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FF:Intehaa Pyaar Ki:Th.5: Final Ch pg. 61 Aug. 27th (Page 87)

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 12:22pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by suku_07

Hmm here goes the review for the whole FF...Wink

Gearing up for brickbats


Well I must say the story was gripping...in fact very good...The characters were also realistic whether Ashu, Armaan, Mallika, Baba, Anji or Nidhi...I could actually connect with all of them...Tongue
 
 
Thanks for appreciating this experimental story of mine.. m glad my characters were realistic n relatable.
Frankly I enjoyed the law background also may be in every FF they are doctors so it actually had different flavors with a certain amount of spices...and trust me it was VERY GOOD...LOLEmbarrassed

Yes... actually I felt this concept needed a law background - med. background would not have suited the characterizations, the concept n the situations.. 
 
Anyways coming back to FF... You portrayed Armaan, Anji, Mallika and Baba really well...realistic characters and no OTT drama...which was very nice... they all were just prefect...!! Big smile

Yeah I just hate OTT drama, yet sometimes I do tend to get filmy with situations n dialogues..
 
@unbold - thanks a lot dear.. I m really glad.
 
About Ashutosh, though I am officially a AD so I was actually drooling over your Ashutosh too but towards the end I couldn't connect with him... I agree he was suspicious after he saw Nidhi with Jagan's assistant but he could have confronted her or investigated properly after all he was mature, it was about his wife, his love and besides everything he was a lawyer...I guess this was the demand of your story so no issues... But you asked for a frank review and here I am...Tongue
 
Of course, I m happy that you are frank with me..
 
Can I be equally frank with u? actually ch-15 & 16 were not meant to be like this originally!
 
as per my original plot, there should have been minimum 10 chapters after 14. but given the paucity of time, I had to squeeze everything in just 2 chapters and that too, I could not give my undivided attention and concentrate fully on these chapters - needless to say result was a disaster actually, a well planned plot came crashing down with these 2 chapters..
 
But u know I had just 2 options - either leave it there and maybe continue in December or conclude in 2 chapters.. I did the later..  
 
 
I m not making any excuses for my failure as a writer just telling u my situation.. I admit I failed to plan my chapters well.. 
 

About Nidhi, very frankly in this FF I was looking forward to Nidhi more than Ashu coz I found Nidhi more realistic and blunt...In fact with each and every chapter I use to love her more than Ashu and hate her more than before coz she used Ashu...But I got disappointed with this character also...A sudden change was not acceptable...Doesn't matter how much we want to change for someone we CAN'T change in just one day... There was 360 degree U turn in Nidhi's character...Besides I personally feel if you want to change change yourself not your personality... Just wearing sarees, having tea and making food doesn't mean you have changed for good... I would have loved her if the change was steady and slow... Smile
 
 
Yeah I agree but read the previous para.. the change was supposed to have been slow over 10 chapters but..
May be you were in hurry to wind up the chapters so no issues...But still besides these two main character I loved the story... 

THank you for understanding..

I actually used to wait till 1 or 2 am for you updates and must say it was worth it... One more thing do I need to tell you again that you are a fab writer please continue writing ... you have something special in you that you write and I imagineWink... I really donno if I am hallucinating LOL but serious you are too good...So please keep writing... 

THank you so much dear.. I m totally overwhelmed by your words.. yes whenever n whenever I write, I will pm u ..


And I am really very sorry if I hurt you Unhappy...SORRY !!
 
Arre no, on the contrary I m happy that u told me frankly wat u felt.. m not that touchy... ye toh vacation me kaafi kuch hua personal life me, isiliye.. everything spiraled right out of my hand aur har kaam bigad gaya so was in a volatile mood..
 
I am sorry if I hurt any of u.. I really care a lot for u all.. 
 

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Posted: 16 September 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by suku_07

Thanks Shirley... will reply tomorrow now thru phone...
 
okay dear, doosra bhi ho gaya..

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshirley

Originally posted by suku_07

 
Thank you. I am glad.. I was wondering if I can actually write romance. But ab lagta hai, m not that badWink  

Naa naa you are pretty good at that Wink


Thanks! I agree - tea - coffee has nothing to do wid personality. I failed to convey what I wanted to, wid that scene

No problem hota hai... You can work hard next time Wink
 
Mouth shut - u trying it on someone?TongueTongue

Hmm yes for later and no for now LOL


Bed on terrace - well, it was not a bed as such - it was a makeshift bed - u know just mattresses or razaais... so they took it back downstairs when they came before anyone got up... lolzz
 itna toh maine bhi nahi socha yaar.. aaplog kyun itna sochte ho? sirf romance dekho na

Sochte toh hai...LOL Anyways I know it was a makeshoft bed but still... In my home if you just shift a pillow to other bed my mom asks hundred questions literally LOL
 
I really liked the Sameer and Mallika bit... both talking about their relationship seriously and more maturely... I really like this Mallika !!
Thanks a lot.. a big hug for mentioning this.. if I hd more time, I had wanted to explain how SamIka were more suited than AshMal.. but again.. 

Koi nahi...I just hope you get more time next time you write... or you can go for your editor ji's advice and keep a buffer with you...Wink
 
oh yes I know u are a staunch AD

Thanks you Blushing
 
Waise u did not mention KISS scene? didn't like the new meaning?

Oh yeah I mentioned about drafting and arguments but "The KISS" scene reh gaya...anyways it was very nice... ...Dont I need say more Wink
  

 
THANK YOU for bearing with me and being such a loyal reader..
Dont worry... You'll always find me as your loyal reader  Wink
 


Edited by suku_07 - 18 September 2013 at 2:34am

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshirley

Originally posted by suku_07

Hmm here goes the review for the whole FF...Wink

Gearing up for brickbats

Here you go darling 

 
 
Of course, I m happy that you are frank with me..
 
Can I be equally frank with u? actually ch-15 & 16 were not meant to be like this originally!
 
as per my original plot, there should have been minimum 10 chapters after 14. but given the paucity of time, I had to squeeze everything in just 2 chapters and that too, I could not give my undivided attention and concentrate fully on these chapters - needless to say result was a disaster actually, a well planned plot came crashing down with these 2 chapters..
 
But u know I had just 2 options - either leave it there and maybe continue in December or conclude in 2 chapters.. I did the later..  I m not making any excuses for my failure as a writer just telling u my situation.. I admit I failed to plan my chapters well.. 

Hmm No problem Shirley... You gave your 100% to the FF... saying everything in just 2 chapter which you actually planned in 10 chapters is really difficult but still you pulled it off...that's commendable...Clap

 
Yeah I agree but read the previous para.. the change was supposed to have been slow over 10 chapters but..

No problem Tongue

THank you so much dear.. I m totally overwhelmed by your words.. yes whenever n whenever I write, I will pm u ..

Will deffo wait for your PM Tongue

And I am really very sorry if I hurt you Unhappy...SORRY !!
 
Arre no, on the contrary I m happy that u told me frankly wat u felt.. m not that touchy... ye toh vacation me kaafi kuch hua personal life me, isiliye.. everything spiraled right out of my hand aur har kaam bigad gaya so was in a volatile mood..
 
I am sorry if I hurt any of u.. I really care a lot for u all.. 

No problem Shirley it happens...Tongue I am glad that everything is sorted now Tongue
 
Eagerly waiting waiting for your next FF Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 September 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged

Hello Shirley...

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Posted: 24 September 2013 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjani9

Hello Shirley...

 
hey Anjani, still awaiting ur reviews.. kab milenge?

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Posted: 25 September 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshirley

Originally posted by Anjani9

Hello Shirley...

 
hey Anjani, still awaiting ur reviews.. kab milenge?

Meine toh de diye 
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