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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Lovely updte
wen is taani going to b totaaly fun loving n bubbly...
I lubd harsh as he ws annoying taani awww as he want to cheer her
sharon ulta thinking btwn taanyam

shani bond superb
four of dem sharon taani swayam harsh i lubd dis four frnship
misses rey much..

Taani angry for rey nt cuming to help her...

Ol ws tooo gud..

Plzz dun go to my like i mn dt y i didn't click like buttom...its crting hell prblm..mny tym i clickd it but i won't show my like..so plzz sry..

Cmmnt obyusly i will make...
Thnkeww for pm

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 3:52am | IP Logged
Awesome Update Tamanna.Really liked Nok jhoks of Taani n Harshad.
Ha ha its Really funny
Waiting for next Update
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Amazing updateTongue
Omg Sharon thinks swayam likes Taani
Plz clear this misunderstanding soon

Nd Taani and harshad part was really cute 
Waiting 4 Rey's pov
Plz update soon!!

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Posted: 17 September 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
awesome update ...
all three part awesome and lovely ... i loved it ...
harsad i don't like pta nhi mjhe lgta h wo taarey ke bich me aa jayega ...
plz harsad ko taani dur rakho ...
taani and rey look each other and then smile ...i love it ...starting of love ...
update soon dear ... plz pm me when u update plz plz plz,

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
hey..
this was an awesome update.. Clap
feels like everything happens with us also whn we r with our frnzzz Star
same masti n same teasing thng goes around with us also Big smile

sharon jealous of taani bt poor she!!! LOL

harshad n taani's nok-jhok.. awesome LOL
taani getting irritated was d most craziest thng Tongue

bechara swayam..Ouch
he himself dont knw tht he's making sharon jealous for his brotherly feelings for taani LOLBig smile

bt seriously wht the hell is going on with rey!!!!!!!!!!!! Shocked

cant understand whts his pov.. Confused

plz update soon the next part.. Sleepy

eagerly waiting for it.. Smile

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged

CHAPTER 4

 

 Next day Sharon alone went to colg after preparing breakfast for taani... when she reached colg she directly went to canteen to meet swahar... swahar were eating their breakfast...

Sharon: gud morng guys...

Swahar : gud mrng...

Swayam: taani kaisi hai... use pain to nahi ho raha tha...

Sharon: abhi wo thik hai... don't worry...

Swayam: tum itna jaldi kyu aa gayi ... use agar kisi chiz ki zarurrat hui to... Leave that tumne sare chize uske samne to rakh di hai na... taki usko problem na ho...

Swayam said this in one go... shahar were shocked to see swayam so tensed... Sharon was little bit angry...

Sharon(angrily): wo tumhare se pehle meri friend hai... mujhe uski jyada fikar hai... so don't worry...

Harshad senses Sharon is angry with swayam... so took the side of swayam...

Harshad: Sharon aisi bat nahi hai... swayam bas aise hi thora hyper ho gaya tha...

Sharon gives whatever look and went to class...

Swayam: ye Sharon ko kya ho gaya...

Harshad: yar mujhe doubt ho raha hai...

Swayam: kya doubt ho raha...

Harshad: ki tu sharon ko love karta hai ya taani ko????

Swayam(shocked): what??? Obviously Sharon ko...

Harshad: to tu taani ko lekar itna hyper kyu ho raha tha...

Swayam: yaar she is my friend... and more than that I treat her like my sister...

Harshad: what?? Tu taani ko sister samajta hai

Swayam: ha...

Harshad: koi kisi ladki ko apna sis kaise samaj sakta hai...

Swayam: I dnt knw... jab bhi mai use dekhta hu I want to take care of her as a brother...

Harshad: ok... but don't act as possessive brother jab mai usse majak karu... becoz we are friends first...

Swayam: ok... (harshad smiles) I will try..(I dnt care look)..

Swahar entered class... they saw Sharon is sitting alone in the class so harshad went to Sharon and sit with her... swayam sat beside them... after some time ashi(** ashi is their classmate and seat partner of harshad..  she is chipku type girl**) came and sat with swayam...

Ashi(holding swayam's hand): swayam dekho na mai kitni thandi ho gayi hu...

Swayam was shocked by this act of ashi... Shahar heard that and harshad laughed and Sharon gave him deadly look so he stopped laughing... harshad saw swayam was in shock state so he said and swayam came out of shock...

Harshad: ashi I think swayam temp measure nahi karta...

Sharon laugh and swayam adores her...

Ashi: mai to bas aise hi bol rahi thi...

Harshad: oh mujhe laga swayam ne mbbs kar rakha hai...

Swayam: shut up harshad...

Harshad shut his mouth then  he saw Sharon and thought something...

Harshad: Sharon..

Sharon: ha..

Harshad:swayam  kitna cute hai na ...

Sharon: ha(thinking about swayam)

Harshad: wo taani ka kitna care karta hai na...

Sharon: hmm...(sadly)

Harshad: kash wo tumhari bhi itni care karta...

Sharon: ha... (coming out of her thought).. kya bol raha hai tu...

Harshad: jo tu sun rahi hai..

Sharon: wo meri care kyu karega...

Harshad: as a friend... kyu tum kuch aur soch rahi thi...

Sharon: aisa kuch nahi hai...

Harshad: I don't think so...

Sharon ignored harshad... harshad also didn't say anything... at the same time with rey... Rey was waiting for taani then he saw Sharon cuming to class alone.. but he thought may be taani is coming with swahar... but to his disappointment... taani didn't come... after few minutes viha entered to the class they saw rey...

Vicky: hi dude...

Rey: hi..

Neha: hi rey..

Rey: hi...

Neha: why are u so sad...

Rey: aisa kuch nahi hai... bas aise hi...

Viha sat together...

Vicky: aaj rey bohat shant hai...

Neha: ha... lagta hai kissi chiz ko lekar tension mai hai...

Vicky: mai pata lagata hu...

After sometime lecturer came... they had continous lecture of 3 hrs after that they had break so they left the classe... vicky told neha that he needs to talk to rey so neha went to library... vicky and rey went to canteen...

Rey: neha kaha hai

Vicky: use library mai kam hai...

Rey: oh.. mai coffee lekar aata hu...

Rey brought coffee for them ... vicky decide to talk with rey...

Vicky: what happened dude...

Rey: mujhe kya hoga...

Vicky: tu subha se itna upset kyu hai...

Rey: nahi to...

Vicky: tu kissi ko miss kar raha hai...

Rey: mai kyu kisi ko miss karunga... tu aur neha yahi to ho...

Vicky: mai humari bat nahi kar raha tha...

Rey: to kiski... pls don't say that ki mai taani ko miss kar raha hu..

Vicky: maine uska nam nahi liya..

Rey: tu lene wala tha...

Vicky: nahi... tu taani ke bare mai itna kyu soch raha hai...

Rey: aisa nahi hai bas thora guilty feel kar raha hu... wok al gir gayi aur mai use help karne bhi nahi gaya...

Vicky: its not ur fault... tu to help karne jane wala tha par... professor ne hume bula liya... aur waha uske friends the...

Rey: I am also her friend... usko kitna bura laga hoga ki maine uski help nahi ki...

Vicky: usko kyu bura lagega... uske friend... I mean close friend waha the... aur usne tujhe waha dekha nahi tha...

Rey: are u sure usne hume waha nahi dekha tha...

Vicky: ya dude... use aur bhi kam hai tujhe dekhne ke alawa...

Rey: mai bhi kon sa usse hi  dekhta rehta hu...

Vicky: ya I knw...

Rey: what u knw???

Vicky: dekh waha taani ke friends.. unse puchte hai taani kaisi hai...

Rey: leave it...

Vicky: tu chal...

Vicky drag rey to swaron and harshad place...

Vicky: hi guys...

Swaron,harshad: hi..

Vicky: taani kaha hai... wo aaj nahi aayi ???

Vicky wink at rey... shahar notice this... they felt weird... rey gave deadly glare to vicky... Swayamm replied to them...

Swayam: actually taani ke leg mai sprain ho gaya hai... aur doctor ne 2-3 days ka rest diya hai...

Vicky: oh.. chot kaise lagi...

Harshad: wo gir gayi thi... abhi thik hai... ghar par rest kar rahi hai...

Vicky: oh..

Rey: ok bye guys we have to go...

Rey went off and took vicky with him...

Harshad: mujhe inka behavior kuch ajeeb lag raha hai...

Swayam: nahi... mujhe sab normal laga raha hai...

Sharon understood what harshad is thinking... she also think that something is fishy... but she decide to discuss this with taani first... so she divert the topic...

Sharon: guys  mai chalti hu... taani ghar mai akeli hogi...

Swayam: hum bhi aate...

Sharon: no its ok...

Harshad: kyu... tum nahi chahti swayam I mean hum taani se mila...(Sharon give a deadly glare)

Swayam: sharon aisa kyu chahe gi...

Sharon: ya... actually I want to spend some time with my bff...

Harshad: are u sure u both are only bff... mujhe kuch gadbad lag raha hai...

Sharon: shut up...

Swayam: ok Sharon... hum bad mai use mil lenge...

Harshad: thik hai... meri taani ka dhyan rakhna.. aur pls uske sath kuch mat karna... nahi to mai barbad ho jaoga...

Sharon: very funny...

Harshad: no I am serious...

Sharon: bye...

Swahar: bye...

Sharon enter their house and saw taani reading novel... she went to her and sat beside...

Taani: itni jaldi aa gayi...

Sharon: class jaldi khatam ho gaya tha...

Taani: tu jhut to nahi bol rahi... kahi tune bunk to nahi mari...

Sharon: tujhe lagta mai tere liye bunk karungi...

Taani: na...

Sharon: tune khana khaya...

Taani: tujhe lagta hai mai is halat mai khana bana sakti hu...

Sharon: tera fav. Pizza order ker leti...

Taani: tujhe shayad yaad nahi... par tu mujhe bahar se lock kar ke gayi thi... aur apni bakwas band kar... aur khana bana... mujhe bhukh lagi hai...

Sharon: ok jati hu... tere hi din hai...

Sharon went to kitchen and made something for them... they ate and sat in hall to chit chat...

Taani: aaj colg kaisa tha..

Sharon: jaisa huesha hota hai..

Taani: Sharon pls...

Sharon: thik thak tha.. swayam ko teri tension thi...

Taani: he is so sweet wo kitna caring hai...

Sharon: sirf tere liye...

Taani; someone is jealous..

Sharon: mai kyu jealous hongi...

Taani: chill Sharon... he  is like my brother..

Sharon: kisi ko bhai banana se pehle soch le ki wo tere bare mai kya sochta hai...

Taani: Sharon aisa kuch nahi hai..

Sharon: wo sab chod... pata hai aaaj tere bare mai vicky puch raha tha...

Taani:matla..

Sharon: simple yaar... kit u kaha hai aur colg kyu nahi aayi... tujhe chot kaise lagi...

Taani; jaise unko pata hi nahi tha ki mai gir gayi..(Sharon gave a questioning look).. they saw me when I feel down...

Sharon: oh...

Taani: waise rey kaha the...

Sharon : wo bhi wahi tha... aur vicky ne question puchne ke bad rey ko wink bhi kya...

Taani: kyu??

Sharon; taani tu sach sach bata tere aur rey ke bich kya chal raha hai...

Taani(sadly): kuch nahi...

Sharon: to tu itna sad kyu ho rahi hai... u like him...(taani nodded).. and u didn't tell me anything...

Taani: actually Sharon I was confused... first time I saw hi I was attracted... phir wohi fortunately or unfortunately mera sit partner bana... u knw what was the most shocking thing...

Sharon: what???

Taani:He remember my name... aur mujhse khud bat karne aaya...

Sharon: ab tu kissi se bat nahi karegi iska matlab ye nahi na ki wo bhi tujhse bat na kare...

Taani: but I really like him... aur mai ye hi nahi chahti wo mujhe chipko ladki type samjhe...

Sharon: like ashi...

Taani: who is asshi???

Sharon: bad mai batati hu... tu pehle continue kar...

Taani: isliye mai use distance maintain karna chahti hu...

Sharon; I think he also like u...

Taani: what rubbish???

Sharon: maine bohat bar viha ko dekha hai rey ko tere naam se tease karte hui...

Taani: maine to kabhi nahi dekha...

Sharon; tujhe apne bare mai koi chiz dikhai deti hai...

Just then door bell rang... Sharon went to open the door... swahar were there... harshad came inside without permission... swaron followed...

harshad: hi sweet heart kaisi hai...

taani; aapke bina thik ho sakti hu...

harshad; not bad...

swayam; taani abhi tumhara leg kaisa hai...

taani; abhi thik hai... shayad 2-3 se colg attend karugi...

swayam; itna jaldi kyu.. thora aaram karo..

taani: swayam mai thik hu...

harshad: swayam chor na waise bhi colg mai humare alawa bhi bohat log hai jo shayad taani ka wait kar rahe hai...

swayam; kon log???

Taani was shocked listening to harshad so she asked Sharon from expression whether harshad knw about rey... Sharon replied in negative... harshad so this... taani to divert the topic...

Taani: waise asshi kon hai...

Harshad: kya bat hai tujhe sab pata hai...ruk mai batata hu...he went to sit beside taani and told her everything...taani was laughing like hell...

Swayam: tu has kyu rahi hai...

Taani: waise uska temp kitna tha...

Swayam: shut up taani...

Harshad: teri itni himmat meri gf se aise bat kare(taani and swaron was shocked) aisa kya dekh rahe ho.. kyu taani tu eri gf nahi hai kya...

taani: ha bilkul... aaj gf hu kal biwi ban jaogi...

harshad: mujhe koi problem nahi... par kuch jyada jaldi nahi ho jayega... abhi tak kissi ki love story bhi shuru nahi hui humari shadi ho jaye gi...

taani; harshad I will kill u...

harshad: don't worry sweetheart... hum pehle romance karenge phir shadi...

taani: aapki jo margi... harshad ji...

harshad: mujhe nahi pata that u itni despo hogi.. ek bar mai romance ke liye man gayi...

taani slapped harshad... first everyone is shocked... harshad was angry.. taani got scared but after few second harshad said...

harshad: pyaar ka pehla thappad...

taani: tu nahi sudhrega...

 

like that days went off... After cog swahar used to come in shani house they used to do so much of masti... harshad as usual used to flirt with taani... now taani also use to slap harshad regularly... every time harshad flirt with taani... he will surely get slap from taani... like that fond between friends become stronger... in the other hand viha want to knw about re's feeling but he used to ignore them... he never asked about taani... but he misses her... till now no one knw about rey's feeling... or rey only don't knw abut his feeling... or rey don't feel for for taani...

 

 

i hope u all like the update... i knw i didnt gave rey's pov... it will take 1-2 chapter...i also knw that this update was not upto the mark... but pls bear with this... and do comment and like... i am not getting good response...

 



Edited by tamanna-azaan - 20 September 2013 at 1:19am

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 1:09am | IP Logged
RES/UNRES

*EDITED*

Awsum update yr

Luved jealous sharon

swayam concern for taani was so luvly

Then rey n viha part was cute

N aashi part was hilarious yr

N shaani part was well written

N dat was the reason y rey dint helped taani

Luved swahar n shaani part

It was so funny

All in all pet dard kr rha hai haste haste

Thanx for PM

Updt soon n PM me

P.S.-me first to comment wo bi kitne dino baad...n I think first one to like too

Edited by -Sweet_Soumya- - 20 September 2013 at 1:19am

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Sweet_Soumya-

RES/UNRES

*EDITED*

Awsum update yr

Luved jealous sharon

swayam concern for taani was so luvly

Then rey n viha part was cute

N aashi part was hilarious yr

N shaani part was well written

N dat was the reason y rey dint helped taani

Luved swahar n shaani part

It was so funny

All in all pet dard kr rha hai haste haste

Thanx for PM

Updt soon n PM me

P.S.-me first to comment wo bi kitne dino baad...n I think first one to like too


yup dear u r the first one to comment and like...
and thnx for the lovely comment...


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