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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 36)

Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

poor Maan he s very strong but he s also breaking inside...
he deserves happiness but his Love of life doesn't remember him...waiting 2 see how his deep love pull Geet 2wards him and they get d true hapiness they deserve...i guess Maaneet's love story will start with Geet starting 2 work for KC under Maan...Maan's part was heart wrenching and emotional...

How did you know that is what I have planned for Maaneet?

poor Arshi...both are under Khushi has thought that Arnav has decided 2 move on as she rejected his proposal and here Arnav thinks that his family has selected Khushi for him while actually it s Lavanya who they have selected...waiting 2 see his reaction when he gets 2 know the truth...

You will know the reaction in today's chapter!

both love stories are temporarily under separation...hope Destiny and Love again play their game and bring them 2gether...

update soon...
Thanks for the review!

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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Alamelu

absolutely amazing update...really felt for maan here...the part of maan in soni's room was so touching...poor guy.  The only one who knows of geet's relationship with maan is arnav and kushi.  Will they tell her anything about it?? how will she react??
WOnder also about kushi.  Did arnav say yes thinking nani is talking about kushi??  was nani / di talking about kushi??

waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the review!
About your questions - Maan will tell Arnav and Khushi to keep their mouth shut! And Arnav did say yes thinking about Khushi, not Lav. Both misunderstood things! Naani / DI was talking about La!
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini_s

omg.. felt so bad for Maan.. hope Geet loves him on her own. and she comes back to him..

looks like Khushi MU Arnav.. waiting for the engagement..
Thanks for the review! You almost guessed my maaneet track after twist!Cry
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjana yadav

loved it
ab kya hoga
sad part
he bhagwan
i think or i should say i m nearly sure nani and anjali will pair arnav and la
ab khushi and arnav ka kya hoga
what abt maan and geet now
geet ko sab kab yaad aayega
will khurana's ever tell ki geet hi soni hai maan's love
now what will happen
plzzz sab jaldi se theek kardo
i cant see them unhappy
Thanks for the review!
About yor questions - I cant reveal about Geet's memory coming back as it will unravel the whole story!Wink  
Maan has issued warning to his family to not open their mouth regarding Soni Geet issue, so they will keep quiet except Dev and NT! They have important role later on!Big smile
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jasminerahul

I've nopeace of mind bcz of maan's resent also was emotional.plz unite maaneet.who iselected 4 Arnav?Lavaya or Khushi?
Yes, it is Lavanya who has been selected!
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

wooo hooo
so here it is the one which will separate maneet right
and maybe even arhi
well if not now it will happen eventually
so sad and yet it has to happen
get to it soon
so lets see how badly it affects maan
who shall be in his MSK avtaar again soon

Thanks for the review! The whole Chapter 55 is based on Separation only!

awww seeing or reading well what ever him like this is hard
he would look lost after all the love of his life doesnt remember him
and that is hard for a man like maan
as it is he hardly lets many people through to his real personna
and geet was one who really had gotten through all his barriers he had put up
she was the one who had broken the walls around his heart but now she herself dont remmeber him

Actuaaly I could not write that part at all coz I was feeling so sad. Had to grit my teeth to complete the whole update! I think Part (E) will also be as tough coz it will have Arnav suffering!

sorry dev but time cant be changed
thats one of the few things that is never in our hands
and we just have to go with the flow for sure
what ever time dishes out to us we have mould ourself according to it
after all time doesnt remain the same for too long

Wow! Loved the 5 lines! You defines time so perfectly!

so if he is heart broken now he will be given new lease of life once again by the same person only
but will have to wait for that for now

Only thoda sa wait, then you are up for a bumpy ride, Maan!Wink

wow so this is similar to what happened with his parents death
god that means she was more important to him than he realised
so much so that he is breaking down with her not remembering him

That scene reminded Maan that he was not living for himself, he has always lived for his family and he has to again sacrifice his feelings and pain for his family!

but this is just the start to his problems
aur solution bhi wohi hongi
and MSK is out
he has gotta stop hiding behind the mask
but that his defence mechanism kicking in
and to stop from breaking further this is what he thinks is best

Everyone has defence mechanism. Khushi grins to hide her pain. Geet speaks too much, Arnav becomes rude while Maan becomes stern. 

man that made me tear up if nothing did before
but even if you keep it locked in you will still have to let go of it sooner or later maan
or it will consume you for sure
but he wont listen now this isnt soni maan but MSK
well lets see what more shocks follow from this

Most shocks will end by Chapter 55 (E).

awww he is still there soni's maan
bless he had to see her once before going it seems
well how can he not after all what ever that may have happened she is still his soni
and he cant forget that ever
she will be his once again soon that much am confident about

Yep, She will be back with a bang!

but more improved than last time maybe with characteristics of geet handa in her
and we all know that he wont be able to run from her love even then
not that he is running but you know what i mean

Run????? He will run thats for sure! But our Geet will also be ready for him!Wink

well yes that he said about himself was so true and about her too
yes she has left you behind
and no maan you might not come back in her life
but she still can and she will maan

Haila!!!! You have almost discovered my plot!

she just has to after all she is your love
sorry pyaar se koi kissi ko azaad nahin karr sakta
no matter what you think now maan babu
yes your ways are separate for now
but if she herself dont come into your life again and make you the maan you were she aint geet raizada

Loved the last line! Well said!ClapClapClap

sweetie you wont mind the peace you crave as she took it with her
and he is right that he wont love another again
but going as fa as not marrying sorry but that wont be happening
dil ko toh abhi apne bandh karr diya hai
parr yeh jyada time bandh nahin rehega itna toh mujhe bharosa hai
pyyar itna bhi kamzor nahin ki itni asani se khtam aur mit jaye
bhale hi usse yaad naa ho parr uska pyaar usse  maan aapke paas zaroor keech layega
after all she has an internship in your company
but of course you shall behave like the DD (not dhak dhak but dusht daanav) with her then

Again you almost guessed my plot!Big smile

ahhh so maan went so did khuranas but there is still tension for raizadas
till they are all discharged this wont be over
so the three gupta sisters are here to help
well only they can at the moment
keep strong raizadas this is just testing period
it shall be over and soon
okay not that soon but you know what i mean
dont let the situation get to you

some people cant give themselves some rest can they

The last line was hilarious! LOLLOL

not that i blame him for wanting to see his sister and nani asap
but he could have asked for help
at least for a wheel chair or something

ASR aur wheel chair? Ha! Good joke! He has to big  ego to ask for it!

but no he is ASR naa
kuch nahin ho sakta nahin iska aur nahin hi MSK

Totally true! Kuch nahi ho sakta!

dammit yaar he should have waited for some help but no
so di okay happy now
but no nani still remains
whats she gonna ask i wonder
and is it what i fear
uff lutiya dono ki doobenewaali hai
well ek ki toh already doob chuki hai aur doosre ki bhi gayi
kya yaar koi nahin lets be positive

Yep, Naani bomb phodegi! Aur Arhi ko alag kar degi!Cry

arrey apke arnavji ne toh thaan li hai sab ko chintit karr ke rahenge
ufff khushi kya karen iss arnie ko toh sirf aap hi sudhaar sakti hain

When I read the line sudhar sakti hain a image popped into my head - Khushi running behind Arnav with a Jhaadu while he is running and shouting Bachaao!LOL

parr uska samay abhi aaya nahin hai
i knew it nani was asking about his marriage
well what else can she want from him
as it is aki is about to be engaged to the one he loves
and anj has her hubby and child too now
only you left and geet
what else would she want but for you to settle
aur aap ko bhi toh kissi se shaadi karni hai
woh baat alag hai ki inki shaadi unse itni asaani se nahin hogi
oh yes khushi its private for sure
and its gonna seal the fate of your love for arnie
but then all thanx to that ASR am afraid

Arnie ne kuraadi uthaaya aur apne hi pair pe maar diya!Cry

nani kya karr rahi hai aap
but i cant fault with what she is saying she wants her chote to be settled too
after the scare they had in relation to nani she is bound to think of her family well being

So true! This was a big jhatka for her!

and only you are who are without anyone
issi liye keh rahe the before proposing her should have told your family
parr ab jab gadbad karr hi diye ho toh DM bachaye aapko
beta this is gonna seal your fate
aap toh gaye re barah ke baav se

The idiot went and dug his own grave. Cant he atleast listen fully to what Naani was saying?

kya baat hai nani that was good of you
but she had to do it too
waise it isnt somethinf hard she is asking
but now your fate is sealed awww and he dont even know

yeh geet ke babaji aur khushi ki DM yeh gaye
arre phele naam toh pooch lete
parr nahin inhe toh harr kaam mein jaldi baaji karni hoti hai
ab bhugatiye

The last three lines were hilarious!LOL

khushi thaare arnavji ne toh beda garat karr diya
yede yeh kay kiya re
kya karein inka ab hum ab toh kuch nahin ho sakta

Sach mein in yedon ka kuch nahi ho sakta!

khushi you were right the next few words changed a lot for you
now arnie shall be her jijaji haiyyo rabba bas yahi dekhna aur sunna baaki reh gaya tha

LOLLOLLOL Laughing on the last line!

woh toh achha hai ki baad mein sab theek hoga parr abhi toh inhone sab satyanash karr diya
dammit it just aint time for lover
ek taraf geet forgot her maan
and now arnie did what he did
khushi ne bhi toh apna faisla le liya hai
ab aayega asli maaza

I always said in the start, no one is villain here. It is the circumstances and the decisions which create problems! Ab toh babaji aur DM hi bachaaye inhe!

woh kyun woh isliye kyunki ab tak dono couples ko jyada papad nain belne padhe the apne pyaar ke liye
parr ab shuru hua asli imtihaan

Mohabbat ki raah kaaton se saji hai!

and there is more to come
oh khushi you dont know but he thinks he is getting married to you
but of course thats not what it seems from your pov right
and the fun begins in real now
let the games begin fate and dentin have already made their move lets see how love copes against them now

Waah! Kya baat kahi! Loved the last two lines!

maan sorry MSK shall be coming back
and he is back once again
well like NT said he has lost the life in him
and is back to being the sadu akdoo etc etc once again
this is just the beginning of it all
just pray that she gets him back again soon
because only she can am afraid
true soni marr chuki hain parr geet ke andar toh soni aaj bhi zinda hai

Yeh baat yeh Maan kyun nahi samajh raha? Ziddi kahin ka!

but of course he wont accept it
now it is all upto to fate how to get love he lost back in his life
because that is gonna happen
yes soni would never forget him but she aint there anymore
oh maan you may have given up on your love but that doesnt your love wont be back to you
this is what we should have accepted from MSK as maan is no more too
she took him away with her
but MSK you will become maan and it wont be soni this time but geet who will do the honours
after all soni was just a shadow of geet
the real geet is the one who you will fall for again perhaps

Exactly! Ab Geet ayegi Maan ko waapis laane MSK se!

but it wont be easy for sure

Yep, it will be really tough!

after all he is MSK naa but then never underestimate the power of love (not common man here peeps)
ahhh so he will live with her memories
but thn again if geet lets you maan sorry MSK

NT and Dev will not allow Maan to live peacefully. They will do many things to get Maan Geet together!

NT dont worry your sapna will come to be
as our kappa dear can never keep lovers apart for too long right

Of course!

fikar not sab theek ho jayega vishwaas rakhiye aap

awww this was so sad seeing maan like this
and yes that was maan there not MSK
he really got to me in the whole update
well why wouldnt  he what with his love not remembering him
and forgetting their love filled memories
but i didnt know that MSK could accept defeat so easily

Maan accepted defeat coz he does not think there is any solution. For him, trying to win Geet back and then failing would be too painful. To avoid pain, he locked his feelings and turned into MSK!

parr that was maan naa
pheli baar kissi ko itni shiddat se chaha
parr usse bhi iss beraham duniya ne cheen liya
okay have lost it there sorry
but had to lighten the mood a bit

Kya filmy dialogue tha! Waah waah!Big smile

oh maan you have lost her and yet you havent
let see how she is returned back to you once again as she will be
kyunki akhir mein woh aapka pyaar hai maan
unhe toh waapis aana hi hoga

Aakhir use aane hai, jara dair lagegi!

awww that was hard to see maan break donw so much

It was hard to write too!

but when the one whom you love the most forgets you what else can you expect but pain
oh maan dil chota naa kariye yeh tasveer ek din zaroor lagegi jahan aap usse lagana chahete the
kyunki agar kismat ne aapke oyaar ko aapse cheena hai woh usse waapis bhi karegi
he sure got it bad
he is now starting to see her and its different this time too
at least back when this used to happen she was still in the same house as him

So true!

but now she is far very far
okay not that far but jab dil ke beech fasle aa jaate hain toh doori toh khalegi hi
oh man all he is remembering is her memories
as at moment he has just those
but fear not those memories wont be the only thing for you
though you shall have to wait for a while maan
saare sapne aur manokamnaye poori sawaha

LOL Really funny!

okay i know being funny here
but thats true too naa kappa

Of course!

oh maan really felt for you there
saare armaan aapke waapis se geet ki poore karengi
ahh the anguish of broken heart
that was the toughest chapter to read so far and there more to come

It was toughest to write too. 
but even that i know and can guarantee shall be done just as well as you did so far
in fact even better am sure

Thanks for the vote of confidence!

so see ya next week for this
and what a performance really you got me there and that was really mind blowing peice of work
cheers for pm

Thank you!Embarrassed

oh and before i forget just have to mention it
now i know why both MSK and ASR wear shades
so they can hide their emotions from others
after all eyes are the mirror of our soul

Never thought of it that way!

waise MSK ki oath aur ASR ki promise dono khariz ho jayengi jald hi
Thanks for the review, Kittu! Made my whole week!
Take care and enjoy the weekend!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 21 September 2013 at 1:21pm
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zindagirocks_21

First of all I have to say I actually cried theoughtout the chapter! I felt the pain maan was going through. And I'm still crying while writing this.

Please dont cry! Bimaar giri toh teri mummy mujhe daantegi! Wink

It was just marvellous, loved the update.

Thank you!EmbarrassedBig smile

Maan has locked himself in his shell and is back to the maan singh khurana he was before soni entered his life. I felt so sad when dev wanted to tell maan to not hide his pain to let it out but couldn't.

Tujhe kya lagta hai? Dev will allow Maan to stay like this? Without his Soni?Big smile

The way maan told the story to geet when she was sleeping was just beautiful but sad as well. Stupid song is making me cry more! Aghh! This is not his soni anymore. He would never fall in love again or even get married. Maan was always soni and soni was maan's. I LOVE THEM BOTH!!!

You know, till now I have written many emotional scenes in DFL, but only two I have felt I have written perfectly, rest I always felt something was missing. And ironically, the two scenes are when Maan is talking to a sleeping Geet. First was before Geet realised her love for Maan, she pretended to sleep and Maan decides to tell her the importance she has in his life. And the second scene is this one. 

I can't believe khushi heard their conversation, now she thinks he agreed to marry someone else and he thinks he agreed to marry khushi when I feel like it's lavanya. It's true what nani said, you might never know when someone dies or what happens in the future.

Aur hogaya Arnav Khushi ke pyaar ka satyanash!Wink

Omg that was just heartbreaking!! The song and how he remember about the times he spent with soni, truly it was just to sad!! That was the scene where I actually started crying, I'm so glad none of my siblings saw me crying. But have to say girl you have so many twist and they always surprise me.

Ro mat! Please ro mat! Isi scene pe royegi toh aage ke sad songs mein kya karegi? Aur bahut sad songs baaki hai mere stock mein use karne ko!Wink Aur jab Arnav devdas banega tab kaise manage karegi? Man Jaage Saari Raat Mera Deewana!Cry

dadi maa is just devastated becuase she always dreamt about maan wedding and even Nt and maan telling them he will never get married is just to sad, whole khurana Family is just devastate because of losing soni and maan as well.

Arre! Dont worry! Dev aur NT haina!Wink

Hopefully everything gets better and maan becomes the maan he was with soni. I love youuu!!!!

This was just perfect, I really don't know how to describe about this part. My brain isn't working right now but just beautiful (:

Thanks for the update and the pm
Continue soon <3

Thanks for the review! And dont worry the story will have a happy ending!Big smile
With lots of hugs and kisses

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 21 September 2013 at 12:21pm
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Posted: 21 September 2013 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 55 C
awesome dear...

Thank you!Embarrassed

but i dont like this unhappy one...
i cant see Maan like this...
its so heart wrenching...
he has got his siblings with him now to stand by him...
and what has he done...
Maan dont do this to urself...
try to win her back...

Yes Maan bhi na! Usko jeetne ke bajaaye usko bhoolne ki soch raha hai! Gadha kahin ka!Big smile

poor Dev...
oh Maan its so heart wrenching...
dont do this to urself and Geet...
i feel like slapping Maan for doing this...

Do I feel a wish coming up?Wink

the Gupta sisters are here to help the Raizadas...
Arnav is the pillar for the Raizadas but Maan is the one on the top...

Loved the last line!

oh ho what is Naniji talking and what is this idiot Arnav assuming...
he will regret it so much later...
ask the name u gadha...

Gadha! Idiot! Kya kya naam diye jaa rahe hain bechaare ko!LOL

oh ho Khushi has heard the convo and is angry and upset...
she should teach him a lesson in sooner time...
bohut ud raha that na ab he will realize soon...


oh no Maan dont do this...
grrr am saying again and again...
hes hurting himself like anything...
cant see him like this...
hes the one who is strong for both the families...
even Arnav looks upon for Maan at many times...
i just hope Maan changes his decision soon...

He won't! He is too stubborn to change his decisions!Cry

Soni kabhi nahi mar sakthi Maan...
she will always be inside u ALIVE...
and that will make u go towards her always...
cont soon dear...
Thanks for the review! Don't worry! Geet ka pyaar itna bhi khokla nahi tha ki itna jaldi sab kuch khatam ho jaaye! Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 21 September 2013 at 11:33am

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