Originally posted by chavvi16yeh 55 kab khatam hoga ji
shall get to it as usual later
haila i so didnt realise that i said what you thought i and other readers might say
but thats not something that surprises me
you seem to know what we might think or say and say it before us
Kya karein? I know how annoying I can be! And I know how much of my antique-giri you guys can handle! So I can easily predict what you guys think next!
haila E tak hoga
koi nahin what difference does it make right
as long as more of this story i dont care agar Z tak jaye
Haaye! Dil khush kar ditta tussi yeh last line likh kar!
well lets get on with it
time for engagement of payash at least is here
kissi ki toh engagement ho rahi hai
When I wrote this part, even I was like finally! Coz inki engagement toh chapter five se planned thi!
oh maan who are you hiding this pain from
your loved ones know all about it
parr ab toh inhe adaat hai aise jeene mein
okay that was bit silly but had to do it
cant see him that sad
though he has his full family with him the one who could get him through it all isnt there
bhaad mein jaaye KC for now though that will be his priority from now
unki yaad mein kya haal bana diya hai
aur yeh toh sirf shururat hai naa
chaliye apne pyaar ke imtihaan ke liye shuru ho jayiye
kyunki ek baar aap yeh pass karr gaye toh soni hamesha ke liye aapki
Yeh Ishq Nahi Aasaan Itna Samjh Lijiye! Ek Aag Ka Dariya Hai Aur Doobke Jaana Hai! Waah Waah!
aur MSK ne aaj tak harna toh seekha nahin
thats one good thing i love about his MSK personality he wont let anything or anyone make him loose
ahhh so they shall be discharged soon well thats nice
and a relief for him too even if he wont say it but he feels it
well dadi knows that if she says her name the flood shall open again
Daadima is walking around eggshells when it comes to Maan!
so payash engagement and arnie la engagement
thenga unko unka pyaar milega
jaise aap hai naa by the end of it unka bhi yahi haal honewaala hai
Yep! Two devdas and one paro! Maan Arnav and Khushi!
And the way I am planning the story, For Maan, Paro will be Soni while Chandramukhi will be Geet! Thank God! I did not plan La to be Chandramukhi for our Arnav Babu!
well jo karoge beta wohi bharoge
so karma is here with vengeance and she is gonna bite his well you know what
i know right had geet not lost her memory it could have been his engagement too
but then usme kya mazaa hota itni jaldi inki sagaai
nahin yeh maan aur arnie ki kismat mei kuch bhi cheez hona asaan toh nahin toh pyaar kyun milega itni jaldi
Separation hi mein pyaar ka main mazaa hai! Aur twists mein hi toh readers ko mazaa hai!
aur waise agar yeh sab naa hota toh payash ki sagaai phele ho jayegi
right two daughters will get engaged together but not who you and that arnie are thinking
aur iske koi aur zimmedaar nahin sirf arnie hain
Agree with you totally! Blame Arnie's ego!
that dont surprise me aur dadi he was bound to say that
well when ever you will come you will see engaement of payash but not arhi
unke saath saath inhe bhi toh zatka lagega naa
waah ussi zatke ka hai mujhe intezaar
aane waala hai bada mazaa arnie ki dekh ke haar
Waah Waah! Waah Waah!
maan dont congratulate arnie as of yet
becasue khushi toh inhe milne se rahi
inki bhi story hogi aapke jaisi
arrey hamari writer nardayi thodi naa hai
agar ek ko apna pyaar naa mila toh duje ko bhi nahin milega
thought both cases are very different of course
one lost his love due to unforeseen circumstance while the other lost his love due to his own follies
arnie dont be silly
maan is right here there is no point in doing what you are suggesting
pyaar kiya jaata hai karwaya nahin jaata
aur aise thop ke toh bilkul nahin
aur aap kyun fikar karr rahein hain itna khud ki love story toh sambhalti nahin aur doosron ki sudharne chale hain
Loved the last line!
aur inse yehi idea ki umeed thi mujhe
worry not our kappa dear is there for maan and geet love story
Yes! Main hoon na! The lekhak nad the sutradhar of this story!
parr aapka toh bhagwaan hi maalik hai
okay just kidding there that too is under kappa guidance but not yet
after all he has to pay for his arrogance and ruining things for himself attitude
Exactly! I hate arrogant guys and want Arnav to have a good fall from his high horse!
hmmm well maybe he is right
actually on this count he is right for sure
that means now when she falls for him wont be due to her being his fiance or fake one
yeh waala pyaar naa kissi dabaab mein aa karr hoga aur naa hi kiski rishtte mein bandhne jaa rahe hain iss liye
so this means now she will love him truly wont she as she wont know of the previous time
which means he shall get his love in reality with the reak geet
Congo! For being the first one to decipher my plot!
okay yes soni was real but without geet in it
and geet is the real deal so no more soni but geet
tabhi toh banege yeh maneet
Phir serhyme! Yaar tum pichle janam mein shaayar thi kya?????
this is creepy am rhyming nahinnn aisa nahin hosakta
okay had to throw bit of melodrama there dear cant help it am nautanki no 1 yaar
OMG! Even I am a nautanki yaar! My friends even nicknamed me that!
bit more than geet khushi and anji as you must have found out by now
and once again i digress sorry cant help it you know
okay arnie dont worry about khushi she wont say about maneet love story
as it is she has more things to worry about
but also in such matter she uses her common sense pretty efficiently
Loved the last line!
dont worry sweeties what if soni is no more
he will get to know geet handa and she will force him to unlock those feelings again
you can wear the maks all you want maan but that girl is gonna smash it once again after all she is your love but with even more spark than soni
You are so right!
okay am not saying that soni was bad but geet is even better version of the girl called soni
he may have loved soni but geet will force him to love again
you arent gonna stay single mate all your life
warna bechari geet ka kya hoga
bechari bhi toh kunwari reh jayegi naa
so this MSK will go again and all thanx to geet yipeee cant wait for that
Even I am eager to write that part!
and that am waiting for eagerly though will take some time naa but can wait for the new and improved geet sorry soni i guess
thats getting confusing should i call her soni or geet
geet right since she is back soni too is there for sure but geet is in more
does that make sense hope so it didnt to me
Made sense to me though!
so where maan started from he is back to that again
geet sure has her work cut out dont she oh well am sure this challenge too she will overcome in time of course
aur waise bhi maan apne MSK roop mein hi toh sabse best hotte hain aur phir unhe maan bannane mein mazaa hi kuch aur hai ji kyun sahi kaha naa
abbe gadhe sorry for that but kya karein inhe sunte hai toh bas asie bol nikal aate hain
kya re ek baar toh naam pooch lete
i mean wouldnt you wanna confrim the name of your fiance to be
i would even if i was sure it was him confirm karne mein kya jaata hai
but no he is one overconfident chokra
aur ab hai yeh bhutega
and serves him right too for his own folly and keeping khushi in dark
You are so right! He deserves it!
but bechari khushi ka kya dosh chalo koi nahin pyaar mein keval ek toh nahin hai rota rona toh dono ko hi padega
Khushi also little bit deserves it! Why did she hide this from her parents? That is a wrong thing to do right? My dad always says ki aise draame hote hain because we are not transparent! We hide things! So somewhere somehow I feel Khushi deserves it!
haan woh baat alag hai ki khushi can deal with it better than him
aur phudakiye aap arnav becoz by the end of the day we all know what you shall be like my man
and i for one cant wait for his face having the smirk wiped off when he realises who he is getting engaged to that will rock on man
Even I enjoyed writing that scene!
haan haan abhi jitna khush ko sakte hain rahiye ji baad mein toh keval rona hai beta
hmm green phene ya naa khushi toh aapki hone se rahi
and all thanx to your over confident self mate
aap toh phele se hi pagal the ab aur kuch bhi hone waale hain
sorry but she wont be feeling any excitement
in fact at this moment she must be real sad
karre koi aur bharre koi
but she shall pretend to be happy with her family and why not her la didi is getting engaged
shame that person is the love of her life but what to do
she cant snatch her sisters happiness after la break up she wont even be able to tell la about her love for the man la is getting engaged too
well i dont know about her face but yours will be worth reading for when the truth of fiance comes out
He he he!
though i can just imagine it for sure if am right which i might not be
chalo at least he didnt go meet her
thank god for some small mercies for the poor heart broken girl there
no my dear man she will do neither
in fact she might end up bahaying ganga jamuna aur saraswati all together
Loved the last line!
though i hope not no pint in doing that
by god agar arnie ne isse blame karne ki koshish ki naa iss sab ke liye toh inki khair nahin
but knowing him he will blame her jab ki saari galti hai inki
You have nailed Arnie perfectly! He will blame her! The idiot!
waise hope then her maan veerji shall take care of arnav then arrey farz hai unka and he is the only other person who knows about arhi love saga apart from geet who cant remember anything so she aint of any use there right
Maan is too much in his own pain to worry about Arnie's hatred towards Khushi!
see for a change i was right
she is putting fake smile for the sake of her family while crying tears of blood seeing her love being taken away
well what else can she do stop the engagement and ruin her didi life and tell about her own love
she will never do that we all know she would rather die than do that to her sister
You understood Khushi perfectly too!
sweetie aapke arnavji ko yeh baat pata thi ki aap payal ki behen hain
aur ee liye hi toh uu ne haan kari iss rishtey ke liye
parr bhaisaab ko yeh nahin pata tha ki aapki ek aur behen bhi hain
toh saare phasaad ki jadd aapke arnavji hi hain
see had he told you that he was akash brother then it was possible for you to tell la about your love for arnie
but since that man wanted to dig a hole for himself well things got messed up bad real bad
so now all thanx to his highness ASR you are gonna see your love get engaged to your sister instead of you my dear
satyanash ho iss nalayak ka babaji and DM sach mein
Oh God! You review is too hilarious!
see thats why she wanted time
so she could handle this delicately but no you didnt let her handle it
in fact bcoz of your eagerness you lost her for sure
Saare fasaad ki jhad Arnie ka ego superiority complex hai!
woh toh achaa hai ki baad mein ya anth mein she will be yours bcoz she cant be made to suffer for your follies now cant she
but till then khud bhi royiye ya jo bhi aap karte hain aur inhe bhi rulayi nalayak
see you should have let her handle thing as then we wouldnt be in this situation but no ASR thinks he knows the best naa when he bloody well doesnt
you know she cant let her sister suffer due to her and yet you had to hurry things along
i swear he still doesnt know khushi as of yet
or what love really is not just being selfish in it but selfless too
the day he realises that khushi will be his
Agreed! Arnav ne pyaar to kiya par nibhaana nahi seekha! Jis din seekhega tab sab theek ho jaayega!
she is right even if its arnie they wouldnt be happy that she kept their relationship in the dark for so long
well she is made of sterner stuff of course but she is gonna gonna make you suffer but then its your own doing of course mate
Yes, suffering will be there! First Arnie will make her suffer and then she will give back as good as she got!
jhoot boliye aur arnie aur apni inki aur la ki zindagi barbaad kijiye
how could you yaar kuch toh maan se seekhte yaar
chalo chaddo koi faiyada nahin abb
jo ho gaya woh ho gaya
aage aage dekhte hain hota hai kya
and she knows for sure now
that her arnavji was a bigger idiot than she thought
but what can she do now its bit late right
sexy aur hot lage bhi naa arnie she aint yours even then sorry mate you brought this on yourself
now how is she meant to make things right at the last instance
i know right he has got you in fix
neither can she say anything fearing things will get worse nor can she keep quiet
its till his fault has fault had he not hidden the truth about knowing about payash naa this wouldnt have happened as then all could have known
or he could have told the family this way at least la would have been spared
she is right about her bua though
woh toh baat ka batanar bana deti hain
haan she loves khushi same as others but she can be bit mean too yaar
see she is doomed either way
one due to her family and his the other arnie
wow even in such situations she can use her brian effectively
Of course! After all she is Khushi yaar!
which she would have needed to had he not taken the decision away from her
and now for her jiji and di she is ready to bear all his anger and hatred
why did you lie to him
all ws fine but aapko bhi inki tarah aise jhoot bolne ki adaat padd gayi
yeh arnav bahut buri sangat hain sach mein bholi bhali khushi ke liyes
About your last line -
hahahahaha i called khushi bholi bhali thats funny no really
agar arnie mahan kaand karte hain toh yeh kaise peeche reh sakti hain
what are these two doing yaar
but ab aur yakeen hota jaa raha hai they are perefct for one another for sure 100%
Again for the last line -
sweet cheeks nazar lag gayi beta
aur itni jaldi baazi apne ki aur kaam aur bigaad diye
soni aur maan ki tarah aap ka pyaar bhi gaya
and what to say yeh toh hona hi tha
awww baby kanha is asleep peacefully not knwoing what storm is coming his mamu arnie way
well maan ka rona abb aapka rona honewaala hai be ready mate
well she just got ya mate
and you dont even know of it till it shall be too late
what else was she supposed to do
let both her sister rishta break for her love
she cant be happy with you if her sister cant be happy and you know that
or do you arnie no you wont or dont
sorry arnie but she lied
well about herself
she had to you see for her sisters
she didnt give you a clue but instead confused you
and you being so over confident fell for her trap
If Arnav had thought logically at that time, many problems would have solved! But Arnav is known to be impulsive and emotionally decisive! Serial mein bhi toh impulsively Khushi se shaadi ki thi!
but aapki waali aapke fav colur mein nahin apne fav colur mein hai
basically she is matching you but you wont know until its too late
oh dear he wont know what hit him for sure
yehi hai aapki sazza ASR
well this will be good for sure
wow aki man your bhai is gonna make you the bali ka bakra
chalu cheez hain yeh
parr jinse yeh oyaar karte hain unse kam in such matters
arnie bhi naa that was naughty
Happy that you liked that scene! Put it up to lighten the mood of readers who must have been dreading this chapter!
no he wont choose the wrong girl but arnie sure shall
and all thanx to khushi only
dehte hain kab tak yeh haste rahenge hah she got him
nautnaki hain yaar sari ki sari
geet giving him confidence
di being di praying to almighty for her chutke
aur inki maate ke baare mein jitna kam bolen utna achaa hai
kya family hain inki naa
Haina ek dum antique!
waah sahi jaa rahe ho beta
he can give arnie a run for his money
after all he fell in love first
told his family about it first
and got exclusive rights on the one he loves first
yaar yeh maan aur arnav bade slow inkle iss mamle mein
Even I find it funny when I think about it!
well they would after all thinking with brain results in this only
chalo koi nahin inka dil toh phir bhi unhi ke liye hi dhaakta hai
well done aki my boy
tussi toh chaa gaye
and payal sweetie sure were desperate werent we
but then can ya blame her either
thay was reallly funny and naughty of aki
and the one thig we were waiting for happened
she got ya mate
and she betrayted you did she
achaa i thought you did it for her
had you found out which sister you were supposed to marry this wouldnt have happened
she wouldnt have been forced to do this
had you told her that he was chote she could have talked to her father and la about it first
had you done what aki did you would have got la
had you done what you didnt she would be with you
but you brought this on yourself
your over confidence your arrogance betrayed you
Daanto! Daanto! Aur daanto!
she just did what she had to to save her family rep and that of her sisters
wouldnt you have done the same for your di
and dont lie that you wouldnt have arnie
He actually married in the sow just for his Di! Toh he cant blame Khushi over this! But unfortunately when it comes to our pyaare Arnav Babu logic toh phoor udh jaata hai! Out of the window!
so here ends another shocking night
ahhh bless this one a loved because finally arnav paid for his deeds woohoo
though am sad too about arhi not being together
but then guess arhi and maneet shall get together in the end only
so that was that huh
another shock and twist out of the way and more to come
cheers for pm