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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 137)

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Posted: 20 March 2014 at 4:24am | IP Logged
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Hello folks,
    I will keep my bak bak short today coz feeling sleepy. Had to do jhaadu work at home, so tired right now. Upar se writing was not coming to me today so I was mostly lurking around here trying to get myself to write! So no compilation today!

    Just now completed last scene of next DFL chapter! So be happy coz tomorrow night you will have both your updates!Big smile But PMs will be sent late so bookmark the thread if you want to read earlier! Thats all for today folks,

Thanks and take care,
Kalpana

P.S Did you do your homework?LOL


Yep completed the homework LOL LOL LOL
OMG! Did you actually read those four chapters?Shocked


Yes Ma'am. LOL

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Posted: 20 March 2014 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fffan123

Originally posted by Kalpana_Writer

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Originally posted by Kalpana_Writer

Hello folks,
    I will keep my bak bak short today coz feeling sleepy. Had to do jhaadu work at home, so tired right now. Upar se writing was not coming to me today so I was mostly lurking around here trying to get myself to write! So no compilation today!

    Just now completed last scene of next DFL chapter! So be happy coz tomorrow night you will have both your updates!Big smile But PMs will be sent late so bookmark the thread if you want to read earlier! Thats all for today folks,

Thanks and take care,
Kalpana

P.S Did you do your homework?LOL


Yep completed the homework LOL LOL LOL
OMG! Did you actually read those four chapters?Shocked


Yes Ma'am. LOL
Very good bachcha! Now you will understand the next chapter very well!LOL Jokes apart, you wont seem confused when Maan or Arhi think about the past!Big smile


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CHAPTER 67. NK ENTERS AND CREATES CHAOS!

 

 

 

Day 2 at Sheeshmahal

Saturday

 

     "Samajhte kya hain apne aapko? Rakshas kahin ke! Aisa koi bartaav karta hai kya? Sataane ki bhi had hoti hai! Yeh theek nahi hai Devi Maiyya! Rakshas jo kar rahe hain yeh sahi nahi hai!", Khushi grumbled as she made Jalebis in anger. The whole night she could not sleep due to Arnav's thoughts and antics haunting her mind and hence the first thing she did next day morning was hunting for Sheeshmahal's kitchen and making Jalebis. As it was barely 5 in the morning, none of the servants were in the kitchen and hence, Khushi was able to work on her Jalebis without disturbance.

 

    "Oh! So I am back to being Rakshas! Interesting!", Arnav mumbled as he stood at the threshold of the kitchen leaning on the doorframe with his arms folded against his chest and a tender expression on his face as he stared at his Afreen. He had woken up due to a phone call from his foreign client and could not go back to sleep. So he came to the kitchen to get some tea only to find his Afreen complain to her Devi Maiyya about what kind of Rakshas he was! He stared at for a while and then mumbled, "Rakshas kehti ho na mujhe! Ab main tumhein kaise sataata hoon dekh lo!"

 

    "Khushi continued to make Jalebis and eat them as she complained to Devi Maiyya about Arnav when suddenly she heard someone speak from behind her, "Afreen Sweetheart? Get me some tea!" Khushi absentmindedly replied, "Ji! Abhi Laayi!" She wiped her hands against the kitchen cloth and turned towards the Fridge nearby to get the milk out when she froze as she realized what exactly had happened. She turned around and looked at Arnav in shock. And what did Arnav do? He just smirked at her and waved Hi to her. Khushi continued to look at him stupefied. Arnav unfolded his hands and stood straight. He took few steps ahead, "Maine tumhein Afreen bulaaya, tumhein usse koi problem nahi hua!" He took few more steps, "Maine tumhein sweetheart kahaa, iska bhi koi reaction nahi diya!" He came close to her and mumbled, "Chai laane ko kahaa toh aise reply diya jaise ek ladki apne pati ko deti hai! Ab main ise kya samjhun Afreen? Kehti ho ki raaste alag hai par dil se tum bhi mujhe apna sab kuch samajhti ho! Ab bataao yeh sab jaanne ke baad main kaise kisi aur se shaadi kar loon?" Khushi looked at him speechless at his words.

 

 

     Arnav moved closer to Khushi and they were so close that they could feel each other's breath on their faces. Arnav slowly trailed his fingers from her hand to her shoulder and she felt her breath hitch. His hands reached her neck and then her cheek. His thumb trailed to her lips and Khushi closed her eyes tightly. Arnav continued to mumble, "Kyun Khushi? Kyun mujhse door jaa rahi ho jab main tumhaari manzil hoon? Chod do yeh zidd! Ban jaao meri! Apna lo mujhe! Yeh Rakshas ko apni Afreen chaahiye! Is Raanjhe ko apni Heer Chaahiye! Haan kardo Khushi aur mujhe iss jhoote bandhan se, is jhoote rishte, Lavanya ke saath shaadi se, aazaad kardo!" Khushi was about to say Yes' when the word Lavanya' brought her out of her dreamland and sent her crashing down into the reality; the reality where if Arnav broke his engagement to Lavanya, Lavanya would be left alone in this world as people refused to get their son married to a girl with broken engagement. Her eyes opened in shock and she pushed Arnav away. Arnav, who was lost in Khushi, was shocked to be pushed so violently. He looked at Khushi in confusion. Khushi glared at him, "Door! Door rahiye humse! Aap humaare Jijaji hain aur humpe meherbaani hogi agar yeh baat aap yaad rakh sakein!" Arnav's confusion gave way to his anger as Khushi's word registered in his brain. He marched towards her and grabbed her arms tightly. He hissed through his teeth, "Kya kahaa tumne? Door rahun? Abhi thodi der pehle toh tum aur hi kuch chaahti thi!" "Chodiye humein!", Khushi said with fire in her eyes. Arnav gave her an angry smirk, "Never!" "Chodiye!", Khushi almost shouted. Arnav pulled her close and glared at her, "Kyun Chodun? Mujhe tum meri baahon mein achchi lagti ho." Both froze as the words sent them into the past where Arnav had said the same words to Khushi when they first met. Arnav's grip on Khushi's arms loosened and but both did not move. Arnav softly sighed as all his anger drained out. "Afreen!", he whispered feeling sad that she was still determined to fight against him and his love. His whisper was enough to bring Khushi back to reality. She moved away from Arnav and looked away.

 

 

      Khushi's face showed distress while Arnav's face showed love and longing for her. She mumbled softly, "Hum aapke Afreen nahi hai! Hum Khushi hain!" Arnav shook his head as he stared at her seriously, "Naah! You are my Afreen!"  Khushi looked at him and glared, "Khushi!" Arnav smirked, "Afreen!" Khushi looked at him in disgust, "Khushi!" Arnav shrugged and looked at her innocently, "Afreen!" Khushi looked away wanting to bash Arnav's head with something, "Khushi!" Arnav looked as if he was contemplating her words and then shook his head, "Afreen!" Khushi could not handle it anymore, "Khushi, Khushi, KHUSHI!" She nearly screamed her name the last time. Arnav realized how close Khushi was to breakdown and relented, "Fine! Khushi!" Khushi took a deep breath at Arnav's words. She turned to walk out of the room when Arnav piped up, "But shaadi ke baad I will call you Afreen only, Haan?" Khushi turned around and replied, "Aisa kabhi nahi hoga! Humaari shaadi aapse nahi hogi! Hum yeh kabhi hone hi nahi denge!" Khushi turned around and stomped away. Arnav just smirked, "Keep on thinking that Afreen! Maybe one day you might actually believe it! But do remember, sach toh yahi hai! Tum meri thi, meri ho aur meri rahogi!" He walked away dreaming about his Afreen.

 

 

     An hour later, G barged into the kitchen. Now why was she awake at such an early hour? That's because she could not sleep the whole night due to excitement. Now why was she excited? Arre! Her Maan was in the same building she was! Now how can she sleep when her mind kept on reminding her that if she wanted to she can sneak into Maan's room anytime she wanted? Of course, she did not do that! What kind of girl do you take her to be? Our Geet is very good girl. She won't do such things! But that did not stop her from thinking about sneaking into her Maan's room! And hence, Geet was up early and into the kitchen to eat something. She looked around and her eyes lit up when she noticed Jalebis on one counter. "Jalebi?", she exclaimed in delight and wandered over to the counter. She pulled out one and bit into it. "Mmm... Delicious! Kitna achcha bana hai! Par kisne banaaya?" She thought for a while and then rolled her eyes, "Aur kaun bana sakta hai? Meri KB ne banaaya hoga! Wahi toh Jalebi expert hai! Wow! Kitne tasty hain! Ek baar KB aur AB ki shaadi hone do phir roz banvaaungi Jalebiyaan unse!" She took another bite and moaned as the Jalebi dissolved into her mouth. Then she frowned as she remembered that according to AB, Khushi made Jalebis only when she was worried, confused, angry or feeling any other emotion extremely. Par aisa kya hua jo KB ne yeh aaj banaaya? She wondered and then her eyes widened. Arre! Kal KB aur AB ko akela choda tha na maine? Bas yeh uska asar hoga! She giggled and gobbled another Jalebi! After having atleast 2 more, she looked around. Hey Babaji! Jalebi se kaise pet bharega? Mujhe aur kuch chaahiye! Par kya? She looked around for inspiration when it struck her. Parathe! After all, GM ko bhi toh parathe pasand hain. She grinned happily and started getting the ingredients ready for it.

 

 

      In the next one hour, Geet had made enough parathas to feed the whole house. After having her fill, she placed the parathas in airtight containers and started keeping the ingredients back into their places. As she entered the fridge to place the butter, she heard someone enter the kitchen.

 

   

    Maan entered the kitchen after having his jog and shower. He had locked his room door tightly since yesterday so that Geet could not go in, to choose his clothes. Geet had already tried entering late night, wanting to choose his night clothes but soon she got the message and decided to cancel any plans regarding choosing his clothes. As Maan entered the kitchen, he heard someone rummaging into the fridge. Not knowing who it was, he sat on a stool nearby and leaned on the counter placed right in the middle of the room. Surrounding him, the kitchen had counters fixed to the walls made out of marble. The counter in the middle had stools surrounding it. He spoke up, "Kya khaane ko kuch hai yahaan? Bahut bhook lagi hai!"

 

 

     Geet's eyes widened as she realized who had arrived. She grinned eagerly and moved away from the fridge. Maan's eyes widened as Geet turned around and chirped, "Haan haina! Paratha hai! Maine abhi abhi banaaya! Abhi aapko paros deti hoon!" She turned around happily to the counter attached to the wall where she had made parathas in the morning so that she could serve it to him, feeling happy that she was getting to serve her handmade parathas to him. But Maan did not let her be happy too much, "No thanks! Main yeh apple khaa loonga!" He picked up an apple place in a bowl on the middle counter while Geet turned and looked at him sorrowfully. Aap aisa kyun karte ho Maan? She turned back to the kitchen counter and started putting the parathas back into the container.

 

 

     Geet was in the process of putting the parathas into the container when she heard Maan shout, "Ouch!" She turned in shock only to see that Maan had cut his finger while trying to cut the apple. Geet ran towards him in worry. She grabbed his hand and pulled it closer to look at it, ""Hey Babaji! Jo kaam karna aata nahi hai woh kaam aap karte hi kyun ho!" Maan looked at Geet in surprise as Geet dragged him to the sink and washed his cut while mumbling about how he did not know how to take care of himself. Maan just stared at her. His mind went back a year and he remembered the day he had cut himself while dicing onions and Soni had worried for him the same way. He continued to stare at Geet as Geet pulled out a medicine box and dressed his cut. Geet looked up after wrapping the bandage and stilled as Maan stared at her with love in his eyes. She stared into his eyes and he slowly raised his other hand and caressed her cheeks. Geet's face turned red at his touch but she did not look away. He pushed back a strand of hair which was lingering on her face and she shyly looked down. His hand reached her chin and he slowly lifted it so that her eyes could meet his. Geet shyly mumbled, "Maan!". And Maan was brought out of his dreamland. He pulled his hand away as he realized what he was doing. He looked away trying to ignore his rising feelings. Geet continued to look at him with a shy smile on her face. "Maan", she again whispered with hope in her heart but her hopes were all dashed away as Maan moved 10 paces back and glared at her, "Door ho jaao! Door ho jaao meri mujhse! Mujhe tumhaare paas nahi rehna!" Geet's jaw dropped open as she stared at Maan speechless. She took a deep breath and huffed, "Fine! Chali jaati hoon!" She turned and walked away while mumbling, "Samajhte kya hain apne aapko. Ek toh davaai lagaayi maine aur yeh hain ki mujhe hi daant rahe hain. Dekh loongi main inhe. Dekh loongi..."

 

 

   Maan could hear Geet's mumblings as she stalked away. After few minutes, when Maan was sure that Geet was not coming back, Maan walked towards the container containing the parathas. He pulled out the parathas and placed few parathas on a plate. As soon as he placed the first morsel in his mouth his eyes closed and he nearly moaned. He opened his eyes and stared at the parathas. Wahi swaad! Wahi Soni waala swaad! He smiled sadly as he remembered how she had made him eat parathas instead of English breakfast a year back. "Kitne dino baad main yeh kha raha hoon!", Maan mumbled as he continued to relish the parathas, "Kaash yeh Geet ne nahi Soni ne banaaye hote! Meri uss Soni ne jisse maine pyaar kiya, jisne mujhse pyaar kiya tha, aur jisne mujhse waada kiya tha ki woh kabhi mujhe chodke nahi jaayegi! Kyun gayi mujhse door tum Soni? Kyun?" He took the plate and sat on the stool missing his Soni.

 

 

    Geet smiled as tears fell through her eyes. After storming out of the kitchen, she had come back to see what Maan would do next. And seeing him eat her parathas had made her very happy. But then his words made her cry, "Main yahin hoon, Maan! Bas aapko yeh samajhne ki der hai! Aapko bhool gayi toh kya hua phir bhi aayi hoon na waapis aapke paas! Kheech laaya na aapka pyaar mujhe! Main agar un yaadon ko bhool gayi toh kya? Yaadein toh nayi bhi ban sakti haina Maan? Bas Maan bas! Ab toh main phir se aapki zindagi mein shaamil hokar rahungi! Kyunki jab babaji hi chaahte hain ki hum ek ho toh aap kaun hote hain mujhe rokne waale!" She wiped her tears and walked away thinking of another plan to woo Maan.

 

 

      It was 10 in the morning and everyone except Lavanya and Geet gathered in the hall after their breakfast to talk and chatter about the wedding preparations. Surrounding them, servants were running around putting up newly arrived curtains and making beds with newly arrived bed sheets and pillow covers from the store and cleaning various rooms as from next day guests from abroad and other cities were to start coming. Infact, today itself a guest was supposed to arrive.

 

 

     Fluttering amongst the servants was Geet who was instructing the servants on how to decorate a special room for the arriving guest. Naani looked at Khushi, "Khushi bitiya! Lavanya bitiya kahaan hai? Dikhai ke nai padi?" As Naani voiced the question, everyone realized the same thing and looked around. Arre! Naani was right! Lavanya was not here. Everyone looked at Khushi curiously. Khushi smiled at them, "Di so rahi thi, abhi uthi hain! Woh kal ek graahak ke yahaan mithaai dene gayi thi toh raaste mein rickshaw kharaab hui aur isliye unhein paidal jaana pada! Toh kal se bahut thaki hain! Isliye jyaada so gayi!" Everyone nodded at her reply when suddenly Geet came into the hall hollering after a curtain holding servant, "ARRE! WOH RANG WAALE PARDE NAHI! GM KO WOH RANG PASAND NAHI!" The servant nodded and went to store room to choose another curtain. Anjali amusedly looked at her baby sister, "Baby! Shaant ho jaao!" Geet huffed and pouted as she stopped nearby Anjali, "Kaise shaant ho jaaun AD? Dekhona! Curtains ab tak ready nahi hai! Woh aata hi hoga na!" She huffed and stormed away as Naani and Daadi looked at her amusedly. Paayal, who was sitting beside Aakash, leaned sideways and whispered, "Yeh aapki behen ko hua kya hai?" Aakash shook his head amusedly and whispered back, "Tum khud apni nanad se pooch lo!" Someone cleared their throat and the couple turned to look at Arjun who pointedly stared at them. They blushed and moved away and Arjun smirked. He was enjoying his revenge!

 

 

    Khushi confusedly looked at Geet as Geet again came into the scene shouting for another servant, "GM KE KAMRE MEIN FLOWER VASE KYUN NAHI HAI? Jaldi ek flower vase ka intezaam kijiye!" Another servant nodded and ran off. Khushi worriedly looked at Geet and then turned to look at Anjali, "Anjaliji! Yeh Geetji ko hua kya hai?" Anjali huffed, "Kuch hua nahi hai! Koi aa raha hai! Aisa koi jise Baby ne paanch saal se dekha nahi! Bas isliye yeh excited aur nervous hai aur nervousness mein sab pe chilla rahi hai!" Paayal spoke up, "Par aisa kaun aa raha hai?" Maami butted in, "Hello Hi Bye Bye! Koi aisan waisan naahi! Koi ekdum ispesal (Special) aavat hai!" By now the Guptas and Khuranas were fully confused and curious about the person arriving.

 

 

    Anjali took pity on them and explained, "Humaari Maamiji ki jiji ke ladke, NK, aa rahe hain!" Madhumati Bua burst out, "Haayre Nandkisore!" and whole Raizada clan burst out laughing. Buaji looked at them confused and Aakash explained, "Buaji! Mere bhai ka poora naam Nandkishore hai!" Rest of them got the joke and everyone chuckled and laughed at the joke. Anjali continued to speak, "Woh Australia main pale bade hain aur wahin rehte hain! Haan! Jab chote the toh teen baar chuttiyon mein Maamiji ki Jiji ke saath India aaye the par ab kuch paanch che saal hogaye use dekhe hue! Humaari shaadi mein bhi nahi aa paaye kyunki uske exams chal rahe the! Woh yahaan Chote aur Chutke ki shaadi ke liye aa rahe hain! Aur shaadi ke ek hafte baad chale jaayenge!" Arnav interrupted with, "Thank God! I don't think I can handle him more than that!" Anjali narrowed her eyes at him and Arnav looked away.

 

 

    Anjali continued speaking, "Woh umar mein Geet se do saal bade hain isliye uski aur Baby ki badi banti thi! Teen hi baar woh India aaye the, jab dono bachche the! Phir bhi unki itni gehri dosti hui, jo aaj bhi nahi tooti hai! Dono summer vacations mein yahaan aate the na! Isliye bahut time ek doosre ke saath spend kiya hai!" Maan looked at Anjali in surprise. He did not NK was this close to Geet! Maan did not meet him but had heard about him in his school days from Anjali. When she spoke about Aakash and Baby, she never forgot to mention NK. Anjali spoke up, "Infact, Baby ke ghar mein computer nahi tha toh woh school ke computer se NK ko emails bhejti thi aur College join karne ke baad toh dono ghanto webcam pe gappe ladaate the!"  Maami piped up, "Hello Hi Bye Bye! Achcha hua Geet bitiya vacations mein lost hui gayi! Kyunki vacation ma Bitiya Bitwa se baat naahi karti na! Agar Caalej days ma memory lost hota toh unko online na dekhkar humra Bitwa toh do din ma iyyaan dhamak padta!" Naaniji and Anjali nodded somberly while Buaji and Amma smiled at the bond between NK and Geet. Even Daadi smiled at Maami's words. Only Maan seemed unhappy as he frowned trying to ignore the twinge in the heart at the thought of NK and Geet being so close.

 

 

   Suddenly, Geet arrived into the hall holding a plate filled of smoking hot parathas in her hand. She placed the plate on the coffee table which was in the middle of the hall. A servant followed her with Jalebis in a plate and placed it on the table too. Everyone looked at the Parathas and Jalebis eagerly. Even though all had eaten breakfast just now, everyone felt their mouth watering at the dishes in front of them. Seeing the expression on their faces, Geet frowned, "Yeh sab aapke liye nahi hai!" Everyone looked at her as if she had announced them some kind of punishment. Geet huffed, "Yeh mere GM ke liye hai! Aur koi nahi khaayega ise!" "Mere?", Anjali looked at her mischievously and Geet rolled her eyes. Maan looked at her miffed. Mere? Daadima frowned, "Lekin Beta, Parathe aapne banaaye hai. Par Jalebiyaan kisne banaaye?" Madhumati Bua huffed, "Aur kaun hoga? Ee humri Sanka Devi!" She nudged Khushi with her elbow and Khushi pouted. Paayal spoke up, "Haan! Yeh Khushi ne kiya hoga! Ise jab bhi pareshaani ho ya khushi, ghussa ho ya dukhi, bas Jalebiyaan banaane baith jaati hai!" Everyone laughed at Khushi's antics and Khushi pouted again. Arnav smirked at her! He knew he was the reason behind her Jalebis! Enjoy everybody! If today morning was any indication as to what is going to happen in next few days, you are going to get to eat a lot of Jalebis! Maan looked away with anger. Hey Babaji! Yeh Geet us NK ke itne gun kyun ga rahi hai?

 

 

    Suddenly, Annie frowned, "Waise Geet why are you calling him GM?" Geet smiled, "GM means Golmaal! Woh kya haina jab bhi NK hindi bolne ki koshish karta hai hamesha kuch na kuch ulta bolta hai! Golmaal kar deta hai! Isliye main use bachpan se Golmaal bulaati hoon!" Geet gave all of them a grin while Arnav rolled his eyes and everyone chuckled at Geet's antics. Anjali spoke up, "Arre! Sab ko bataaogi nahi ki woh tumhein kya bulaata hai!" Geet, to everyone's surprise, blushed deeply. Maan glared at her. Aisa kya bulaata hai woh jo yeh sharma rahi hai? Anjali giggled, "NK ise Patakka bulaata hai!" Everyone looked at her in shock including Maan. Patakka meant firecracker and Patakka was what boys called girls when they looked hot or sexy. It was considered a borderline slang. Maan felt his blood boil. Uski himmat kaise hui Geet ko aisa kuch bulaane ki? Anjali giggled again and spoke to everyone, "Arre! Ghabraayiye mat! NK ka woh matlab nahi tha! Jab NK aur Geet chote the tab humaare Chote NK ko bahut chedte the aur NK bechaare Chote ke pranks se bahut darte the! Tab Geet Chote se jhagadne aa jaati thi! Uski fighting spirit ko dekhke NK use Firecracker bulaata tha jo Geet ko samajh nahi aaya! Toh NK ne Firecracker ko hindi mein translate kiya aur Geet ko Patakka bulaane laga!" Everyone smiled at that but Maan's anger refused to go down. Arnav rolled his eyes at Geet, "Tumhaare liye woh Golmaal hoga par mere liye he is nothing but a Kabootar! Bas ab iski kami thi! Ab mujhe Motor Mouth aur Kabootar dono ko jhelna hoga!" Everyone chuckled at his complaint while Geet folded her arms against her chest and pouted.  

 

 

    Khushi eagerly smiled, "Waise aapke yeh Nandkishorji bade hi dilchasp insaan lagte hain!" Geet nodded and sat down beside Khushi. She eagerly told Khushi what a fantastic person NK was and Khushi absorbed it like a sponge. Now it was Arnav's turn to get shocked. Itna interest? Itna interest toh tumne meri life mein bhi nahi liya Afreen?

 

 

     Suddenly, someone piped in an English accent, "Main aagaya Patakka!" Everyone turned to see a handsome young man in early twenties standing with a bag on his shoulder and another bag near his feet, his hands raised in the air as if he was SRK. Geet squealed, "GOLMAAL!" and ran towards him and as soon as she reached him, she hugged him tightly. Aakash looked at the duo in surprise, "Gale toh aise mil rahe hain jaise NK Raj ho aur yeh Simran! Gaur se sunoonga toh shaayad background mein DDLJ waala tune bhi bajega!" Everyone laughed as they got up to greet NK. Maamiji, who was walking beside Maan, chirped, "Hello Hi Bye Bye! Kitni achchi Jodi lag rahi hai in dono ki! Lagta hai Jiji se baat kareka padi!" Maan looked at her in shock and the shock turned into horror. Arnav, who was on Maan's other side, noticed Maan's expression and smiled. He adopted a look of innocence and spoke nonchalantly, "Haan! Dono achche dost bhi hai! Jodi achchi lagegi!" "Haina?", Maamiji looked at her nephew eagerly while Maan now looked at Arnav in horror. Arnav did not react and continued to walk all the while laughing inside.

 

 

     Soon, NK had entered the house and was welcomed by the elders. He touched every elder's feet and hugged every family member. He was introduced to his future Bhabhi and was told that the other Bhabhi will be here soon. He was introduced to Shyam Jijaji who he had only seen through pictures and then he was introduced to the Khuranas. While he met and was met by every Khurana with sweetness and charm, when Maan gripped his hand for a handshake he almost crushed it with his anger. But NK did not react much except gulp and smile nervously. And then came the turn of introducing Guptas. The moment he was face to face he grinned eagerly, "You are so beautiful like a rose petal...", Khushi blushed and NK continued, "Pankhdi Julaab ki!" And everyone broke out laughing while Khushi looked at him in shock. Geet, who was standing right behind NK, spoke, "Dekh aap sabne! Mere GM ka golmaal! GM, Julaab nahi gulaab!" NK looked surprised, "Oh yes! Pankhdi Gulaab ki!" Khushi smiled happily at his words and Geet looked around only to see Arnav standing beside Anjali glaring at NK. She giggled and pranced towards him. She stood on his other side and whispered to him, "Sambhaal lo AB! Jald hi Khushi ka dil jeetlo warna yeh videsi Kabootar aapki maina ko seedha Australia le jaayega!" Arnav gave her a glare and she pouted and walked away. Anjali piped up to him, "Chote! Khushiji aur NK ki Jodi kitni achchi lag rahi hai, haina?" Now it was Arnav's turn to be horrified! He looked at his sister in horror. Hey Devi Ma! Yeh kya din dikha rahi ho mujhe? NK aur Khushi? No way! Main yeh nahi hone doonga! Khushi meri hai, sirf meri! But looking at NK flirting with Khushi, Arnav was starting to have doubts.

 

 

   Soon NK entered the hall and his eyes fell on parathas and Jalebis. He grinned happily, "Meri Patakka ke haath ke parathe!" He walked towards it eagerly. He took one of the parathas, rolled it and took a bite. Anjali exclaimed, "Arre! Plate toh le lo!" NK shook his head and swallowed the bite, "Arre! Di! Aapko pata nahi maine iss parathe ko Aussie mein kitna miss kiya! You remember Patakka? I was 15 and you were 13 when we met last time and you had just learned to cook parathas! Wow! Aaj bhi wahi taste hain! You are still an awesome cook, Geet!" Geet grinned proudly at his praise while Maan glowered. Then NK ate few more bites and then pouted, "But last time toh tumne mujhe apne haath se khilaaya tha! You won't do that now?" Geet smiled and took the parathas from his hand and fed him. All assembled ladies went Aww' at the scene and their friendship while men rolled their eyes. Maan could not take it anymore and stormed away in anger.

 

 

       It was nearly noon when NK was able to enter his room. He only had time to freshen up as it was already lunch time and Maamiji had told him to come back immediately. As he walked outside of the room and neared the dining hall, he came across a dusky beauty dressed in traditional chudidaar looking like an angel coming from another corridor going the same way he was going.  "Wow!", NK mumbled unknowingly. As the girl passed him, he spoke up cheerfully, "Hello Beautiful! I am NK!" The girl turned and gave him a smirk, "And I am taken!" She showed him the engagement ring in her hand and walked away. NK heaved a sigh as he stared at the girl. What a girl! Wow! But unfortunately already taken! But then he cheered up; But Khushiji toh hain!

 

  

 

TRIVIA

 

For those who have forgotten the older chapters (which is possible coz I wrote the first chapter nearly two years back) here are the details about the older chapters I am referring to in the story.

 

1. The Heer-Raanjha reference is from Chapter 35 when Geet and Khushi meet and Geet calls Arhi, Heer-Raanjha!

2. The Arhi first meet is in Chapter 4.

3. The scene Maan is thinking about when he gets his finger cut is in Chapter 32 where while making parathas for Soni, Maan cuts his finger.

4. The scene Maan is thinking about as he eats parathas is in Chapter 22. Do read it again. That scene is another one of my best written comic scenes.

 

 

 

WISHES FULFILLED

 

1. Chavvi16 - Thread I Page 45 - Wanted to see a Jealous Arnav and Maan - Fulfilled!

2. The Dark Knight - Thread II Page 5 - Wanted a Jealousy Scene of Maan - Fulfilled!

3. Spvd - Thread II Page 12 - Arnav gets a chance to get jealous - Fulfilled!

 

Also, this is just the trailer, there are some more Jealousy scenes coming!

 

 

 

ANNOUNCEMENT

 

To all those poor souls who did not read my reply to your reviews in which you asked who is La's ex boyfriend and in which I wrote the answer clearly! Here is the answer! Padhlo and by heart it coz I am not repeating it! He is some idiot called Rohit or Rohan, don't remember and don't care to remember! But it is not NK! NK has come to India for his cousin Aakash and Aakash's cousin Arnav's weddings and met La for the first time in this chapter! Samjhe! Ya doosre language mein likhun coz you are asking the same question again and again and when I reply, you forget the reply and ask again!

 

Phew!

Now that we are done with my ranting, I can go back to being sweet and polite writer you are familiar with!

 

 

 

 

PRECAP

 

I won't give precap today coz it is a surprise! But I will give you a clue and see if you can guess topic of the next update which will be on Sunday!

Here is the clue: Last Letter!

Socho socho!

 

Take care and enjoy the day,

Kalpana

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Yay I am first... Party Dancing

Anyways jokes apart. Loved the update. NK is truly GolMaal and he is going to create chaos in hearts of Maan and Arnav and make them green with jealousy and envy.

Was laughing like anything when I was reading Arnav's reaction to Khushi's interest in NK.Also loved Maan's reaction. Looking forward to next part.


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First before I start on this story must mention the jodi names for dev tara annie Arjun and of course out newest couple to be nk and la

So for nk la it was lana funny right sorry but cant think decent one

Annie Arjun is junnie which you liked

But this couple is the hardest I tell ya

Dev tara maybe dent is the best name

Unless peeps come up with better names there

Hope they do come up with better name

But till then I shall be using the names above for couples when they are mentioned

This is the one which sees the entry of nk huh

Cool that is nice

And also my wish and that of others will be fulfilled

As in jealous arnie and maan

That is always fun to see you know

And now we get to see errrm sorry read it

Waise maan being jealous is good thing for geet

As he proves it to her that he still loves her

And that is a morale booster for geet am sure

She needs to after all with this dusht danav

La's ex who gives a damn about him

Now that she has new dude in her life

I don't mean arnie of course who is too busy with his afreen at this given time

Well if he wont be busy with her then who yaar

Chalo must get down to it

Enough of my babbling

Well lets see what more happens in this one

Poor jealous lover boys feel bad for them not they sked for it I tell ya

This had to happen for sure

Well sweetie I think who apne aap ko arnav samjhate hain

Sorry had to do that

Waise she is right you know he is such rakshas

But hers nonetheless hai ki nahin

Though he sure is confusing her for sure

What with his hot and cold behaviour man

So she is complaining about him irritating her

Not for the fact that he is saying such things to her who is gonna be his saali

Well of course she wont be that but she is that for now right

Wait did that even make sense

Hope it does to you though

No jo who karr rahe hain who sach mein sahi hai

And about time he did this

Not irritating her but trying to get his love back of course

Oh ho she is on jalebi making spree

That cant bode well for others

Hmm so she is upset about it a lot

She must be with the jalebi making

Chalo acha hai it is effecting her there

And that's what he wants and so do the readers naa

Waah ek hi din mein arnav ne inke raaton ki neend

Aur din ka chaain cheen liya

So much so she had to go and make jalebis in sheesh mahal

Waise hopefully their I mean khushi and also payal too first rasoi will be in this place only

Then khushi can make her jalebis as she would be tensed there

And we all know why

Okay that's me going way too ahead of time I tell ya

Baap re itni jaldi uth karr jalebi bana rahi hain

Wait soyi kab yeh jo uthi itni jaldi hai na

Good the servants weren't there though

They might have got right heart attack if they saw her like this

Making so many jalebis like that

Arnav my dear boy ab rakshas ko rakshas naa bolengi toh kya bolengi

Waise haan he is her rakshas and rajkumar too

Two in one he is

Good thing she hasn't seen him yet or she will be cribbing even more

God I missed this between arhi man

Thanks to that foreign client he got the chance to see her like this so early in the morning

Without others knowing about what he is doing

As in staring at his saali and not biwi to be

Should I be scared for khushi or arnie when he said how he is gonna trouble her

As this is khushi he is on about

She knows how to answer back to him too

Or did he forget ki khushi kissi se kam nahin

 Khushi doesn't realise he is there drooling over her

Wait did he call her sweetheart yup he did haiyye

Hello khushi you didn't even react to him calling you afreen sweetheart and even listened to his demand which in future will be common once they marry

Ahhh there she snaps outta that trance didn't she

Now she realises what she was about to do

And who asked her to make the tea

Hmmm I had always wanted them as in one of the boys to do that

Say hi to their lady love by waving hi

He is right khushi you didn't have any problem with him calling you afreen

Which is opposite of what you said to him in the last one

Kya karein inhe react kaise hoga if you call her with those names for her

Haiyye kya baat hai naa him being all lovey dovey I like that side of his

Hmmm even I wanna know that khushi how did that happen

You were so behaving like his wife there

Socho this is what it will be like kya future hai

Good one arnie he got her there didn't he

Well what do you have to say in your defence dear

Kuch toh kahiye parr kya kahein yeh

Hmmm this heady feeling that he is making her feel its been ages that we read this

Well this is getting interesting here with arhi

He is gonna make her faint soon if he doesn't stop now

He got her there almost but then with her sister name she snapped out of it

Waise kya solid emotional dialogue bole arnav ne

Chaa gaye boss

Had me swooning over him

But of course khushi is made of sterner stuff

Ahhh yes the reality id harsh for la

Until and unless khushi finds someone who will take la after arnav breaks his marriage with la she cant agree

She cant do this to her elder sister now can she

She isn't selfish like that even if she wants to

Arnat try to also understand why she keeps pushing you away

Only then you can progress with her

For her at this moment of time though she may love you to bits but its also true that she loves her sister just as much

And she would never jeopardise her life for her love

Damn this is sad naa

Arnav and his anger when will he learn to control it

Dude it was this anger and ego that got you in this situation in the first place

Please at least this time think rationally mate

Inka kuch nahin ho sakta

That's so not the way to try to woo her mate

In fact he is making it worse for himself

This isn't just about you arnav

Don't forget she too is part of this equation

Just once think it about it for her please and stop being so silly

But of course he cant as this is ASR we are taking about not arnav

Ahhh their first meet so much has happened since that

And the way they met wow that was so magical

Haiyye that brings back those sweet memories

Finally he snapped outta his rage that isn't gonna help matter

But is just gonna make things more difficult than they are

Hey I remember when geet called arnav khushi's ranjha

Forgot about that almost

Damn this is worse for arhi

 Like I said before I think that with maneet there is no one else in the equation

But here they have la to think about naa

 And that makes it worse I think

Really that was so cute and funny

Afreen khushi khushi afreen

Ahhh bless these two are just hilarious at times like this

Cant believe they are doing this yaar

Violence will not solve anything dear

Look who is saying that me wow didn't think I would say something so outta character

Though am with khushi wanting to bash his head

But not now that was when he was being right jerk to her then I wanted to bash him up

Omg these two are too much

Sometimes even three much

Sorry poor joke that

What are they little kids fighting for a name

Ahhh thankfully he stopped

Man so glad no one heard them or else it would be hard to explain wont it

Well he stopped as she was getting real mad and he didn't wanna risk making things worse

He is improving now he gets her much better

Shaadi ke baad jo bulana hai bulaiyo

Shaadi toh ho jane diyyo

Yeah right sorry arnav's afreen you shall be

We have all decided your fate with him

You can make him pay for it for the rest of your life while being married to him though

This time it shall happen warna bahut rona aayega hum sab ko

And am sure writer don't want that

Arnav you know very well that wont happen then why say it

Hawww teasing her for that

Haiyye kya solid dialogue bol karr gaye yeh

So true right

Yeh inki thi hai aur rahengi

 He went dreaming of his afreen taking the said person sleep away man

Ufff ek pair gaya toh doosre ka aana honewala hai

Wow they all are excited but then of course what with their love in same place how can they not be

So geet too is up this early but her for different reason of course

Wow over excited geet is always fun to read about

Really her mind is being naughty wanting to sneak into maan room

Giving am sure poor maan a right heart attack with family if they come to know of it

Shame she wont do it well not long when both shall be in same room so that's okay for now

She is good girl true but like you said true that she is free to think of it

After all its nothing wrong in thinking

And its not as if she is thinking of sneaking into some strangers room either its her maan we are talking about

Not her being fan of jalebi too

Cool more things for khushi and geet to bond over I hope

See kissi aur ke bhi kaam aayi yeh jalebi

I swear jalebis help lot more than one gives it credit for naa

Aapki hone waali bhabhi ne banayi jalebi

Ek minute khushi inki bhabhi bhi hongi aur nanad bhi

Waah double rishta kya baat hai

Arrey khushi ne banayi hai toh delicious toh hogi hi naa

She is right in her guess

Her eldest bhabhi to be made it

She is gonna call her KB when arhi get married

But khushi will be calling her parjayiji

Confusing ho jaana hai naa

Hello unki shaadi ho jayegi aap tab ho naa ho unke saath

You too could be getting married to her veerji maan naa

Geet bhi naa kitna door ki sochti hai

Ek baar shaadi ho jaane de phir jo banwana hai banwana apni bhabhi se

Hmmm good she is thinking about that too

Well she is feeling all those emotions thanx to your AB of course

Really do you even have to ask what could have happened

Duh AB the toh kuch naa kuch toh hona hi tha

Aapko kya lagta hai unhe akele chod dene se saara mamala theek ho jayega

Arrey khushi itni asaani se haan kaise karr degi

Chalo inhe samajh aaya ki khushi itni jalebiyaan kyun banayi

Sirf jalebi se pet bharna bhi nahin chahiye

Doodh jalebi khaani chahiye waah kya nashta hota hai who waah

Parathe bana rahi hain yeh

Hey remember when she used to make parathe for khuranas

Dev used to love those didn't he

Well this geet and khushi what ever they cook is usually enough to feed whole house wow that is something

That's good they can cook so much will come in handy for them only

Now who is coming in the kitchen

Please let it be maan then we can have maneet moment in the kitchen too like arhi just did

 Woohooo peeps its maan only

Waah kya baat hai maan bhi aa gaye chalo acha hai

Waah yeh toh already taiyyar bhi hog aye kya baat hai  

But then it is so geet cant chose his outfit this is funny I tell ya

She tried it last night too haila this she didn't use to do

But who am I to complain about it

Dude its none other than the person who are trying to escape from mate

Waah he is asking her for food

 What a good opportunity for geet right haiyye

Lagta hai Babaji bhi geet ke saath hain

Man she was all happy and so am I when she found who graced the kitchen while she was there and even asked for food

Maan sorry dude too late now sit down and eat your eat that she is gonna give like a good boy

Damn he knows how to deflate all her excitement

Maan this is silly man

Come on if you are hungry cant you have her food also

I know you don't want to accept he love but what has food gotta do with that

Its wrong to insult food you know

That was mean yaar

Hadh hai maan aap ka kya karrein

Waise geet iss baat ka aap bhi chunn chunn ke badla lijiyega

Khane ke liye bhi aap ne mana karr diya maan

 Hmm yahi hota hai jab kissi ka dil dukhate hain aap maan

Kisne kaha tha over smartness dekhane ki ab bhugatiye

Now I so agree with geet why do it when you don't know how

Uff inka tension badhane mein kya maza aata hai inhe

Well you are there so now you can take over the job of looking after him

Men really cant look after themselves that well anyway I have noticed

Ahhh brings back memory of soni doing the same

What more proofs does he want that his soni is still alive

Well if she wont worry who will maan

Now your family isn't gonna bother I hope dadi herself has asked geet to come in your life and take over it completely

Haiyye he was being her maan again

Aww being all lovey dovey making her blush kya scene hai

Damn that was broken too he is back to reality kya yaar

He is still ignoring his feelings for her lets see for how long that will go on

Geet he is being MSK again sweetie

Hadh hai yaar

Yeh maan bhi naa kya karein inka

Bless its so cute when geet is mad at him and mumbling things about him

Dekh lena sweetie I really want you to

Remember chunn chunn ke badla lena geet

 Haila yeh dekho hadh hai

Phele mana kiya aur apne aap ko chot bhi pahuncha di aur ab paratha khaa rahe hain

Maan aap ka hum kya karein

Oh hello the taste cant change naa after all the person who made it is the same

Is he kidding me

You know khushi felt like banging his head I feel like doing it to maan here

She is soni only ufff maan

Geet hi soni hai soni hi geet

When will you understand that maan

The day you do all will be okay for you

Oh hello toh kisne mana kiya tha parathe khane se jab geet ne kaha

Well she kept her side of bargain in a way

Though she forgot you but she did remember you

And she didn't leave you either

This time you yourself are separating your soni from you

She still loves you and so do you mate

Maan she is away from you its you who wont let her come near

Ahhh so she hadn't gone she saw it all good

Aww that must have made her happy he had her parathe

But his words sure made her sad

See she is also saying the same she is here only

Its you who wont accept the fact mate

I know right memories can be made again man

As long as the person you want to make those memories with is there

Go geet its time to be more direct no more letting him run dear

Haha he just made her stance more stronger now babaji being with her and your family well sorry to say she isn't gonna spare you no more

Aww she is off to make more plans to woo maan

Poor maan he wont know what is about to hit him

Ahhaaa so all are here for breakfast minus two good all are now awake and busy with the wedding preps

Oh ho taiyyari shuru ho gayi hai

 They have to be don't they after all it's a home where two or maybe more wedding will happen and lots is to be done too

Ahhh nk is coming aint he that am really excited for as finally la will have her man too

 Is that nk room being decorated must be right

Yeah where is la man

Ek dulhan hone waali dulhan missing hai re

Acha she is sleeping due to lateness and being so tired

Aww that's cute

Who the hell is this GM

Meant to say that with paratha making and geet talking about him but forgot

And wow can she scream or what

Wait why does she call nk GM hain bahut confusion hain ji

At least I hope its nk for whom she is doing all this

Payal am sure even you will know soon geet is like this only

Poor payash they get caught a lot these days

Arjun really is loving this aint he teasing payash

Geet chill maar yaar

Abb yeh ladki mujhe daaara rahi hai

No wonder she fell in love with maan

Inka bhi para chadh jaata hai maan ki tarah

Especially when things aren't done right

And khushi asked the one question we all wanna know the answer to

Who is this person she is meeting after ages I wonder

Kuch jayada hi excited dikh rahi hain yeh nahin

Itna toh maan ke liye bhi excited nahin thi yeh maan beware

Wow so much mystery for nk haan

This is so cool for sure

NK babua ab aa bhi jayiye aap

It is nk for sure

Buaji not your nk but yes that was funny

Ufff bauji and her nandkishore that was funny yaar

Oh ho itna time ho gaya inhe mille hua

Chalo at least payash ki shaadi mein toh aa rahe hain

Well how on earth will he take his dluhania with him that soon

Acha arhi ki shaadi ho naa ho uss din hope lana kit oh ho jaye

Arnie nobody asked you

Am sure after he arrives he might not like to have nk here even more

Arrey waah geet and nk being good friends

Well of course they would be naa

Dono kafi similar se jo hain

Lively and light hearted peeps

Maan beta you are gonna know more of geet and nk friendship

Wonder how he takes to it though

Wow they really seem to be close maan are ya listening to this mate

Hmmm mami words sure are affecting maan

Kuch hua kya maan yeh sab sun karr

But why should it make any difference to you

After all she isn't your soni so she can be friends with who so ever she wants

And it shouldn't bother you either

But of course that cant be the case either hehehe

Ufff BF karne ke baad bhi sach mein kya kahen

So she is getting things ready for her bestie it seems

Oh ho mere GM kya keh rahi hain aap

Maan isn't very happy about it either

Oh ho dadi aap ko pata hi nahin hai khushi expert hai jalebi bannane mein

As madhu bua just pointed out

Aww poor thing ribbed all due to certain rakshas

Aur dekho kitne khush ho rahe hain yeh arnav babu

Hmm lagta toh mujhe bhi hai ki aane waale kuch dino mein khoob jalebiyyan banne waali hai

Maan really he is her best friend why is it bothering you

Of course its bothering him man jealousy that he is feeling man so glad my wish is fulfilled

Oh now I get it GM means golmaal

Him and his hindi ke DM and Babaji who ton poochiye hi mat

Bilkul sahi naam choose kiya geet ne as usual

What does he call her and why is she blushing so much at that

Aisa kya bulate hai who inhe

Maan is getting more and more jealous haiyye

Well he is right in calling her pataka

Very appropriate isn't it for geet

Maan of course isn't very happy why would he be

Someone is calling his soni pataka naa that he cant bear

Maan cool it dude its nothing like ou were thinking

Yeah she is one firecracker as maan know it too well now

NK bhi naa he is too funny and cute man

And he isn't even here yet and making all laugh

Oh ho maan still angry of course he would and soon so will be someone else naa

Hawww kabootar that is mean arnie

Dude that's not the only thing you shall be complaining about soon

And you will know what you more you will be complaining about

 Oh ho so khushi too wants to know more of nk

He is pretty interesting our nk babua

No wonder geet nk aur khushi ki banegi they are pretty similar

And that is making him as in arnie mad too

Please aap mein aisa kya hai joh yeh aap ki life mein interest le

Jab dekho LG banne raheta hain

Oh ho he is here finally wow

La tera dulha aa gaya aap kahan hain

Aki that was good observation

Yeh nk aur geet bhi naa

That of course must be driving maan mad

And with what mami said made it even worse

Arnie chipping in his suggestion too

But lets see how he will react to nk when he goes after his afreen

That will be fun for sure

Actually not introduced to right bhabhi but that's okay

Oh yeah he hadn't seen hi jiju had he since he never attended anj wedding

I just realised we don't have Jodi name for Anjali and shyam need to think of them too naa

Maan was bound to do that to his hand

Beta nk yeh toh sirf haath ka aisa haal kiya hai

Inka bas chale to aur kuch bhi aapka dabaa dein

Oh ho so he is off in his tutti phooti hindi

Dude not julab but gulab

Yeh we can see why you call him GM now

And now its arnie turn to want to strangle nk

Geet bhi naa kya jale pe namak chidak rahi hain

Anj you are so good aint you

Now she made arnie become shocked with what she said about nk and his afreen

Beta arnav ab pata chala maan pe kya beet rahi thi

 Hmmm he is living up to his name our nk

Itni saari gopiyan hai inke ird gird

Paar kanha toh kewal radha ke the naa  

Aww he was so excited to have geet's sorry his pataka's parathe

Well she made them for you especially

Aww he is so cute haiyye he is perfect for la I tell ya

Arrey waah nk ko geet ke parathe tab khane ko mille jab inhone pheli baar banaye the

Maan isn't very happy about his though

Nk toh maar khan eke kaam karr rahe hain

Maan inhe ab naa chodenge

Geet inhe khilayegi naa ab toh maan aapko naa chodenge nk

Aww for sure but a certain someone is hopping mad aint they

Maan isn't bery happy with turn of events it seems cool

La where are ya dear

Hello itne parathe khan eke baad yeh lucn bhi karenge

Mainnu ki inke marzi ji

And there she is la

Haiyye he is smitten by her

Shame that for now she is engaged to be married to arnav

But don't worry not for too long dude

Wow indeed mate aapki hone waali biwi hain yeh

Wow is nk forward or what

But la is no less either

She said am taken

Yes but not for too long

You will be his dulhan only

She isn't taken not really

Haila not khushi she really is taken

Koi nahin you will get the one you liked initially mate

Haiyye main wari jawan kya baat hai

Kya update tha

Dil khush kitha aap ne kalpana waah waah

Jitna kahe kam hai ji

And there is more to come haiyye

He sure is creating lots of chaos for both arnie and maan good going dude

He just came and chaos he already created hehehe

Cheers for pm



Edited by chavvi16 - 23 March 2014 at 3:32pm

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Posted: 20 March 2014 at 11:38am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update, well written

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dono ka kaam ek se chla diya.
Bechara NK. maan or arnav use jinda gaad denge. LOL

he is in constant danger. Tongue

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Wow nice update...




Jealous maan and Arnav...maza aagaya...


Khushi ki jilebi aur geet ke parathe mujhe bhi khane hain

NK aaya...maza aaya...waiting for more jealousy scenes...






Edited by -indu- - 20 March 2014 at 11:46am

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