stop and atlast he entered d moment he said "Khushi" Dats it i was gone in rabbe ve world

But i didnt like d way khushi ignored himAngryAngry

I knw she went through a heart break CryCry arnav was a jerk to leave herAngry bt he wasnt at fault dat tym

And nw wen he realized it i knw he wnt leave a chnce to get her back

Waiting for lots of dhak dhak dhak dhak and Rabbe ve moments 

Loved d update dii





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Fabulous update..
finally they met..
i knew it.. my god d meeting was awsm..
actually i like rakesh and garima relation too.
so smooth and yet cuteEmbarrassed
woaahhh khushi cried and i want it that arnav should see her state and
yes he saw.. amazing scene..
khushi was angry with him and anyone could be..
i hope he will do something now..
wonderful chappy...
waiting for d next oneBig smile


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