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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 70)

love2_soma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 November 2013 at 9:37am | IP Logged

bechara charo pyar k mara...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 November 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
great part
liked it
precap is interesting

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khwaishfan IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 02 November 2013 at 10:26am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Awesum song! Geet falling 4 Maan! update soon! Well written! Happy Diwali!

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jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Arshi song was so emotional b beAUTIful.Geet is falling 4 maan.plz someboy tell her that she was maan's soni.Is arnav going 2 take revenge on Khushi?Oh!

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spvd IF-Addictz

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Happy Diwali dear

part 59
excellent dear...
loved it so much...
especially Maan and Geet scene...

Arnav Khushi
hmmm once again Khushi has gotten herself caught in the dangerous den...
poor her...
and Arnav hes being such a dash dash dash...
he hurt himself and Khushi was in pain...
he saw that still hes hurting with his hurtful words...
waah Aakash kya timing hai song chalaane ki...
cant he think?
who the heck made him a businessman?
seriously Arnav give that good for nothing head and brain of urs some serious work...
at this rate everyone is gonna hate Arnav and sympathize with Khushi...

Maan Geet
this is what u call it as entertainment...
haye i loved that scene so so so much...
Dev brought her to Maan's cabin to have lunch with them...
too good...
and royal ignorance was too nice...
Dev and Geet were having a good time...
whoa Geet and pasta?
didnt see that coming...
and poor Maan he was so shocked...
waise did Geet eat pasta in KM during her stay?
twas always her khilaying parathas to Dev...
tiffin box?
i remembered my school days...
so she using Aakash's box...
so family and love touch in this...
Geet soon get into ur detective mode dear...
u are gonna be surprised...

OMG the girl is so careless...
but chalo hero yahan hai tho why worry...
Maan was so scared and couldnt stop himself from getting close to her and showering her his love...
he called her Soni...
but Geet is so khoyi hui hai in his care...
like this scene where Maan is Maan in fact Soni's Maan...
very good she had a live dream and Maan too had a dream...
good frequency...

Geet u dont know that ur AB is a knows chauffeur to certain someone...
in fact i think instead of Anjali gettign to know about this if its Geet then it will be like band baja baraat to Arnav...
she will never leave this teasing in her lifetime...
well Geet is the only one who can make Arnav accept her stubbornness...
poor Khushi...
always getting caught...
seriously Arnav u are gonna regret so much...
and am looking forward to it...
and Khushi good she has started reacting to his words...
good way to go girl...
now her anger and she left well next time Arnav is gonna get it back so much and thats gonna be the start...
he deserves all the anger and hurt...
he will realize it late?
loved it all dear...
so good...
cont soon dear...

PS - tum somehow poori kardi about this Arnav being driver...and the precap is so interesting...

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.sushmitha. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 03 November 2013 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Fab update yaar kalpana... Truly luved it...Clap
Waiting fo the next update...

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Awesome update...cant wait gore kushi to answer back...continue soon

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Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 November 2013 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolflora

ok so I am firstShocked

I was waiting for half hour

finally you updated

I read your reply and I am getting more curious now

but whatever it is it will surely be something good

coming to update

i truely love the first song it perfectly suite them

thank god arnav though arnav didnt behave rudely with her at that time

but he was again on his ASR way when he call her saaliji i so hate it

coming to maan and geet

dev is best at least he is trying to unite them unlike maan himself 

so geet like pasta now

it wad cute scene both dreaming about each other

maan call her soni seeing getting hurt but geet didn't notice

geet already falling for him

waiting for next

cant wait

For a half hour????? So did not expect that! Seriously did not expect that! But really touched to read it! And do get curious! Coz that will get me more interesting reviews from you!LOLWink
Yes, when I heard that song, I was like this was so perfect for Arhi! It explained their feelings for each other so perfectly.
Even I hate when he says that but kya karein? Story demands it! I mean what else should I have made them do while Geet was falling for Maan. I mean unless Geet falls for Maan again the story would not move ahead for anyone of the four. So I decided that Arnav will give Khushi the same treatment he gave her in IPK, taunt her as much as he could! 

And happy that you liked the Maaneet scene!

Thanks for the review!Big smile

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 04 November 2013 at 12:24pm

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