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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 135)

Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by archa2810

suna suna is one of my favorite songs... it was a beautiful update
Thank you dear!Big smile
Even I love that song! Actually all songs I use in this story are the my favorites!Big smile

Zindagirocks_21 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
DFL chapter 67

Poor khushi couldn't sleep because of arnav, this will keep happening to her until arnav makes you his. And arnav singh raizada just standing there and staring at her so tenderly. awee they are just the cutest couple ever. Hahahah she calling him rakshas once again and what does he do, he plays it according to himself and says. "Afreen sweetheart, bring me some tea"
Too hilarious and khushi is like Jee abhi layi. Even though she denies it she still Is connected to arnav no matter what. And she can't stop it at all, asmano mein yeh Jodi bani hai, aur ise koi bhi kids nahi kar sakta.

Ahh man khushi please stop being so stubborn now. I can't see Arnav like this. He is a broken she'll without and forcing him to marry lavanya will get you no where. He'll still love you.
Both of them remembering about first time they met, it's just too cutee! Been such a long time since they've been together, and seriously I cannot wait for them to be together once again. Yes they talk and all but they are still not together.

Right at the point Arnav Singh Raizada. She'll always be afreen to you not khushi. And obviously I love how he's like after marriage I'll only call you khushi and khushi is like that won't happen, because we are not getting married! Afreen Arnav Singh Raizada, wah kya naam hai.

OMG it's like both of the girls can't sleep. One with having problems and the other with excitement.

Oh wow geet already planning about making khushi cook jalebies for her when arnav and khushi get married. And bam geet is making her favourite and best specialty PARATHAS. Entry of maan singh khurana: kuch hai khane ko?
Awee I felt so bad for geet when he refused her, and what does he do cut himself afterwards. Awee she was worrying about him the same way soni did, and why wouldn't she because they are still one person no matter what.

It's hilarious how at first it was khushi tellin arnav to go away from her and now it's maan telling geet to go away from him.bas gender change hua hai lol. Everything else is same. Ohhh Nk is coming people. Damn cannot wait for that, his Entry will for sure bring a twist in the story. And look at geet she is just so excited about him coming that she is even shouting at the poor servants to get everything ready and over here maan is sitting and being jealous about geet praising Nk so much! Hahah jalebi bhai get ready for the days ahead where you will be making/eating a lot of jalebies ahahha. Evil evil raizada!

Even I was wondering why she kept calling him GM but now I understand (golmaal) lol i like it, and what a name Nk chose for geet. Pataka! Haha maan is so jealous of him right now that he could easily strangle him for making geet blush. And true the way they hugged was like raj hugging Simran. Achi baat ki hai badi wadiya Jodi hai yeh and arnav being his self says yes why not. Poor maan I would've loved to see his face expression in real life. But this way atleast maan will realize that if he doesn't accept her he will loose geet.

What a day for both maan and arnav, Nk is taking away both of their lady love. And when Nk was being introduced, poor his hand got crushed by maan Hahaa. Now that is what I call jealousy. Geet feeding his parathe with her own hands. Lets just say he couldn't handle it at all. And Nk you have just come and you are already flirting with khushi. Arnav will not leave you alone. Because khushi will always be Arnav's!!

OMG please tell me that was PayAl who said that or was it lavanya? Lol so confused about the last part.

Thanks for the update and I'm really sorry for not replying back. My semester is coming to an end soon and my teachers are piling so much assignments and quizzes. Ughh too much! So wherever I get a time to read and reply I do.

So I'm really sorry about that. Now I'm off to the next chapter :)

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Zindagirocks_21 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 March 2014 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Wow antakhari game. This brings back a lot of memories. One game where all the family members sit down and actually enjoy themselves fully! Nice idea of doing this.
Well now I'm sure lavanya and Nk haven't met eachother yet.

Raizada clan vs Khurana. It stills makes me smile when maan told khushi and PayAl that he is their brother so that means that they are khuranas as well.

Nice seating plan, everyone is facing eachother. I'm so glad that geet told arnav about playing the game because of khushi and maan is there like I can't believe arnav left me, and what did geet say to him to make him so eager to play the game.

Awee naintara and dev just make a really cute couple, love the singing part of them and how both of them were reliving their college memories. And what a song he chose to sing. The song where he propsed naintara. I think no one will ever forgot about the song they sing to their lady love when they propose them.

And then comes the time for one of my favourite song. Soona soona. Even though this movie still creeps me out so much I still love it and this song is just fabulous. And all the girls teaming up and singing this song in a horrible key tune. Poor boys their ears must be hurting by now with the way the girls sang the song so badly. But that's what is fun about this game, you get to sing and it does not matter if it's perfect or off key like khushi's was. And we can all know that khushi is not a singer but a dancer so no worries.

It's funny how one person wants to forget about the memories etched in their mind, while the other wants to make more memories like that.

Even though I've never heard the song PayAl and akash sang, it's still pretty good. They both compliment eachother. They are both shy and have the same favourite song. They are meant for eachother.

Wow mami Jee ordering PayAl to sing when just an hour ago you were hiding from others for the same reason lol. But what can we say these are the moments to live and enjoy.

Thanks for the update and do continue soon
Love you

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 3:23am | IP Logged
part 68 A
awesome dear...
whole family moments...
hahaha Maamiji's shyness was funny...
oh NK and La are missing...
chalo koi na...
but the way they were all chatting was funny...
and Maan and Arnav's nicknames were hilarious...
hahaha Geet made Arnav to participate and Maan had to join with them...
nice one...
but only songs were there...
will there be moments between Arnav Khushi and Maan Geet like this?
cont soon dear...

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Kalpana_KaCy IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by spvd

part 68 A
awesome dear...
whole family moments...
hahaha Maamiji's shyness was funny...
oh NK and La are missing...
chalo koi na...
but the way they were all chatting was funny...
and Maan and Arnav's nicknames were hilarious...
hahaha Geet made Arnav to participate and Maan had to join with them...
nice one...
but only songs were there...
will there be moments between Arnav Khushi and Maan Geet like this?
cont soon dear...
Thanks for the review dear! 
About Arhi and Maaneet moments, it will be only after Antakshari ends, Antakshari is just for entertainment and to make Khushi and Maan realise that they cant run away from their lovers! Also, there is NK and La scene in between for which this Antakshari was crucial!
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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ashavi

well i can't believe that after hurting Khushi for one long year for no real reason of hers and even after knowing that it was his fault that they ended up in this mess Arnav still expected Khushi to forgive him so easily...please atleast when Khushi gets to know that Arnav knew that she was Payal's sister right from the beginning make her bit angry on him else it will show that she doesn't have any self respect bcoz he has hurt her a lot...

well loved the monologue of Geet and her interaction between the two Geets...waiting 2 see how all these problems would solve...

update soon...
Khushi wont know that Arnav knew the truth at all! But yes, Arnav ko bahut papad belne padenge to get Khushi!LOL
Thanks for the review!

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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sutapasarbabhom

Asom updt feel bad for kushi n geet both men r jerk arnav mafi bhi magta hai jaisey dhamka raha ho cant he remember hw he taunt her n break her heart hw many times til nw he cant undrstnd her prblm waiting for next part thanx for pm
Thanks for the review!
And yes, both men are jerk! But dont we love them for their arrogance and attitude!LOL
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Posted: 25 March 2014 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

was stalking sorry
okay maybe not sorry if you dont mind LOL 

I love you for your stalking! 
Thanks for the review!

And so the one we were waiyting for is here

Haiyye kya baat hai

Bless this is it peeps

Arnav and geet are gonna go and get their love after all raizada gets what raizada wants

And baby am I waiting for this or what ASR and GR will be in form now

MSK and KKG wont know what hit them right

So will be done today of course

Well of course it would be since not too long

Hmmm lets get down to it then

Haan! Chalo! Shuruvaat karo!

Geet there is nothing more ti understand

You have to get maan back

Its what you need to do and have to do

Cant let him be such devdas don't suit his personality


Boy this sure is fun I tell ya

Raizadas are both gearing up for the fight

May they win their love back

Oh ho that's because maan don't want further heart break

But we know that wont happen

No one is forcing him to love you either

He loves you anyway

Now you just gotta prove it to him that his heart will be safe with you

And this time his love will be his

Not much you have to do just make him believe in his love again

Okay I must be kidding if am saying not much to do


That's gonna be real hard to do

Making MSK you get it MSK to believe in love again

Because if you don't then well he wont let love into his life

Will make himself and you miserable

Now am sure you don't want that dear right

No more asking babaji like I aid to ASR God helps those who help themselves

Ab sab aap parr hi hai geet

You have to fight for your love and only then you shall win

No point is staying sad like this too long as that's not gonna help not in your case or that of your bother anav

Dil ki baat sunni chahiye when its to do with emotions

Waah! Kya lecture diya hai! Mazaa aagaya!

Maan ka kya hai dekhiye aap unhe paane ke liye karengi sab kuch toh maan mil jaayenge naa

Maan says a lot of things don't mean that you agree with them all do you sweetie

Well I think diary will give her hope for her to fight for her love

Sorry geet there is no other way

That way is not for you ever please not giving up

You didn't when you escaped your cruel family

Then how can you give up now when again its matter of your life dear

Sorry dear that song I don't see maneet like I said before see different couple but song is apt

I know and I understand!

You know what those words mean don't you

He made you his deewani now time to return the favour my dear

Of course he didn't get his love easily

You never do that do you

So if he fought for his love now its your turn dear

So now you know what to do don't you dear

Time for you to woo your love

Agar who karr sakte hain toh aap bhi karr sakti hain yeh

And she got it what she gotta do

Time to dance in happiness like geet

Kya baat hai about time it sinks in right

Chalo she understood what babaji and all readers want


Happy days are here finally

Yes, yes and more yes she shall fight for her love

Haiyye we all wanted that didn't we

Thought this day couldn't get here soon enough

And now that its here woohooo

Mission M more like double M dear

Maan and mohabbat

Maan count the days soon you will be confessing your love to your lady love in front of all

Haiyye kya baat hai

Just thinking about it makes me so happy

Oh ho its so good to see her so happy

Ahhh geet is being very dangerous at the moment

Hehehe that's where the fun lies don't it

Haila like I said she is dangerous mode now

Mami ki lipstick ke saath kya karr diya inhone

Haiyyo rabba geet jhalli kya karr rahi hai

But I prefer this jhalli geet to the sad geet she was being any day


Trust me mami understanding her mood at this moment wont be easy

Leave it you shall know soon enough why she is behaving this way

Poor mami got scared what she saw in the mirror

Ab kya karrein yeh toh hona hi tha

Ahhh thanx to kanha she wont do any mischief here right

Anj you Baby was always crazy now you realise it

Parr aaj kuch zyada hi crazy ho rahi hain apne phele pyaar mein

So who is the next victim I wonder

Her veere or her jiju don't think he would be home or her AB

Okay so its her veere only

Oyye hoyye who toh parjayji ke khwaab mein khoye huye hain

Well he is the only one who can openly look at his love's pic naa

Poor geet and arnie cant do the same

So true!

Time to keehcofy his tang I think no

That's what she will do right hehehehe

And he wont even know when the typhoon geet hit him

Sheesh she screamed in his ear

That was even more naughty of her

So hilarious that was poor aki man

Happy you enjoyed it!Big smile

Run geet my dear

Your veere is after ya dear

So if she didn't tease him regarding payal now there is still time for that in pre wedding rituals naa

She hid by the poolside and aki didn't see her

Well yes arnie could use a hug right about now

As it is he is too miserable due to his love life going down the drain

He needs this hug and geet being there for him

She might just give him idea how to get his afreen back

Aawww at least someone finally saw him crying

I know! Finally kisine inka dard dekha!

Well dear he is crying for the same reason you were just a day ago

Heart break and not getting his love

Even ASR is effected by those things

After all he too has a heart which is broken as his love doesn't want to be with him

Though for different reason to geet love story

Hope he tells her and she can help him

Its time he started sharing his grief with others it will help

Well duh she too is going through the same

She knows what you will be going through as she too is going through the same

Please tell her why you are like this arnie

Aww am glad he has shed his ASR mask before her

He needs that hug and someone for a change to soothe him too

Arrey yaar pheli baar inhone pyaar kiya dil kissi ko diya aur jab thukra diye gaye toh chot toh inhe bhi lagi naa

Am glad she was there for him

That she too could comfort him when he needed it

That's what siblings are there for


Ahhh she sure will figure it out it seems

Thanx to that DM idol I hope and rest she can find from the horses mouth sorry I mean arnie

Horse??? I would say donkey!LOL

Yup your thoughts are going in the right direction geet

It is to do with khushi only

Now you just need to figure out or ask him why

She is good aint she yup she is

Kitne jaldi do aur do ko joda aur paanch bana diya

I know I know do aur do paanch nahin hotte but it sounded better there sorry

Nope! It sounded perfect there!Big smile

Yes that khushi mystery that needs to be solved and soon by you

Aww but she too is right

Now is not the time for that

She needs to comfort her brother who needs some comforting right about now

Ahhh good seems his emotional outburst has stopped

Weird to see him and maan cry

But then love makes even the toughest of peeps cry don't it


Is pyaar ne insaan ko kya kya bana diya,

ek achche bhale insaan ka saara system hila diya!LOL

Really don't be silly

So what she saw your emotional outburst

Choti hain toh kya hua hai toh aapki hi behen

Don't hide this side of yours from family at least

Aww I loved it when she placed her shoulder on her AB that was so cute scene seeing these two bond too

Glad you liked it!

Arnav don't try to hide please

It will help if you told someone they can help

Don't have to say her name but can tell your problem even then

Aur choti behen se kya chupana arnie

Come on don't you clam up to her please

Come on we know you can do it

Tell her please arnie you can do it

You can bare out your heart to geet

Waah! Arnie ki personal cheerleader!!!!LOL

Yeh arnie bhi naa bahut hi ziddi bache hain

Lets see what she does to make him open up

Or if not that tries to help her AB

Soch lo arnav yeh maukka phir naa ayega bata do geet ko kya hua

Aise akele udaas baithne se toh acha hoga aap inhe bata dein

Arnav ab aapki choti behen itne pyaar se pooch rahi hai kya hua unhe nahin batayenge aap

Come on better tell her before she tells your di that you were sad

And once it gets to your di she will be after you like anything till she knows all

Am sure you don't want to disturb your di so just tell geet

Plus he is right anj will feel guilty for getting you engaged with la and not khuhi whom you love

So geet is the safest option dude

She can help you out as she is going through the same

And you can unburden yourself with her too

Geet wait for it he is deciding to tell you

Just give him few minutes and he shal tell you all I hope

And he finally opens up to her

Tells her what she knew of but now forgot

And the whole saga

Not just how he met fell in love but also how he hid things from her too

Those were the times right

When arnav would whine to meet up with khushi on Sundays and poor dear had to lsten to him

Though it was hard for her

I miss writing those days!

Well yes that made us laugh too geet this side of your AB that khushi brought out sure is a miracle

I know like you made maan do things no one else made him do khushi too did the same

Kya baat hai kitni milti hai inki soch naa

Well thank god they came into ASR and MSK lives or these two would be the robots that they were and would forget living as humans yaar

So  true!

Wow didn't know that he didn't share his pain of losing his parents with even his family

Yes she does mean a lot to him

But then he had to go and forget all this in this past year didn't he

Waah all the story is coming out

He hasn't left anything behind and that's good

See even she can see that wasn't the best way of handling things with khushi

Kya karrein geet apke AB aur aapke maan dono ek hi thaali ke chatte batte hain


Oh my she almost was gonna be violent against him

Wanting to slap or strangle him that's bad naa

Well duh she can understand what khushi went through when her brother made her go through that dark phase

Well pyaar mein idiot bhi bann jaate hain geet

And he isn't the first one to commit such stupid mistakes either


Plus you know what your brother is like when someone hurts him he goes all defensive and hurts that person too

See she agrees with me that in love you do the stupidest of things

Wow geet aur mere khyal kitne mil rahe hain regarding hee brother and her love

Even I was thinking the same

I know right inn dono ka kuch nahin ho sakta

But you gotta help him out not for him but for khushi dear

Doe he really wanna hear whats she gonna say

It wont be anything good about you just so you know mate

She knows once she says what she does he will go all angry on her so is making ready for her escape

Smart girl must say why be near the furious lion right

Arrey geet ne toh mere mann ki baat cheen li

She is right you know in calling you all those names

Don't know why you are screaming so much when she is right

ROFL I always enjoy your sarcasm, Kittu!

So what else should she say after finding out how you yourself ruined your love with your own hands ASR my man

See she can tell what your afreen is like and you claim to know her and understand her well

She has forgotten what she was like with khushi but she can tell what khushi is like

And that she would never betray you kya zamana aa gaya hai jisne pyaar kiya use apne pyaar parr bharosa naa tha

Aur jo khushi ko jyada nahin milli who unhe zhat se jaan gayi

I know he had no trust on her love for him

He didn't even ask her even once why she did what she did

Itna toh aap ko haq tha naa to ask

But no what did you do instead taunt her and what not

Gussa hone se kya faiyda when what she said is true mate

Don't you go if only on me mate

If only will not help you right now okay

Yeh babaji geet tera bhai naa sach mein maan ki tarah hai


He is giving up on his love too just because khushi told him not to come after her

Laga isse ek sach mein naa kya karrein inn dono ka

Had hai bewakkofi ki bhi arnav sach mein

I know geet even am like what is wrong with this guy too

No you might not deserve her

But she blooming well does deserve someone who loves her that much

Now how to tell him not to give up just like that geet

Cause if you don't he wont get it either

You tell him dear aise haath pe haath rakhne se kuch nahin hoga

Like geet he too should fight for his love yaar

Aap ASR hain ki nahin

And since when did ASR give up so soon yaar

She is so right make her forgive you

Fall in love with you again

For aminute he was like I can do this and then he mentioned his wedding

Oyye 18 din kaafi hai yeh sab karne ke liye

I know who can be more stubborn than ASR when it comes to winning (well MSK of course but that's besides the point)


Waise geet khushi ko pataana inke deal karne se bhi jyada mushkil hai

Parantu naamomkin bhi nahin

Rejection se tang aa karr hi toh jitney ka zasba aaur badh jaata hai

Guess its time to use her own story to make him understand

Of course maan and arnie knew one another love story

In fact only maan knew how he was keeping his identity hidden from khushi

Arrey don't go there geet

Jab pyaar ke liye kuch naa karr paaye toh dost ke liye kya karte

Not when arnav's love is his baby sister too

So right again she is

Per pe kuraadi maar li hai dono ke dono doston ne


Inak sach mein kuch nahin ho sakta parr hona zaroori hai

So she told her story too

And how she fell for him again well this time properly

Is arnav kidding me you are angry at him for doing this to geet

Did we forget what you did to khushi mate


You weren't any less harsh with her

When you know why he did it then you being angry on him don't make sense

Ahahah kya baat hain maan ki glati dikhi

Khud ki galti bhul gaye aap arnav

She sure pointed out that he too did the same to khushi too bhul gaye

Good that he understood that he wasn't any less wrong too that he will point his finger in accusation towards maan

She is gonna fight for her love just as she is asking you to do the same

Yes both brother sister have built walls around their hearts

Which will have to be taken down by you both and soon too

Inki toh sach mein suyi atak gayi hai

Baar baar rejection ka soch karr ghabra jaate hain

Aha loved what she said to arnav there about love and being able to take anything for that love

That needs to be drilled in him too

Jab inhe pyaar huya naa toh sab change ho gaya

True Love can change you make you mature and do what ever you can do to keep that love with you

Come on if Baby can do it so can you her brother do it

Aww that was so cute scene with arnav and geet

And he is gonna fight for his love wooohooo even more happier now

Chal give him another solution as to how to make his afreen come back to him

Hmmm yes he has to start thinking with his heart and swtich off his brain in this matter

As brain wont help him woo her back

Your heart knew she would never do this to you but you didn't listen to it did ya

Love is not any of your deals mate its love so think of ways of getting your love back by being sweet and nice to her as you once were

Of course she will help you

But just helper not the one with how to go about wooing her

That has to be you and only you not google either mate

LOL Reminded me of Kahaani Zubaani!

Aww and then he too can help her with maan cool

And it seems they are ready for their fight or war to win their love back

Of course DM did this

You asked her for help and she did help when you tried to help yourself too by telling geet all this

Oh ho kya baat hai

He believes in DM now

Aww isn't that just great

Sach mein pyaar mei kya kya nahin ho jaata ji

ASR ko phir se DM yaani ki bhagwaan pe vishwaas ho gaya

Yup! Infact, planned a jhatka scene for Anjali and Khushi based on DM!LOL

Aww all that darkness after his parents deaths has vanished after his that confession to DM

And Baby your AB is back in action about time too

It seems that khushi managed to get the same arnav who used to pay pranks on the family not this one who was all arrogant and silent

Wow she sure has changed him

Seems true love can change anyone even ASR

So true!

Aww isnt that just good

She gave them there arnav once again who changed and closed himself off after his parents death

Abbb aap unki naa fikar kariye he is back

But don't underestimate khushi either

If she can do this to your brother she can also resist him too

You are so right!

So let the games begin geet

Ahhh well lets see what maan is doing now

What with his rejection of geet playing on his mind whats gotten into him

Dadi he is running can you believe it

All those excuses he is using to avoid one certain someone

Uff kya karrein yaar

Dono bhai behen ne toh bgahne ka plan bana diya hai


They aint gonna make it easy for them are they


But then they shouldn't either right

That's some excuse you made there mate very naughty lying to your dadi

She knows that its just an excuse mate

But guess he don't wanna tell her either why he is going

 Don't wanna complicate the matter with dadi knowing right

Yeah use your sis and her hubby as an excuse too

As if she don't know that you are doing this to avoid someone

Shame she don't know that someone is geet only

Who else but her can make him do this naa

Of ciurse he cant miss their wedding

Although given his current state you never know he might just skip that just to avoid geet

But he wont will he

No! No! He cant! After K and La's parents' death, there is no one to do Kanyadaan! It is Maan and Dev who are doing it!Big smile

After all its not only his best friend's wedding but that of his sister's too

So not coming to that will cause lots of problem

As if he can miss it like you said arnie and aki wont participate in their wedding rituals without him naa

So he will come with annie and jun huh okay that's fine

Hmmm actually dadi there is someone who can make him change his mind and that's feet she is trying to do just that from this point onwards so chill

Aha so NT heard them good

Now she can tell geet as well about this

So geet is aware of all this naa

Bechari is making plan to make him fall in love and he is running

Ahhh so she told dev to talk to geet good idea

Bless she is so excited about her plans for maan

Wait till she knows about maan decision

Dev is like hain she sure is chirpy after what happened

Oh dev she has moved on from that now

All she is focusing on is how to make him confess again

Sorry did she say bro pe line maarne ke liye to dev


Wow she sure is out to get maan aint she cool

Ufff kya yaar inke office romance ke plans gaye pani mein

Well that can still happen after their wedding right

How can he miss the wedding my dear

Yup that wedding is gonna bring them closer again

That's the spirit dear make sure he falls for you again

Hmm so she is letting have his time off from her

And then when they meet well he wont know what hit him

As ASR younger sister is out to get him

Though MSK wont make it easy either but there where the fun lies right

Ahhh so khushi is leaving too

Wow she cant remember the time spent with her sister but with arnie

Now that's something ehhh

Sweetie it aint tainted never say that

And once you marry that man am sure you will be happy that this happened

Well you will be able to as you will be with him naa

Kpi nahin khushi that's okay

Yaad toh unhe karr sakti hain naa

He might not be yours but you can think about him

No she wont be able to will she

As if that's possible not when DM is in the other camp now

Haila! Never realised that! DM ne toh party badal li!LOL

Yes goodbye indeed but just for few days and then hello arnie

Then he wont spare ya at all

Wow he is giving her too time off from him

And then wham he will be there for her forever

She wont know what hit her naa

But of course she too wont make things easy for him either

Afreen toh bas aapki hain ji

Aur soni maan ki

So let this love game begin yipeee

Cheers for pm

Happy days are here now woohooo

Thanks for the review! Enjoyed reading it a lot!Big smile

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 25 March 2014 at 1:24pm

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