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T4-ARIYA--PeHla PyArr-part 57 pg 46 (Page 9)

Aks13 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 9:30am | IP Logged
First of all so sorry for late comments.

Nw about update. Its super duper awesome dr.

Awww She waited for Arjun so that he feed her.

They r so cute n madly love eachother.

Loved the way Samjun fight for paying the bills. She is really lucky to hv a family like this.

Yayyy she choose him over her parents. Thats great as she made the right decision.

Loved the she took Arjun's side in front of her parents.

Precap looks super interesting.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

teja21 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 21 August 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
nice update dear

thanx fr d pm 
1993.ssg Goldie

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Superb update Riya choose Arjun Thanks for the pm pls continue soon
pinkerbell IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 5:38am | IP Logged

Part 51

They were all sitting in the hall after dinner..

Suryakant: mein socha ki ab riya bhi thik hai.. 

toh kyon na adhoora kam pura kiya jay..

Arjun: matlab?

Savita: aree teri aur riya ke shaadi karane hai..tum kya 

kehte ho riya?

Riya: mein€. Mein kya kahun..

Arjun got her hesitation to answer and so does others.. 

they all knew riya was still going through an inferiority 

complex coz of her scars and burns..

Suryakant: tum dono aram se soch lo aur hame bata 

dena.. riya aap rest karo beta..aur bilkul tension nahi 


Arjun took riya to her room.

.riya stood in front of the mirror.. she was seeing herself/€

Arjun remembered how  she had reacted whn she saw 

herself for the first time in the mirror after the 


she was shattered to core and she cried the her heart out 

so badly..


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pinkerbell IF-Rockerz

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Riya was getting better and she wanted to look herself in 

the mirror..coz whenever she asks arjun how is she 


His answer was always that she is the most beautiful girl 

he had ever seen..

When she saw herself in the mirror .. she shouted so 

loudly that all the members sitting outside got scared.. 

nurse quickly went to riya to check on her.. 

and she found riya fallen on the floor crying so badly€

Nurse immediately called arjun..

arjun came and hugged her ..took her in his arms and 

assured that he is there for her always..

Riya: arjun mein itni buri dekhti hoon..

 aap mujhse jhoot bol rahe the ab tak..

Arjun: shhh riya pehle shaant hojav.. quiet bilkul rona 


He cupped her face.. kissed her forehead  let her calm 

down in his arms..

Riya: arjun mein€

Arjun: shhh riya€ meine kahan na pehle rona bandh 


Now she was calm bt she ws broken from within..


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pinkerbell IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged

Arjun: riya tum es duniya ki sabse beautiful ladki ho.. 

aur mere liye tum meri angel ho..samjhe tum..

Riya: angel par daag nahi hote arjun..

Arjun: toh kya hua meri angel special hai please riya.. 

yeh scars burn marks sab chale jayenge.. 

aur agar nahi bhi gai so wat? I dnt care..

Riya: bt I do.. mein nahi chahti ki aap apni life eke se 

ladki ke saath spend kare jisse  body pe ..

Arjun: riya meine toh socha tha ki mein apni riya ke 

saath life spent karunga joh mujhse bohot pyar karti hai..

Riya:pyar karti hoon issliye keh rahi hoon phir se 

sochiye.. kya kahenge sab ke apne ek burnt ladki se 

shaadi ki..

Arjun: nahi sab yeh kahenge..

 iss languor ko itni beautiful pari kaise mil gai.. 

and riya do u really think mein logo ke care karunga..

U are and u will always be my riya..

the most beautiful person in my life..

From that arjun not only started to care for her recovery 

bt also started to build her broken confidence on herself..




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pinkerbell IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 5:47am | IP Logged

Arjun held riya from back.. covering her in his arms..

she too placed her hands on his..

Arjun: kya hua ri?(he sometimes call her ri..)

Riya: arjun.. mein soch rahe the ke hum abhi shaadi na 

kare thode time baad kare toh..

Arjun: ri shaadi ko lekar koi tension mat lo.. abhi nahi 

karne toh jab bhi tumhara mann ho tab karenge koi jaldi 

nahi hai.. ok..chalo medicine ka time hogaya hai..

He gave her medicines..caressed her cheeks..

Arjun: gn..ri..

Riya: gn..

He pecked her lips and went out of the room.

Riya pov: I m sorry arjun..

mein janti ke apko hurt hua hoga ki meine shaadi ke wait 

karne ki baat ki.. par mein€ 

mein janti ki aap mujhe waise hi accept karenge jaise 

mein hoon par mein nahi chahti ki aap  hamare rishte 

mein koi bhi compromise kare..

mein apko wooh har haq har khushi dena chahti joh apko 

mere pati ke roop mein milne chahiye..

apne  mere liya bohot kuch saha hai arjun par ab mein 

apko sirf khushiyan dena chahti hoon..




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Annika_Ishqbaaz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 August 2013 at 6:00am | IP Logged
Arjun and Riya's POV were written very beautifully.
I can understand how Riya is feeling.
Flashback was really painful.
Dnt seperate Ariya,please.
Continue soon.

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