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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 62)

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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

loved the update...
loved Maaneet's first meeting in office...atleast Maan understands Geet's feeling but very disappointed with Arnav...it was all due 2 hisaction that they are in this mess and he s hurting Khushi with his cutting words...if he s in pain then Khushi s in more pain than him...y s he accusing Khushi that she trapped him in her love,it was he who used 2 stalk her and nt the other way around...once he realises his mistake Khushi should nt forgive him easily as he was at more fault than her and he s hurting her self respect a lot...please don't show Khushi 2 b all forgiving when Arnav realises her stand as he s nt even trying 2 understand her POV bt still s throwing accusation at her...if he feels Khushi has betrayed him then even he had betrayed her by hiding his real identity from her...
so nw Geet and Dusht Davan's love story will start...so Geet's heart has not 4go10 her love for Maan...
good update...
update soon...
Dont worry! Khushi wont forgive Arnav easily! I have planned something hatke for them!

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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sutapasarbabhom

Nice update arnav is so cruel to kushi if he realy lov her hw can he huqt her so much wish their misunderstanding wil clear soon lov geet in kc scene
Wasnt Arnav the same way in the show? I have tried to stay true to the characters!
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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushigowda

buaji arnav-khushi ki baath suni kya??
when will NK come???
Buaji did not listen! 
Nk will enter after chapter 64!
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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by coolflora

idiot arnav 
always do like that
but khushi is no less always sacrificing for love ones
i think sometime it good to be selfish then selfless

one question whom does lavnaya love?
nk or some other person i am sure he gona enter soon

i love geet maan scene
MSK back to dusht dhanav forms 
Lavanya loved a guy from her college named Rohan! But now they have broken up! She will be paired with NK now!
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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana yadav

haye lovely update 
so now mannet's track is coming
but what abt arhi
grt one
Arhi will keep on clashing till Geet falls for Maan again. Then both the couples will have a hatke twist and the story will be back on the main track!Big smile
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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 2:47am | IP Logged
part 57
excellent part dear...
lovely...
too good...
am enjoying Maan and Geet scenes so much...
wanna see that cute Soni in Geet soon...
oh ho Anjali is asking Khushi to come to S to select jewelery...
how will seh react when she gets to know what Khushi did?
Geet is joining office?
OMG Geet is joining KC...
excellent dear...
wow cant wait for the office romance and fights and drama to start between Maan and Geet...
finally Pinky and Geet met...
if only they had met before Pinky would have told Geet about her feelings for Maan and Maan for Geet...
sigh...
OMG Naina is too smart...
all thanks to her...
the letter is the beginning...
yaar include me hugging Naina too...
else they would have to think of something get Geet to KC and it would have taken some more time...
Dev and Naina deserve the hugs and pats...
wow Maan thinks hes dreaming with open eyes...
dont worry Maan honey ur Soni is here to win u and u make her remember u...
oh Sasha is not evil here...
i forgot about that...
good good...
in fact Geet will be taking her post here...
Dev if Maan gets to what u are doing tab tho khair nahi but i hope by then Geet falls for Maan and Maan cant do anything to Dev...
Geet is scared of Maan?
or say nervous around him...
hmm well thats a start...
chalo koi tho reaction hai Maan ko lekar...
he will always be in her mind from now on...
the baby is so sweet...
oh ho Anjali u are leaving Khushi is the loin's den...
poor Khushi Arnav is gonna be harsh on her...
seriously Arnav is this the way to hurt her?
its not like only shes is the culprit...
even u are...
did u idiot ever try to ask the name to ur sis and Naani?
fool, stupid...
choosing the easy way here to console ur heart...
that was so cheap Arnav...
poor khushi...
such words on her?
good Anjali came to save her from further harsh words...
haila...
finally the most important BANG happened...
Maan and Geet collided with each other...
and Geet falling and Maan catching...
and they getting lost in each others; eyes...
awesome...
slight glimpse of Soni...
hahaha Maan is so frustrated...
bechara now he cant do anything but tolerate and break his stupid wall...
good Geet will fight with him...
have the trust on her to always fight with him...
hahaha poor Dev...
he better be careful else Maan will eat him alive...
oh twas all Maan's doing and idea that Geet had in the one year...
still he says he should stay away from her...
stupid...
Maan and Arnav are stupids idiots and fools...
Geet Handa nahi Geet Raizada and Dev's self thought soon Geet Khurana line made me to laugh so much...
i loved that...
door rakho?
thats surely not happening Maan babu...
hum aisa hone nahi denge...
sigh Arnav the blind idiot is back...
poor Khushi...
she deserves the punishment but such harsh words?
Arnav will regret using such words on her later...
hahaha Geet baby is back...
her lines and words are always so hilarious...
and looking at her angry face the Raizadas were scared...
wow only Geet can tolerate Maan...
good theres someone to meet Maan's anger and also get angry equally...
lovely...
hai the baby is cute...
he diverted her anger...
cute scene...
Maan reminds her of Yammy?
my God...
Maan is gonna blast her for this...
Geet honey u are not understanding Maan cant scold u directly as of now since u have joined now only and to let out his anger and frustration bechara the employees are getting ur share...
soon u will get to know that...
hes not unfair but kya kare woh majboor hai as of now...
bachke rehna darling...
but Aakash made her realize his good soft side too...
hmm only if Arnav had told her about Maan's real nature then the family would be supporting Maan and make Geet fall for him soon...
given that Anjai will do anything for her Maan Saab...
only they have to know what had happened between Maan and Geet then everything will be so easy in Maan's life...
loved Geet and Maan and Dev's scenes...
cont soon dear...

PS - thanks for the scenes dear...loved them...

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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 57
excellent part dear...
lovely...
too good...

Thank you!Big smile

am enjoying Maan and Geet scenes so much...
wanna see that cute Soni in Geet soon...

Dont know about cute Soni but romantic Soni will be back soon!Wink

oh ho Anjali is asking Khushi to come to S to select jewelery...
how will seh react when she gets to know what Khushi did?

Anjali will know nothing! 

Geet is joining office?
OMG Geet is joining KC...
excellent dear...

Woh toh hona hi tha! Woh appointment letter aise hi thodi na diya tha!Wink

wow cant wait for the office romance and fights and drama to start between Maan and Geet...

Drame ka toh pata nahi par romance jaroor chaalu hoga!

finally Pinky and Geet met...
if only they had met before Pinky would have told Geet about her feelings for Maan and Maan for Geet...
sigh...

Why do you think I never made Geet visit KC before the twist?Wink

OMG Naina is too smart...
all thanks to her...
the letter is the beginning...
yaar include me hugging Naina too...
else they would have to think of something get Geet to KC and it would have taken some more time...
Dev and Naina deserve the hugs and pats...

Done! Will do it by next week or next to next week!

wow Maan thinks hes dreaming with open eyes...
dont worry Maan honey ur Soni is here to win u and u make her remember u...

Sorry to disappoint but Geet will never remember Maan!Cry

oh Sasha is not evil here...
i forgot about that...
good good...
in fact Geet will be taking her post here...
Dev if Maan gets to what u are doing tab tho khair nahi but i hope by then Geet falls for Maan and Maan cant do anything to Dev...
Geet is scared of Maan?
or say nervous around him...
hmm well thats a start...
chalo koi tho reaction hai Maan ko lekar...

LOL

he will always be in her mind from now on...
the baby is so sweet...
oh ho Anjali u are leaving Khushi is the loin's den...
poor Khushi Arnav is gonna be harsh on her...
seriously Arnav is this the way to hurt her?
its not like only shes is the culprit...
even u are...
did u idiot ever try to ask the name to ur sis and Naani?
fool, stupid...
choosing the easy way here to console ur heart...
that was so cheap Arnav...

Aur daanto Arnav ko! He is an idiot!LOL

poor khushi...
such words on her?
good Anjali came to save her from further harsh words...
haila...
finally the most important BANG happened...
Maan and Geet collided with each other...
and Geet falling and Maan catching...
and they getting lost in each others; eyes...
awesome...

Thank you!Big smile

slight glimpse of Soni...
hahaha Maan is so frustrated...
bechara now he cant do anything but tolerate and break his stupid wall...

LOL

good Geet will fight with him...
have the trust on her to always fight with him...

So true! What is Maaneet without some fights?

hahaha poor Dev...
he better be careful else Maan will eat him alive...
oh twas all Maan's doing and idea that Geet had in the one year...
still he says he should stay away from her...
stupid...
Maan and Arnav are stupids idiots and fools...

Sigh! Totally agree with you! But lovable idiots nahi?Wink

Geet Handa nahi Geet Raizada and Dev's self thought soon Geet Khurana line made me to laugh so much...
i loved that...

Happy to hear that!

door rakho?
thats surely not happening Maan babu...
hum aisa hone nahi denge...

Agreed!

sigh Arnav the blind idiot is back...
poor Khushi...
she deserves the punishment but such harsh words?
Arnav will regret using such words on her later...

Dont worry! I will make sure he will regret it!

hahaha Geet baby is back...
her lines and words are always so hilarious...
and looking at her angry face the Raizadas were scared...
wow only Geet can tolerate Maan...
good theres someone to meet Maan's anger and also get angry equally...

Sher ko sherni mili!LOLWink

lovely...
hai the baby is cute...
he diverted her anger...
cute scene...
Maan reminds her of Yammy?
my God...
Maan is gonna blast her for this...

LOL

Geet honey u are not understanding Maan cant scold u directly as of now since u have joined now only and to let out his anger and frustration bechara the employees are getting ur share...
soon u will get to know that...
hes not unfair but kya kare woh majboor hai as of now...
bachke rehna darling...
but Aakash made her realize his good soft side too...
hmm only if Arnav had told her about Maan's real nature then the family would be supporting Maan and make Geet fall for him soon...

Arnav wont open his mouth because Maan would kill him! And somewhere Arnav thinks Maan is right! Geet should be given the choice to fall in love with her choice of guy! Lekin Destiny toh Destiny hai! Apne manzil par laakar humein khada karti hi hai!Big smile

given that Anjai will do anything for her Maan Saab...
only they have to know what had happened between Maan and Geet then everything will be so easy in Maan's life...
loved Geet and Maan and Dev's scenes...
cont soon dear...

PS - thanks for the scenes dear...loved them...
Thanks for the review!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 25 October 2013 at 11:57am

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ohhooo... now you have to mend so many broken hearts... do that soon please Embarrassed

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