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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 79)

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 2:31am | IP Logged
Asom dear lov the u describe drunken arnav bechara devdas feel bad for maan bhai bhen ke bich me phans gaya finaly u updated thanx for pm

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 2:31am | IP Logged
lovely  chapter
arnav drunk scene was well written
also geet maan was kind of cute
loved the last line when maan said: Yeh achcha kaam mila hai mujhe! Arnav is drunk, Geet ko call karo! Geet is drunk, Arnav ko call karo! Yeh bhai behen ke beech mein main phas gaya hun!
excited for next part 

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 3:10am | IP Logged
bechara maan...bhai behen k beech mein phans gaye...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Lovely part. Hope the misunderstanding between ARHI is sorted soon and looking forward to Maneet part.

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 5:20am | IP Logged
part 61
awesome...
excellent dear...
too good...

Dev Naintara
oh wow Tara is expecting...
and Dev's strategy to make her talk to Maan to escape from Maan's anger is funny...
awesome...
junior Dev or junior NT?
hmm what about dono?

Geet Naintara
oh so now only they are meeting like this...
sigh those days were so beautiful...
koi na hope NT and Dev's plan work soon...
so they are trying to make her remember the time she was with them and Soni...
sigh...
those reminders worked on Geet or not it worked on my memory...
waah kya din the wo sab...
so Geet is now all the more curious to know about Soni...
so Geet desires Maan to feed her like that...
not to worry dear Maan will surely do that...

Arnav Khushi
seriously his only way to forget is to drink?
gadha kahin ka...
then when he regrets and repents what will he consume?
i will send him zeher...

OMG he went to her home...
what would have happened if Buaji was there?
this guy never ever thinks anything except himself...
is haalat mein bhi isse gussa aa raha hai?
duffer idiot...
poor Khushi...
bechara Maan...
Maan calls Geet when Arnav is drunk now Khushi calls Maan when once Arnav is drunk...
Maan i think has to change his profession at this rate...

Geet Maan Arnav
hahaha here once again its Geet who is helping Maan and Arnav...
too good...
bechara Maan and Geet too...
Arnav should hear a good scolding from Maan for turning like this...
oh ho Geet dear ur Ab is enough to have troubled her a lot now u too dont trouble her and hurt her...
hope she supports Khushi later and yells at Arnav...

Khushi Arnav
oh ho Khushi dear u still wanna see that obnoxious guy?
hope she doesnt hurt herself...

oh ho the stupid idiot gadha is back to his angry and irrational form...
yeh naya naya tarika dhoondh tha hai to hurt her with such words...
but Khushi too is giving back but its not at all enough...
the way hes doing is too much...

Maan Geet
Sasha did a good work...
and Dev well he has got one more chance and plan to implement and execute...
hahaha poor Maan...
Geet and Maan on a long drive and meeting and dinner...
excellent...

how did she mange keeping her mouth shut this long?
hehehe poor Geet...
and Maan was controlling so much...
had Arnav been here he wouldnt have believed and also would have celebrated this silence of Geet...
oh ho so Geet is drunk here...
now i seriously laugh at Maan's condition...
hes the one who is caught in such positions with drunken people...
hahaha...
now Maan has called Arnav to take a drunken Geet...
her antics were funny...
hmmm she almost confessed...
and they were about to kiss...
waise did Maan and Soni ever kiss?
i have completely forgotten about this...
almost kiss but Arnav arrived at that time...
hahaha so Maan too feels like this only...
hehehe...
lovely dear...
precap
poor Khushi...
and Geet well thats good...
cont soon dear...

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Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
awesome
what will happen
grt part

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
ok so nt and dev la plan flop toh nahi hua hai 
and arnav and khushi both are taunting each other 
and maan aur geet ki date 
and maan ka dialogue ki dono bhai behen ke beech mein main phas gaya was hilarious
do update soon

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Posted: 23 November 2013 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
Amazing update:D
Looking forward for ure next chapter!!

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