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OS- Pehle ka naata

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 6:58am | IP Logged
Hey guys this os is based on the news of Madhu marrying Sultan and the entry of new character. Pls read it and give ur comments...and I promise it wont disappoint you...

RK was devastated, or rather to say destroyed. Today he is completely dead. Madhu left him forever about an hour ago and now RK, who is immensely drunk, is strolling through the park near RK mansion. He was unable to digest the fact that Madhu left him for the person who was his biggest enemy, Sultan. RK was so much affected by this act of Madhu that he was not able to cry even. Finally RK gave out a large cry, "MADHUUU!!!!!!" He came out of the park and was running through the road like a mad person. Suddenly he came in front of a car and fell down on the road.

Jahanvi (new character) was returning from her office. Suddenly she saw a person coming in front of her car. She immediately applied the brakes but the person had fallen down. Jahanvi quickly got down to check whether he is okay. When she turned the person, she was shocked and automatically blurted, "RK!!"
 Jahanvi splashed water on RK's face. As he regained consciousness, she asked, "RK, tum thik to ho? Mujhe pehchana? Main Jahanvi..."
RK- Woh chali gayi...woh mujhe chorke humesha ke liye chali gayi...
J- Kaun chali gayi RK?
RK- Madhu kyun kiya tumne aaisa???
J- Madhu?? RK...RK...

RK had fainted. Jahanvi dragged him in her car and drove to RK mansion.

When she reached RK mansion, Jahanvi was confused with the unusual silence in the house. It was not that she was a regular visitor of the mansion but still she could say that there is something wrong. She called out, "Radha Aunty!"
Radhajee came out from her room. Seeing her son lying on the sofa she let out a sigh which was of relief. Then she noticed the girl beside the sofa and spoke, "Jahanvi, tum?"

Five years ago, Jahanvi had tried to commit suicide, for some personal reasons which were not known to anyone except her. That time it was RK who had saved her from drowning in the river, who happened to be shooting beside the same river where Jahanvi had jumped. He brought back her confidence of living, showed her many reasons to live, and slowly both became good friends.

Radha cried her heart out to Jahanvi that how Madhu left her Rishu. She said, "Rishu ab bilkul tut chuka hai...woh zinda lash ban chuka hai aur sab kuch Sultan ke wajah se..."
Jahanvi startled when she heard the name. Did she hear it right, was it Sultan? How could she forget Sultan?
Jahanvi asked, "Aunty, kya yeh Sultan, gangster hai?"
Radha was surprised. "Tum janti ho usse?"
Jahanvi adjusted  herself and said," Nahi woh newspapers mein uske baare mein para tha."
R- Oh...tum aaj raat yehi ruk jao beta. kal Rishuko thoda samjhana, shayad kissi dost se milke usse accha lage.
Jahanvi nodded and went to the room Radhaji showed her. She nervously walked in a to and fro motion and told to herself, "Sultan, pehle tum ne meri zindagi barbaad ki, aur ab mere dost ki? nahi yeh main nahi hone doongi. ..."

Next Morning, when RK woke up and found Jahanvi, he hugged her tightly. Jahanvi consoled him and said, "RK main tumhara dard samjh sakti hoon. Hume Sultan ko saja deni hogi. jis tarah se aunty ne mujhe Madhu, aur Sultan ke baare mein bataya, mujhe poora biswas hai ki Sultan jaroor Madhu ko blackmail kar raha hoga, jis wajah se usne tumhe divorce diya...hume uske paas jana hoga..."
RK- Par kaise Jahanvi?
J- Main jaanti hoon ki Sultan kaha rehta hain...

Sultan's home

Sultan came inside Madhu's bedroom and found her crying on the floor. He said, "Arre tum ab tak taiyaar nahi hui? Jaldi se taiyaar ho jaao. Humari shaadi mein bas kuch hi waqt baaki hai."
M- Main shaadi nahi karoongi.
S- Karna to tumhe parega hi...
Saying this he went to his room to get ready.

At a deserted building under construction

 Sultan got out of the car and dragged Madhu out. Madhu was continuosly sobbing and pleading Sultan not to marry her. Sultan dragged her near a mandap and made her sit and was about to sit  when he heard a female voice singing, "Tera mujhse hai pehle ka naata koi...yuhi nahi dil luvaata koi..."
Sultan screamed, "Kaun hai waha?"
Jahanvi and RK came out from their hiding place, surprising both Sultan and Madhu. RK ran towards Madhu to help her. As Sultan was moving to hurt RK, Jahanvi said, "Naah Sultan, RK ko haat lagane ki koshish bhi mat karna, warna iss pistol ki goliyan tumhare seene se milne jaygi...door khare ho jaao." Sultan was astonished to see Jahanvi with a pistol. He said, "Jahanvi, tum...tum zinda ho?"
J- Mujhe zinda dekhke chauk gaye na? Chaukna hi chahiye, kitna plan karke pehle gari ka accident karwaya, phir meri laash ko nadi mein pheka taaki koi mujhe dhoondh na paye...phir bhi main zinda kaise bachi??? huuhh...Sultan jab tumne gari ka accident karwaya, tab main gari se kud chuki thi, jis wajah se main zinda bach gayi...jab maine tumhe apne paas aate huye dekha to mujhe laga ki shayad mujhe bachane ke liye aaye ho...magar tumhe haaste huye dekhkar mujhe sab samajh aa gaya...zinda thi main jab tumne mujhe kheechkar nadi mein phek diya...jisse suicide attempt kaha tha maine RK se, woh to murder attempt tha...agar uss waqt RK nahi hota to shayad aaj main mar hi gayi hoti...

RK and Madhu were shocked to realise that Jahanvi was none other than Mrs. Sultan Kundra...Whom they knew to be dead...

J- Main chahti to tumhe bohot pehle hi maar sakti thi, magar sirf ek karan se nahi maara...mujhe bas itna jaanna hai...ki kyun uss raat tum meri jaan lena chahte the...tum to mujhse bohot pyaar karte the na...phir Kyun???
Su- Kyunki maine tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi tha...mujhe bas ek saathi ki jarurat thi jo mere akelepan ko door kar sake...tum mere pyaar ke jaal mein fans gayi aur mujhse shaadi karne ko taiyaar ho gayi...jab Aryan juya to mujhe ek raasta dikhai diya, apne dushmano ko khatam karneka aur Dubai ka badshah Sultan banneka...mujhe uss waqt tumhari koi jarurat nahi thi...issliye tumhe apne raaste se hatana chahta tha...
Jahanvi's face crumbled with hate. She stepped forward and slapped Sultan tightly. She said, "Miane apne mata pita ko tumhare liye chora...unhone suicide kar liya meri wajah se...tumhe be intahaan mohabbat karti thi main...aur tumne kya kiya?? Itna bara dhokha?? Tumhe to maut ki saja bhi kam paregi..."

Saying this she stepped back and pointed the gun on Sultan.
J- Par marna to tumhe parega hi Sultan...woh bhi mere hi haatho...

Saying this opened the safety lock of the revolver...
RK- Jahanvi nahi...hum police ko khabar denge...aasia mat karo...
J- Aaj mat roko RK, bohot dino ki khwahish aaj poori hone jaa rahi hai...

Saying this she pulled the trigger five times constantly. The five bullets hit Sultan's body at many places and the last one finally at his head.
RK and Madhu both were shocked to see all this in front of their eyes. Jahanvi, after finishing her work, casually said, "Tum dono yaha se chale jaao...Jaldi...police thodi hi der mein yaha aa jayegi...jaao yaha se...JAAAOOO!!!!!"
RK- Par Jahanvi...tum...
J- Meri fikr mat karo RK...ab main bohot khoosh hu...mujhe kuch nahi hoga...tum jaao...

RK pulled Madhu and started to leave the building. Before leaving, they saw Jahanvi checking whether Sultan is alive. After that she placed the gun near her head and immediately pulled the trigger. A few moments later, they was again complete silence...

After 2 months

Madhu and RK have sorted out every problem in their lives. They were happy in their married life. And finally when Deepali saw that nothing could separate Rishbala, she started to give time to her family, ya Sikky and their coming child. Everything was alright in their place and all thanks to Jahanvi. Rishbala had a photo of hers in their home in which they put flower garland everyday. RIP Jahanvi...

So how was it????? Pls give ur reviews...and sorry for the mistakes...Smile


Edited by rg0782 - 17 August 2013 at 7:31am

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