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FF: The Healing Touch #3:Ch 16 Pg 134, New Thread Pg 149 (Page 101)

Nidsubh007 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anu2108

this iz my first story in ur work loved it
very new story line
will start to read others too
pls pm me further updates




Than so much! I appreciate your feed back.

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 11:31am | IP Logged

Edited comment on pg.84Smile

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
ohh myy goddd
i hv beeen an iddioot to find this stry nowww

oh godd..dis is maaagiiicaaalll !!!
love love loveee itt..
im sooo gladdd they met..uodate soon pls <3

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Posted: 25 October 2013 at 7:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Afsha29

ohh myy goddd
i hv beeen an iddioot to find this stry nowww

oh godd..dis is maaagiiicaaalll !!!
love love loveee itt..
im sooo gladdd they met..uodate soon pls <3

Thank you!!!  Your response put a smile on my face, love your enthusiasm.  LOL


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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 1:10am | IP Logged
Hello,

I just paused reading this story after two chapters as i was not able to be on line that much, but I just could not stop myself from continuing it, so on the day of The Eid itself, I started reading it again while people were busy celebrating Eid and distributing meat!

This story has me all hooked up to read it.

Loved how Arnav and Khushi got closer with time and would spend the night together even if they keep silent, but that strengthened whatever relationship they had. She is so in love with him that she introduced him to his parents and shared everything with him, then Arnav told him all the truth from his end breaking her strong feelings which he had not any clue about how deep they are, but then his surprising gesture when he himself asked her to 'Spend the day with him' which was the best day of her life as she got a chance to know him and his life more, but again he broke those dreams at the end of the day trying to persuade himself it's better to get apart now before they fall for each other! Unconsciously, his feelings are stronger than what he had ever thought. Then they had to live THREE months without each other! How painful!

The meeting after these months was a shock for both them. You portrayed his longing for her very well, and her refusal to look at him fearing that she would not able t stop herself from loving him more. She knew she would not be able to drown in him once again.

Their dialogue was amazing. I actually kept recalling them the last two days (After reading the last chapter) It's so heart-touching. Here i can't blame any of them for the condition they are in now!!

PS: Loved Vendanna's character because she was the one to urge that jealousy in Khushi! And therefore we got that scene where Khushi asks Arnav to go back to his life. And yes Arnav's possessiveness was like a cheery on the top when he saw her with her cousin, and that encounter which follows in his room *gulps*

Looking forward to the next update,

Keep it up,
Shaimaa

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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Oh my god now this came as a surprise
raizadas knw rakesh
they met
i loved hw kushi walked out on him he deserved he has to placate her
continue soon
waiting...

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Posted: 26 October 2013 at 3:37am | IP Logged
wow nids, that was a very emotional  update
lovely going dear -
sorry iam late
will wait for the next

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