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A Little Bit Mad [ArHi SS] Pt.3-4/Pg.12 & 15 (Page 14)

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Finally found the time to read this new one of yours A.



Funny, I'm reading it on a day when I am in a similar state of suspension between the real and dream/ nightmare, wondering what I'm doing and why!

The description of the state of being suspended in the dream, just like an aircraft feels as it is about to land, at the beginning of chapter 3 was stupendous. So many times I've had that eerie experience when I am asleep and dreaming, yet there is prt of my brain that is fully aware of what's going on around, including the fact that I'm dreaming, yet not being able to do anything, while my limbs feel heavy with the sleep.

Khushi's state has sucked me in so totally, that i'm not even going to attempt to make sense of it. Mercifully, you have told us that you have the story written, I'll wait for you to create sense for me.


Is it a 'little' bit mad??? Boy, in the state I am in, it feels completely and scarily mad!! Get us out of this dream like state soon, Aria.


Brilliant writing!


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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by katunkka

Res.
Arnav is extremely sweet and nice which makes me so intrigued about who he is so does khushi btw.
Ill come back to say more.

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Japonica

Finally found the time to read this new one of yours A.

Funny, I'm reading it on a day when I am in a similar state of suspension between the real and dream/ nightmare, wondering what I'm doing and why! 

The description of the state of being suspended in the dream, just like an aircraft feels as it is about to land, at the beginning of chapter 3 was stupendous. So many times I've had that eerie experience when I am asleep and dreaming, yet there is prt of my brain that is fully aware of what's going on around, including the fact that I'm dreaming, yet not being able to do anything, while my limbs feel heavy with the sleep.

Khushi's state has sucked me in so totally, that i'm not even going to attempt to make sense of it. Mercifully, you have told us that you have the story written, I'll wait for you to create sense for me.


Is it a 'little' bit mad??? Boy, in the state I am in, it feels completely and scarily mad!! Get us out of this dream like state soon, Aria.


Brilliant writing!

Good to see you here L. Welcome to the Madness. 

@bold, hope everything is good at your end.

Yeah, that point in a dream, is it even called a dream? is pretty weird. But its not an uncommon experience apparently.

I'd like to believe it is just that 'little' bit madTongue Nothing more. 


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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 5:12pm | IP Logged
Khushi is lucky that a good guy like Arnav found her...

The third chapter was jarring because I distinctly remember the halcyon, dream like state of the first two...almost as if there is something serious going on with Khushi, but the dream is masking the severity of her situation.

Just as in waking from a dream, the third chapter is shockingly lucid. The latest chapter shows Khushi, on the face of it is suffering from PTSD...or is it something more??

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Khushi's nightmares as a result of  bad happening in the past have cost her job.

Waiting to see how she overcomes and how Arnav assists her.

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Posted: 27 August 2013 at 2:01am | IP Logged
intriguing..
im hooked

i need to re-read it...

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Posted: 28 August 2013 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Khushi suffers from these nightmares as a result of the scare she had.
Poor girl!
What has Arnav landed himself into?
The story is getting really interesting now.

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