Updated my comment on page 24 ---
Originally posted by Anarocksick
Nidhiii!! This chapter was so heartbreaking, really! It started so cutely, I didn't see it taking this sort of turning.
But you know what? I absolutely LOVED this chapter. You wrote it so damn well.
Arnav's character is so pained and flawed... but he has come a long way. But today, he went right back to the start. But I think this is the turning point of the story - their separation. It'll make him realise just how important Khushi is for him. Perhaps, it'll make him want to break the brick wall he has created around him to shield himself from love.
Having said that, I feel so awful for Khushi. She's so young and sweet. Hate to see her heart breaking like this. Love how she's acting so mature though.
Again, Nids, I loved this chapter a lot! It's my favourite till date.
Also, sorry for being so late in comment :-((