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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 155)

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Posted: 28 March 2014 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

has to be arnav only
he is the one who will give jhtaka
zor ka jhatka dheere se lage
not if its arnav right
Hey Babaji!
How do you do this? How do you guess my surprises so easily? 
No problem! Waise bhi Sunday ko sab ko pata chalna hi tha! And no one reads the reviews and replies much so mera secret is still secret!
And sorry for no reply to DP's reviews! The whole morning I was out and whole afternoon the light was out!Wink

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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by honeygrape

ahh poor geet and poor arnav...why cant khushi trust arnav when he says that he ll make evrythng right..everyone here is suffering from trust issues...nice part
I Know! Khushi is a bit dense! She thinks that she is always right! Big smile
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi10

srry  for commentin soo late...
but cldn't help mahself this tym...
awsum update luv geet and de ASR!!!!
go RAIZADAS!!!!
Thanks for the review!
And I dont mind how late you review! It is the thought that counts!
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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rattyswami

That was an awesome updateDancing
 I simply love this prankster Chote aur uski pagal behen Baby
I was really getting upset with all the angst between the lead pairs...
but now i'm happyBig smile
Geet and ASR are all set to win back there respective loves
and I'm sure that Maan and Khushi don't stand a chance against these Raizada'sWink
But what about La???
Uska bhi kuch karo, nahi toh woh bechaari akeli reh jayegiOuch
Make her jodi with her prince also...
taaki we can have a happily-ever-after for all...
Maybe La can get back together with her ex-bfConfusedsry can't remember the name

LOL I love the way you described Arnav and Geet - Prankster Chote aur uski Pagal Behen baby! Loved it!Big smile
Glad that you are happy now! 
Of course, Maan and Khushi are nothing in front of the quirkiest siblings of Raizadas!LOL
La will have NK bitwa!LOL
Thanks for the review!Big smile

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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

well it was a great update...
well loved Arnav and Geet's interactions a lot...Arnav needed this much needed opening up of his heart to some1...also happy that both have decided to fight for their love...
well Khushi's reason for guarding her heart can be understandable bcoz Arshi's love life could have been much easier if Arnav had acted more smartly...but Maan's reason is not quite convincing bcoz his Soni's separation from him was a play of Fate in which Geet had no power in it...
in his fun please do something in such a way that even Lavanya is not hurt and the family happily accepts Arshi without any probs...by the way who is this mysterious Lover of Lavanya...hope even Lavanya's love life is solved and all three four couples are married soon...
waiting for the fun to start...
update soon...

Thanks for the review!
Glad you liked the update!
Oh! So you did not find Maan's reason understandable? I found the same too! But then human mind does not use logic. It thinks by emotions and Maan thinks that if Fate took away Geet once, what is the guarantee it wont do it again?
And dont worry about La! Arshi will be together without La getting hurt and that is a promise!
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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deelight

On hearing the AB n Motor Mouth convo I was like




Still not able to believe



That was like the most awesome(est) conversation eva!

Haila!

 This Raizadas combo cant wait fa the action to start.. goood that u planned a 10 dazzz leap nahi to mera kya hota..

n the last lines of Arnav (last few lines of the FF) n khushi(after her convo with Dev) were
 "MINDBLOWING"!


cant wait fa d nxt update..
I just can't


My dear imaginator d update was indeed a bigg suprise.. thnxxx a looot!

n ur 5 yr plan waaaoo... i was neva happy noeing India's 5 yr planzzz bt noeing urs m literally jumping

luv ya fa this! tc . . . off to dreamland!




When I saw your review first, I was totally shocked! And I loved it! But only got time to review it now!
Glad you liked the update!
And yes, that convo is one of the best that came out of my mind, not only on terms of quality but also the dialogues stole the show! While I never compare my work with others, I do compare my work amongst them and that is one of the best convo of DFL! I think once DFL ends I will put up a small post where all my favorite and best written scenes will be put up for my own time pass!LOLWink
And so happy that you liked the last lines! Had it planned from the start of the story and was itching for this chapter to come and to write those lines down!LOL
Thanks a lot for the review! Coz when I read it, it really cheered me up a lot! Thank you!Big smile
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Posted: 31 March 2014 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

in all this between arhi and maneet i forgot one thing
more like one person
and that would be la
while i dont want arnie and la to get married
i also dont want la to be heart broken again
well she already is
waise who was her ex
you didnt say right
and please let it not be nk please
he is coming too isnt he
so does that mean la will have someone too
as if she doesnt then khushi no matter how much she wants to be with arnie wont be with him if her sister will be left at the altar so to speak
am i making sense or just rambling
sorry for the ramble then
You should be happy coz La will not be hurt due to Arhi getting together or will not sacrifice Arnav for her sister! She is not that selfless here! But she will be the reason for them being together along with Geet's sharp mind!Wink
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Posted: 26 April 2014 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 65 B
awesome dear...
excellent...

Thank you!Embarrassed
And thanks for the review!

i read first half one and the other the next day...
can believe this Bhai Behen...

LOL

Geet Arnav
lovely...
Geet was confused but the diary helped her...
her Babaji helped her...
her cute antics are so lovely...
her hug and kiss surprised everyone...
so lovely...
shes cute...

Glad you liked this Geet!Big smile

and finally she found her stupid AB...
the convo was so lovely dear...

Thank you! It was my best work! One of the rarest times when the scene came out the way I wanted!

the bro sis were at their excellence here...
though they fight so much Arnav is protective of Geet...
he got angry when he came to know Maan shouted at Geet...
waah...
now Geet is advising Arnav to fight for his love...
good now these 2 will the support system for each other...
Geet has strong will power...
she now knows what all happened in Arnav's life...
the idiot made too many mistakes...
at least these 2 will fight in ever way...
poor Maan and Khushi they are gonna face the 2 devils now...
wonder what what these 2 will do...

Two devils!LOL

Maan
what hes leaving to Mumbai...
grr Maan has made the plan to be postponed...

Geet
well Dev told Geet about Maan's plan...

Khushi
poor Khushi...
shes not able to control herself...

Arnav
finally he has decided to take everything in to his hands to get back his love...

too good dear...
cant wait for these 2 start their devil acts...
cont soon dear...
 
Glad you enjoyed this chapter so much!Big smile

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