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EHMMBH SS DESTINY (Page 3)

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
awesum start cont soon

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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
plzzz comtinue hope manvir end up together
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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
awesome story..
loved it
but y jeevs doing so
continue soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 09 November 2013 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
nice concept
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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Part 3
Manvi was busy helping her nani when the bell rang.
Shipra:gopal darwaza kholo
No one opened the door
Shipra:mannu jaa dekh na
Manvi:went to open the door while going she peeped into virens room who was busy talking to jeevika she got angry and went to open the door
She opened the door and their was a guy holding a cake and flowers 
Manvi; heyy who are you
Guy removed the flowers from his face and said:virat virat vadhera
Manvi:tau mein kya karoon vadhera hoge apne ghar mein 
Sudhir came
Sudhir:arrey virat aagay tum aao andar aao
Virat:uncle flowers aur  cake apke liye and winked sudhir ohh thanks
Manvi:nano yeh kon hai
Sudhir:yeh mere bacpan ke dost kaa pota aur jeevika hai na uska dost
Manvi:uss larki ka dost
Jeevika and viren came jeevika hugged virat and introduced  him to viren
Jeevika:viru my new friend viren
Manvi was reaaly angry she went to her room and jeevika smirked virat was clueless whatever was happening and viren was guilty
8:30 everyone gathered on the table and talking except manvi
Sudhir:12 baje mannu ki  b-day hai decoration hall mein hogai hai aur viren tum pehle jana phirhum ayenge tum humesha first wish karte ho na mannu ko
Viren:haan aur iss baar bhi mannu kush hojayegi
Jeevikaa:manvi  am sorry but tumh apni b-day pe kush nahi hogi koi tumhien wish nahi karega
She made someone call sudhir and shipra that shipra sister was unwell so they went to meet her
Jeevika:viren why you buy a gift for manvi 
Viren:good idea ill just go and buy some stuff
Jeevika:can come with you want to buy a gift and apoligise to her
Viren:yaa  cool bu goo
At9:30
Manvi came out and saw virat sitting outside and watchin tv
She asked him about her grandparents and viren
Virat:vo uncle aunty anuty ki behen se milne gaye hai and viren jeev ke saath bahar gaya hai
Manvi:wo sach mein bahar gaye hai
Virat:haan 
Manvi felt like crying she controlled her tears and went to her room virat felt bad but hewas stuck he diagree with jeevs
On the way back virens  car stopped working it was 11:30 and his battery died he waited for a taxi but was not found he thought of walking and taking a tube till the next staion and then he could find a taxi
He took al his shoppers and went with jeevika
12
Manvi was sitting and reading fashion magzine when someone knocked on her room she thought viren  came to apoligise
She opened the door and saw virat holding a cake and flower he wished  her happy birthday she was elated and surprised as she forgot about her b-day she realized viren was not their and felt sad but virat cheered her up and they cut the cake she thanked him and they sat on her bed talking manvis parents and virens parent called her annd wished her they thought viren would be with her so they wanted to talk to him manvi said he went to the washroom she was talking to them laughing and slept virat was busy admiring her the bell rang he came out of his dreaming session he went aand opened the door viren rushed to manvis room but she was sleeping he looked at the time it was1:30 he wnet inside kissed her foregead and put all her gifts and told jeevika and virat to go as  he will sleep here only virat felt bad but wnet to his room
Jeevikacame to virats room and sat on the sofa and was laughing poor manvi no one wished her and that cake waste hogaya awww
Aur wo viren usko bewakoof banana kitna aasan hai uski car ka tyre punture kara aur wo late hogaya and kal jo hoga wo dekhne mein maza ayega viru well thanks mera saath dene ke liye
Virat;jeev tu manvi ke saath aisa kyun kar rahi isme uski kya galti
Jeevika:galti hai ke wo ram kappor aur harish ki ladli hai,viren ki jaan hai
Virat:meine usse wish kiya aur uske saath cake kate jeevs
Jeevika:kyaa 
Virat:yaar wo
Jeevika:I love you virat tu ne bilkul sahi kiya abb usske saath friendly ho aur jan viren se uski dosti toote gi wo weak hogi tab uska support bana phir shuru hogi asli game
Mein toh bas party ka wait kar rahi hoon manvi aur viren ki dosti khatam
Morning 
Manvi woke up and saw her room filled with flowers sorry and birthday cards and she saw viren holding coffe and cake manvi was very angry she avoided and went to the bathroom she came out and saw viren was still their she was ready she was wearing virens fave colour dress a royal blue knee lenght sleeveless with that black heels and a black guess bag
She wore her guess watch and was going out when viren pulled her and apoligised he told her everything how he went to shop for her and got dresses bags shoes and his car brokedown and was late jeevika came cause she wanted to get a gift for you ad wanted to say sorry.Manvi forgave viren and hugged him
Manvi:viren plzz leave me ever ill die without you.You know when sw you laughing with that girl felt like killing myself if you go away from me ill kill myself promise me we will never fight
Viren wiped her tears promised her they will never fight and he asked her to promise that the will always trust eachother no matter what
She promised and hugged him virat was looking at them and felt scared for manvi
Viren and manvi came out togather and told virat and jeevika they are going to uni
Jeevika:manvi happy birthday your gift manvi took the gift and said thanks
Virat:jeevi jaldi 
Viren:come with us 
Manvi:haan virat come with us naa 
They all went towards the car jeevika went and sat on the front seat which was manvis as she use to sit with viren
Manvi came ad told jeevi that its her seat
Jeevi: sat here yesterday issliye noo prob come
Manvi sat and jeevi and virat sat peeche 
Manvi:I didnt come with with you guys that's why you sat agaey jeevika  but nevermind it was your first and last time cause next time se whenevr you will hang out with my viren ill be their
Jeevika:ajj tumhara aakhri din hai haslo saath saath
College came and they left togather
Precap unvi party viren virat drunk
Jeevika blames viren that he was misbehaving with her
Virat hits viren
Manvi angry on guess
Like and ill update

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Posted: 10 November 2013 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Omg plz update soon loving dis hope manvi n viren will fall in love n virat jeevika dont wanna see them in pqin but if u do plan 2 seperate them plzz add some passionated intense kinda so manvi viren can realise their love plzzz its a thousands billions request

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Posted: 14 November 2013 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
plzzz do update soon
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Posted: 27 January 2014 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
awesome update
but y is jeevs doing like that
continue soon
plz pm me

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