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Bile rose up in her throat as Shailendra hugged Pratigya , sniffing loudly €˜oh€I am going to miss my precious daughter€.. but she is going as the bride of the Thakur Family€..what else would a father want?€™ €€€€€€. She stood like a statue, wishing to die €€€€. Women around them sighed , one gushing €˜not to worry minister €€€. Ur damaadji will be treating her like a queen€€€.€™ A muscle pulsed in his jaw as krishna walked quickly to the black audi RS 5 waiting , all decorated , dragging pratigya out of the false grip of her father, by their knot €€she felt relief spread over her the moment she was out of the grip of shailendra€.€€ sajjan put a calming hand over krishna€™s right shoulder as chandu held open the door€€€€€Krishna smiled at sajjan n climbed in €€€€her tear strained eyes met the cold stare of sajjan n she suppressed a shudder as she climbed in , turning her eyes to look at the general direction of the window of her mother€™s room€€€€€.
Krishna n Pratigya were looking out of their respective windows , each slowly becoming increasingly aware of the other€™s proximity €€€€ Chandu was driving n he kept his eyes to the front €€.. Pratigya just wanted to cry , let out all the pain n sadness n fear inside her €€€€.. Krishna could increasingly feel the urge to turn n just look at her , anywhere over her, but he gritted his teeth n glared outside €€€.. they drove in dead silence n chandu was reminded of their journey home after the attack during night€€€€. Krishna felt the despair n fear in her as slowly his mixed feelings of anger n desire mellowed down€€€€.he looked around at her , confused €€€€€. Her face was turned in the opposite direction n his eyes trailed down her ridiculously covered n decorated body n down to her mehandi covered hands , wondering why was she feeling so desp€€€€. His thought jumped back to his dream when he had practically searched for his name in her hands €€€€ he closed his eyes in frustration n opened them, his eyes falling on the knot which tethered them to each other€€€€€. He stared at it long , feeling strange as he couldn€™t feel any aversion to the way he had been tied to something , her!, all this time€€€€€.. he found that he wasn€™t looking forward to untie it soon , when some minutes ago he all but wanted to untie it €€€€ he clicked his tongue in frustration n turned towards the window again€€€€€€€.
Pratigya could feel his eyes on her n she moved closer towards the window , her hands mashing her skirt over her knees€€€ she felt both relieved n a sense of loss when his eyes finally moved away €. She let out an inaudible gasp as she saw his face reflected in her window€€€.. her eyes followed his gaze n guessed that now he was looking at the knot €€€he looked so handsome€..no! stop!€€she averted her eyes , cursing herself , but found herself glancing at his reflection from under her wet lashes €. She continued to gaze at his reflection n felt herself calm down, the knot in her chest loosening a bit€€€. She felt relaxed, till he turned his face away , a flash of anger n frustration across his features, startling her€€€€. He is really mercurial! €€ n his mood changes just like that€.! she thought , a faint smile breaking her lips, slightly annoyed€€€€ she stared ahead in shock, blinking as she realized what was she doing €€€ she was thinking about him again !!!! €.. n smiling !!!! when all her world was hurling towards destruction, she was smiling €. N that too thinking about the various silly mood swings of that devil!!!... she closed her eyes in pain, praying for the nightmare to end€€.
The pandit opened the door to find angad standing in front of him€€€ he squinted at him , trying to place him€€€..angad smiled , stepping in , as he said €˜I am angad€.Ma Sahib€™s son €she send me to€€™ €˜oh €. Come inside malik€..€™ said the pandit, bowing n allowing him to pass€ angad felt smug €.malik ! €that sounded n felt good€€€ very soon , he will be the real malik€he mused €€™pls sit , malik€.its too late, but then again would u like to have tea or coffee or anything?€™€inquired the pandit politely €.€™no nothing €€™ declined angad , getting impatient €..€€™I have been looking up preventive solutions malik, n I think if a proper shiva puja is conducted we could minimize the effect €€.but it will come to pass , nevertheless€.€™ Sighed the pandit sitting down on a chair opposite angad€€€€ angad eyed pandit in dislike€one one hand he has called him malik n he has the audacity to sit in front of him€! He forced himself to let go of the matter €.the pandit should remain alive till he knows all the facts €. €˜what will come to pass? What solutions? €sorry, ma didn€™t tell me exactly€..€™ began angad carefully €€ the pandit looked at him confused €€™didn€™t ma sahib tell u?€™ he asked €€ €˜well, no€.actually€.. may be the matter is of atmost importance €..€™ angad said offhandedly , laughing €€. €˜anyways , she told me to tell u that she is coming here soon to discuss the matter €€. In the meanwhile why don€™t u tell me what€™s going on€? €˜ the pandit felt a bit weird at the edge in his voice€. €˜er€ I don€™t know€.its..complicated..€™ he mumbled , still confused€€€..
angad was losing his patience , but he continued €˜yeah , ma also said like that€but panditji , is there anything to worry? I mean all r excited about the marriage n r we not paying attention to something important? €˜ he asked, trying to sound genuine €.. €˜yes n no €! €˜ sighed the pandit, feeling at ease at his concerned tone €€€€ €˜I know u r all excited about the marriage n I had warned ma sahib to postpone the marriage €..but ofcourse chote thakur wants things his way, so ma sahib told me€€€.but what€™s done is done€! Let€™s hope the possibilities remain as possibilities n nothing worse happens!...€™ angad stood up, trying to rein the excitement in his voice €˜what ? is there any problem with this marriage? See, I am very fond of my brother€.younger to me ofcourse, n so he is the jaan of the house €pls tell me€.what is it..? €˜ the pandit looked at angad as his confusion was triggered again €€€€ €˜er€ this marriage will endanger chote thakur€™s life€€. May be even the girl€™s too€.. but not to worry €˜ he added hastily as angad€™s eyes widened €€€ €˜its just the time €..this time, precisely €€€ once chote thakur crosses the age of 26 all will be well€€€..€™ €€ €˜what do u mean? He will die soon?€™ whispered angad , his eyes glinting in unmistakable anticipation n excitement n hope but disbelief too €€€.. n for the first time , the pandit noticed all the underlying emotions €€€€.. he tensed , standing up uncertainly ..€™malik€when would ma sahib come?€™ angad stood up too , abandoning his well mannered behavior , an evil smile playing across his lips as he said€€€™she will come€. €.€™ His voice turned hoarse with excitement €˜Tell me what is going to happen? Will he die soon?€™ €€.
Pandit looked horrified at angad , stepping back , his eyes darting around the hall n towards the door€€ €˜what r u talking about malik? He is ur brother ! why do u want him dead?€™ asked the pandit, his voice laced with anger n panic€€€.. €˜€™brother ! my foot! €˜ shouted angad , deranged €€ the pandit backed away , his eyes darting to the near by vase€€€€€ but angad was quicker he charged forward n caught the pandit by neck , his face contorted in anger €..€™he is not my brother! He is my enemy ! I am the elder one but he gets to enjoy the riches all bec my mother is the daughter of a mistress!!! €€€€ people fear him n even respect him !!!! while they look at me as scum !!!...n the girls !!!...they r fighting over themselves to be his slave n all I get is his left over!!! €˜ he spat , tightening his grip over pandit€™s throat €€€. Pandit struggled , kicking out €€€.his knee hit angad squarely on groin n he doubled up in pain, releasing the pandit with a groan €€€..the old man scrambled away , choking n coughing n shouting for help€€€. €˜u bas***d€!€™ shouted angad , his hand taking hold of the vase n flinging it on the old man€™s head €€€€ the man lunged sideways trying to avoid it but collided with the nearby wooden sculpture n fell down €€€€. Angad was beside him n stamping him down on his stomach in a moment€.the old pandit howled in pain €€€€ €˜what do u want ? I don€™t know anything €€ ps leave me€.pls€..€™ the pandit pleaded €€€.. €˜don€™t waste my time n energy , u old fool€.. tell me , what did u see n their kundalis? How long will he live? €..tell me nicely n I may let u die calmly or else u will die terribly ! €™ angad smacked him across the face€€€€€ blood spurted from pandit€™s mouth as he groaned in pain€€€. €˜no ! I won€™t tell€€ I€.am a loyal servant to thakur sahab €..€™ shouted the man as he pushed angad off him with his feeble hands with all strength he could muster €€€€.angad staggered back hitting his head on to a pillar €€€€
the pandit scampered up , terrified as he limbed across the room to the land phone €€€€angad€™s hand went for his gun but he stopped as his cunning mind alerted him...using the gun would alert the neighbors €€€€. Also there will be an enquiry by Chandu as the pandit , even though out of service is still their family pandit €€€€€ n Chandu n by extension Krishna will know what happened as he had taken his regular gun n not the illegal one €€€€. The pandit had barely reached the telephone when angad plunged a broken wooden piece from the fallen sculpture down his back €€€€.. the blood curdling scream of pandit was enough to waken the whole street n angad just ran, after trying to haul the pandit€™s bleeding body near to the toppled sculpture to make it look like an accident, looking around if he had accidently left any thing that might point at him€€€..
The pandit opened his eyes, groaning in pain €€€€.. his eyes streamed as he forced himself to keep them open n tried to crawl , blood gushing from the wound on his back€€€€€. Once he reached the telephone stand he exerted himself to stand , his teeth gritted in pain , hands flying erroneously to grab on to the table €€even when life was being sucked out of him , his thoughts swirled around his maliks €€€ chote malik was in grave danger ! n its his own cousin who is after his life ! as if all the other enemies rn€™t enough€..! €..trying to keep his eyes open , he dialed the only contact number he knew of about the Thakurs , after he was thrown away from their service €€€their public directory land line number €€€€..
Sumitra was finishing the decorations near to the staircase in the main hall when the phone rang €€€. All servants looked curiously at the phone as the land line was seldom in use , unless it was some emergency €€€€ sumitra looked at the phone in confusion as the head of the servants , rakesh looked at her , unsure €€€€ she nodded at him n he picked up the phone , nervous , but indicating the others to resume their work€€€.€™is malkin there?€™ rasped the pandit into the phone , willing himself to speak €€€€ rakesh looked up at sumitra , startled as he heard the dying man€™s voice €€€™who r u ? €˜ he asked curtly into the phone €€€™I€am€. Shankar lal€. Pls€. give the phone to€.to malkin€€™ the pandit gritted out , his legs threatening to give away €€. Sumitra walked over to the phone in confusion n anxiety as rakesh offered the phone to her , calling €˜malkin €€. I think there is some problem€€it€™s our old pandit €.shankar lal€.. €˜ sumitra took the phone , burning in tension €. €˜malkin€!!! €. Chote malik €.. ! he is in danger €.. he €the bride €€ they €.their life€€in danger €€€˜ the pandit choked into the phone €€€.€™what ? what r u saying €?€™ sumitra inhaled sharply , fear clawing at her throat €€€€™choti malkin ?...€™ the pandit was finding it difficult to believe his dying ears €€of all the people that woman had to attend the call!!! €.. oh what had he done €..! he had alerted the enemy itself €.! He had thought that ma sahib will attend the phone , but €€ didn€™t he hear that choti malkin was thrown into some cellar down the haveli !!!! his mind reeled as pain clawed at his now parched throat €€€ sumitra was frantic €.. what was he saying ? after all these years why was he calling? N he seemed €€€oh!€€.. he seemed as though he was in pain €€.. as though he was €.dying ?€€.. or falling unconscious ! €€€.. n what was he saying ? that her son€™s life is in danger ! n the girl€™s too !!!! €€€€.
€˜what €. Pandit ji€pls talk €€ what were u saying ? what happened to u? r u alright ?€™ she shouted shrilly into the phone , rakesh looking at her in confusion €€€€.. the pandit€™s dying eyes flickered open with a new found vigor as he heard the genuine , true concern in the voice of a woman he thought was bad all these years €€€ €˜choti malkin ! €€ur son €. His life is in €danger €.. pls€.save €. Him€.. the girl€.. her too€.. €˜ he said , trying with all his might to stay alive €€€. €˜shankar ji €.. what r u saying ? my beta €..krishna €.. ! is he alright ? what happened to u €..?€™ shouted sumitra into the phone , suddenly feeling weak €€€€. €˜save €.them€.. angad €.he€ traitor€..€™ the pandit collapsed to the floor , finally, unable to stand €€€€€. €˜hello€.? panditji€€ ? hello€.? €˜ sumitra said frantically into the phone €€€€€.. meera, who was checking whether the guests n thakurs were arriving or not , entered the hall smugly ,saying €˜hurry up, they r at the gate€€€€™ which was absolutely unnecessary as the guards at the gate already sounded the bell in the corridor to alert them€€€€€ the servants ran a last sec search to make sure the everything was alright while sumitra dropped the phone in consternation , not before meera hearing her frantic shout n the look of shock in her face€€€€ meera frowned at sumitra€™s retreating back, shocked€€€. That woman used the phone! N who was this pandit ji? €€€€ she will have to tell ma sahib about this! N may be she will get some new jewelry , she mused walking swiftly towards the maids , standing not so near to them, flaunting her new gown n necklace , her eyes following sumitra as she disappeared behind the curtain along the kitchen corridor €€€€€
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