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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 46)

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Posted: 01 October 2013 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Love it
I m reading & Cry Cry Cry

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Posted: 02 October 2013 at 1:37pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 October 2013 at 7:23am | IP Logged
all r in pain...
none is happy...
hope it will be over soon..

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

In Maaneet's love story the separation was caused by fate but in Arshi's love story it was caused completely bcoz of Arnav's foolishness...after hiding the fact from him abt his identity, accepting the proposal without actually knowing who the girl was nw he s blaming Khushi 2 betray him...well the truth is that he himself brought this pain upon himself...he always thinks that he s one writing his destiny and that he can do anything...hope he gets 2 know the truth...hope Maan puts some sense in2 Arnav soon...

I agree with you regarding Arnav's fault! His impulsiveness and ego had always been his bane even in the show! And the brunt of his anger always fell on Khushi there! I tried to keep Arnav in character here by showing his reaction in such a manner!

bcoz of Arnav's one foolish decision 3 people are suffering...Arnav, Khushi and in a round abt way Lavanya too...poor Lavanya even she is suffering in between all this and no1 s bothered abt her pain...hope Payal gets 2 know abt Lavanya's state of mind soon...

Yes, Arnav's foolish decision cost three peoples' future but don't worry! Before things go too wrong, I will get the story back on track!

so Geet called Maan for help when she found Arnav missing...but still i didn't expect Arnav 2 b in a devdas manner...Maan should really be appreciated as he s being strong, thinking logic inspite of all the pain his heart s suffering...hope Geet falls for him soon...i guess the office track will bring abt the deep sleeping love in Geet's soul 2 wake up and get back 2 her Maan...

Maan has been living for his family for so many years that when personal tragedy fell on him (Geet's memory loss) he hid his emotions and continued to live normally for his family's sake. If you remember, I had shown Maan taking the responsibilty of his family from young age after his parents' death. I had shown that so that you could understand Maan's reaction here. 

And about Arnav, in my story Arnav is shown a bit selfish! For him except his Di, nothing is important, and thats why he went into Devdas mode when he did not get what he wanted (Khushi)! Infact, that is why I chose Mann Jaage for Arnav's pain coz that was apt for him! Paaya Woh Na Chaaha Chaaha Woh Na Paaya! Get it! And as he is dedicated to his Di, he won't break the engagement either as that will break his Di's heart. 

anyway felt bad for Maan, Khushi and Lavanya more than Arnav...hope things get solved soon without causing pain 2 both the families...

update soon...

Thanks for the review! And no families will be harmed due to these young peoples' decisions!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 04 October 2013 at 12:54pm
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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Suppi_4_u

i pity men sometime!!! Arre shanti se thinking karne ki jarurat hoti hai tab dimaag ko tala lagwa lete hai
these stupid men...             
arnav aur maan bhi same catogary ke bandhe hai...

Emotional wala update .. Plz don't make them suffer more yaar

thanks for the pm


You said totally what I wanted to convey! These men na! When they should be calm they get angry and take impulsive decisions and then when they get to know the truth they start to regret the decisions! Idiots!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 07 October 2013 at 9:42am
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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zindagirocks_21

Chapter 55 (D)

Amazing update as usual!
 
Thank you!
And thanks for the review!

Maan why are you hiding your pain from others, everyone can see that you're going through a lot of hurt and pain. I just feel so sad for him. Talk to someone maan, talk to your dadi.
You will always love soni maan no matter what. The way he cried on dadi shoulder was just to emotions and than putting that mask back on :( pleassseee nooo!!

Maan will never talk to anybody about his pain! He is used to hiding his emotions from others too much! He hid his emotions and remained strong for Dev and Annie when his parents died and now again he is remaining strong for his family!

OMG even maan thinks that it's khushi who arnav is getting engaged too! But this happiness of arnav and maan will soon turn into pain, and hurt by their loved ones.

Exactly!Cry

Arnav is so happy that he is finally getting
Engaged to khushi and that now she'll be all his, but the shock
HE is about to get will be the death of him.
I was so happy when arnav texted khushi and told her about how he was so happy that they are getting
Engaged and that now she'll be his, I actually thought khushi might do something to stop this but no she didn't!  

What could she have done? There is no guarantee that the matter would  have been solved without the tamasha and arguments! There was a good chance of Payash rishta breaking! 

I wS just so angry with khushi that even after finding our about the truth she still didn't do anything but I can understand that from her perspective! She can sacrifice her happiness for her family, her sisters and that's what she did. She purposely planned the game and texted arnav about the wrong color so that it would be lavanya who he would pick!

Yep! She played the trick! Happy that you understand her point of view!

Arnav shock and hurt/pain was just too much!! He was betrayed by his afreen and i truly felt sad for him. I can't seee my arnav go through that.

Awww! Dont worry! Your fav ASR will be back with a bang!

Sorry for the late reply, have been busy with school. Just read the both parts. Please forgive me for it. Loved your update as usual <3
I understand! Chalta hai! Atleast you reviewed! Late hi sahi! Study hard and focus on your goal! Best of luck!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 07 October 2013 at 9:52am

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zindagirocks_21

Chapter 55 (E)

OMG I'm actually crying, I can't even imagine like that, though he did cry in the show but still. He is so hurt by the person he loves, he felt like he was teenager again and that he lost his parents again. It was so sad!

Thanks for the review! Oh teri! You cried! Feel so bad yaar! 

Maan was shocked as well, he thought that khushi is just playing a childish game but when he saw lavanya in khushi place he was hell shocked too!
Only he can understand what arnav is going through and only he knows how to console him!

 Exactly! Only Maan understands Arnav's pain!

Truly how can anyone be blinded, couldn't they see the pain arnav was going through couldn't anyone see that!!!

No one can see coz everyone is happy in their own world! This is something which happens in our real life too! Only people who are good observers can notice such things!

Ohh maan is angry and walking toward khushi to confront her, hit arnav stopped him.

Dii I have to say that the way you portrayed Arnav's scenes were just mind blowing, out of this world!! And that's a truth.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Really happy to read that! (Grinning like idiot right now!)

The way arnav cried for khushi and how he was like she betrayed him, how he loved her dearly and that's all he wanted back as well not the pain. I was shouting in my head when arnav said that he will marry lavanya and show khushi that he can be happy without her, but what maan said was a hardcore truth! You can't forget the person you love no matter what, though his situation is different than arnav, but same at some point too.

Really touched that my work affected you so much!

Khushi I feel so bad for her as well! That she had to sacrifice her love for her family sake, and how arnav was like why khushi why?
He thinks as if she broke up with him becUse of only one of his lies, aweee! Khushi please don't do this. Don't let arnav hate you!! Damnn arnav threatened her that he will not let her live in piece and really any guy in this situation would do that.  

Yes, he threatened her! Coz thats what he always did in the show too! Remember?

Maan and khushi both crying for their lost love, at least maan talked to someone and khushi as well! I feel so sad for them. That how on the same day both of them lost their love.
Both of the consoling eachother, brothers never leave their sisters in peace and sisters can never watch their brothers in pain.

Yes, siblings bond is one of the most beautiful bond in the world!

OMG nooo way! Arnav is drunk shit!
When maan picked up the phone even I was like hmm who is calling him at night, but it turns out to be geet and I'm fine with that lol. She was so worried about arnav that she just had to call maan and tell him about it.
Poor maan his heartbeat got so fast just by hearing her voice that's what love is, you go crazy by just hearing their voice. One crazy love!!

Haay re! Crazy Crazy Wazy romance!Wink (Singing a song from Shuddh Desi RomanceBig smile)

Ohhh arnav don't cry, your making me cry too much again becUse I just finished watching ghajini and cried so much. Khushi will never leave you! She loves you too. And on top if that the sad song :(  

You watched Ghajini before reading this! No wonder you were crying after reading it!

When maan came and consoled him was just way to emotional!
OMG seriously next chapter is the lAst!!
I'm shocked but loved this chapter
Do update soon and thanks for the pm Hun.
Love you
Rafia
Happy that you liked the update so much! Thanks once again for the two reviews!


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 07 October 2013 at 10:07am

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Posted: 04 October 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 55 E
awesome dear...

Thank you!
And thanks for the review!

poor Arnav...
feel so sorry for him...
hes so angered and feels so betrayed...

Arnav was total heart broken! Writing him like that was a big challenge!

and wow Maan saw all these happening...
and the protectiveness he feels for Arnav is so so so nice...
he just wanted to blast at Khushi but Arnav stopped him...
cant blame him too at that time...

Arnav stopped him coz he did not want a tamasha when his Di was so happy!

he saw his family being so happy and stopped himself...
but only Maan could see him...
Arnav hadnt u disclosed everything before yeh naubat aati hi nahi idiot...

Exactly! The idiot!Angry

oh ho now hes out venge it all like this...

Of course! He has to come in his ASR avatar! Warna yeh story Arhi ki kaisi! Arhi and maaneet stories are incomplete without ASR and MSk avatar!Wink

but still what Khushi did is all so foolish...
Maan gonna talk with Khushi...
and Arnav is so badly hurt in this...
oh wowww Geet called Maan and initiated the talk...

Yep! Poor Maan!

but Maan darling is so hurt...
hes not even ready to face her...
ut her one smile did everything...
NT is too smart...
way to go dear...
hope her tryign doesnt go in waste...

It wont go waste! That saree has its own role to play in this story!

Geet saw the saree and kept it inside...
very good Arnav yell at her...
she deserves it...

She so deserves it! Sacrificing idiot! I dont know how many times I must have cursed her while watching the show! Her sacrificing act always got me angry!

and she is still lying to him...
damn it Khushi...
and Arnav has decided to marry La...
sigh...
in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta...
idiots...
gadha gadhi hai dono...

Agree! Totally agree!

they have lied and played with their lives so much...
all coz of their foolishness...
so Maan is the only one here to be a matured and intelligent...

Yup!

and Khushi told him everything...
and Maan knows its allcoz of one mistake of Arnav's and to have stretched that too much for its own good...
and Khushi has no idea about this...
wow nice pairing...
Khushi and her Veerji (Maan)...
and here Geet and her AB (Arnav)...
 

LOL

kamaal ki paring hai...
OMG La is all set to marry Arnav...
who is that guy who cheated her?

Some idiots named Rohan or Rahul! Cant remember! Mentioned it in the earlier chapters!Wink

she has completely given up on love and her life and wishes now...
and Paayal has no idea about it...
shes also unhappy and just doing everything for others' sake...
poor La...
hoe will she accept and react when she comes to know about Arnav and Khushi later?

You wont have to worry about La! She will also have her happy ending!Wink

oh am missing Soni so much...
wish to see that Soni in Geet soon dear...

Sure you will!

and Geet and AB together...

Sure! You will! That is one thing for sure!

Soni is really a cute soni and Geet is thoda sa matured for me to accept to fell extent...
would like to read on her to get attached to her Geet character instead of Maan's Soni...

Yes, Geet is thoda mature but that is because Soni did not face what Geet faced! Soni was a girl without her memories; the memories which made her Geet! Pretty soon you will meet a the real Geet!

oh shes talking with Maan and asking his help...
chalo good shuruwaat...
Maan now u can never escape from her...

Exactly!

u were trying to move away from her life completely but see fate is making u to come in front of her and talk with her...
excellent...

Thank you!

this excited and too much talking Geet is reminding of Soni so much...
this is what i wanted too see...

Happy to know that you are satisfied!

wow Geet saw through Arnav too...
looks like Maan and Geet are in the same wavelength and frequency...

Exactly!

too good...
bechara Arnav...
Arnav bana Devdas...
what did Maan yell at him?

He did not yell! He just asked where are you? Thats all!

the scenes was damn funny for me...
the convo to be in particular...
that one scene made me smile...

LOL Happy to read that!

he looked like the kid Arnav to Maan...
poor him...
his anchor is Maan...
sigh Maan ke liye kaun hai?
only him...

Agree! Poor Maan!

dont worry Maan u will get ur Soni soon and Geet will be with u always...
nahi tho i wont leave kalpu...

Oh teri! Have to start working on next chappy soon!Big smile

these 3 people i like their personalities...
Maan, Geet and Arnav i mean...
theres something in them that really attracts me in this FF...

Oh really!!! Actually I like these three out of Arnav, Khushi, Maan and Geet! I dont know why but I dont like Khushi that much! Find her too dumb for my tastes! Geet was shown dumb in the show but I accepted that coz she was treated badly at her house but Khushi does not have any excuse to be so dumb in the show! So did not like her at all!

nice part but very painful...
cant see Maan in pain and feeling so furious seeing Khushi's idiocy and Arnav's pain...
cont soon dear...

Thank you!
Even I am feeling furious about Arnav and Khushi! But then I should not coz this is my story!Wink

P S- oh thank u dear...i slapped Maan...good deserves him and it really did wake him up...thappad yaad thi par main nahi grrr...naam bhi yaad nahi kiya...par thappad ka feeling tha...how unfair Maan...but koi na if it really makes him realize and change his will...thanks dear...
You are welcome! And sorry he forgot you! Kya karein? He is so in love with Geet that he does not notice any other girl!Wink Na! Your thappad wont change him! It is only Geet's love which will change him! That was just a dream that he forgot also! After all if he remembered toh meri poori story ki band baj jaati na????Wink


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 07 October 2013 at 10:31am

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