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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 21)

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 6:28pm | IP Logged
OMG!!!! What just happened there?

When he stopped the car at a house my gutter mind was thinking varied thoughts and BOOM!!!!! He dropped a bomb. There is a reason why I love this Arnav. The painful past and his anguish are like  fire that consume him and everyone in his vicinity y that I mean Khushi.

What a heart break? For Khushi and more so for Arnav because he bears the pain of two people. Well, if introspection and seperation are the only ways for him to understand how Khushi is his better half who can wipe away the bitterness in his life, so be it. Bring it on.

Why is it that men don't think why a relationship would not work while getting into it. Every single reason that Arnav gave for this relationship not working including the geographical distance, his familial responsibilities and all else existed earlier too. Yet he moved ahead and now all the doubts.

COMMITMENT is the problem. He Knows that Khushi is the kind of girl who deserves something more. He cannot just sleep with her and leave.While I appreciate his thoughtful gesture towards Khushi, I feel like breaking his stubborn mule headedness.

I'm sorry for my violent thoughts. This Arnav brings out all in me too. 

Now the million dollar question? Is he really gonna let her leave? Iss Judai Ko Kya Naam Doon? 






Edited by AquaSandhya - 02 September 2013 at 7:37pm

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 6:39pm | IP Logged
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Haaw i can't believe that he left her like that...how could he leave that one person with so much hurt who was responsible for showing him the true meaning of life and relationship. Too bad Arnav. And that to after spending such an amazing day with her. Why offer her the moon and the stars and then just pull the carpet from under her feet. Broken Heart

But i guess that its required cause only her absence in his life will make Arnav singh Raizada realise how much better his life is just by her mere presence in it. That should give him the boost to fight the so called demons which stop him from letting go of the past and welcome life with open arms once again.  Looking forward to that day now. BAS.

I love Payal for being the sister that she has been supporting her sister in whatever she wants to do but still be there for her and guide her in every step she will take. 

I completely understand the fact that Arnav is emotionally disturbed due to all the things of his past but i feel if he was so sure that he would not be able to overcome the ghost of the past he should have just let khushi be and not intrude on her life. 

Waiting to read how you are going to bring about Arnav's self realisation Nids...cause i love this THT wala Arnav...Embarrassed

And now my wait for Chap 13 begins...Day Dreaming


Edited by kondhili - 02 September 2013 at 1:36pm

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
waiting for chapter 12... EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Loved the update
Hope he doesn't leave her and go


Edited by aaradhaya1688 - 02 September 2013 at 12:11pm

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Chapter 12 has been posted!!

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Nidhiii!! This chapter was so heartbreaking, really! It started so cutely, I didn't see it taking this sort of turning. 
But you know what? I absolutely LOVED this chapter. You wrote it so damn well. 

Arnav's character is so pained and flawed... but he has come a long way. But today, he went right back to the start. But I think this is the turning point of the story - their separation. It'll make him realise just how important Khushi is for him. Perhaps, it'll make him want to break the brick wall he has created around him to shield himself from love. 

Having said that, I feel so awful for Khushi. She's so young and sweet. Hate to see her heart breaking like this. Love how she's acting so mature though.

Again, Nids, I loved this chapter a lot! It's my favourite till date. 

Also, sorry for being so late in comment :-((


Edited by Anarocksick - 25 September 2013 at 7:08am

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 7:33am | IP Logged
oh god!
no...that was so emotional!

i cant even say much about this chapter because whatever i saw, how much ever i say, its not going to be enough!

hes gone, he left her!
i cant even digest this fact!
please u have to update soon!
i want him to realize his feelings soon!
please just dont go away like this!

i trust u so much to make things better!
and i know u wud make them better!

update soon pleasee!

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Posted: 02 September 2013 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Loved d update
beautifully written nd emotions
were well described
Thanx for mailing

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