Wow, a new story from you, I'm very excited to read the story further.
I've not read the original and this story sounds very intriguing and interesting,
The first update was fabulous and amazing,
The first few lines of the update I had read a few times as it was like reading a tongue twister, lol.
By the way does red not mean danger? Just curious.
An amazing read and written brilliantly,
Eager to read the next part,
Continue soon please and Thanks for the PM xx