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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 135)

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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

great part dear
Thank you!Big smile

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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dreamy

Thanks for the review! 
But I have a question for you? Har waqt Emoticon post karte ho instead of words, toh bore nahi ho jaate? Just curious! And BTW, why do I feel there is a story behind your putting up emoticons instead of words? Any reason behind it? Ho toh bataana!WinkBig smile Do answer my questions!Smile
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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 1:56am | IP Logged
great part dear
loved it
waiting for nk entry

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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

Woo hoo it seems I will be able to do this today

Thank god you split it into two2and that means more for us to read

You are the best for sure

Haaye! Yeh kya keh diya!Embarrassed Dil touch kar ditta tussi!LOL

Thanks for the review! Padhne mein bahut mazaa aaya!Big smile

Well lets see how their decision helps them out

Hmmm raizadas hain agar apni zidd poori nahin ki toh kya faiyada

Though it still wont be easy for them

It has to be done anyway

But if not maan khushi should make it hard for him

She don't have to right after all he will do that himself

He usually does don't he

Ahhh and no one saw him crying for his love

Weird but he was outside to be fair

And except maan no one knows of arhi love story either


Geet did but she forgot all that

So no one but he can help him now

What with maan being too busy avoiding his love

What will you say to her now

And will that stop her from going

Somehow the talks aren't gonna be enough

But guess at least they should talk about this right

That's the least that can be done now

And it will only strengthen his resolve to get his love back

Will she listen to you now

After all that happened mate

But yes the wedding has to be stopped

As like we all know it will ruin too many lives

And whats the point of that

Its better they stop it before three of them regret it later

As after they get married (which of curse wont happen) they cant do anything about it either right

You are so right!Cry

Back to where he came from

And still buaji aint back hain

What did she go to bring man that's taken her tis long I wonder

ROFL Only you could think of such things when such a serious scene is going on!LOL

Aww poor thing rona hi likha hai aaj kal inki zindagi mein

But not after this right

So am gonna not feel too bad about her

Ahhh she is all ready to go huh

Seems arnie will be in time to talk to her

That's all he will be able to do though

Trust me its been long and now she notices

To think had instead of arnie some thief had come then what

But no inko toh khabar hi nahin thi

Arnie while talking about other things can you also ask her to be more vigilant

ROFL Again you went off tangent! How do you get these thoughts when such a serious scene is going on? Do tell me!ROFL

Kya pata koi kuch karr de aapki khushi ko agar yeh aise hi apni duniya mein khoyi rahi

Sorry had to add that don't know why

Chalega! It is my fault! Generally I dont leave such silly loopholes but I had no other option to get Arhi face to face in the way I want! Toh yeh darwaaza khulla rakhna padha! ROFL

Now she is thinking is she

Well better late than never in this case

Someone did come and go also

Again you didn't know dear

She has gotta be more alert yaar


Ahhh and he comes and just in time

Or is it at wrong time

So he is here is he cool

Well wouldn't you wanna know why he is here

He will tell ya himself why he is here

Don't worry nothing to worry about too much

Well it is but has to be said and done at least

Nope not this time no taunting warna iski toh aisi ki taisi


Sorry for threatening arnav but he needs it

Dude scare her more why don't ya

Ufff kya karein but then this is him naa

Ab pyaar kiya toh darna kya

Cant believe I just said that


Yup he sure is scaring the hell outta her

Hmmm that he is anyway good at somethings cant change

Though I wish once she too scares him but in different way

Haila! Wish maanga? I have to write it down! Give me a sec!

And I am back! Where was I? What was I reading? Ah! Here it is!

Well if she wont be fearful of your actions of closing the door what else will she do

You are the one who did this to her

Had you tried to know the reason why a year ago this wouldn't happen

So true!

Sorry sweetie he knows

Not that it canges things much

Well some day he would know and the sooner the better

Not only for you two but la as well

Really you think he will believe you now

After knowing everything he wanna rectify it if possible ASAP

Acha tab yeh understanding kahan thi when he misunderstood her

LOLGood question!

Why didn't he realise then why she did this

Ab bade aaya hai inhe janne waale

Toh kaun sa bada teer maar liya

You only know cause she told you while talking to herself

Otherwise you yourself would never have known mate

Khud toh pata karne ki koshish nahin ki

Hmmm I know all happy that he don't hate you anymore

But he is still engaged to your sister

That still needs to be worked out

But cant begrudge her some happiness there can we now

After so long she got her happiness

Let her enjoy it for now

Hmmm aww that was cute

Let them be with one another for now

Before she realises that technically nothing has changed

That will be sad to see

But what to do ehhh

Aww she missed his soothing presence

Well so did he though he tried to ignore it am sure

Haiyye seeing them like that is bliss

I know!

But this wont last too long

I know!

And when it does please let it be only after he is made to pay a bit for making her cry so much

Ek aur wish? Ek second do! Likh loon!

Haan! Likh diya! Chalo! Aage padhti hoon!

Wow she sure forgot everything being in his embrace

Wonder what shall break this spell

And she snaps outta it

And realises who she is with and what she is doing

And once again the dream is broken

But not for too long I hope

Oh dear she is gonna push him away right

But this time you cant give in to her no matter what

Dude I thoguth you knew her well

Even then that question

Sweetie you know your afreen was bound to do that

If she didn't well she wouldn't be herself

So true!

Ahhh so many days since he called her afreen

Trust me when you come to know whats going on in her min d that smile will be wiped again

Ahhh loved how she was being sarcastic

Well yes it wont be that easy

Warna mazaa kaisa

Abhi toh khoob papad belne padenge


And she isn't wrong to say all this

Just because you know the truth things cant change just like that

Did I say that before dang memory is bad man

Love it when she shocks him don't you

Excuse me again who is he to freaking forgive her

Whats with this guy still all me, me it is with him

LOLIt is like he is a bakri, mein mein karta rehta hai!LOL

When pray tell me it will be about them both

Dude don't be your arrogant self

It isn't helping well what with her murderous thoughts of course they aren't

What he is saying is the truth though

But then neither can he live without her

Or did he forget that bit

Guess I have to give it to you dear you have fulfilled my wish again

Errr... Which one? (The writer scratches her head! Abbe yaar! Maine ek wish poora kar diya aur mujhe hi pata nahi!Confused)LOL

Oh come on she should just forget it all

All those taunts and mean things he said about her

She is right why didn't he come ask her why she did what she did

But no he was being mulish there

Yes I loved this fiery side of her

And all she said is so true

Why didn't you ask her arnie answer her that

I know right he remembered his hurt but what about hers

And you think a sorry will cut it

Will it sooth her heart of all those vile things you said about her

Hell no it doesn't

And if he thinks it does then he has another thing coming for sure

Not his anger again

Dude you ruin things with your anger

Like you did a year ago

Yaar yeh kaam bannane ke bajaye bigadte jyada hain


No really he does

Aww baby just loved those lines from ya khushi

What apt words those were yaar

Haiyye am totally happy with this side of hers

Happy to read that!Big smile

She sure showed him that he may be ASR but she aint no less

Hah beat that dude bade aaye sab theek karne

Arrey waah ab bade plead karr rahe hain tab nahin inpe raham aa raha tha when you were taunting her

Wow she sure gave it to him

Am so prud of her right now

Big smile Me too!

You have lost your rights on her mate

And you did push her futher all by yourself

Didn't I say you would regret doing this to her and that time has finally come yipeee

Maine kahaa tha na? I will make him regret his decisions!Big smile

Please don't do something you will regret again in your anger mate

She is right in her place too mate if you are

Abbey who maafi thi

Aur kyun naa de tujhe attitude didn't you do the same to you

After all she is your lady love and maan's sister toh attitude toh banta hai

He thinks all this is drama hey kushi ki DM save him will ya though he cant be saved can he

You tell him dear that you aren't some toy

Jab mann kiya khele aur jab mann kiya chod diya

Hadh hai yaar

When you weren't ready to listen to her why should she naa its only fair mate

Hmm changed his tactics did he

Good he pleaded not ordered

But am so sorry dude that wont change her mind either

By the way who would have thought he would actually plead to her

I didnt see that coming you surprised me there cool

Happy to surprise you!Big smile

It aint that easy is it

And with your temper I think you might just screw it all up

Guess your actions made her lose her trust on you

And she don't wanna trust you when you didn't

This is called as karma


Ek time tha she hoped you would understand and needed you now its your turn

That was naughty of you to flirt with her sister like that just cause she didn't pay attention to him and hence ruins things by himself too

She is so right

He did fall in love but he sure didn't know how to keep that love intact

Was his love only this much that he didn't even once think of things from her pov

Yes trust and communication both are necessary in any relationship

He didn't trust her or communicate with her as to why she did what she did

See it from her pov now you didn't think for just once what she went through when yo said those things to her

How would you have felt had she said the same and you know you would do what she did

Hmmm can she really trust him to keep her heart safe again

To not break it like he did a year ago

Come on you should know this aint easy for her try to understand her but don't give up either

Ahhh who would have thought she would say that to him that their ways are separate but he forced her to didn't

I know!

Once again he didn't listen to her fully

When is he gonna stop doing that urgggh he makes me so mad sometimes

So she did forgive him should have known

She has too big heat sometimes man

But she cant make her life better at cost of her older sisters

If its possible for him to make sure neither la suffer nor they then that will be perfect can you do that arnav hope you can

How can she knowingly ruin her sister's life

If she did she wouldnt be happy and if she isn't you wont be either

You cant build your own happiness at stake of other can you it will only make you more guilty

Come now even arnav wouldn't want that

But that don't mean you give up if you do then where the hell is that ASR who gets what he wants

I might be mad at arnav but he is the one for khushi nonetheless

So true!

Geet time now weee

Poor baby is crying after maan rejection

Oyye kudiya rona mat time aa gaya hai aapko maan ko dikhane ka ki geet raizada kya hai

Exactly! Go Geet!Big smile

Aww poor thing isn't faring well after his rejection this is sad seeing her like this

Geet ab sirf aap hi hain jo sab theek karr sakti hain

Not only for yourself but for maan too

Please don't lose courage

You are much stronger than that we know you are

And I know you know that too and will find solution to this too

Oh dear you had to fall for MSK not maan cause MSK side of his is more prominent

And after the whole soni debacle MSK is back

So if you fell for MSK then you really love him

I know he seems to be mean and all but he isn't dear

Jo cheez asani se mil jaaye usmein mazaa kya geet

Arre! Waah! Kya baat kahi!Clap

Good she realised that she is soni so why did he reject her

Seem she is getting there aint she

No dear that's not what you should be thinking

Koi apna phela pyaar itni asani se bhul jaye

And when that love had reached to the level it did

Surely you cant believe him in fact he gave you clues as to why he cant love ya dear focus on that sweetie

I know she will get it and soon why he did what he did

Ahh am glad she is thinking rationally

Hmmm well she should do right

He cant let go of that love

Not at all is it possible is it dear

Well that was maan this is MSK that's one difference

Another would be that he has closed off his emotions being MSK but of course he cant run from love

He couldn't when he fell for soni and he wont when he falls for geet

No change dear but he is showing it to  be

He still cares for you why else would he be worried for your well being but is just hiding it well

Of course he loves you dear

And he will never stop but he wont show it to you either

You shall have to make him show you his love

Make him believe that you wont leave him

That you will be with him forever this time and voila maan will be yours again

Wow! Loved the way you are cheering Geet!Big smile

Please aage badh chuke hain

What rubbish that is dear

The maan who cared for you is the true one

This one was just pretending to distance himself from you but you don't go away from him

Wow that's more like it

This is what we wanted and we got it thanx sweetie

You are welcome  (That thanks was for me, right?Confused)

Waise she has to have her answers too

After all she is heart broken too

Seems all are heart broken okay one exaggerates there but you know what and who I mean I hope course you do

Her veere is here

Man I missed this guy

Me too!

At the moment sirf inki love story qayamat hai

Baki dono stories that started with his are in jeopardy


Whats up with aki I wonder

Loved him there

He too is a raiazada after all

So what he dosnt show that side of his

He sure gave her an idea there and hopefully that arnav too

Come on buck up there geet arnav get what you want after all you are raizadas

See geet this is what you gotta do too

You have to make that man confess his feelings for you again

Loved aki there man

He just gave her such good advice without knowing he did

Come on dear you are a raizada time to show what a raizada can do when they want to


Hmmm guess she needed to see the changes in her

She aint geet handa but geet raizada

But confident you can do this

Come on who do you wanna be geet handa aur geet raizada

You can see the difference between them

Come on you have the confidence to get his love back

Hmmm her inner self is right you know

There is more of that raizada streak in you than handa

You cant give up now

Come on she is telling you what you should do chose to be geet raizadas and you shall get what you want please chose her

Geet raizada who shall fight for her love and win too

Come on you know you will chose raizada version she will for sure

And we will know what she does as geet raizada


 Uff here is our devdas it seems

Ufff yeh toh kuch zyada hi shock mein rehete hain aaj kal


What to do with him

Snap outta it will ya

Seems someone too needs to tell him he is a raizada

Aww he is fighting with God well they did give you your happiness

But what to do when you yourself reject that happiness and love

There is only so much She can do


Haven't you heard the saying God helps those who help themselves

So you gotta do that too mate

Dude you could have told geet or your di but guess that isn't possible but geet is

Well where was this love when you didn't trust her arnie

And we thoguth you could do anything

Isn't that what you keep saying surely this too you can do

Don't lose her work on getting her back

And also make sure that la don't suffer either

That isn't too hard if you really want her as your wife after all ASR can do anything right

Wow just loved seeing him like this

I know might sound sadistic there

No you dont! Every reader must have been thinking the same thing!Wink

But till he is pushed to a limit only then he does something

He wants khushi then get her

No way should he stop just cause she isn't ready to forgive him

Well my dear man its time to take your life back in your hands

Don't let fate rule you again

Grab a chance to bring her nack in your life

Only you can help yourself and her in this

You know you can do it just like geet is getting she can

Come on raizadas siblings I dare you both to get what you want

Cheers for pm

What a dhamakedar update dear

Though it was angsty but it will show them a way forward right

Happy that you liked this update!Big smile Thanks for the awesome review!Big smile

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 18 March 2014 at 1:54pm
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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maaneet099

What a Raizada wants is what a Raizada gets! no doubt :D
Go conquer the world Geet and Arnav ;)
Happy that you liked that line!Big smile
Thanks for the review!

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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sriif

Awesome update...
 i dint like crying arnav... i just love the shrewd and possesive arnav and get what ever he wants by hook or crook... Angry

geet shud make maan realize that hez wrong and make him jealous to such an extend that he shud become more possessive abt her... Angry
Even I love that waala Arnav! I just love it when he goes flirty and possessive and leaves Khushi fumbling and scared! I enjoyed it when during Payash haldi and mehendi, Arnav behaved so flirtily. You will find the same Arnav here too!Big smile
Oh wow! Is that a wish? I will add it to wish list! A jealous Maan! Hmmm!
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 18 March 2014 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 65 A
nice one dear...

Thank you!Big smile
And thanks for the review!

Arnav Khushi
poor them...
good Arnav knows the truth now he will do something...
he better do or else he will regret...

He will! He has to! You know I hated the show and the ASR till the Payash marriage events started and Arnav flirted with Khushi. That possessive romantic Arnav is what enticed me to love his character and he will come to fore in my story too!Big smileEmbarrassed

and Khushi well cant blame her now at this time La's life will be a question mark...
hope Arnav does something so that none will get and all will be happy...

Dont worry! Everyone will have a happy ending! Even La!

but his arrogance is something that should be kicked out...
idiot gadha...
even his apology is like something else...


now Khushi knows that Arnav knows and it will be difficult to stop his approaches...
and Khushi's words are also true...
he didnt believe her never tried to talk to her but hurt her so much...

Ab aayega story mein asli mazaa!

poor Arnav...
hes helpless as of now...
but he will do something soon...
but what is he gonna?
hope nothing stupid...  

No! Nothing stupid! Just something for which you will cheer and clap!LOLBig smile

Maan Geet
poor Geet...
shes also hurt...
Maan's rejection has hurt her so much...
shes confused too...
does Maan love her or not...
but Aakash's words made her to be determined to get her love back...

Yes! A Raizada gets what a Raizada wants!Big smile

hope the four somehow meet and the lover boys do something...
well have hope only on Arnav and Geet...
kyunki this other jodi of bhai behen are strongly determined in the other way...
lets see this bhai behen win or that bhai behen...
cont soon dear...

As I have been saying for few days, Abhi hoga asli mazaa!
Once again thanks for the review! was fun reading it!Big smile

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 18 March 2014 at 12:35pm

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