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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 8)

chavvi16 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
sorry sweetie but will do this tomorrow
dont be too mad
but then i can spend more time tomorrow on this
and i will need time for this
after all its another part of shocks twits and not to forget separation time
one due to his own foolishness and the other due to her past
but cant wait to know what happens next
does geet go missing here or in next one
and arnie coming to know of his mistake and folly
thus becoming totally devdas types
which even maan shall once he looses his soni
oh man seems it will be soon sad time for both couple
but it is needed after all right
so shall take it in stride
sorry for the lateness but here now finally
dang didnt really see the title there completely
so tragedy will be struck
for one by their own hands and the other due to his love's family
well at least one member
oh man this will be sad in the end
but that has to be done
so lets get down to it then
wow mami once again you have spotted geet
she is good at this right
but in the end it wont matter as geet shall be taken away
hmmm so they saw khushi with geet
that means even if they dont see her they can ask khushi about her naa
but will they be able to do so
so payash engagement will happen
chalo at least he shall get the license to be with his fiance
unlike a certain somebody who just wanted to spring the engagement on people
haiyyo rabba kya chal raha hai
maan arnie hello dont stare too much yaar
warna log kya kahenge
it aint official for either of you
as if they ever cared and this time am with them
well arnie my man this is all you will get to do from now
drool and observe khushi from far after the kaand you have done
man these two can be pretty shameless this way not that i ever want them to change that though
aise hi acche lagte hain dono
while our girls will observe them chup ke chup ke
ussi mein hi toh mazaa hai boss
ohhh trust me your gut instincts are spot on for sure
it seems that danger is moving closer to your soni
and am afraid you wont be able to stop it
dammit this is bad but must not freak out
not already man nahinnn
okay have gotta cut on my melodrama when such serious situation
not both the girls disappearing man
have they been taken
and geet is trying to free herself
getting really worried about same
their relief wasnt really relief as their love is missing
and that scream from geet just is telling of danger coming or having come to her
oh it was danger their way
but how did they see in the dark man
and why them both
just take geet unless they thought it best to take both girls
if both are taken no one would know
because had they taken one then the other would have known for sure
sorry i have to swear here just this once please pretty please
kutte kamine gadhe saale teri toh
please arnie se phele main iski band bajaana chahungi when the time comes please if its possible
so those idiots with him kidnapped both the girls
and she knew how much danger she is in
but does she remember what he did to her
more like the reason for her house arrest and now her kidnapping doubt it
well no she aint married
and she aint like you so shut it mate
good move there geet
she made sure that they had some chance of escape
by her shout for his name she made sure that he knew that she is in trouble
man that was harsh the way that man behaved
agar main iski dhulayi naa karr payi toh kya hua at least arnie and maan should do when time comes
oh no both have been kidnapped
and this is bad real bad for sure
so they got there in time
and managed to bash those kidnappers
but if the boys are here bashing those goons why would geet be taken
guess have to wait and read patiently
wow meri wish itni jaldi aur bina kuch kahe hi poori ho gayi
come on guys let bash them real good
after all they just tried to mess with your loves right
itna toh banta hi hai naa
so they did see geet
and she doesnt just look like her she is geet
dammit it seems this aint over yet
and they are still in danger
oh no it seems the boys wont be able to win
which means geet shall be kidnapped
and this is worse than not knowing that she is kidnapped
they are pretty strong and our boys are also outnumbered
man maan has been hit this is hard to read but one must
thank god someone had the sense to call the police
good move la at least you called the police but hope they can hang on that long
seriously dev not now mate
dont waste your time waving to wife man pay attention
but must say his thinking is as sharp as his brother what a way to gain upper hand
hmm action is all going on but what will be the outcome
yup you guys dont have to just fight them but use your brains too
god these phelwaan are bit thick
but then they are brij men so this was bound to happen
good move jun i liked that
that was good he saw that man on time or geet would be hurt seriously
oyye they may look delicate but when it comes to such things they can give you a run for your money
never take panga with our girls warna karr dengi tunko nanga
nalayak peeche vaar karne chala tha
and yes people she is your baby
well at least that was cleared right
wow so he instead got hit with the rod
well he was asking for it
after all he had attacked her before
yes yes people very proud of geet but lets get back to the fighting
or else geet could be taken away
am glad though that now they know for sure
yes geet these are the people who are responsible for your this state as in memory loss
but what i dont get is what led to this
aisa kya dekh liya tha aapne that they wanna kill you kidnap you and harm you
must be something big right
or else they wouldnt have dared to pull such stunt with so many people there
ahhh i blooming well hope not
but it is possible too right
after all she is very near her delivery time and all this stress is enough for her to go into labour but i hope not as that shall be bad
not that having baby is bad but in such situation it can lead to problems
and where is that police why arent they here yet
saara kaam kya hamare ladko ne karna hai
or will they come on time unlike  movies
akash dude inki kya galti
abhi sagaai bhi nahin huyi aur yeh tevarr
though he aint wrong in telling her that
but lest get down to the real fighting shall we akash
you go arnie teach those idiots trying to mess with your khushi
this i didnt see coming
no no no man this is even worse
he has been knifed crap this is bad real bad
oh no take him to hospital asap man
so she saw the man coming for arnie and warned too
but he wasnt able to hear her
oh man this is bad seeing the one you love being harmed so brutally
man she wanted to go to him
make sure he is okay but glad geet stopped him
i know its hard to stay put when the one you love is hurt and he just got knifed
if she goes then she too could be in trouble naa
what ever he may have done or said he didnt deserve this for sure
hope he will be fine though
DM and babaji hope arnie shall be fine
he just has to be warna khushi ka kya hoga
waise i know he shall be all fine he has to be man
nani ko heart attack aa raha hai
dammit the situation is getting even worse man
this is real bad for sure
yeh brij ki wajah se bahut kuch gadbad hone waala hai
aur ho bhi chukka hai
damn that man into pits of hell and beyond
why did he have to come back man
man nani just saw her grandson being knifed that was enough reason for her attack
oh god yeh sab kya ho gaya
hope anj dont go into labour too due to shock as that will just make the situation even worse
yaar why is it that all this is being done by la only
baaki logogn ko kya ho gaya hai
well thankfully someone has the sense to think rationally
geet and khushi i think dont even know about nani too focused on arnie and keeping khushi rushing to be with her love
now i know why you said we will hate you by end of this chapter
but shall try not to
damn the evening that started so beautifully has just turned into nightmare for all
and all because of one man brij damn him
oh great just what was needed to make the institution worse
anj going into labour as well
dammit it thats three catastrophe in just one day so far and this aint over as of yet
though i must say that one incident of arnie being stabbed sure had profound effect on all
loved how you described everyone's feeling to that one incident
thats why she didnt panic the way other are
well duh of course
the rest are pretty close to raizadas
so of course they rational mind goes down the drain
sorry for saying that no one was using their sense
you cant in such situations can ya
seeing your loved one being hurt
and as la aint that close to them since she just met them she was the only one to be of any help
damn they are still there
and thats still bad news as arnie is down
and akash went to see to him
not to forget shyam went to his wife well duh knowing her condition he would do
oh no that vile man took opportunity and went for geet
and he is getting away with it too
what with others being busy in fighting the goons
well khushi can at least try to stop him
after all she is her bhabhi to be
well bhabhi only forget the to be part
and she has to try keep her safe after all arnie got hurt due to this very reason and that should not go in vain either right
yes she will try to stop you she may seem weak but at moment she is really mad as it is due to her love being hurt all thanks to you
so she will try to keep her safe for sure no matter what happens to her
oh man never mess with these girls either
see they did try to stop you for sure
but he hurt geet as well as khushi
could this be the reason for their separation
she got hurt and she might just forget time spent with maan
that she will forget maan no please not that
but it might just be that
maan must be so enraged right now
as not only did he just try to hurt his sister
but because of him his brother (arnav) and love are hurt 
see told ya he would be mad real mad seeing her hurt
and he wouldnt spare that man now
not that i would want him to either
oh no this is bad for sure
how much tragedy can be seen by us all yaar
now am sure this could be the reason for their separation
seeing how all the goons have been disposed off right
what else could it be man
see i knew it he would have killed brij for sure
well wouldnt you if you just saw your love being hurt by same man
only with geet name was he able to stop
so now they come the police when all is over
abb kya faiyada hai yaar
oh man so casualties were too high for the good people
who cares about those goons man
nani with heart attack anj with her labour arnie knifed in stomach and geet unconscious due to brij
the day just got even worse than it did some time while back
crap all are in ICU
wow that was even better than i thought it could be
sorry to offend you there saying that its better than one thought please dont take top much offence
oh boy who thought that this could happen
and the day aint over yet
you take your time
there is no hurry at all so rest that hand and do the update little by little dear
this one was enough ti keep me satisfied by next week
take care dear and cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 20 August 2013 at 1:57pm

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drashtimeetu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
awsome performance
fully enjoyed it
tooo good
arnav.geet both are hurted badly
nani heart attack and anjali labour pain
update soon
tc of ur health

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kushigowda IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
great update

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fffan123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Wow !!! What amazing twists. Hope that Arnav, Anjali, Naniji and Geet survive the night and ARHI and MANEET do not have a long separation. Am not sure why is Brij so determinedly after Geet? Can you please give some back-ground.

Also NK ki entry kab hai?

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ILoveFF IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Action packed

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shiv456 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
very nice update even though your wrist hurt

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Kareena1994 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
nice update
thanks for the pm

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ThanuAditya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 August 2013 at 3:50pm | IP Logged
Omg hope everyone is oky esp my jaan Arnav …

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