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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 134)

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Beautiful chapter!!!

Just loved it! 

I loved how he kissed her and letting her know that he was there and letting her know how much he has missed her...

Expressing his feeling through flowers was just wonderful and how each flowers had its meaning to it... He planned each day and wooed very beautifully... He kept his distance, nothing to show her that he wanted anything physical just being to spend time with her.. When someone is in trouble they should get ideas from Arnav...
He asked for forgiveness also but through flowers.. I know he truly means it.. But he still hasn't told Khushi that he wants to be with her and or said the magic three words..
They both live in two different parts of the world, so I can understand Khushi hesitant of giving in to Arnav love. She's afraid that she will be hurt again unless she has the surety that he will be by her side always..
So will he able to tell on Diwali??

Love the way you this chapter and the descriptive meaning to each flower he was giving her with the note, that was just unbelievably remarkable ! Brilliantly written!!

Thanks for the email..

Eagerly waiting for the closeness...

 


Edited by Hawa1997 - 14 November 2013 at 11:49am

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I loved it ,
Loved her reaction to knowing that he was going back for her...and him admitting that walking away was a mistake and he wants to rectify it and this time he is not going to let her walk away,...that kiss gave me chills, it was passionate, romantic, the sense of belonging, longing,urgency and desire for each other ...back in each others arms and that kiss it felt that this is where they belong,...a perfect fit, time and other issues forgotten for that moment ...
I like that he is working hard to woo her and I love that he is and showing her a good time with so many various aspects of life! She deserves it! I like his idea of keeping physically away from her so as not to confuse her with the physical attraction they feel for each other. 
Loved his flower for a day, loved the significance of each flower and how he makes it so very unique! from planned evening to spontaneous ones, from cooking for her to sightseeing and the tennis game, it is like a window of what life together would be for them !
I would love to see how these dates actually went...but I love the concept..
But there are things that need to be cleared going forward...both from different walks of life, their lives in their respective cities and countries. 
He wants her completely, and all of her, does that mean what she wants is what he is ready to offer...the marriage, the house, the children ? 
I am curious to see how they clear all these issues, I have no doubt they will...cannot wait to see his reaction to her in the saree given by Anjali and her in his house, will he realise this is where he wants her forever!
As always beautifully written and a visual treat! 



Edited by vandana.sagar - 13 November 2013 at 4:29am

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loved the teaser. its fab. cant wait for the update

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Di update it...
My sleeping time is nearing...
I want to read before sleeping

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Awesome part

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