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T4-ARIYA--PeHla PyArr-part 57 pg 46 (Page 5)

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Arjun: chalo riya ghar chalke aram karo..





sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai..




Riya dad: riya hamare saath chal rahi hai.. 






she is our daughter..






Nurse had taken out riya's engagement ring.. 





and given it to her mom..






Riya's mom: le lo tumhare ring..





khatam hogai yeh sagai..







koi rishta nahi hai tumhara hamare beti se.





na tumse shadi karne ki dhoon savar hoti aur nahi riya ko 






yeh sab dekhna padta..








Before arjun could say anything ..riya said..







Riya: mein apne ghar ja rahe hoon..suna aap logon ne..







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Riya's mom: sun liya na riya ne kya kahan..





she is going to her house..





Riya: apne thik se suna nahi.. 






mein apne ghar ja rahi hoon..







Riya's mom: ha riya tum hamare saath chal rahe 







hoon..right..







Riya: nahi mom mein apne ghar ja rahe hoon.. apne 







arjun ke saath apni family ke paas..








meri family apni hone wale bahu ka intezar kar rahi hai..








Mom meri engagement ring de dijiye..








Riya snatched her ring and gave it to arjun..









Riya: mujhe pehnaeynge nahi arjun?









Arjun took her hand slowly not to hurt her wound and 









made her wear the ring..









Riya's dad: aur hum riya?







Hum tumhare kya hai? Sirf iss 







arjun ki wajah se  tum humse ese..










Riya: dad aapp itna kuch hone ke baad bhi arjun ko 







samaj nahi paye..jis koi aur ko app mere dhoondna 







chahte hai na wooh toh mujhe uss aag mein marne ke 







liye chod deta meri jalee hue body ko dekhke..





par arjun us hadse se lekar aab tak  mere saath hai.. 






unke aai baba mere saath hai..apne na jane arjun se kya 





kuch nahi kaha hoga.. 






par fir bhi unhone apko palat ke jawab nahi diya..






yeh mere arjun hai.. aur koi aur unki jagah lena toh dur.. 






unke jaise bananee ki koshish bhi nahi karne ki himmat 







bhi nahi kar sakta..





kyonki  mere arjun jaisa koi ban hi sakta..








mein aur arjun ek dusree se jude hai.. 







jiss din aap dil se arjun ko apna lenge uss din apki beti 








bhi apko wapas mil jayegi..chaliye arjun..







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Arjun: shaadi ke date final hote hi apko inform kar 





denge..aap ayenge toh..






Riya: wooh nahi ayenge arjun.. 





wooh bohot buzy hai… chaliye..








In the car…








Riya: arjun jante hai ek pal ke liye meine socha ki mom-







dad ke ghar chale jaate toh apke life thodi simple ho 







jati.. 






par phir aaj pehli baar mera dil selfish hona chahta tha 








apke pyar ke liye apne family ke liye..aai baba ke liye..










Arjun: riya ek baat kahun.. 








agar tum aaj chali jaate toh mein sach mein mar jata ..







ek pal nahi jee sakta tumhare bina..









Riya: mujhe bhi toh apke bina jeeena nahi aataa. 








I love u..








Arjun: I love u too.. I love u the most..









Riya switched on the radio..and the song played was..








Hume tumse pyar kitna yeh hum nahi jante

Magar jee nahi sakte tumhare bina..










Riya rested her head on arjun's shoulders and he kissed 








slightly on her head..remembering all the wonderful 









moments of their love..



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Arjun took riya home.. all hugged her and thanked god..





Savita welcomed riya…her nany was also there..





Savita: beta thik toh ho na?





Riya: ha aai..bilkul thik hoon..






Suryakant: beta aap jake aram karo..aur kuch bhi 






chahiye wooh humse kehna..







Riya: jee baba..







Riya: nany aap yahan??







Savita: ha riya.. 






tumse milne ka maan ho raha thaa toh humne yahi bula 





liya..






Nany: agar ap log bura na mane toh kya mein kuch din 






yahan ruk sakte hoon.. riya ka khayal bhi rakhungi aur 







apke madad bhi kar lungi..








Savita : zaror yeh apki  beti ka hi  ka ghar hai ..







 aap haq se ruk satki hai..ma hai uske ..








Riya was recovering well with the love and care of  her 









family…










Now riya had only to go hospital once a month for check 







up.. her scars and burns marks were reducing.. 








and some almost vanished..










So now arjun's parents decided to get them married..

 








(it was 6 months from the day they were supposed to be 




getting married..)









precap:








is riya ready for the marriage.???






will her scars and burn marks pull her away from arjun???



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unres so romantic and perfect part ... Riya's Decision made proud... Story headed very good way... Sam- jun fight i like it... Riya and arjun food wala scene super... Nice precap Update soon dear... Thanks for the PM...

Edited by ashmijoseph - 20 August 2013 at 11:52am
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Superb Part...
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*Unres*

Wonderful update.
Just loved it.
Was waiting for this update since two days.
I am really very proud of Riya.
She took the best and wisest decision of her Life.
Riya's parents' ki ghamand abhi tak nahi gai.
They r still so selfish and still they r thinking abt themselves,not about Riya's happiness...
Loved how Riya answered her Mom.
Riya didnt even have the breakfast her Mom made.
She waited for Arjun and had the breakfast made by Arjun's Aai.
She herself ate and made Arjun eat.
It was really superb.
Loved how Sam bhai and Arjun fought over paying the hospital bills.
Finally,Papa Rawte told Sam bhai and Arjun to share the payment.
Riya ne sabke samne Arjun se kaha to make her wear the engagement ring.
That was the most beautiful moment.
Yay..
I m so happy,that,Riya is moving with Arjun and his parents'.
Finally,Riya is discharged.
Yay...
I m happy again...
The Ariya moment in the car was really beautiful and sweet.
The song,(which is my favr8),added more to its sweetness.
While i was reading it,i was actually visualing the whole scene...
Beautifully portrayed it.
Touched my heart.
Awwwhhh...
Loved how Savita aai and Suryakant Baba were really concerned for their Riya bahu...
They just love her a lot.
Awwwhhh...
Even Riya's nany was there...
Riya's Nanny will stay with them to take care of Riya and also to help them with the preps of Ariya wedding.
Thats really good.
Please,Pinku.
Dnt seperate Ariya,again.
Dnt make them Arjun and Riya...
They look good when they r together.
They are two bodies' with one soul.
Just bind them together...
Continue soon.


Edited by zebbie0504 - 20 August 2013 at 1:35pm
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