Asya OS: Twist, Sway and Whirl - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

And I bought a belly dancing belt. And met Optimus and had a great laugh when a girl in butt shorts went up on stage and almost strip danced. 😆

Originally posted by: rivya

Thanks for the PM...this was a beautiful OS..I love the way you write...I can almost visualize the events...and I am a visual person...so the story telling makes a very big difference...

Let me know when you write more stuff... I am someday soon going to sit down and go through ur writing index...

Rivs

Thank you. The hardest part of being a writer is to make the readers connect with the story. I don't have an index. 😛

awesome story!

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

should i laugh or feel bad for her??

i'll choose the former 🤣

Don't feel bad for her... She was making hearts with her fingers and pouting the whole time. She might as well have been dancing in a club. I don't want to be judgmental, but I couldn't help it.

Originally posted by: sowmy18

awesome story!

loved the fact tht its very realistic!

and thanks for the pm!

do pm me when you write more!😳

Thank you for reading. The love stories usually start like this... It was nice to write something so light hearted and not over the top. I'll PM you for the next one. 😆

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

Thank you. The hardest part of being a writer is to make the readers connect with the story. I don't have an index. 😛

Hmmm optimus nice name though
The meet once n then keep meeting again n now its time for their marriage
Really superb update dear,i so much love it
Thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: Sand_Princess

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awww pleasure s all mine , 😛

Originally posted by: rivya

Then you need to make one girlfriend (hope u don't mind it)...can't have such beautiful work left unread...make one super fast and PM me the link...pretty please 😊

I'm not that fast a writer... 😆 I take time to write. I need plot to write. I'm not a genius or anything. I'll surely send you a link when I post. 😃

Originally posted by: mariam1368

Hmmm optimus nice name though
The meet once n then keep meeting again n now its time for their marriage
Really superb update dear,i so much love it
Thnx for the pm

Optimus sounds... powerful. I love the name. Reminds me of transformers! 😃 Thanks for reading! 😊