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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 90)

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Posted: 10 February 2014 at 11:20am | IP Logged
MAAN THINKS GEET DOESNT LOVE HIM AND SO IS TRYING TO AVOID HER
GEET HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH MAAN AND SO WANTS TO SPEND TIME WITH HIM

ARNAV DECIDED TO STOP ANNOYING KHUSHI AS THE MORE HE HURTS HER, HE GETS HURT MORE

WHEN WILL THEIR LOVE STORIES COME ON TRACK

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Posted: 10 February 2014 at 9:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by punam2712

MAAN THINKS GEET DOESNT LOVE HIM AND SO IS TRYING TO AVOID HER
GEET HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH MAAN AND SO WANTS TO SPEND TIME WITH HIM

ARNAV DECIDED TO STOP ANNOYING KHUSHI AS THE MORE HE HURTS HER, HE GETS HURT MORE

WHEN WILL THEIR LOVE STORIES COME ON TRACK
In the next two chapters!Wink
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Posted: 10 February 2014 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolflora

awesome chapter as usual 
its getting interesting geet investigating about her
now she found something is between arnav and khushi
oh good when khushi called him jijaji 
what the hell arnav do that khushi was crying 
but over all damn good'

maybe arnav get drunk and and tell get everything
other i dont know maybe geet
will wait for next
get well soon 
Oh wow! You actually got it right! Cool!
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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 12:15am | IP Logged
awesome one...loved it...feeling very very bad for arnav and khushi...wow the precap is an exciitiing oneBig smile cant wait to hear geet confess...wonder what his reaction would be

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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 60
excellent part dear...
loved it so so so much...
the tracks are gonna come back to the main track soon...
all thanks to Geet baby...

Thanks for your sweet review! Loved it! 

Geet
haye the memories were excellent...
loved it...
when i was reading that twas like how they show in the serials...
in black and white i was picturizing them...

Wow! That is so cool!

so the age difference between
Geet and Aakash is 4 years...
Geet and Arnav is 5 years...
Geet and Anjali is 7 years...
Anjali and Arnav is 2 years...

Yup! You got it right! And Anjali, Maan and Shyam are of same age! Aakash, NT and Annie are of same age! Dev, Arjun and Arnav are of same age! Paayal is a year younger to Aakash and La is two years younger to Paayal! And Khushi is two years younger to La and one year younger to Geet!Wink

the flashback was so nice...
they all are so attached...
and the love between them is so beautiful...
Geet them all so much and they all too have accepted Geet as theirs back then...
hahaha Arnav glaring at Geet for her non-stop chatter was so so so hilarious...
he was scared for her this trait back then and had kept himself to his room whenever she visited...
seriously i loved that...

LOL

hmmm discussion about Maan has made her antennas back to working...
the Raizadas have no idea about Soni...
sigh if only they get to know her things would be very different...
so Geet remembers Maan calling her Soni yesterday...
very good Geet...
yaar i have doubt, u said Geet wont be getting back her memory (which am so grrr about) but will she and everyone get to know that SHE is Soni at least?

Yup! In chapter 64, the truth will be out in front of Geet!

i want this to happen...
bhale hi usse woh sab yaad nahi aayegi but will she get to know at least she is Soni?
hmm interesting they didnt tell Geet anything...
the way they keep secrets or say their beliefs are nice...
Geet is family but they didnt disclose about Maan's life...
but said she should Maan himself...
poor Geet they dont know that she can never ask him or at least now i think...
arey Geet baby u dont have rishta with Maan?
u are his life baby...

Tu Ne Zindagi Mein Aake Zindagi Ho... Felt like singing a song for this line!LOL

Aakash and his dreamy feelings...
since Geet's mind and heart are so clubbed with the doubts and questions she didnt tease him much this time...
Geet's Soni and Aakash's Sony were funny...

LOL

hes too good...
what does Lo hogaye Siyappa mean?

See the problem happened - that is exact translation. And the meaning with reference to context is - Uh oh! or Damn! or Oh Shit! It is used like that! It is like NT using gayi bhains paani mein!Big smile

hahaha Aakash has given her 2 options which are never options for Geet...
Anjali doesnt know fully and she will never ask Arnav else he would kick her out after biting her head off...
hmm Khushi option might work but i wonder will Khushi tell Geet everything...
her reasoning confused Aakash...
but Geet is smart...

RM
hmm Anjali has again invited Khushi...
haye Rabba Devi Maiyya save Khushi this time...

LOL

Geet is thrilled to hear this news...
kyun nahi hogi after all her questions will get answered soon...
but Arnav is furious and also hurt...
no one noticed the tear...
hmmm...

Arre! Fictional like mein relatives andhe hote hain! Kuch notice nahi karte! It is only in real life people notice everything!LOL

good Khushi didnt look at him...
common Khushi be strong...
oh Geet was wishing to say bye to Khushi but think she gonna find something about Aranv and Khushi...
good she didnt leave but she has seen them...

Arnav Khushi
OMG how could he?
grrr...
i feel like hitting him...

LOL

but wow Khushi gave it back to him this time...
excellent...
let him have a dose himself...
hes so stunned to see this avatar of Khushi...
deserves him right...
well shes right in her point too...
i didnt think of this in this way...
Arnav could have talked to the family and stopped it all but he accepted it just like Khushi did in her way...
how is she alone wrong?
idiot gadha...

Arnav did not stop the engagement coz he wanted revenge from Khushi and he thought he could easily flaunt his relationship with La his whole life. But now in chapter 63 he has learnt that doing that is only hurting him more. 

Geet is shocked to see this...
but damn she didnt hear anything...
chalo koi na she will get to know the issue soon...
one more task in her hand to solve...

KC
awesome...
OMG Geet is asking every single person about Soni...
Maan will strangle her if he comes to know about it...

Totally true!

Dev is funny all the time...
but smart too...
hes amused to get this info about Geet trying to know about Soni...
Geet has linked the time and events that happened with Khushi...
really shes so smart...
no wonder Maan has fallen for her so hard...

LOL

hahaha Maan has seen her talking with all and Dev somehow manged the situation...
but wonder how long will this go on and Dev escape...

Geet Khushi
awesome...
the friends are together after so long...
well Khushi almost called her by her relation Parjaayiji and Geet thoda shak hogayi...
Khushi bach gayi...
she cant lie but also cant say the truth...
sigh...
oh no no no...
Anrav yahan?
how the heck he knew Khushi will be here?

Erm... he heard them discussing it!Big smile

OMG what hes gonna do now?
and Khushi very hurriedly eating was funny though the situation is tense but still her antic was funny...
ha second furious reply to Anrav by Khushi...
excellent...
way to go Khushi...

I am so glad you liked this fighter Khushi!

Maan
OMG so Maan was making it sure that Arnav and Khushi never meet face to face...
oh i never thought Maan would be actually doing this...
excellent move but still he couldnt save her all the time...
they have faced so much and many times Maan babu and Arnav koi kasar nahi chodi...
Geet is thinking Maan knows about Arnav Khushi and also Khushi knows about Maan Soni...
hmm how is she gonna get the mystery solved...
the Bhai Behen wont give in easily...

Yeh toh pakka hai!

poor Khushi shes upset again coz of Arnav...
grrr...
common Geet only u can solve everything...
precap
drunk?

Big smileLOL

well i think it would Maan and Arnav but kya pata u bring some twist...

i loved the whole update dear...
very entertaining...
cont soon dear...
I did give you jhatka by making Arnav and Geet drunk!LOL 
Take care and enjoy!
KalpanaLOL


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 February 2014 at 10:20am
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Posted: 11 February 2014 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by archa2810

lol... the last lines were awesome... i love ur writing style
Thank you! You  are making me blush!EmbarrassedBig smile
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CHAPTER 64 (A). GEET'S PROPOSAL AND MAAN'S REACTION!

 

 

 

Day 15

Monday

Place - Khurana Constructions

 

      When Geet Raizada entered the Office, everyone could feel the change in her. She was more smiling, more eager and most of all there was this nervous energy around her which anybody could feel. From seeing her, they could understand only one thing and that was that something special was going to happen in Geet's life today. But what the staff of Khurana Constructions did not know was that not only Geet's life, their boss, Maan Singh Khurana's life was also on the verge of change today.

 

     Geet eagerly stood by the reception waiting for Pinky to end her phone call. The moment Pinky kept the phone down, Geet chirped, "Hi Pinky! Mr. Khurana aaye kya? Mera matlab MaanSir aaye kya?" Pinky shook her head as another phone rang, "Nahi! Abhi tak nahi aaye! Strange! Humesha time pe aa jaate hain. Aaj nahi aaye? Shaayad koi meeting ke liye gaye honge!" Pinky turned to answer another call while Geet waved her bye and walked towards Sasha's cabin. Maan nahi aaye? Lekin aaj toh unka koi meeting nahi hai? Warna Saturday ko yeh nahi kehte ki woh meri design early Monday morning hi dekhna chaahte hain! Nahi! Kuch toh gadbad hain! She turned around and walked towards Maan's secretary and asked her. The Secretary told her that MK Sir did not have any meeting today. Geet frowned. Phir Maan hai kahaan? Hey Babaji! Main toh aaj Maan ko apne dil ki baat bataane aayi thi aur aaj woh hi abhi tak nahi aaye! She pouted. Babaji dekhlo! Aaj mere pyaar ka izhaar ho jaana chaahiye, haan?

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Mansion

 

    Dev looked into the room from behind the door. After staring for a second, he felt a pinch on his waist and he nearly shrieked. But he controlled himself and turned around to look at the person who pinched him. His pregnant wife smiled at him sweetly and then whispered while glaring at him, "Kya hua? Kya dekha?" Dev shrugged and whispered back, "Bro exercise kar rahe hain." They both inched around and looked from their hiding place and saw Maan break an ice block. Both of them winced and moved away. NT poked Dev, "Yeh Veerji yahaan kya kar rahe hain? Inhein toh Office mein hona chaahiye tha na?" Dev nodded. NT questioned again, "Waise toh Office jaane ka bahaana dhundhte hain. Kal toh Sunday tha phir bhi chale gaye. Phir aaj kya hua?" Dev shook his head signaling that he did not know. NT bit her lip and questioned again, "Aapko pata hai kya? Ki kyun Veerji Office nahi gaye?" Dev just gave her a look; a look that said Are you that stupid?' After a second, NT's eyes widened, "Oh! Aapko pata hota toh aap humein jaroor bataate nahi?" Dev rolled his eyes. NT frowned, "Aap unse baat kyun nahi karte?" This time Dev just smiled sarcastically, "Main kya paagal dikh raha hun jo sher ke mooh mein jaake haath daalunga?" NT shook her head. Dev continued, "Itni tumhein fikar hai toh tum jaaona!" NT's eyes widened in shock and she shook her head vigorously. No thank you! She was not an idiot! They inched ahead and again looked at Maan. This time Maan broke a wooden block and the couple winced again. NT mumbled, "Bahut ghusse mein lag rahe hain Veerji!" She shuddered as she thought of the anger in Maan's eyes. Dev frowned, "Pata nahi kis wajah se!" They moved away to their room and sat in confusion thinking. After two hours of thinking, talking and brainstorming, NT got an idea. She called the Office to talk to Maan's Secretary.

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Constructions

 

    Geet huffed as she paged through the file in front of her. Yeh theek nahi kiya aapne Maan? Aisa koi karta hai kya? Main apne pyaar ka izhaar karne aayi aur aap hain ki gaayab hi hogaye! Geet felt so sad. After waiting for Maan's arrival in Sasha's cabin for an hour Geet had again approached Maan's secretary asking for any news on Maan only to come to know that Maan had decided to work from home. Now, Geet did not know what to do. Ab main kya karoon Babaji? Aaj kaise apne pyaar ka izhaar karoon? Babaji! This is not fair! So not fair!

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Mansion

 

    As NT kept the phone she smirked. She turned and spoke to Dev, "Humne abhi Veerji ke Secretary ko call kiya yeh jaanne ke liye ki Maan ne aaj Office na jaane ka kya bahaana diya!" Dev frowned, "Aur kya jawaab diya usne?" NT sat beside Dev, "Woh keh rahi thi ki Veerji ghar se kaam karenge!" Dev was in confusion, "Par Bro toh paaglo ki tarah ice aur lakdi tod rahe hain!" NT smiled smugly, "Aur iska matlab kya hai?", she asked teasingly. Dev let out a huff, "Bro ya toh kisi wajah se naaraaz ya frustrated hain." "Exactly!", NT spoke triumphantly. She grabbed his arm excitedly, "Aapko pata hai Veerji ki Secretary bata rahi thi ki Geet do baar aake Veerji ke baare mein poochke gayi!" Dev was puzzled, "Toh?" NT slapped her forehead, "Arre! Buddhu! Geet wahaan Veerji se milne ke liye bechain aur yahaan Veerji kharaab mood mein! Iska matlab kuch samjhe aap?" Dev's eyes widened and then he smirked, "Yaani ki Office kuch toh hua jiski wajah se Bro Geet ko avoid kar rahe hain!" NT narrowed her eyes, "Yeh theek nahi hai Dev! Aisa lag raha hai jaise jab bhi Geet aur Veerji ke beech mein nazdeekiyaan badhegi tab tab Veerji use avoid karenge ya use apnea apse door karenge!" Dev shook his head, "Par NT! Yeh baat toh humein pehle hi pata thi na! Ki Bro is rishte ko phir se jud ne se rokne ke liye bahut ladenge!" NT pursed her lips, "Ab hum dono ko hi kuch karna hoga, taaki inki pyaar ki gaadi line pe aa sake. Bahut hogaya yeh luka chupi ka khel! Sab kuch saamne aane time hogaya hai!" Dev looked at her curiously, "Matlab? Soni ki Sachchai?" NT nodded. Dev stared at distance, "Par kaise?" NT smirked, "I have a plan!"

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Constructions

 

   Geet packed her bags as she pondered the phone call she had gotten. Few minutes back, Dev had called her and told her to bring certain files to Khurana Mansion as Maan wanted to work from home. Geet had agreed. But now Geet was not sure! Files chaahiye tha yeh theek hai, par mujhe hi kyun bulaaya? She thought for a while when suddenly hope filled her heart. Kahin Maan bhi mujhse milne ke liye bechain... Nahi Nahi! Geet! Tu Jhalli hogayi hai! Khair jo bhi hai! Mennu ki? Mennu toh isse matlab hai ki mennu apne pyaar da izhaar aaj hi karne milega! She giggled and packed her bag happily.

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Mansion

 

     Dev waved as the car drove away. The car carried NT and Daadima away to NT's Doctor. For their plan to fulfil, NT had decided that Daadima should be away from the house because the confrontation between Geet and Maan would definitely be explosive. They did not want Daadima to interfere in it. So, NT had called her Doctor and booked an appointment. She dragged Daadima away claiming that she wanted someone elderly with her and not a simpleton like Dev. Daadi had agreed and now all Dev had to wait was for Geet to arrive. After fifteen minutes, Geet arrived and Dev smirked. Chal beta! Lag jaa kaam pe! Aaj tere Bro ko uski Soni dilaani hai!

 

    Geet entered the house looking around with nervousness. Even though while getting out of Office she was excited for her confession now nervousness had pierced her heart. She was not sure whether her idea of confessing was good or not. Kahaan hai Dev Sir? Dev smirked from his hiding place and came out with his phone glued to his ear acting as if he was talking into it. He talked for a while and then acted as if he just noticed Geet, "Are Geet! Aagayi? Ek kaam karo upar jaao aur left mein jo kamra khula hai woh Bro ka Office hai aur Bro wahi hain. Jaao Upar aur file Bro ko de do!" Before Geet could say anything, Dev walked out of the house still talking in the phone. Geet bit her lip in nervousness. Ab kya karoon Babaji? Akele upar jaaun? Chal Geet puttar! Apne Maan se mil le! Aur Babaji ne himmat de di toh pyaar ka izhaar bhi kar lena! She trudged towards the stairs. Dev smirked from his hiding place. He had just acted that he was going outside but hid behind the door. As he stood there Dev hoped that Geet reached the right room. You see, the room Dev had told Geet to go was not Maan's study as Geet thought. It was Soni's room; the same room which Maan had kept locked for months and the same room which Dev had opened just today. Jaao Geet jaao! Aur milo apne ek aise chehre se jise tum bhool gayi! Milo mere Bro ki Soni se! Aaj woh bhi tumse milna chaahegi!

 

   Geet climbed the stairs in trepidation. Main aa rahi hoon Maan! Apne dil ka aapko haal sunaane! She gulped and slowly climbed the stairs each step making her heart beat faster. By the time she reached the top, her heart was racing and her palms were sweating. Butterflies were flying around in her stomach. Babaji! Bacha lena! She took a deep breath and turned left. As she walked she passed a door but it was closed. The next door was also closed. She walked further to encounter an open door. This is it, Geet! Tere zindagi ka sabse important din aagaya hai! She smiled excitedly and entered the room only to stop in shock. Yeh kis kamre mein Dev Sir ne bhej diya! The room seemed like a normal bedroom but everything was covered in cloths as if to protect it from dust. From the bed to the cupboard, from the table to photos on the wall, everything was covered with cloth for protection. She worriedly took a step ahead. On her left she saw a table and she swiped her hand on it. Her hand was covered in dust. "Itni dhool!", Geet exclaimed in shock. "Yeh kamra toh kai dino se band kiya hua lagta hai! Toh phir Dev Sir ne mujhe yahaan kyun bheja?" She took another step ahead. "Kiska kamra tha yeh jise is tarah band rakha tha! Na koi cleaning or na koi dusting! Aisa hai kya is kamre mein! Store room toh lagta nahi hai!" Geet was confused but her natural curiosity came fore and she walked ahead to explore. Suddenly, she stopped as something came into her mind. "Agar yeh kamra band karna hi tha toh photos ko kyun yahaan choda! Kuch toh gadbad hai!" She trudged ahead and pulled the cover from one of the photo only to take a step back in shock. The photo was of Daadima, NT, Dev, Maan and herself. "Yeh kab ki tasveer hai?" Geet murmured as she pulled it from the wall. She did not remember taking any photo like this. She looked at the photo carefully. Daadima was seated on a chair while Maan and Dev stood behind her. Dev had an arm around NT while Geet stood beside Maan. She carefully looked at the photo Geet's dress. It was a dress she did not think she owned. She frowned in confusion when suddenly it struck her. This must be from the time of her memory loss. Didn't she live with Khuranas after she lost her memory? She smiled at that thought when her eyes widened. Iska matlab yeh mera kamra hai? She looked around excitedly. But then she stopped. Kahin main galat hui toh? She bit her lip and placed the photo on the table. She looked around her eyes searching for some concrete proof that this was her room. Suddenly, her eyes reached the wardrobe and she smiled. She walked towards it and pulled it open. Her eyes widened at the collection of salwar kameezes in it. She noticed the salwar kameez she was wearing in the photo hanging in the cupboard. She smiled softly. Toh yeh kamra mera hi hai! She closed the cupboard and she looked around wanting to know more about her life with Maan. She saw a big portrait hanging on the wall. She walked towards eagerly and pulled the cover away. What she saw took her breath away. There sat Geet on a chair like some princess dressed in a beautiful pink Saree. Geet's eyes wondered through the clothes and jewels the Geet in the portrait was wearing. Her eyes widened. Yeh Saree! Yeh toh wahi hai jo NT ne mujhe di thi pichle saal! She took a step back and loosing her balance she fell on the bed. She giggled eagerly. This was supposed to be her bed. She got up in excitement and looked around when her eyes fell on a book on the bedside table. She grinned. Is that the book she used to read here? She took the book and opened it and a gasp came out of her mouth. Hey Babaji! Yeh kya hai? She stared the first page in awe. There stood Maan dressed in black Sherwani with Duppatta over his shoulders. Hey Babaji! Maan kitne handsome lag rahe hain! Kahin inhein meri hi nazar na lag jaaye! She saw Maan Bro on my wedding day! This is his book!' scribbled below the picture. Lagta hai Dev Sir ne likha hai! She turned the page and giggled as she saw the next photo. It was of baby and below it was written, Mera Puttar Maan'. Maan kinne cute lag rahe hain! The next picture got Geet laughing. It was of Maan at the age of two but with a stern expression which she had seen on older Maan's face everyday. Bachpan se hi lagta hai yeh aisi the! She laughed again and started looking through the scrapbook. As she went through the photos, she sometimes laughed and sometimes smiled tenderly as she realized that the book was filled with Maan's young age pictures. Some were with his parents, some with his siblings, and some with his Dadi. There were some featuring NT and Arjun too. But after Maan's 12 year old pic there seemed to be no pic of him; only blank pages. Geet shrugged; Shayad jisne bhi yeh banaaya ho usne aur tasweer lagaane band kar diye! She was about to close the book when the book fell out of her hands. She picked it up and noticed that when the book had fallen some page had opened up. She realized that someone had written on it after leaving some blank pages after the photos. She went to the first page of writing and read through it.

 

Aaj bahut tanha sa hoon main! Lag raha hai ki zindagi mein akela hoon akela rahoonga!

 

Geet frowned as she read those lines. Handwriting to Maan ki hai! Bechaare! Lagta hai zindagi unki badi tanha kati hai! She sighed sadly and turned the page. Her eyes widened as she read the next lines.

 

Hai Kisne Taraasha Yeh Badan Marmari Sa

Yeh Khaabon Bhari Aankhein Yeh Chehra Pari Sa

 

Hey Babaji! Geet frowned. Yeh kiski baat kar rahe hai? She read further.

 

Meri Zindagi mein ek pari hai. Achaanak si meri zindagi mein aayi woh. Woh kaun hai main yeh jaanta nahi. Bas itna jaanta hoon ki woh bahut khoobsurat hai, ek dum Soni! Isliye maine use naam diya Soni!

 

Geet gasped. She remembered that Soni was Maan's lover who left him. Yeh Soni ki taareef kar rahe hain. Haayo Rabba! Suddenly she frowned; Par yeh naam dene ki baat kyun kar rahe hain? Kya uska naam Soni nahi tha? Aur kuch tha? She shrugged and turned the page.

 

Mujhko Jab Aise Dekhti Ho Tum

Rang Bhar Jaate Hain Fizaaon Mein

Kasmasaati Hain Aarzoo Dil Mein

Geet Ghul Jaate Hain Hawaaon Mein

 

Jaadu Bhari Aankhon Waali Suno

Tum Aise Mujhe Dekha Na Karo

 

Mat karo aisa Soni! Mat dekho mujhe is tarah Soni! Aise dekhogi toh pyaar mein girne se mujhe koi nahi rok paayega! Aur phir jab tum mujhe chodkar jaaogi toh main apne aapko nahi sambhaal paaunga!

 

Chodke jaaogi? Inhein aise kyun lag raha hai ki Soni unhein chodke jaayegi? Itna yakeen kaise hai inko is baat par? Lagta hai aaj iss Soni ki sachchai yeh diary hi mujhe bataayegi! She turned the page.

 

Tujhse Mila Toh Jaagi Duaayein

Aur Nazar Ne Sajda Kiya

Jannat Zameen Pe Aayi Utarke

Khushiyon Ne Jaise Chun Sa Liya

 

Tum zindagi main aayi Soni, aur zindagi khoobsurat ho gayi! Aur aaj jab baarish mein tum mujhse lipat gayi toh laga jaise sab kuch theek ho jaayega! Phir meri aankh khuli aur mera sapna toota!

 

Geet narrowed her eyes. "Lipat gayi?", Geet growled in anger. "Badi aayi mere Maan se lipatne waali?", Geet mumbled. After a second, Geet realized that she was jealous of this Soni and she burst out laughing. "Main bhi na Jhalli hun. Jo ateet mein hua usko sochkar jal rahi hun!" She turned the page to know more about this Soni.

 

Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena

Mere Dil Ki Rani Tu

Meri Khushiyon Ka Mausam

Mere Khaabon Ki Taameel

Mere Sapno Ki Tasveer

Bin Tere Kaisi Yaar

Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar

Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuch

Tu Na Ho Toh Bekaar

 

Aaj jab Doctor ne kaha ki tum coma mein ho Soni, toh main dang reh gaya! Tumhaare bin jeena mushkil hai Soni, jaldi theek ho jaao!

 

Haayo Rabba! Geet looked at the book in horror. Soni bechaari coma mein gayi! Bechaare Maan! Kitna dard hua hoga unko! Shaayad aaj bhi woh coma mein ho aur isliye log keh rahe hain ki woh unhein chodke chali gayi! Hey Babaji! Kahin Maan aaj bhi usse pyaar toh nahi karte! Phir toh meri prem ki naiyya chalne se pehle hi doob gayi. Geet hurriedly turned the page eager to know what happened to Soni.

 

Tum Jo Aaye Zindagi Mein Baat Ban Gayi

Ishq Mazhab Ishq Meri Zaat Ban Gayi

Sapne Teri Chaahaton Ke

Dekhta Hoon Ab Kayee

Din Hai Sona Aur Chaandi Raat Ban Gayi

 

Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua ki mujhe tumse pyaar hua hai, Soni!

 

Geet let out a sigh of relief. Pyaar ki baat kar rahe hain matlab woh Soni theek hai! She smiled thanking the Babaji to keep her Maan's love safe. Par aage kya hua? Woh Maan ko chodkar kyun chali gayi?

 

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona

Tujhe Dekhkar Hai Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujh Mein Basi Hai Meri Jaan

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak Jaaye

 

Main vaada karta hoon Soni jitna deewana tumne mujhe banaaya utna deewana main tumhein apna banaaunga!

 

Haaye! Geet sighed as read the words. Maan kitne romantic hain. Apne pyaar ke liye apne pyaar ko apna banaane nikal pade! Uff Babaji! Aisa hi pyaar woh mujhse karein! She giggled and turned the page.

 

Main Toh Bas Teri Chaahat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

Main Toh Bas Teri Kurbat Mein Chaahoon Rehna Sada

 

Main bas tumhaare saath rehna chaahta hoon Soni!

 

Geet pouted. Kitna pyaar karte hai Maan apni Soni se! Aur yeh Soni hai ki unhein chodke chali gayi! She glared at the book while turning the page.

 

Dilruba Yeh Bata

Kya Karoon Tere Siva

Main Toh Tere Pyaar Mein Deewana Ho Gaya

 

Aaj jab hum long drive par gaye tab mujhe aisa kyun laga ki main tumhaare liye jo feel karta hoon wahi tum mere liye bhi feel karti ho! Soni, I am in love with you! Do you love me too?

 

Geet felt a pinch in her heart. She could not bear her love being in love with someone else. She made a face and read further. As she read she felt shock gripping her. Yeh meri handwriting yahaan kya kar rahi hain? Aur yeh kya likha hua hai maine?

 

Kaun Kenda Hai Ki Duniya Vicho Rab Gaya

Mennu Naina Vicho Tere Lab Gaya

- I found God in your eyes, Maan! Ab aap hi mere sab kuch ho!

 

P.S. Aap jo mere liye mehsoos karte ho Maan, Main bhi wahi mehsoos karti hoon!

 

Geet could not believe her eyes. Yeh kya likha hai maine? She turned the page to know more.

 

Khamoshiyaan Gungunaane Lagi

Tanhaayiyaan Muskuraane Lagi

 

Aaj yeh duniya bahut khubsurat hai, jaante ho kyun? Kyunki aaj maine use meri banne ko kahaa humesha ke liye aur woh ban gayi! Aaj maine usse jeevan bhar ka saath maanga aur usne haami bhar di! Bas kuch din aur phir bahut jald woh meri ho jaayegi! Poore duniya ke saamne main use ek nayi pehchaan dunga! Mrs. Khurana.! Mrs. Geet Maan Khurana!

 

Geet lost her breath and she dropped the book in shock. The words echoed in her head; Mrs. Geet Maan Khurana! Her eyes widened and her jaw dropped open. She could not believe what she had read. Hey Babaji! Yeh kya likh diya Maan ne? She picked the book to confirm what she had read. And it was true. Maan had written her name. Par Maan toh Soni ne pyaar karte the na? Toh beech mein main kahaa se aagayi! She turned the page to check the dates. All the pages were written within the gap of two months. Suddenly, something struck her. All the dates were of the time she lost her memory. She gulped. Yeh sab jab hua toh main yahin thi! Aur sab jagah jahaan Soni likha hai yahaan Geet likha hai! Yeh kya hai? She had to read further. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Tujhe aage padhna hoga Geet! Agar yeh kitaab tujhe Soni aur Maan kahaani suna rahi hai toh tujhe is kahaani ke anth tak jaana hoga! She turned the page to learn more.

 

Ek Din Aap Yun Humko Mil Jaayenge

Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jaayenge

Maine Socha Na Tha

 

Sach mein Soni, tum zindagi mein aayi aur meri zindagi mein khushiyaan hi khushiyaan bhar di!

 

Geet frowned. Soni? Phirse Soni? Kabhi Geet ki baat karte hain toh kabhi Soni? Ek minute! Hadn't she read few pages ago that Maan had named his lover? Matlab... Her eyes widened in shock. Unhonein mera naam Soni rakha tha! Kya main unki Soni hun? She could not believe it. There had to be some other explanation. She turned the page to clear her doubts.

 

Is Pal Mein Hoon

Ya Tum Bhi Ho

Ya Dono Ho Ke Bhi Na Ho

 

Aaj jab tum aayi mujhe neend se jagaane ki liye toh mere dil ne ek hi cheez maanga mujhse! Ki roz tum aao aur aise hi mujhe uthaao. Aaogi na Geet?

 

Geet looked at the book with wide eyes. This proved that Geet and Soni were same. Maan could not have talked about one girl in one page and other girl in other page especially when both the pages were written with few days' gap between them. She felt tears well up in her eyes as she realized the extent of devastation Soni's leaving must have created. Unhonein pata nahi aise hi kitne sapne dekhe honge Soni ke saath aur Soni ne unhein chodkar kitna dard diya hoga unhein. Maine unhein chodkar kitna dard diya hoga? Aur mujhe yeh sab yaad bhi nahi? Par Soni yaani ke main unhein chodke gayi kyun? She had to read more. So she turned the page.

 

Choo Liya Tu Ne

Lab Se Aankhon Ko

Mannatein Poori Tumse Hi

 

Tumne suna Geet! Ek mahine mein humaari sagaai hai! Aur do mahine mein Shaadi! Main aaj bahut khush hoon! Bahut jald meri Soni mere paas hogi!

 

Geet started weeping slowly as she read the pages. Kitni ummeed hai Maan ke in shabdo mein! Par maine! Par maine unka berehmi se dil tod diya! Unhein chod diya! Kyun choda maine unhein? Kyun? She turned the page still crying. As read the next page, her eyes widened in shock.

 

Ishq Mein Toh Har Cheez Mit Jaati Hai

Bekaraari Banke Humein Tadpaati Hai

Yaad Yaad Yaad

Bas Yaad Reh Jaati Hai

 

Kyun gayi mujhe chodke tum Geet? Tum toh meri Soni thi na? Mujhe akela chod diya is zindagi ko jeene ke liye! Barbaad kar diya tumne mujhe! Par phir bhi main waada karta hun tumse! Main tumhein nahi bhoolunga! Main sirf tumhein pyaar karoonga! Na pyaar phirse karunga aur na shaadi! Main tumhaari yaad mein jiyunga aur tumhaari yaad mein hi mar jaaunga!

 

Geet turned the page in hopes to read more but there was nothing written after this. She closed the book and slammed it on the table. Maine Maan ko chod diya! Par kyun? Kyun Maine unhein choda? Kyun? Suddenly, a thought entered her head and she checked the date of the last entry. Dread filled her heart as she realized that it was written the day she got up in the hospital after spending two months at Khuranas without her memory. Iska matlab main unhein bhool gayi isliye unhein lagta hai ki maine unhein chod diya! Maine unhein choda nahi tha! Main toh unhein bhool gayi thi! Aur is baat ka matlab unhonein yeh nikaala ki main unhein chod rahi hoon? Hey Babaji! Bas itna hi pyaar tha unko mujhpar? Ki mere unko bhoolne par apne pyaar ki haar maanli? Aur apni Soni ko mara hua maan liya? Main unhein bhool kya gayi unhonein mujhe apne se alag karne ka faisla kar liya? Bas yahi tha unka pyaar? She started crying. How could her Maan give up just after facing one storm in their life? There will be many storms in future. Will he give up everytime they face it? After a while she stopped crying. And then she started thinking. Lekin Maan aur karte kya? Shayad mere bhoolne se unhein itna dukh pahuncha ki unhonein mujhe mara hua sochna hi theek samjha? Maine unhein bhool kar kitna bada dukh diya hai! Toh asar toh hua hoga na?Mujhe is tarah unhein judge nahi karna chaahiye! Par yeh maine kya kar diya? Unhein bhool gayi? Unka toh bahut bura haal hua hoga na? Bahut toote honge na woh? She felt like crying again as she thought of Maan's situation. But then she frowned. Arre! Main bhool gayi toh kya hua? Unhein yaad dilaana chaahiye tha! Ya mujhe phir se apne pyaar mein paagal banana chaahiye tha? Aise kaise haar maan gaye! She wiped her eyes and stood up with determination. Bas bahut hogaya rona dhona! Bahut hogayi yeh judaai! Ab humein puraani baatein bhulaake aage badhna hoga! Even if he gave up on our love I will make sure that in future he won't have any chance to give up! Main unhein give up karne hi nahi dungi! She smiled softly. Main abhi jaake Maan ko bataa deti hun ki main bhi unse pyaar karne lagi hun! Ki yeh Geet phir se unki Soni ban chuki hai! Phir saari sadness khatam and only happiness shuru! She eagerly got out of the room and searched for Maan with the diary in her hand.

 

 

 

Place - Maan's Workout Room

 

     Maan smashed another wooden block with his hand but his anger remained intact. He had been breaking the wooden and ice blocks from the morning but the anger and frustration he felt in himself refused to budge. And the worst part was that everytime he was breaking the block, Geet's face flashed in front of his eyes. Why? Why couldn't he forget her?

 

    Yesterday's incident had left an impact on Maan. From the day a drunken Geet had tried to kiss him, Maan made a promise to himself that he would stay away from her. Of course his promise to himself was broken the moment Geet's leg slipped and she had a sprain the next day. It was only after she went home that Maan realized that he was again getting close to Geet. He had distanced himself again only to falter in his promise to himself in the lift yesterday when Geet had fallen on him. Nahi! Yeh nahi ho sakta! Main phir se uske kareeb nahi jaa sakta! Uske paas jaana yaani ki Soni ki yaadon se mulaakat karna! Jo main nahi chaahta! Mujhe apne is dil ko sambhaalna hoga! Geet se mujhe door rehna hoga! Mujhe phir se iss pyaar ke chakkar mein nahi padna! Pichle baar toh sirf dil toota tha, lekin iss baar agar Geet mujhe chodke chali gayi toh main hi toot jaaunga! NAHI! No more Geet! NO MORE GEET! Maan moved ahead and smashed another block in front of him. He started practicing tai-chi trying to immerse himself in it and trying to forget Geet when, "Maan!" a soft voice called him and Maan stiffened.

 

   

    Geet was searching for Maan in the whole house when she heard the noise of something breaking from a nearby room. She neared the room and looked into it. Geet was left breathless at what she saw. There stood Maan in the middle of the room dressed in nothing but black pants practicing some moves. Geet just stood there staring at his body. Her heart started racing and her hands longed to touch him. Her body longed to be in his arms and she was filled with desire of being close to him. She was broken out of her thoughts when Maan smashed a block. Geet looked at the block and then at his hand in shock. Hey Babaji! Haath hain ya hathoda! She gulped and slowly entered the room. Bas Geet! Ab bol de apne dil ki baat! "Maan!", she spoke in a soft voice and saw Maan stiffen and stand still. She took that as an encouragement and started speaking.

 

    Maan felt his heart race. Geet! Yahaan! Before he could turn around, she started speaking, "Aapki Soni aapse kuch kehna chaahti hai Maan!" Maan's eyes widened in shock. Soni?? Kahin Geet ko sab kuch yaad toh nahi aa gaya! His heart hammered in his chest with hope at that thought. Geet continued speaking, "Aapki Soni yeh kehna chaahti hai ki woh aapse bahut pyaar karti hai Maan!" Maan turned and looked at her with tear filled eyes. Geet also gave a teary smile. Maan walked swiftly towards her and grabbed her by her arms, "Kya tumhein sab kuch yaad aagaya? Kya tumhein pata hai ki tum meri kya lagti ho?" Maan looked at her with hope and happiness in his eyes. All he wanted was for her to remember everything. Geet shook her head, "Mujhe kuch yaad nahi!" Maan left her shoulders and stumbled backwards. He balanced himself before he could fall but his eyes showed the devastation he felt. "Toh... phir...", he mumbled in confusion. That is when he saw the diary in her hand and everything clicked in place. He schooled his expressions into a blank mask, "Oh! Toh tumne woh diary padhi!" He pointed towards the diary and glared at her, "Us diary mein mera past hai. Use yaad dilaake apne liye mere dil mein jagah banaane ki koshish na karo!" He turned around and placed his hands on his hips. Geet moved few steps ahead, "Par Maan is diary ne kuch nahi kiya! Isne toh sirf mujhe apna past bataaya! Par pyaar toh main aapse tabhi bhi karti thi aur aaj bhi karti hun. Haan! Mr Khurana! In kuch dino mein mujhe aapse pyaar hogaya! Aapki Soni phir se aapki hona chaahti hai!" Maan turned around swiftly. He grabbed her arms and shook her, "Naam mat lo Soni ka! Kyunki uska pyaar mujhe nahi chaahiye!" He left her and she took a step back at his words. He glared at her, "Soni mujhe bhool hi gayi! Kaisa pyaar tha uska? Jo mujhe bhool gaya! Ek jhoka aaya aur uska pyaar kamzor pad gaya! Tum bhi wahi karogi! Ek problem aayega aur tum bhi mujhe chod dogi! NAHI! Mujhe tumhaara pyaar bilkul bhi nahi chaahiye! Soni mar chuki hai aur main isi sach ke saath jiyunga!" He looked away. Geet felt anger well up in her at his words. Till then she wanted to convince him that she loved him but now! Now she would tell him what she felt about his love. She understood that he was hurt due to her forgetting him but questioning her love, how dare he! She walked towards him and pushed him back, "Kya samajhte ho aap apne aapko? Soni ke pyaar pe ungli uthaate ho? Aur aapka pyaar? Woh kaun sa mahaan tha? Main aapko bhool gayi toh kya hua? Aap toh aa sakte the na? Mujhe yaad dila sakte the na? Aur mujhe yaad nahi toh mujhe phir se apne pyaar mein deewana bana sakte the na? Lekin aap! Ek mushkil aur aap peeche hat gaye!" "GEET!", Maan roared at her. "Chillayiye mat! Chillaan mujhe bhi aata hai!", Geet glared at him. Maan looked away. Both of them were taking deep breaths due to anger. Maan closed his eyes and calmed his anger. He took a deep breath, "Tum yahaan apne pyaar ka izhaar karne aayi hona! Jaao! Main tumhein inkaar karta hun. Nahi pyaar karta main tumse!" Geet looked at him devastated. Maan looked into her eyes, "Mera pyaar usi waqt mar gaya jab meri Soni mujhe bhool gayi! Main tumse pyaar nahi karta! Mere dil mein tumhaare liye ab kuch bhi nahi hai! Jo tha woh Soni ke saath chala gaya! I don't love you Geet! I don't love you!" Geet stumbled back in shock at his words as Maan looked at her indifferently. She felt tears fall down her cheeks. She turned around and walked away with defeat written in her body language. Maan closed his eyes. I am sorry Geet! Par main apne dil ko aur dard nahi de sakta! Behtar hoga ki main pyaar se hi door rahoon!

 

 

 

PRECAP

 

Arnav comes to know that Khushi is leaving to Lucknow!

Ab kya hoga?

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Posted: 12 February 2014 at 9:56am | IP Logged

ya..ya...me first :). This is quick and long update.

 
huff...Finally Geet knows who is soni. Mann needs sometime to come around. I guess there will be more confrontations between Geet n Mann before heading for happily ever after. Waiting for Arnav n Kushi part.


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