Balika Vadhu


Balika Vadhu
Balika Vadhu

The Engagement Gift :JaGa OS

-Eris- IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 25 October 2011
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Hi Guys 

This is Vibz and I am watching this how from a few days and the Jagya - Ganga track has me hooked LOL the doctor -nurse angle is what intrigued me in the starting as it resembles a Korean Drama I was very fond of..Embarrassed

Oki without much talking here goes..


Jagat looked at the woman sitting next to him and his heart clenched. He had not been able to realize his folly until now; he was a coward to cave into his family s demands. How could he let her go alone, dint anyone understand the difficulty faced in travelling alone with a toddler? How could she complete formalities in a new city would nt it be too tiresome with Mannu clinging to her hip, the language barrier worsening the situation? He jolted out of his reverie when something soft touched his cheek; a smile lit his tense face as he saw Mannu point towards the air hostess standing next to their seat holding a chocolate laden tray. The airhostess pinched Mannu s cheeks and Jagya s heart strangely swelled with pride when she complimented little Mannu on being well behaved. Hell he should have been paying attention to his friend rather than his beautiful mom. Jeez where did that come from?? He reprimanded himself and Strike that out he chided.


He looked at Ganga as she picked one chocolate for herself. That was the difference it suddenly dawned to him between the childish woman whose eyes gleamed when he had slipped a three carat diamond on her manicured finger a few hours back and this woman whose eyes brimmed with child like enthusiasm as she carefully peeled the wrapper. She glanced up with questioning eyes; probably his staring was making her uncomfortable .He smiled at her as he pulled Mannu closer to him as he closed his eyes for a well deserved nap. Miracles did happen he concluded.

                                                         Just a few hours ago

He was sitting amongst his family, his soon to be fiance and loved ones but still he felt out of place as the women were performing ghoomar on the occasion of his engagement. He did not want a lavish ceremony, but who could he confide in? Who would listen?  A small voice inside him taunted. You could nt even tell them that you was scared to get into another marriage. Dint they remember the sham of his marriage not once but twice? He had agreed to get hitched to Sanchi for, sake of his childhood friend. After all he was morally obliged to do everything to keep her happy. Was nt he the one to almost ruin her life? It was the same reason Ganga was travelling alone today and he was staring blankly at everyone unable to tell them what he wanted. The old Jagat would not care about others and he would have selfishly placed his priorities over others desires rather than becoming the martyr like the new one. At times he wished he could strike a fine balance between the two. He knew he dint want to accompany Ganga to Mangalore it was more of a need; he needed to see her settled safely in the new city before he could come back and start his routine at the hospital without his favourite 'nurse'.


He remembered the day she was trying to learn to give shots she had asked practically everyone she knew to let her experiment but the negative response had not left her disheartened. He was met with a strange site that night when he saw her sitting in her room fiddling with the syringe practicing on Mannu s favourite toy. Jagya had no idea why but he agreed to let her try on him and offered her his hand. She had poked it relentlessly but when she was still unable to master it, he had given her his other hand unhesitatingly. Five minutes later Mannu woke up startled, his mom was screaming in triumph while the doctor yelped in pain. He had worn full sleeved shirts to work for almost a week and had started donning a night shirt instead of his customary vest to his mom s surprise or rather relief.


Why was it that small details were etched in his mind when it came to Ganga but his brain drew to a complete blank whenever he tried to think about the woman next to him, whose hand rested on his after all he had to spend a lifetime with her. He wished he could go back to his room faking a headache when he was met with a sight that made him get up with a jerk. Lal Singh was walking up to him grinning and beside him stood the two people he least expected to see. He started walking towards them when Sanchi whose face looked like she had bit into a lemon decided to tag along clutching his arm. His mom s eyes were shooting fire but before she could say something Dadisa handed him his gift, an envelope with flight tickets for him and Ganga . The boyish smile on his face as he thanked his Dadisa was not missed by the old woman s sharp eyes. Jagya could not control the smile that reached up to his eyes throughout the ceremony. The ticket s in his breast pocket had completely eased the heaviness within.


Jagya caressed Mannu s head lovingly his mind filled with many questions that were slowly boring a hole in his heart. Why did his mood change for the better the minute he had seen Ganga and Mannu ? Why did he feel more at ease holding Mannu than slipping the ring on Sanchi s finger?  Why did that inflated ego of his bask in the knowledge that he was the one who had taken Ganga and Mannu on their first flight trip? Why did Ganga clutching his hand when the plane took off feel so natural? Go to sleep... the small voice inside spoke again. After all he could ponder over these questions at leisure once he would come back. Could nt he?

Would love to read your thoughts on it...Embarrassed

Edited by -Eris- - 17 August 2013 at 7:08am

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KiranlovSriti IF-Rockerz

Joined: 28 February 2013
Posts: 5350

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 7:11am | IP Logged
awesome OS ...hope you write more...

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Libra123 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 November 2012
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Awesome OS vibz... I hope dadisa gives him some gift like that.. Atleast give him permission to leave after the engagement. 

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charuluv_SV IF-Dazzler

Joined: 24 April 2013
Posts: 4128

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Wonderful short story vibs,thank u so muchClap
hope we can get these kind of scenes in futureEmbarrassed
please write FF on JaGanSmile

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ExcuseMePlz IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 24 January 2013
Posts: 37145

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Hello Vibs,its so beautiful.Thank you for writing on JaGan.Expecting more from you.

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sush_ IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 January 2012
Posts: 10390

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:12am | IP Logged
mindblowing Approve
awesome os vibz Clap
wish in serial jagya questions himself like this in serial.. poor guy he is so alone Unhappy

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champawati Groupbie

Joined: 03 July 2013
Posts: 123

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Good Approve

The best part I find is last paragraph where Jagya realize and understand what his heart wants.Clap  

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Colt.Pixy IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 02 August 2013
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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Awesome OS  Thumbs Up   ClapClap   Hug  
It has been so long time I have read from you Tongue  feeling so refreshing  Big smile

I loved dilemma of Jagya Embarrassed 
childish woman hehe. favorite nurse
He suffered pain for Ganga only Embarrassed
I loved DS. I wish she could be like OS on show also Cry

wow Mannu vs Sanchi  Dancing 

He felt natural >>Ganga clutching his hand  Blushing   

I want to read Jagya's realization for Ganga  OS from you Tongue

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