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SwaRon Poem - Tanhaiyaan

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Hola guys Hug

I am here with an poem...read it as SwaRon's point of view post asthma track 

Tanhaiyaan


Tanha hai tanhaiyaan bhi
Na mera ab kuch bhi
Yeh dil bhi hai tere pass
Bachi hai bas tujhse milne ki aas

Har pal mein teri hi yaadein
Hawa bhi karti hai bas teri hi baatein
Anuragi tha tera mera saath
Jaane kyun chutey yeh haath



Tere hoto pe mera naam
Laata tha mere chehre pe muskaan
Naam bhi hai ab anjaan
Naa hai iss chehra se koi pehchan

Rahe thi humari alag
Fir q tha humare milne ka sanjog
Dil se kabhi dhadkan nahi hoti juda
Fir q toota yeh sapna pyaara

Rim jim rim jim pyaar ki fuhaaren
Aur masti bhare pal suhane
Fir kaisa yeh khel kismat ne khela
Aa gaya yeh naa mitne wala fasla

Khushi ka tha jaha basera
Banaya tha aisa ek ashiyaan
Ab toh chaya hai andhera
Tanhaiyaan bhi hai tanha


i know its lame...criticisms are welcomed Smile

luv

Shrutika


P.S.: thank u deepu di...SwaRon You
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Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 23 August 2013 at 12:33am

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
res for deepu di Smile


Hey my sweetest heartHug


Such an amazing poem...i loved the way u expressed their feelings through ur words..it was so soulful...i could feel their pain..their love...u are such a beautiful poetess swthrt...why dont u write more...i write so beautifully ...

I want read more works from u ...plz do write more...SWARON U babyEmbarrassed

Mujhe kyu thank u bola tuneShockedShocked...love u babyHug

Love
Ur Deepu di


Edited by ShrutikaSwaRon - 23 August 2013 at 12:31am
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
its great dear...do write more...Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 11:28am | IP Logged
mast shru...well written..write moreSmile

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Hey very well written dear.Smile

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
it's great shrutika.. chan ahe...
bg music also..

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Posted: 18 August 2013 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Shrutu yeh tune likha Shocked
OMG dis is so beautifull..
Loved it.. Awesome yaar Clap Clap
Tu toh chupi rustam nikli Tongue
Amazing work..
Lovely poem.. Clap Clap


Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 18 August 2013 at 3:15am

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