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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 23)

khushiiXOXO Senior Member

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:09am | IP Logged

dats for being a stubborn pig,Arnav!! sheesh!

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged

This is the stuff that good stories are made of...I loved it...
I loved the way he looks at her sleeping,smiling ... remembering her promise not to and the way he gently kisses her unable to resist her...

He is a man of his past...what he is today is a direct co relation to his past.. He is terrified of the feelings she brings out in him...for her!  He realises her love for him and admit or not what she means to him and that he loves her...he cannot imagine kissing another woman, she has his heart ...but he just does not know how to react and what to do...the feelings engulf him and he needs distance both physical and emotional...and yes words...he knows that she deserves more and yet he feels overwhelmed and scared and needs to leave...
It's like he is suddenly feeling too exposed and he is unable to comprehend why he wants to share so much of his past with her...or is it his need to make her understand him better...

His frustration and anguish over his decision to leave is clear in his outburst, behaviour  and reactions...he is caught between his heart and his head...he knows they have more than a friendship and he has opened his past to her, and I have hope that he will soon let her in to his present ...but he knows that she is special , not someone he can use and discard...and is angry with himself for even letting it reach where it has...but he does not realised it but its her healing touch that will help set him free from the wounds of his past...that are threatening his future...their future...
Was such an emotional and gripping update...

Khushi on the other hand ...brave and I love her ...she is going to let him go...silently while she suffers...'if you love someone set them free, if they come back they are your for life, if not they were never meant to be...' 
I feel her heart breaking but she holds her head high and with self respect and how well, it's no wonder he loves her...
I love her feeling of helplessness and disappointment you brought it out so well and I want to hug how she confides to Payal and lets it all out...hoping to relieve her self of some pain...
Love how here face does not reflect on her face, but remains almost numb specially with his announcement of leaving...but is lost ...
I love how he keeps looking for her before he leaves...he feels the pain too...just does not know how to let go of it...and has justified his actions in his heart trying to convince himself it would seem. 
Loved the conversation by the beach...his need to see her ...I love what she says to him...she has set him free...with no expectations from him...musing me wonder did he want her to stop him...? 

It was so heart wrenching yet left me feeling hopeful for their future...what they shared and feel for each other is too strong and potent to be dissolved by physical barriers ...I think the emptiness he will feel in his heart and life by her absence will finally be un resistible for him...but this space and distance will bring them closer... 
Beautifully and flawlessly is no wonder I love your characters, writing and stories as much as I do...

Mints take a bow baby...beautiful banner!

Waiting for the next one...

Edited by vandana.sagar - 02 September 2013 at 8:26pm

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akaps Goldie

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Running away from present  which is  beautiful & full of love towards a past that haunts.
Khushi is a wonderful person

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sman IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:22am | IP Logged
This was so touching :( lovely

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Happytwinkle IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:32am | IP Logged
wonderful update
feeling awful for them
waiting eagerly for the next part...plz update soon
thanks for the mail

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priasweet IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
wow amazing update

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chippu84 Senior Member

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
awsome... continue sooon yaar...

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spsharmila Goldie

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Very Touching update ...beautifully written Big smile
So  Arnav is going back...I am sure he will be back soon...sometimes you need to go away to see things in right perspective.

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