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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 139)

Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 April 2014 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 65 B
awesome dear...

Thank you!Embarrassed
And thanks for the review!

i read first half one and the other the next day...
can believe this Bhai Behen...


Geet Arnav
Geet was confused but the diary helped her...
her Babaji helped her...
her cute antics are so lovely...
her hug and kiss surprised everyone...
so lovely...
shes cute...

Glad you liked this Geet!Big smile

and finally she found her stupid AB...
the convo was so lovely dear...

Thank you! It was my best work! One of the rarest times when the scene came out the way I wanted!

the bro sis were at their excellence here...
though they fight so much Arnav is protective of Geet...
he got angry when he came to know Maan shouted at Geet...
now Geet is advising Arnav to fight for his love...
good now these 2 will the support system for each other...
Geet has strong will power...
she now knows what all happened in Arnav's life...
the idiot made too many mistakes...
at least these 2 will fight in ever way...
poor Maan and Khushi they are gonna face the 2 devils now...
wonder what what these 2 will do...

Two devils!LOL

what hes leaving to Mumbai...
grr Maan has made the plan to be postponed...

well Dev told Geet about Maan's plan...

poor Khushi...
shes not able to control herself...

finally he has decided to take everything in to his hands to get back his love...

too good dear...
cant wait for these 2 start their devil acts...
cont soon dear...
Glad you enjoyed this chapter so much!Big smile

Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 May 2014 at 11:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

Well this is the start of it all peeps

The wooing by raizada siblings of their love

Who aren't making it easy for them

Well they shouldn't either man

After all phir mazaa kaisa ji

Now this makes it more fun for sure


Thanks for the review dear!

Hmmm so back to pavilion for arhi

This is where their love story started

As did payash and their love story has been successful

Thank god for that

Don't want all devdas now do we


Sorry just kidding maaf karo bhai if offended you

So let the games begin shall we

And these shall be fun

To make their love remember their love and trust its gonna be hell of a journey right

Right lets gets down to it shall we

Awww it cant be easy being back here

Neither for anj or our arnie

After all it was their childhood home

Where they had fun frolic were with their parents

But also where some bitter memories also remain

Last year it was to find the brides for her chote and chutke

Now her little borthers are getting married

And to the women they chose here too

Though for now its arnav la wedding jus for now

Ahhh yes some memories can never be driven away

Though its best they don't either

Even if they are bad dear

Ahhh arnie knows what his di is going through

After all they are both going through the same aint they

What can I say here

As long as they have one another and their family well all shall be okay wont it

I should hope so right

It cant be easy for them

But to get rid of those horrible memories its time to fill it with new better and happy ones

And it seems sheesh mahal will also see romance betweem arhi maneet and payash

That it will!

Something new for sure

That's the spirit anj am sure that soon it will be filled with happiness

And some day you all can come back again when they all have their kids too

Filled with kids laughter and naughtiness

Yes of course aki this is where you met miss cham cham

And arnie too met his lady love

Can she forget it I doubt that payal would after all this is where their love stories started naa

Awww so she is telling about it to khuaranas

Well this place will be special for them too soon

If geet plays her cards right which she shall

Err... depends on what you are implying!Wink

Your wishes shall come true dear

And there shall be lots of fund and frolic you just wait and watch sweetie

Hell yes she don't know what is to come

And what shall happen

But there shall be happiness soon and don't I just look forward to that

So maan aint here yet huh okay that's nothing to worru about he shall be here soon

Aman what would they do without him

One good thing that he don't interrupt his boss here

With his phone calls warna iski toh


As it is too many interruptions to their love story no more yaar

It's a small castle hmmm makes you think of price and their princess

Which makes for good fairy tale

And of course that is coming true too in a way

Oh ho so families shall be together

This is good for arnie and geet

After all easy access to their love right

Even am wondering the same nani

Where on earth is maan man

And when is he getting here

Of course geet too wants to know about his whereabouts

Bless she sure was all ears to this conversation weren't she

Hmmm hope he cometh soon man

We all are waiting for her to start on making him believe his love again

Maan bro ki chinta ka kaam jald hi kewal geet ka hoga

They can all chillax and let her do the worrying and scolding


But there is still time to that

Arrey waah kya good news di hai dev aap ne

Dil khush karr diya hamara bhi aur geet ka bhi kyun hai naa geet

Ahhh of course she is waiting for him and eagerly

And we are waiting for you to start wooing him

And make him fall in love and this time trust that love too

Awww all are chiiling out huh

Hmmm so all in all its relaxed time and taking it easy huh

Bless that's cute for sure

Loved this chilled out atmosphere

Dev what are you doing I wonder

Why did he want his bahbhi to sit next to him I wonder

Well does it matter am sure there must be a reason right

What are these two upto I wonder

Aur waise bhi she as in geet is there family too

And soon she will be it officially too

If maan lets her which he shall

Aki and arnie here too you guys are on about work ufff


Poor payal and khushi well same will be the case for geet too

What has that gotta do with your bhabhi

Unless he wants her to sort his clothes out and put them in

Like a wife would do

Or did I get that wrong hope not

Yippee I was right woohoo

Like she once used to

Remember she don't know what soni used to do

Memory loss mate

Aao ki bhi memory loss ho gayi hai kya

Chalo he told her that's something for sure

So now she shall be doing what soni used to

Awww isn't that cute

Remember how they both used to chose others clothes and all

That was real cute

And gave insight into their future domestic life together

Glad you liked those scenes!

I loved those days and now there shall be return of those days haiyye

Geet ko toh ishaara hi kafi hai

So now let get down and do what soni used to

So he knows that his soni now geet still cares

Oh ho dev and NT sure make cute couple

How they cover for one another

I know!

Hopefully we will see the same for maneet as well

And our arhi too and the other couples perhaps

Maan bhi naa bade confused soul the

She did it for duty I think not

That was her way of showing she cared right

Soni was so cute and this geet who was soni even more cute

No really man

Maan wont know what hit him soon

So be ready to welcome back your soni mate

She is making sure you have your soni back

Ahhh they are getting ready to shift too

Good arnie will see his lady love soon too

That's nice all are gonna assemble in sheesh mahal

Who is at the door

Dare I think its arnie

With him you never know right


So all the functions will be at sheesh mahal

Well that's good naa

All shall be together

Making it easier for some of them right

By that I mean geet and arnie of course

But that much harder for maan and khushi to avoid them

That is why I brought all of them under one roof or else how would ASR woo Khushi and Geet win back Maan?Wink

They were right to conduct them all in same place

Less time consuming for sure

But am thinking more for geet and arnie there

Than others for now at least

Arrey shaadi toh hone dein

Pata nahin kaun kiski dulhan banegi


Well we all know there shall be change in dulhans

La wont be arnie but khushi

La might be someone else's dulhan right

Bidaai mein toh aath din hain

Aur inn aath dinon mein bahut kuch hone waala hai

Aur job hi hone waala hai bada mazaa ayega uss mein

Haiyye cant wait for the fun to begin

Which it has with this chapter naa

Hain koi nahin tha bahar

How is that possible I wonder

Well it is very much possible when certain someone is being naughty

It was arnie for sure

Hello who else but him would get her the bouquet of red roses he is the only one who knows

Okay not only one but only when who else could send them to her

Ahh yes the rose garden trip that was cute

Well sorry to say it was him

And after reading the card yo can be certain it was him only dear

He has started his wooing dear

It cant be for la as you have those initials

With that of future initials as well

He is so naughty aint he

If someone saw that card and flowers what will she say

Well khushi they are called red roses your fav

Sorry just had to do that dear


Oh sweetie what else would he do

Hey she took them that's something right

Even if it made her cry

Yeah right arnie and a kid well sometimes he is

Oh boy now she is mad at him

And why not he is getting married to her sister

Even then he is sending flowers with message like that

Yeh toh gaye

Naaa she wotn say anything that's for sure

She sure is mad at him

But then that's nothing new either

So now to arnie is it

He knows her so well that's nice

Well be prepared for angry khushi

What else would she be if not mad

Has someone else seen the roses and message she was doomed you know

So many questions she would have to answer mate

Aur waise bhi once she comes he cant relax either can he

Then he has to be on his toes to woo her

But will he get the rest I wonder

Nope don't seem like it

And why all thanx to geet man good

Don't know why he is so surprised

This is geet we are talking about she was bound to do something like this eat his head we hope

Good practice naa for future when khushi does the same with her bak bak


Well good she got hold of him

The man don't even have a freaking plan it seems

What plan he says

If this keeps up then forget khushi

Aapke bhai naa ajeeb hain

No wonder he fell for khushi she can be ajeeb too

What do you mean tumhe kyun bataun

Hawww ek toh geet ne inko encourahe kiys ki yeh khushi ka mann jeete

And now he says main kyun bataun tumhe

Hadh hai yaar

Isse naa short term memory loss hai kya

How will she help you if she don't know the plan

Of course he has no plan

No wonder he don't wanna tell her

Oh man what to do with him right

Hawww itna gussa kyun arnie

She is only trying to help ya

She aint gonna leave him now will she

Ab toh yeh inko inhe plan de karr hi rahegi hai naa

And that shall be fun

Poor arnie he wont know what hit him

Well he will know but wont be able to do anything about it

Did she really say what I think she said

Oh yes she did

Kidnap khushi and then marry in mandir

Waah kya plan hain

Pagal hai kya yeh


It will be alright if maneet do that

But if arhi do that well then there will be trouble for sure

This time I agree with arnie pagal ho gayi hain kya

Agar galti se bhi kissi ne sunn liya toh yeh toh gaye

Aise idea isse aate kaise hain yaar

Bade khatarnak idea hain inki tarah


Hmm she suggested the same idea khushi gave in serial for payash

Ab toh mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai geet aur khushi ki khoob jamegi when arhia dn maneet marry and the boys keave the girls together


They already gelled pretty well and now even more

Sorry arnie he will turn mad he already has in her love

And as if you wont be stuck with same situation

After all these two are pretty similar dude

Arnie kya karr rahe hain

Don't give her more options to get such ridiculous ideas please

But no he had to be freaking sarcastic ther didn't he

And she did come up with more filmy solution

Why are you freaking encouraging her mate

Sach mein don't you know this girl by now that she would have such ideas for sure

Well he is right to be scared man

Aise ideas jo de rahi hain

Agar gir gaye toh kuch khas nahin

Zayada se zayada aap swarg ko sidhar jayenge

Aur kam se kam aap ki haddi pasli toot jayegi


Of course yeh aap ko marwa ke rehengi

Awww she just cant stop can she

Wonder how bad his headache shall be

And this is why he calls her motor mouth don't he


Awww he finally lost it at her

But it was cute scene to see

I mean arnie and geet bond sure was funny

Shame he don't think the same

Oh bless she drove him away

And then she says what she did

That was so funny

Thanx to one of your readers wish we got to see ummm sorry read such hilarious scene for sure

Now he knows better than to ask for her help

Or next time he will tell her of his plan

This way he will have a plan ready

Kya sarr khaya naa geet ne arnav babu ka hehehehe

And still she don't let go of him

She sure is one of a kind

Big smile

Poor arnie he will not be rid of her

Not till she goes and lives with maan of course

Must give it to her once she decides to irritate someone she does it pretty well


Inke toh peeche hi padh gayi ji

And then she threatens him as well

That she will tell who he really loves

And knowing her she will probably do the same too

Arnav if I were you I would come out of your room

Gosh this geet is too much

But loved this little scene between this set of siblings

Waah dhamki bhi di toh kya

Beta arnav ab inke haathon aap ki dukti nabz aa gayi hai

She wouldn't would she arnav

Really I thought you knew her better than that mate

She was so gonna get him into trouble

Haila she was gonna call anj man

And if that happened well then he shall be doomed I tell ya doomed

This girl is good ion threatening peeps aint she


Ahhh all that just to get him to spill the beans

Wow kitne papad belne padhte hain inke wajah se uff

So whats the plan

We also wanna know naa

Simple plan is it but what

Awww that sure is cute plan

Hope it does work and hope it don't back fire either

No geet that wont work

I know that's the easiest way to go about this

But she as in khushi doesn't want that does she

Because then this way la wedding shall stop

Then who will marry her

She wont risk that for sure

After all had she wanted to do that she would have done that ages ago

She wont go for her happiness at cost of her sister's

And that arnav knows now

Plus like arnav said all would be okay

But then it wouldn't be because they wanted to

But because family asked them to

That's not gonna make maan and khushi trust their love again

Then it would be just duty for them even though they love their respective partners

You understand my characters so easily!Clap

He is right though

If they force their love on them its gonna make things worse

Glad they had that talk

Pyaar zabardasti se karenge toh forget them

It would be kinder to let them go

Awww he finally got it didn't he what love is

Well what true love is goodie

Yup! Finally!

Whats got dadi worried

As if we don't know

It has to be situation with maan only

Guys I guess its time to let her in too

Tell her about geet being in love again

And that she isn't gonna let go of her love now

Man I so feel for dadi

What with maan not giving gete a chance or himself

We all know why she would be this sad

Only one reason and person maan of course

Man seeing dadi like this is harder than seeing maan like this

She has seen so much and now on top of all that she has to see maan like this

Cant be easy for her right

Well NT might not be able to get maan back

But someone else can

And that's his soni only and she is gonna get him back

Awww dadi aapne toh hamare muh ki baat cheen li

Even we want the same for maan

And of course for geet as well

And am sure that will happen

Dadi your maan will be back and we will be rid of MSK

So try not to stress out too much please

Yup good they shall tell her now

Well its better this way

Seeing her like this best to tell her

Or she will take more tension

Once she knows that things shall be okay with maan well then she need not worry about him

And so she knows the latest developments

No need to tell her all of it

Or she might just worry more

But she knows enough for now

That geet isn't gonna let go of her love who happens to be maan

And that soon he shall be back to being maan again who used to smile

So the fact of matter is that geet loves maan again but maan isn't accepting the same

But the difference now is that geet is determined to win him back

And no matter what happens she shall win him for sure

Chahe kuch bhi ho jaye ab toh yeh maan ko phir se deewana karr ke hi rahengi

Oh boy he is in more trouble aint he

Dadi is mad at him for rejecting maan

Bechare bahut hi kismet ke maare hain

She was happy that geet loves her grandson but of course with maan not accepting it well she isn't happy anymore

Phew good he wasn't there though

Warna maan kit oh khair nahin thi


Good she understood why maan was being like this

Aww so she meets once again her pota bahu

And she shall be her pota bahu for sure

Lagta hai maan toh gaye

He has strong opponents now

All are in team geet mate so you have no where to run

Yup she is her pota bahu man

So glad that she still will be maan dulhan

Hmmm well this talk was gonna happen

Needs to be done right

Am sure you will do and give dadi what she wants

We all know maan is good though dusht at times

Parr iss barein mein who kuch nahin karr sakte

Okay just kidding

Yes he shall be good hubby no doubts about that

But isn't being a father bit of a stretch right

As in I know he shall be good father but still time

Okay have gotta stop butting in like that

Oh come on dadi she was bound to get shy when talking about their future children

But lets get to serious matters

That's what he is doing in a way

Yup he has seen lots of tragedy losing his mother at such young age and all

Itne se bache parr itni badi zimmedari

Which he did manage to fulfil very well for sure

He has looked after his younger siblings pretty well

Ahhh so his dad wasn't able to cope with his wife death

Dadi had to take care of KC

So it was maan who took care of his siblings

And to do that he never thought of himself

So guess its time for him to live his life too

Good that she came into his life

He had started living again but even then that was snatched from him no fair

But now she is back to him and he will have his life again just for himself

Wow it seems he has been looking after everyone and thinking of their dreams and wishes that he really did forget himself

Now that cant be easy right

And yet he did it so well for sure

Wow he did so much in such small age man

And he lost his dad in between all this

Now we know even more why he seems to have given up

As since he has been small he has only lost and now he fears that with geet too he will lose her again

Cant say I blame him for being this way

Glad you understand Maan's point of view!

But yes geet will have to make him live again for sure

I know he lost his innocence as it too was his time to chill out with friends and not be serious but guess that wasn't meant to be

Ahhh seems maan never had the childhood others did including arnie

So this means that she has to make him smile laugh and love again

As he never had that and he bloody well deserves it man

Man maan what did you do

She is right he took over everything never thought of himself

And when he did and got love for first time even that was nstahced from him

No fair naa shee yaar

Sab samajh gaye ji

So now its time to make him losen up and bring happiness and colour in his life no matter what

Wait sam kahan se aayi

No way would he be married and would fall in love with ya

Dadi must you give us and geet such jhatkes please

Acha so he was gonna marry sam huh interesting

Check out Chapter 3 of DFL for more details on Sam! It is mentioned there!

We get to know more about maan

She needs to know this to plan accordingly right

Well inhe toh darr lagega hi naa after all inke maan ki baat hai

All can understand your feelings including the one you love

Just that he don't wanna make himself vulnerable again dear

Hawww bechare maan ko mandap pe chod gayi

Come on man that is bad

Why didn't she just tell him before

Am sure he would have understood

And it would have saved him lot of grief too

Oh dear sam ki wahaj se dadi ko heart attack bhi aaya

Arrey yaar this story is getting more grimmer

Ahhh this explains why he doesn't wanna be back with her

No matter how much he loves her

But for him his family comes first

And with geet forgetting him it also affected his family

So he is doing all this more for family and less for himself

No he can never hate you

As hating you would mean hating herself

Plus you didn't really do this on purpose did you

How were you to know that this would happen

That you would forget him

Some things aren't in your control geet

Yup dadi is right he cant hate you or be angry at you not really

Though he may pretend to be angry he isn't really

Just is afraid what if you forget him again

He wont be able to gather himself again if that happens right

Jab dard inhone diya hai toh uska marham bhi yehi hongi

He may be afraid to let his heart break again but we know that this wont happen now

Come on yaar he had enough of grief time for some happiness back in his life

Don't be silly geet

She wants the opposite to happen

She want you back in his life as that was when her maan was happy

And how can she not want that

Yaar yeh geet ne sach mein NT or dev ko mini attack de diya tha when she said that she whouldnt come in his life


He started living due to you why will she want you to stay away from him

I know right as if dadi would want her gone

Not when geet is her only hope for her grandson

Arrey waah dadi that sure was right

She is right though

The fact geet fell in love with him again after her memory loss only goes to show that she is the only one for him

And no matter what she will be his love only

I agree again with dadi

Babaji ne hi inhe phir se milaya hai

Aur ab inka dil nahin tootega

But of course to explain this to him wont be easy

After all he is one stubborn dude


Hmmm I know her family will want the two of them together

This way the relations between the families will strengthen naa

Haan maan inki ek naa sunn rahe

Parr inko toh unhe manana hi hai chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

Yeah geet you have to make him realise that this time all will be okay

No she will never leave his hand

And am sure she wont give up either

As the alternative is too horrible to contemplate

Yes the road ahead is hard and lots of disappointment she has to face

But like dadi said only she can be the future mrs MSK

And with dadi asking for this it has to happen

Yipeee and now geet promised her to be hi wife and she shall win just have to yaar

Arnav here too and with such good news

Her maan is here man

Kya baat hai arnav kya naam diya inke mission ko aap ne bhai

Well he has all the rights to know about this

After all geet inki choti behen jo hain

Nahin yahin rahiye aur mat miliye

Sorry had to be sarcastic there

But so cute when she was asking for permission naa

Yup maan's life shall be set and why not right

Hell yes that one year was just a bad phase

Now time for happiness to make its come back

And that's what is gonna happen

Aww that was such informative chapter

We gotta know why maan was being this way more than we did before

Time for love to blossom again yipeee

Cheers for pm

Glad you liked the chapter so much! Thanks for such an awesome review!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 05 May 2014 at 1:06pm

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