Originally posted by chavvi16
so here it is the one which will separate maneet right
and maybe even arhi
well if not now it will happen eventually
so sad and yet it has to happen
get to it soon
so lets see how badly it affects maan
who shall be in his MSK avtaar again soon
Thanks for the review! The whole Chapter 55 is based on Separation only!
awww seeing or reading well what ever him like this is hard
he would look lost after all the love of his life doesnt remember him
and that is hard for a man like maan
as it is he hardly lets many people through to his real personna
and geet was one who really had gotten through all his barriers he had put up
she was the one who had broken the walls around his heart but now she herself dont remmeber him
Actuaaly I could not write that part at all coz I was feeling so sad. Had to grit my teeth to complete the whole update! I think Part (E) will also be as tough coz it will have Arnav suffering!
sorry dev but time cant be changed
thats one of the few things that is never in our hands
and we just have to go with the flow for sure
what ever time dishes out to us we have mould ourself according to it
after all time doesnt remain the same for too long
Wow! Loved the 5 lines! You defines time so perfectly!
so if he is heart broken now he will be given new lease of life once again by the same person only
but will have to wait for that for now
Only thoda sa wait, then you are up for a bumpy ride, Maan!
wow so this is similar to what happened with his parents death
god that means she was more important to him than he realised
so much so that he is breaking down with her not remembering him
That scene reminded Maan that he was not living for himself, he has always lived for his family and he has to again sacrifice his feelings and pain for his family!
but this is just the start to his problems
aur solution bhi wohi hongi
and MSK is out
he has gotta stop hiding behind the mask
but that his defence mechanism kicking in
and to stop from breaking further this is what he thinks is best
Everyone has defence mechanism. Khushi grins to hide her pain. Geet speaks too much, Arnav becomes rude while Maan becomes stern.
man that made me tear up if nothing did before
but even if you keep it locked in you will still have to let go of it sooner or later maan
or it will consume you for sure
but he wont listen now this isnt soni maan but MSK
well lets see what more shocks follow from this
Most shocks will end by Chapter 55 (E).
awww he is still there soni's maan
bless he had to see her once before going it seems
well how can he not after all what ever that may have happened she is still his soni
and he cant forget that ever
she will be his once again soon that much am confident about
Yep, She will be back with a bang!
but more improved than last time maybe with characteristics of geet handa in her
and we all know that he wont be able to run from her love even then
not that he is running but you know what i mean
Run????? He will run thats for sure! But our Geet will also be ready for him!
well yes that he said about himself was so true and about her too
yes she has left you behind
and no maan you might not come back in her life
but she still can and she will maan
Haila!!!! You have almost discovered my plot!
she just has to after all she is your love
sorry pyaar se koi kissi ko azaad nahin karr sakta
no matter what you think now maan babu
yes your ways are separate for now
but if she herself dont come into your life again and make you the maan you were she aint geet raizada
Loved the last line! Well said!
sweetie you wont mind the peace you crave as she took it with her
and he is right that he wont love another again
but going as fa as not marrying sorry but that wont be happening
dil ko toh abhi apne bandh karr diya hai
parr yeh jyada time bandh nahin rehega itna toh mujhe bharosa hai
pyyar itna bhi kamzor nahin ki itni asani se khtam aur mit jaye
bhale hi usse yaad naa ho parr uska pyaar usse maan aapke paas zaroor keech layega
after all she has an internship in your company
but of course you shall behave like the DD (not dhak dhak but dusht daanav) with her then
Again you almost guessed my plot!
ahhh so maan went so did khuranas but there is still tension for raizadas
till they are all discharged this wont be over
so the three gupta sisters are here to help
well only they can at the moment
keep strong raizadas this is just testing period
it shall be over and soon
okay not that soon but you know what i mean
dont let the situation get to you
some people cant give themselves some rest can they
The last line was hilarious!
not that i blame him for wanting to see his sister and nani asap
but he could have asked for help
at least for a wheel chair or something
ASR aur wheel chair? Ha! Good joke! He has to big ego to ask for it!
but no he is ASR naa
kuch nahin ho sakta nahin iska aur nahin hi MSK
Totally true! Kuch nahi ho sakta!
dammit yaar he should have waited for some help but no
so di okay happy now
but no nani still remains
whats she gonna ask i wonder
and is it what i fear
uff lutiya dono ki doobenewaali hai
well ek ki toh already doob chuki hai aur doosre ki bhi gayi
kya yaar koi nahin lets be positive
Yep, Naani bomb phodegi! Aur Arhi ko alag kar degi!
arrey apke arnavji ne toh thaan li hai sab ko chintit karr ke rahenge
ufff khushi kya karen iss arnie ko toh sirf aap hi sudhaar sakti hain
When I read the line sudhar sakti hain a image popped into my head - Khushi running behind Arnav with a Jhaadu while he is running and shouting Bachaao!
parr uska samay abhi aaya nahin hai
i knew it nani was asking about his marriage
well what else can she want from him
as it is aki is about to be engaged to the one he loves
and anj has her hubby and child too now
only you left and geet
what else would she want but for you to settle
aur aap ko bhi toh kissi se shaadi karni hai
woh baat alag hai ki inki shaadi unse itni asaani se nahin hogi
oh yes khushi its private for sure
and its gonna seal the fate of your love for arnie
but then all thanx to that ASR am afraid
Arnie ne kuraadi uthaaya aur apne hi pair pe maar diya!
nani kya karr rahi hai aap
but i cant fault with what she is saying she wants her chote to be settled too
after the scare they had in relation to nani she is bound to think of her family well being
So true! This was a big jhatka for her!
and only you are who are without anyone
issi liye keh rahe the before proposing her should have told your family
parr ab jab gadbad karr hi diye ho toh DM bachaye aapko
beta this is gonna seal your fate
aap toh gaye re barah ke baav se
The idiot went and dug his own grave. Cant he atleast listen fully to what Naani was saying?
kya baat hai nani that was good of you
but she had to do it too
waise it isnt somethinf hard she is asking
but now your fate is sealed awww and he dont even know
yeh geet ke babaji aur khushi ki DM yeh gaye
arre phele naam toh pooch lete
parr nahin inhe toh harr kaam mein jaldi baaji karni hoti hai
The last three lines were hilarious!
khushi thaare arnavji ne toh beda garat karr diya
yede yeh kay kiya re
kya karein inka ab hum ab toh kuch nahin ho sakta
Sach mein in yedon ka kuch nahi ho sakta!
khushi you were right the next few words changed a lot for you
now arnie shall be her jijaji haiyyo rabba bas yahi dekhna aur sunna baaki reh gaya tha
woh toh achha hai ki baad mein sab theek hoga parr abhi toh inhone sab satyanash karr diya
dammit it just aint time for lover
ek taraf geet forgot her maan
and now arnie did what he did
khushi ne bhi toh apna faisla le liya hai
ab aayega asli maaza
I always said in the start, no one is villain here. It is the circumstances and the decisions which create problems! Ab toh babaji aur DM hi bachaaye inhe!
woh kyun woh isliye kyunki ab tak dono couples ko jyada papad nain belne padhe the apne pyaar ke liye
parr ab shuru hua asli imtihaan
Mohabbat ki raah kaaton se saji hai!
and there is more to come
oh khushi you dont know but he thinks he is getting married to you
but of course thats not what it seems from your pov right
and the fun begins in real now
let the games begin fate and dentin have already made their move lets see how love copes against them now
Waah! Kya baat kahi! Loved the last two lines!
maan sorry MSK shall be coming back
and he is back once again
well like NT said he has lost the life in him
and is back to being the sadu akdoo etc etc once again
this is just the beginning of it all
just pray that she gets him back again soon
because only she can am afraid
true soni marr chuki hain parr geet ke andar toh soni aaj bhi zinda hai
Yeh baat yeh Maan kyun nahi samajh raha? Ziddi kahin ka!
but of course he wont accept it
now it is all upto to fate how to get love he lost back in his life
because that is gonna happen
yes soni would never forget him but she aint there anymore
oh maan you may have given up on your love but that doesnt your love wont be back to you
this is what we should have accepted from MSK as maan is no more too
she took him away with her
but MSK you will become maan and it wont be soni this time but geet who will do the honours
after all soni was just a shadow of geet
the real geet is the one who you will fall for again perhaps
Exactly! Ab Geet ayegi Maan ko waapis laane MSK se!
but it wont be easy for sure
Yep, it will be really tough!
after all he is MSK naa but then never underestimate the power of love (not common man here peeps)
ahhh so he will live with her memories
but thn again if geet lets you maan sorry MSK
NT and Dev will not allow Maan to live peacefully. They will do many things to get Maan Geet together!
NT dont worry your sapna will come to be
as our kappa dear can never keep lovers apart for too long right
fikar not sab theek ho jayega vishwaas rakhiye aap
awww this was so sad seeing maan like this
and yes that was maan there not MSK
he really got to me in the whole update
well why wouldnt he what with his love not remembering him
and forgetting their love filled memories
but i didnt know that MSK could accept defeat so easily
Maan accepted defeat coz he does not think there is any solution. For him, trying to win Geet back and then failing would be too painful. To avoid pain, he locked his feelings and turned into MSK!
parr that was maan naa
pheli baar kissi ko itni shiddat se chaha
parr usse bhi iss beraham duniya ne cheen liya
okay have lost it there sorry
but had to lighten the mood a bit
Kya filmy dialogue tha! Waah waah!
oh maan you have lost her and yet you havent
let see how she is returned back to you once again as she will be
kyunki akhir mein woh aapka pyaar hai maan
unhe toh waapis aana hi hoga
Aakhir use aane hai, jara dair lagegi!
awww that was hard to see maan break donw so much
It was hard to write too!
but when the one whom you love the most forgets you what else can you expect but pain
oh maan dil chota naa kariye yeh tasveer ek din zaroor lagegi jahan aap usse lagana chahete the
kyunki agar kismat ne aapke oyaar ko aapse cheena hai woh usse waapis bhi karegi
he sure got it bad
he is now starting to see her and its different this time too
at least back when this used to happen she was still in the same house as him
but now she is far very far
okay not that far but jab dil ke beech fasle aa jaate hain toh doori toh khalegi hi
oh man all he is remembering is her memories
as at moment he has just those
but fear not those memories wont be the only thing for you
though you shall have to wait for a while maan
saare sapne aur manokamnaye poori sawaha
okay i know being funny here
but thats true too naa kappa
oh maan really felt for you there
saare armaan aapke waapis se geet ki poore karengi
ahh the anguish of broken heart
that was the toughest chapter to read so far and there more to come
It was toughest to write too.
but even that i know and can guarantee shall be done just as well as you did so far
in fact even better am sure
Thanks for the vote of confidence!
so see ya next week for this
and what a performance really you got me there and that was really mind blowing peice of work
cheers for pm
oh and before i forget just have to mention it
now i know why both MSK and ASR wear shades
so they can hide their emotions from others
after all eyes are the mirror of our soul
Never thought of it that way!
waise MSK ki oath aur ASR ki promise dono khariz ho jayengi jald hi
Thanks for the review, Kittu! Made my whole week!
Take care and enjoy the weekend!
Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 21 September 2013 at 1:21pm