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anushayamersy22 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Kapoor mansion
ram aditya and harish are sitting togather disscusing about business and avantika and priya are with pankhuri instructing her to sit in one place and now comes viren
viren:good morning everyone
harish:heyy romeo supp
viren:nothing dad where is mannu
priya:tumhari mannu soo rahi jao utha lau
ram:priya viren kyu jaye tum jao samjho
priya:ram plzz stop it viren tum jao
viren:wait wait yeh kya hai why is uncle stopping me is mannu alright raat ko 2 baje tak tau thik thi shit raat ko icecream ki wajah se bimar tau nahi huwi
ram:ek minute tumhien kaise pata wo 2 baje tak thik thi and usne icecreamm khaye
viren:(thinking phas kya viren abb tau uncle aur shak karien ge)
manvi:uff ho dad stop thinking negitive dad i was talking to viren on the phone issliye btw good morning everyone
she went and hugged viren and kissed him on his chhek
ram:issliye you always wish viren first
manvi:awww my dad is angry you know na dad mein sab se naraz ho sakti hoon viren se nahi he is very special but i love you daddy
ram:more beta abb breakfast karien
pankhuri:haan buhut bhook lagi hai
harish:adi butterfly ko table pe leke aao
they all had their breakfast and it was sunday soo they all were planning to go out 
the door bell rang
sundar:manvi maam and viren sir ke liye letter aya hai
manvi and viren read the letter and shout
everyone kya huaa
manvi and viren tell they got admission in london and they have to go next week
ram:thats fabb and waise bhi maine aur harish ne london aur america mein nahi branch start ki hai tau vikram is handling america and mein aur harish london shift horahien hain for a year or two
priya:apne bataya nahi
avantika:yaa and its pankhuris delivery time 
harish:avantu we will go next month manvi and viren abhi manvi ki nani nano ke saath rahien ge
ram:i think it call for a celebration why not keep a party
avantika:i think thats fab
manvi:okiee btw viren lets goo for shopping
pankhuri:i wanna come
manvi:no bhabhi app aur doll relax ill get a XXL dress for you
pankhuri got angry and manvi and viren were laughing when pankhuri shouted aaa aaa
everyone rushed to her
pankhuri:adi the water broke
manvi and viren:baby is on they way they all rushed to the hospital after a while the doctor came congratss beta huwa hai
manvi:noo i wanted a baby girl
viren i wonn champ huwa
they all went and saw the babyyy 
vadhera house
jeevika and virat were leaving today for london
dadji:virat yeh humare purane dost ka num hai tum log uske ghar pe raho ge apne khayal rakhna okay
virat:jee dadaji
jeevika came down wearing a anarkali she liked wearing traditional dresses
they took blessings and left
okayy so next update foursome will meet and it will be very interesting
manvi and viren will fight for the first time because of jeevika
manvi will start hating jeevika

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pinky.padda IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 December 2011
Posts: 7180

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Awesome cannot wait to start reading
kulsum_virman IF-Rockerz

Joined: 24 February 2012
Posts: 6451

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
nice update really cute and sweet family Big smile
but why was ram doubting them ???
and precap viren and manvi fight not good..
update sooon Big smile
anushayamersy22 Senior Member

Joined: 14 January 2012
Posts: 216

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
1 week later
manvi and viren were at the airport and waiting for the driver
sharma mansion
shipra(manvis nani)
jeevika beta please red roses laga dau vase mein viren ko buhut pasand hai
jeevika:lekin aunty apki tau granddaughter aarahi hain na
shipra:arre wo aur uska bestfriend aaraha hain aur har cheez viren ki pasand ho tau hi meri mannu kush rehti hain
jeevika:achaa viren ka pura nam kya hai
shipra:viren singhania harish singhania ka beta buhut rich log hain 
the bell rang
shipra:sudhir mannu agai
shipra opened the door and saw manvi wearing blick shorts and white sleevless top and viren wearing whit t shirt and black jeans
shipra and sudhir welcomed viren and manvi and hugged them
jeevika came and greeted them
sudhir:mannu yeh mere dost ki grandaughter hain
manvi:ohh heyyy
viren:mannu i am really tired
manvi:yaa tum fresh hojao phir hum kahna khate hain
viren:okiee cupcake
jeevika:aye mein apko apka room dikha doon
manvi:nahi viren ko pata hain
shipra:nahi beta viren ke room mein abb jeevika rehti hai
manvi:kya wo room viren ka hai
sudhir:mannu bas abb jhagra mat karna
viren went and freshend up and went was going to manvis room when he saw jeevika trying to tie the dori viren being viren went and helped her he touched her bare back she closed her eyes manvi was passing by when she saw jeevika and viren she entered the room and shouted
viren and jeevika turned
viren went upto manvi and said:mannu wo wo kya hai na
manvi:dekh liya maine sab kuch
jeevika:wo app jo samaj rahi hai
manvi:just shutup you stay out of it yeh mera aur mere bestiee ka matter hain
jeevika:tau apne bestfriend ko trust bhi nahi karti waao what a friendship
manvi:you bitch
viren:enough manvi tum tau baat ko kahan se kahan leke jaa rahi ho tum uss bechari jeevika ko insult kar rahi ho 
manvi:waha  viren tum is ke liye mere se fight kar rahe ho 
viren:mannu aisi baat nahi hai
manvi:bas mannu mat bolo mujhey and yaa raho apne new friends ke saath dur raho mujh se
manvi went and loacker her room
jeevika went upto viren and sai:viren ji app tension mat le isme manvi ki galti hain wo aik spoil brat ki tarah act kar rahi hai app bhi usse mafi nahi mangna
viren moved her hand from his shoulder:bas tum hoti kon ho just stay out of it he wnet outside and jeevika smirked
jeevika:best friends tch tch abb yeh friendship tau khatam
jeevika called someone
j:abb tumhari entery hai
person:i am on my wayy babyy
viren:mannu ko kaise manao uske bigair mein ek second nahi reh sakta 
manvi:kyun kiya aisa viren 20 saal mein ek bhi fight nahi ki hain humne aur abb tum
viren:mannu mujhey pata hai tum yeh soch rahi hogi ke humne ajj tak fight nahi ki phir abb kyun i am sooryy mannu 
manvi:viren mein tumhien maaf kardoungi ek baar ajaoo
jeevika went to viren and apoligised and started to talk to him they were talking and she was making viren laugh manvi came out and saw this and got angry and went to the kitchen to help her nani
precap new entery you know who 
college first day
jeevika tries to create more problems betwwen viren manvi
uni party

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Nikiee Groupbie

Joined: 06 January 2012
Posts: 124

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Nice updatee !
But why is Jeevika doing all this ?
Anyways update soon :P
jia123sagar IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 April 2012
Posts: 3316

Posted: 17 August 2013 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates
Loved it
Plz cont soon
keetha... Senior Member

Joined: 29 May 2010
Posts: 825

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 10:29am | IP Logged
Nice concept continue soon...:-)
koolgurl IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 December 2009
Posts: 9019

Posted: 22 August 2013 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
awesum start cont soon

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