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Thank you friends Hug .will.put next part soon

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 FF:Journey of Love (part 4)


Few years back

Next Day

Evening

Raji walks with her dad in park.Rdad"yenama ithu yellam,athu yeppadi avan phone la irunthu avanuku theryam ah ".Raji"appa,unga phone la irunthu nan anupa mudyum ila,ungaluku theryam ah".Rdad"mudyum".Raji"athey mathri than,yaro avan phone la irunthu anupirkanga,yenga friendsip pidikam ah, avan matum kidakatum".Rdad"analum Raji".Raji"kastam enaku pa,ana vali avan kanula theryuthu,avan ah santhega padura alavuku nan onnum arivu ilathava illa".both stops near the tree.Raji"appa oru nimisam ".He follows her.Both stops near  a stone bench and hides behind the tree.


Kdad"what happend ,you wont give company,when you dont have problem".Karthik"dad today very bad incident happend".Kdad"yena achu".Karthik"yen phone la irunthu,yetho oru bitch,yen friend picture ah morph pani anupirkan,avan matum yen kaila kidakatum".Kdad"arivu iruka da,phone ah ippadi ya care less ah vaipa".Karthik"ippadi nadakumnu yenaku yeppadi theryum".Kdad"karthik,ithu yellam nama image ah spoil panum da,intha vishyathula thappey panalanalum,sariya parka matanga ".Karthik"ana antha ponnu partha dad,why dad she belived me this much".Kdad"what ".Karthik"yes dad,she fought for me,athum HR phone ah vangi,"i love you nu message "ah ava phone ku anupitu,neenga thaney panuneenga nu ,smart ah pesi,purya vacha vitham,antha nambikai yenomo panuthu pa,yenaku theryala,antha ponnu yena nambunathu ,antha parvai,anbu doing something pa". 

Kdad"unaku nala friend kidachurka da,miss panidatha,analum intha problem thappu da,seekram antha black sheep yaru nu kandu pideenga".Karthik"sure dad,ava yen pa yena nambun ah".Kdad"she may be smart enough to judge you".Karthik"pidichurku pa".Kdad"yena solura".Karthik"yenaku theryala,yethetho thonuthu".Kdad"dei antha ponnu una kapathunathula confuse agita,just relax da,thanks sollu,nala gift ah vangi kodu".Karthik"love panatum ah".Kdad'adapaavi,love oruthar pana help kaga vara koodathu".Karthik"illa pa,she is so friendly apuram".Kdad"dei mudyala valikuthu,un mansuku pidicha sei,inimel romba careful ah iru".Karthik agrees.


Raji gets surprised.Rdad"yenama avangaliye parkra".Raji"avan than pa nan sona payan".Rdad "athu yena solluveenga nala iruntha".Raji"cute pa".Rdad"amam romba cute ah irukkan,ivan thappu panirka matan,apuram Raji ne yena panalum yenakum samtham".Raji smiles"appaaa,avanthan nan nambinen nu santhosathula ulararan neenga yena da na".Rdad"illama,pinala yethu nadanthalum yenala prachanai varathu nu sola varen".Raji smiles.

Presant
Next Morning

Nila comes and sees karthik standing near the window .Nila"vinu ".Karthik turns and smiles..Nila comes and asks "vinu ,what happened".Karthik"had a dream".Nila"what happend".Karthik explains about khusi and the dream.Nila gets surprised.Karthik"i doubt i had  a connection with this little cutie pie".Nila smiles "if so ,then i will be the happiest person ".Ashok comes and says "fine macha,am going back to Us today".Karthik gets shocked"then i have to be alone here".Nila"nope i will be here,mom and dad needs me,they will arrive soon".Karthik smiles "ippo than santhosam ah irukku".Ashok"ne paru macha,nan two months la varathukula ,you will find your name".Karthik smiles. Ashok "fine am leaving now ,bye ".Nila goes to send him off.Karthik goes back to sleep as he felt tired".

****

Karthik sits in balcony. Raji calls him.Raji" dei kulfi what you doing".Karthik"Moon la una dream panuren,superb ah irukka theryum ah".Raji"poda".Karthik"sandai kozhi ne innaiku panatha ninachen,yevlo periya adventure".Raji"pina village la irunthu vantha avanuku yena oru yennam".Karthik"so proud of you sandai kozhli".Raji"english la reply panuven nu,viswanathan ethirparthurka matan illa".Karthik"amam ,kandipa ".  Raji"sari da,romba happy mood la irunthen athan call panen".Karthik"fine".Raji"kulfi  unkita onnu sollanum".Karthik"yena Raji,hey yethum gift thara poriya".Raji"illa".Karthik"then".Raji"keep guessing".karthik"hmm shopping poganum ah".Raji"No".Karthik"gift venum ah".Raji"mokkai".Karthik"Film ".Raji"ila da".karthik"apuram".Raji"vanthu vanthu ".karthik"yena".Raji"Good night da".Karthik screams "Rajiii".

****

Karthik screams Rajiii. Ashok and Nila comes to his room.Karthik"same girl i dreamt again,but i called her Rajiii,her name must be Raji".Nila"vinu  are you sure".Karthik"yep same lady".  Ashok"lets follow her".Nila"but Ashok she is married and having kid,we both saw her with her husband".karthik"yes ,but why she coming into my dreams,is she connected to my life,i want to know".Ashok"simple idea,you will meet Khusi in park ,ask her the adress and meet her ,problem solved".Karthik"it should happen soon".Ashok"dont worry,it will".Karthik agrees.

 

Next Day

Karthik comes to park and waits for khusi but she didnt turned up.  karthik used to come and wait for khusi ,but everyday he gets the same disappointment .


After a week

In Banglore

Khusi jumps and says "uncle when we going".Vishnu"today".Arnav"omg then we have to do home works every day".khusi"it means i cant play video games always ".laksmi"ofcourse".Khusi"oh nooo,let me stay here itself".Vishnu gives a diary milk and says "if you want this,you should get ready soon".Khusi and Arnav jumps and agrees.Vishnu smiles and says "avan ah mathriye irukka illa".laksmi"yenaku innum puryala,why you people not showing his pic to khusi".Vishnu "avan yenga nu keta yena nu solurathu,konjam naal pogatum laksmi". Laksmi"i dont think its good".Vishnu"let raji decide it".  Laksmi agrees.Vishnu sits and his memories goes back to olden days

*****

Raji sits and hears some songs using head phone.karthik comes and sits near her.Raji didnt listen him.Karthik takes a magazine and starts to read.  Vishnu and laksmi sees this.Vishnu"too much laks ,see ava song kekura okay,ivan book padikra mathri scene potutu,looking at her'.Laksmi"vichuuu".Vishnu"yena achu".Laksmi"see karthik".Vishnu"avanuku yena".laksmi"book ah thaligila vachu padikran".  Vishnu"adapaavi,shall i message him and say".Laksmi"just dont disturb him".sushan calls Laksmi .Laksmi"yena sushan".Sushan"hey raji phone switched off nu varuthu,avala partha room ku vara sollu".Laksmi says okay and keeps the phone down.Vishnu"appo avalum ah". Laksmi"itha vida koodathu".

Vishnu comes near them and says "laksmi yenaku pudhusu pudhusa books padikanumnu asai,yenaku GK valarum  ah".laksmi"yen vishnu varathu,inga oruthan half ah hour ah ,thalaigela book vachu padikravanuku yellam  GK varunma ,unaku yen varathu".Karthik quickly turns the book and smiles"sorry padikra interest la gavnikala".Vishnu"dei thiruda un interest yenga irunthuchu nu than parthomey".Karthik smiles .

Vishnu"laksmi un phone la call pana mudyum ah".Laksmi"yen mudyathu,switch off ana phone la,oruthu half an hour ah patu kekura,yen phone nala than irukku".Raji looks up and takes off the head phone and gives a smile.

karthik"vanthu raji song kekuratha disturb pana vendamnu".Raji"actually,karthik book padikra style ah secret ah note panalamnu".laksmi"rendum Kedi um sernthu love panuthu,hmm yena nadakum ".Karthik"Raji kosu thollai jasthiya illa".Raji"amam nama pesam ah canteen ku pogalam ah".Karthik and Raji goes from there. Laksmi"yena vishnu kosu nu solitu poita".Vishnu"vera yethum solam ah vitathu periya vishyam".

Laksmi"what shall we do now".Vishnu"let we try the same".laksmi gets shy and goes from there.

*****

Vishnu comes out of his memories.khusi comes to him .Vishnu"hey what doing here".Khusi"aunt asked us to sleep,i said i will sleep here".Vishnu"fine".Khusi"but uncle now this small kid want to watch Tom and Jerry".Vishnu"hmm".Khusi"i want to watch ".Vishnu agrees with a smile. 

****
*****

Karthik knocks the door.Vishnu"yenada venum".Karthik'twlight".Vishnu"yenathu tube light ah".Karthik"joke ah siripu varala".Vishnu'dei naliku semester da,nan padikanum".karthik"nan vendamnu sollaliye".Vishnu"TV ah off pannu da".Karthik"yenda ivlo periya veetla idam ah illa,ne poi hall ah utkarnthu padi,nan inga Tv pakren".Vishnu"yenda un veetla TV repair ah".Karthik"naliku sem,innaiku film partha,appa oru vali paniduvar,athan escaped".Vishnu "neram da".He goes out.

Karthik shouts "vishnuuu".Vishnu"yena da".Karthik'super ghost movie da,thaniya parka bayam ah irukku,ingaye utkarnthu padi da ".Vishnu"dei ithu yellam overuuu".Karthik"please da,just one hour ".Vishnu"deiii".Karthik"pesi disturb panatha da,movie parkanum". Vishnu playfully beats him. play fully

 
*****
 
Vishnu walks to window and sees outside.

Next Day

Raji gets ready and comes out.Madhan"yena Raji ivlo seekram".Raji"khusi is coming i want to buy some gifts ,toys for her,come lets go quick".Madhan"sure,this driver is ready".Raji gets emotional.Madhan"sorry ,sorry i remainded karthik am i right".Raji nods.Madhan"chear up raji,come on".Raji agrees.

In shopping Mall

Nila"vinu,ne one week ah so upset,chear up pana koopitu vanthurken".Karthik"ithuku per kodumai".Nila"feel free da,just come with me".both enters into a shop.

Raji and Madhan enters into same shop and searches for toys. karthik gets a call and he moves away. Nila hits Madhan accidently.Madhan"sorry".Nila"fine no problem".Madhan"konjam parthu vanthurkalam".Nila"actually parthutey vanthu than ivlo probs".Madhan smiles and moves.Nila takes the phone from the floor and comes to karthik .


Karthik"shall we move".Nila "sure". Karthik"ne shopping finish panu,am going to toy section".Nila"yethuku".Karthik"i dont know,my heart saying,i will meet khusi ,so want to surprise her with a teady bear".  Nila agrees .

Karthik goes to the shop. Raji was busy selecting there.  Karthik walks in. He sees Raji and thinks"she is the girl in my dream".He moves towards her.He thinks"what she will think,if i talk to her ".He moves towards her.Raji was busy in selecting the toys.Karthik's felt something in his heart,his heart wants to convey something,but he couldnt get it what it was.  Karthik moves towards raji .He thinks "she should not mistake me,who is she,why i feal some pain,happiness in seeing her"...He walks

friends hope i didnt put mokkai.thanks for the support Hug friendsSmile

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Thats a nice part anu..
Romba sandhosathilla...update panneegalo???

Karthi realizing raji in dream fantastic
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anithu

Thats a nice part anu..
Romba sandhosathilla...update panneegalo???

Karthi realizing raji in dream fantastic

ha ha yes da .updated in happy mood
Thanks Hug
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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
I like!
At least, this K is feeling something for R...not like the other one...

Anyways, waiting for the update!

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Wow, Raji's dad like him, on first sight itself and giving assurance, he will not create problem in future.
One small suggestion Anu,
In the dream update of KR conversation, its look little clumsy, After reading 4-5 times only I got it correctly. Use different color for the conversation or update line by line da.
Its a small suggestion Anu, otherwise your way of story telling in three phases is amazing, loved ur update very much da.

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Posted: 04 September 2013 at 11:29pm | IP Logged

very nice update anu,

wow,raji' dad calling karthik  cute,lol,please pinch me..

it could be happened only in my dreamsLOL

vishnu's flash back scenes were good.

finally karthik is dreaming about his past,it was a good sign.

in dream i think raji is telling about her pregnancy?

will karthik talk to raji?

waiting for next part.

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Nice one Daffi, enjoyed reading it. 

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