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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 122)

flutterlashes IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
What an update..
i fellin love with flowers and cardsDay Dreaming
seriously fantabulous update...
he was wooing her like anythingHeart
loved it when he wrote he wants to share
his family with her..
that was so touching
and the kiss ufff!!
literally read the kiss and touching part
after so many times in this storyLOL
o damn teaser was such a teasing and
u didnt include thatOuch
waiting for the next chappy...
his blocking senses when he will see her in red and that too in sareeEmbarrassed
mindblowing update
update next part soon
loved the update to the bitssHeart

Edited by flutterlashes - 13 November 2013 at 11:08am

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jas0308 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 17584

Posted: 12 November 2013 at 7:55am | IP Logged
amazing update
such a beautiful update nidhi
loved arnav made clear to woo khushi and woo he did, that too very brilliantly
loved all the flower things and his notes, that was so cute and romantic
he took khushi to places in delhi, and they spend every beautiful moment together!! wow
khushi is afraid!! hope arnav will confess his feelings soon coz that's what make khushi believe In his feelings more!!
cant wait for next update
continue soon
PS: sorry for the damn delay in unres'ng Smile

Edited by jas0308 - 16 November 2013 at 1:23pm

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Hawa1997 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged

Beautiful chapter!!!

Just loved it! 

I loved how he kissed her and letting her know that he was there and letting her know how much he has missed her...

Expressing his feeling through flowers was just wonderful and how each flowers had its meaning to it... He planned each day and wooed very beautifully... He kept his distance, nothing to show her that he wanted anything physical just being to spend time with her.. When someone is in trouble they should get ideas from Arnav...
He asked for forgiveness also but through flowers.. I know he truly means it.. But he still hasn't told Khushi that he wants to be with her and or said the magic three words..
They both live in two different parts of the world, so I can understand Khushi hesitant of giving in to Arnav love. She's afraid that she will be hurt again unless she has the surety that he will be by her side always..
So will he able to tell on Diwali??

Love the way you this chapter and the descriptive meaning to each flower he was giving her with the note, that was just unbelievably remarkable ! Brilliantly written!!

Thanks for the email..

Eagerly waiting for the closeness...


Edited by Hawa1997 - 14 November 2013 at 11:49am

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vandana.sagar IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 9:45am | IP Logged
I loved it ,
Loved her reaction to knowing that he was going back for her...and him admitting that walking away was a mistake and he wants to rectify it and this time he is not going to let her walk away,...that kiss gave me chills, it was passionate, romantic, the sense of belonging, longing,urgency and desire for each other ...back in each others arms and that kiss it felt that this is where they belong,...a perfect fit, time and other issues forgotten for that moment ...
I like that he is working hard to woo her and I love that he is and showing her a good time with so many various aspects of life! She deserves it! I like his idea of keeping physically away from her so as not to confuse her with the physical attraction they feel for each other. 
Loved his flower for a day, loved the significance of each flower and how he makes it so very unique! from planned evening to spontaneous ones, from cooking for her to sightseeing and the tennis game, it is like a window of what life together would be for them !
I would love to see how these dates actually went...but I love the concept..
But there are things that need to be cleared going forward...both from different walks of life, their lives in their respective cities and countries. 
He wants her completely, and all of her, does that mean what she wants is what he is ready to offer...the marriage, the house, the children ? 
I am curious to see how they clear all these issues, I have no doubt they will...cannot wait to see his reaction to her in the saree given by Anjali and her in his house, will he realise this is where he wants her forever!
As always beautifully written and a visual treat! 

Edited by vandana.sagar - 13 November 2013 at 4:29am

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45678 Goldie

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 10:00am | IP Logged
loved the teaser. its fab. cant wait for the update

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Aasmaali IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Di update it...
My sleeping time is nearing...
I want to read before sleeping

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tina_1234 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Awesome part

Edited by tina_1234 - 13 November 2013 at 12:19am

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shubhanjli Goldie

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Posted: 12 November 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Wonderful update.
Loved the kiss. they are kissing after three months.
I loved the concept of sending flowers with their meanings. Can i ask you something is it true, the words associated with the flowers.
Arnav is hell bent to woo Khushi but she is guarding herself this time.
Waiting eagerly for next update. The Diwali dhamaka.

Edited by shubhanjli - 14 November 2013 at 11:53am

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