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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 86)

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 10:31am | IP Logged

Welcome back dear

Boy this is it right

All the twists shall be over with

Hmmm a lot will happen right

Hope it don't take me too long

If not tonight by tomorrow shall comment back

And it was not last night but today sorry for this

Well this is the one where loads will happen

Khushi will be getting ready to leave to lucknow back to her family

And geet realisation of love will be ssen

And how maan reacts to the same

God knows how he will react to this

Well maybe not this one but soon she will have to tell him

And well then we just gotta wait and see what happens when she confesses to maan

So we start with arnav do we

Okay lets see what he does today please make him stop doing this

Or it will be that much harder for him when all is well

At the rate he is going nothing will be well

Hope khushi makes him pay for all this later on

That would serve him right

Inka ego naa kuch zyada hi bada hai brother

Aww isn't it sweet to see their sibling bond

Shame that anj didn't know of his love story or she could have helped him

But he did keep it hidden

Mandir mein kya khushi bhi hogi

I rather they not face off once again

Before she goes off to lucknow but am sure they will right

Actually that might be good idea

As your wife to be too will do the same

Will be easier then if they have mandir nearby mate

He really loves teasing his di don't he

Well nothing wrong in that

In fact its good right to have such close bond between brother and sister

Better than what geet brother did at least

Uss brij kit oh main okay lets not go there shall we

Or waste of time that shall be

Well great anj thanx for that

So near khushi again

As if their last face off wasn't enough

Of course khushi would be going too

Why wont she

Have to make life that much more complicated for them right

Hmmm so how do they face one another after her returning his gift to her

Hope they can both be civil to one another this time around please

Though I have doubts on that

Something or the other triggers them to be mean to one another

Well not something but their love which has been snatched from them

Dammit indeed mate but not only for you but for khushi too mate

Ahhh well of course how can she relax with him around

There was a time when she could relax but not anymore

I know right she must be thinking before going also I have to bear his taunts

Well hope he keeps quite and don't make it worse for himself and of course you

Phew there is hope for them yet

He didn't say anything and that's good news for sure

As long as they keep civil towards one another that's good

Good she didn't ask him why he is quite

Why poke the sleeping beats leave it as it is dear

Arrey even he must have realised that there is no point to it

After all you give it back to him

So both parties are hurt and he is taking the diplomatic approach

At least I hope that's what he is doing

With arnav you never knows whats going in his mind

Hmmm that was close for her right

But once again he didn't say anything

And that's good right

Phew she really is scared of what he might say to her right

Who would have thought this day would come for them

Being so close and yet so very far from one another

I don't think its arnav with your duppatta probably stuck in the car

As these damn things bound to do

Okay he did hold her duppatta

Man seeing him like this sure was heart breaking

Man how did they come to this

That he cant even be with her without being bitter

That their love has been tested well and truly

Seeing him defeated like this sure isn't what any one us wanted

Even though he did ask for it

Oh my they both are so heart broken right

Why did this day have to come

Why did they have to separate and not be with one another

But that's part of the story and this phase too shall go away right

It will take time and a lot of working on the writer's part but am sure she will make it okay eventually

Well she didn't really betray you but it was circumstances that made her do this

Because she too loves you just as much as you do

You just couldn't see it as you were too involved in your own pain

But hurting you hurts her too

Just like it does with you

Wonder what he is gonna ask her

And if she can really answer him even

That's one question even we wanna know about

But then I think I know the answer to it

Though am sure the reason isn't gonna change much

Kyun jab alag hi karna tha inke dilon mein pyaar jagaya

It would have been better if they never fell in love

Right arnie but dude if that hadn't happened we wouldn't have any story

Toh kya hua agar aap nahin maante unhe

Parr unse yeh sawal toh karr sakte hain naa

Kaise poochengi yeh sawal

Jiska jawab unke liye sunna bhi utna hi khathin hai jitna aap ke liye

Man that was one hell of an emotional scene

You sure got me there

When he asked in a broken tone from his love why did God do this to them

Why did he snatch his love from him

And even from her

Though since they have snatched that love am sure time will give them their love back too

It just has to happen right

Ahhh maan and geet again

Hmmm does she behave differently with him now she knows she loves him

Or still the same old geet

Lets see shall we

Okay so she isn't behaving how she had been behaving with maan before after her realisation

That's something right

Boy if she keeps giving him smiles like this he sure is gonna go crazy

But then that aint such bad idea right

Yeh itna shocked kyun hain ji

Pheli baar toh aapko dekh karr nahin muskura rahi hain yeh

But its first time after their separation though right

 Seems she is gonna be whirlwind of your life again mate

And hope you are ready for that maan

Do you really wanna know why she is being extra efficient

Hawww ek toh she is working more and he is being suspicious

Had hai yaar maan

Ji aaj kal aap ke saath aur time spend karne ka muakka mille toh yeh badi jaldi jaldi kaam karr rahi hai ji

Isn't that just cute

Yeah right as if mate

Iss ladki se koi lena dena nahin

Really mate who are you kidding

Well except yourself there mate

Hmmm this is just the beginning of it all mate

Aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya

Aur kitne shocks lagne waale hain inhe

I knew it he isn't gonna make this easy for her

She will confess but after that confession well things could be hard for her

At the rate he is going it seems like that

Oh boy hope she is geared up for this challenge for her love

But am sure she will be

Maan heumien toh laga tha ki yeh mehanti hain

Aap itne shocked kyun hain ji yeh janne ke baad

Okay all this to impress maan

Good going my dear

But trust me it wont be easy road for you from now

Your realisation of love is just the first step there is more to come

 Hell yes he does feel for you

But he wont let you know of the same either

He might just try to deny you of the same

With him you never know either

Both maan and arnav are hard to understand

But once geet and khushi understand them then it all becomes easy

Nope its not friend little sister that is keeping him away

It's the fact that you were his first love and you forgot him

But then how is she to know the real reason right

Kya baat hai future patidev ko impress karne mein hain ki who arnav ki kewal choti behen hi nahin balki unka khudka bhi wajood hai

Well she sure is going the right way for that to happen

And hope he will be impressed with her

But that still wont change much either

He will still run away from her for sure

Sweetie in all this you forgot one thing for sure

Soni the woman he loves who is you

She really will have to think about that angle soon enough

Ahhh arhi well what to say about them

Well it is her first love so she forgot those important things too

When you are in love guess you just don't see anything else

And come one its her firt time that she remembers her love right

So let her bask in her new found love

Soon enough she will know she has to know more about soni and arhi

Wow so she is impressing him goodie man

Aww she even put tea for him

Wait he drinks tea I thought he too is fond of coffee like arnav

Dude like I said this is nothing

Hawww can you really forget her

As if he can forget her if he could well again this wouldn't be happening

But its just self-preservation from his side right

Please she is not gonna come back to normal

And certainly not that easily

Wait what do mean by normal abhi abnormal hai kya

When and how come I didn't see that maan

God she is cute when she baffles him

Now not did she lose man

This girl naa she loses something or the other

But its so funny when she says lo hogaya siyapa

Seriously I just love this dialogue of hers

Kya dhoond rahi hain yeh ladki

Man she sure made her room a right mess

So much so even anj is shocked to see this much mess

What did you lose this time dear

Its something small for sure though

Okay she lost her mobile

Ahhh then it makes sense why she made such mess of things

See had your AD not been there what would you have done girl

That's the first thing you should do when you cant find your mobile

Unless of course if its on silent then this is the best way to find the mobile

I know right anj inka sach mein kuch nahin ho sakta

Kya room ka haal bana diya hai inhone

Bless as if her chotte wasn't enough messy person even baby is messy

Man they are more alike than it seems right anj

Arrey you don't have to worry soon enough

Soon there will be someone else running after them for their things

Like khushi and maan at least I hope they will help these two out

They need them for sure for all that and plus they love them too

I know right socho apne teen chote bhaiyyo or behen ke peeche inhe yeh sab karna oadhta toh inka paas toh koi time hi nahin bache kiski aur cheez ke liye

Oh yeah soon her little kanha will follow their steps

But by then you will have two sister in lays to help you out right

Where did she leave her mobile

Not in the house for sure

Oh ho so she left it at work

Of course she did

These days her focus is more on maan and impressing him than her own things it seems

We all will agree with your that evaluation

Aap sach mein jhalli hain

But theni love this jhalli side of geet

Hey she is right

Even I didn't think that

If the watchman is outside and she left her phone by her desk

How on earth did the watchman get inside to hear it when he is outside

 Acha its maan in office

I swear to God inhe hain naa office mein hi camp out kar lena chahiye

Jab dekho tab bas kaam kaam aur kaam

Of course only maan would work on the freaking weekend

Not dev yaar

Unki biwi hain jo at the moment pregnant hain

So he would be spending his time with her

Unless of course if there was an emergency which it aint am sure

Of course she is gonna go now

Since she knows that her man is there in office

She gets the chance to see him on Sunday too

Yeh toh arnav waala hisaab ho gaya yaar

Really you cant wait another day for the phone now right

Man she was so cute when she was making all these excuses to get her phone

And all due to the fact that maan is at office

Ufff anj seems you only knew of aki love story

Baki saari love story aap ko bina pata hi ho rahi hain

Oh ho Anjali they all keeping you outta the loop man that's sad

But not long to go for sure

Your little sister is happy because she is gonna get the chance to see the man she loves on Sunday

And that's why she is so excited to go to the office

There maan was thinking he wont have to deal with her on Sunday

And that she will be back to normal by Monday

Fat chance of that happening mate

And he will soon know that too

Course geet get more chances to see him

Because god knows how he shall react once he gets to know that you love him

Aww poor thing she didn't get the chance to see him

Iss watchman ki toh bet she is so thinking about that

Bless that was so funny she was so happy and now she is down again

Being so close to seeing her love and then not getting to see him

What is cooking in that brain of hers I wonder

Babaji save maan from her actually why bother right

So that's what she is thinking

Wow over efficient ho gayi hain pyaar mein

Must be the first time itna koi efficient hua hoga kissi ke pyaar mein yaar

So she is turning into a workaholic too

But all for love right not like maan who is trying to forget that love

She is lucky he had given her work to do that she can do without raising too much suspicion

But where is the man she is looking for

There he is wooohooo

And he must be thinking what is she doing her on Sunday

Geet he wont ever reply to you lovingly till the dude don't break his own promise to himself

Well he will have to break it some day but not now

Well she came running to see you

But of course she cant say that to you on your face now can she

So she went for work excuse thankfully

Hmmm jaise ki who kabhi bhi baat karne ke mood mein hote hain bhi

Jab se soni inki zindagi se gayi hain well he is back to being MSK

And even with the soni in geet now falling for maan isn't gonna change things right

Well when she is scared she isn't gonna grab onto you who else will she grab

As it is you were the only person in the lift with her

How to be freaking sarcastic you gotta learn it from both maan and arnav

Dono iss kaam mein mahir hain

Maybe it's a blessing in disguise that they got stuck in the lift together

Or maybe not obly time shall tell

What do you thinks she is doing

Yes she loves you but seriously that's not the reason why she is coming so close to you

So just be nice to her mate she is scared

OMG this girl is such nautanki for sure

Like really did she say that

Unfortunately for her the electrician is on time

Or more like he would be scared that the main boss would murder him if he aint there soon and the lift aint repaired

So less time but make the best of it dear

Aise maukka roz roz nahin aate hain ji

Dude itna bhi khush hone ki zaroorat nahin hain

There geet is sad that the lift is working again and you are happy

Well this I so didn't see coming

But what a scene yaar

She fell on him due to suddent movement waah kya baat hai

Arrey waah kya baat hai

Ankhon hi ankhon mein ishara ho raha hai ji

Well this eye lock is way overdue in my opinion

Bet neither wants to take their eyes from the other but will do so

This is the limit yaar


Why so many miss on their kiss yaar

Damn that was so annoying that once again something stopped them from kissing


That way things will be less complicated for sure

Dude you love her that fact you cant change

And no matter how much you try running from her you will only come more closer to her

No really that's so the case here now

You both were gonna kiss one another

Both wanted it so badly

Ahhh well yes he does feel for you what you feel for him

But there is still a big problem in your way dear

And that problem is you only

No dear don't be so hasty as to confess

Give it bit of time will ya dear

Waise bhi when you will tell him you love him god knows how he will react

So its best for her to enjoy till then right

Don't confess in office dear

Kissi ne sunn liya toh phir kya hoga yaar

Ahhh back to arhi huh

So khushi is here one last time before going back right

He doesn't wanna see her as it hurts too much and she also thinks the same

No one does notice him when he is sulking

And I thought his di would at least notice something is off between arhi

But even she didn't though geet did

She too is busy in her love world to see anything amiss between arhi too

Wow she sure did well

Awww that sure was cute

At least some good news there man

But that didn't last for too long the good mood

Why do they do this

But then the family don't know naa

Sheesh this is not gonna be easy for her either

The more she tries to be away from him the more they push her towards him

Well he is more than her jiju to be

He was and still is her first love

Geet yaar did you forget what maan said

That don't let arhi come fact to face with one another

Even am dreading this now

Ahhh why are yoy making this harder for her too mate

And you said it hurts you when you do this to her

Then why now arnie

A sad song is it aki is famous for it

So she is gonna feed him she would have done that gladly before but now well what to say right

But this time its his emotions that can be related to this song right

Oh god seeing them like this is heart wrenching

These could be the last moments she gets to be beside him

 As she is leaving for lucknow soon

Of course she cant tell him that

And when they come face to face next he will be marrying her la di

Well he might not marry her in the end but he will be her jiju naa

And that will be driven home seeing la and arnie together

Neither of whom is happy with this marriage of course

Even am gonna cry soon if this song don't finish seeing them like this

Well she was bound to take her hand away from his

 She don't have any rights on him anymore does she

Last year things were different and you know it

But then his heart doesn't want things to change between them

Though they have changed and so much

So she did give him what she gave him last time

 Good that the family didn't come with her

Or if anyone had seen her doing that well things could have gotten outta hand

Oh what time has come that they cant even share their happiness or pain with the other right

There is still time arhi please don't do this to yourself

And not to forget la

You will be making not only yourself miserable but her too

But seems neither is gonna stop this wedding due to family right

Ahhh even am feeling sad seeing them like this

Though not for too long

Now things are once again gonna change aint they

Well for one khushi is going back to lucknow

And the weddings are coming closer

Not to forget geet confession

A lot is gonna happen and soon wont it

And cant wait for that now

Okay that's it from me

Cheers for pm

Got that was emotional update for arhi

Cute funny and yet sad for maneet too

Edited by chavvi16 - 08 February 2014 at 8:32am

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shiv456 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 February 2014 at 10:47am | IP Logged
beautiful update

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men!!! they are so cluelessShocked

yaha Maan apni Soni ko avoid kar raha hai because he thinks she doesn't love him...but SHE DOES

aur wahan Arnav apni Afreen se kehta hai ki woh heartbroken hai, uske betrayal ki wajah se...lekin kyun usse Khushi ki ankho mein uska dard nahi dikhta????Confused

After all agar Khushi itni hi heartless aur selfish hoti toh usse Arnav ke dard se koi farak nahi padta..
par usse farak padta hai damn itAngry yeh devdas kab apni ankhe khole ga...

Ab sub kuch Devi Mayiya aur Babaji ke hath mein hai...wohi in chaaro ki kashti ko paar laga sakte haiBig smile

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nice update...Smile

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Arnav and Khushi are suffering so much plz do something :(

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Maan and khushi are hopeless. both lost their love. and i can't understand them.Ouch
i want geet to do some jasoosi on Arnav and khushi. and and bajao of maan.

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