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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 107)

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Posted: 09 March 2014 at 4:13am | IP Logged
LOVED ARNAV'S TORTURE AND GEET'S BAK BAK
WHAT IDEAS GEET GAVE TO ARNAV
DADIMAAN TOOK A PROMISE FROM GEET THAT SHE WILL NOT ACCEPT DEFEAT AND WILL MAAN OVER

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Posted: 11 March 2014 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Hello folks,

    This post is for my those readers who are interested in knowing my progress on compilation of DFL Notes. So here are the details:
1. I have completed the fat diary.
2. The travel book will be done only after I get others done coz there are too many ideas in them.
3. I am almost done through this thread for the wish list. Only last 20 pages are left. After that I will post the updated wish list! I am sure I can get it done in next three days. 
4. About my old DFL notes, due to exams I was not able to got through it after Chapter 24! But I am sure I can clear it fully in next five six days!
5. Songs will be sorted later on after all the ideas are put up in a single page and sorted properly.

    Also even though the compilation is still going on, I will keep on working on the story writing. I will just refer to each of my idea collections whether it is on PC or in my travel book or in my old Notes or even the song list. I will just go through each and every one of them every time I will sit to write a new chapter till I have the compiled notes ready. Once the compilation is done, I can just sit and write without worrying whether I was missing something crucial. (And knowing my forgetfulness I will forget somethingLOL)

Phew! Thats it for today! Tomorrow I will put up the progress along with a teaser!

Thank you for reading and take care,
Kalpana

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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the teaser.

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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Hello folks,

      I am here to put up a teaser for the Sunday update! But before I do that I want to say something to you. First of all, thank you guys! Thank you so much for reading my stories. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! A big hug for you all Hug Now you must be thinking - Ab ise kya hogaya? You see for compiling my DFL notes I had to read through all my older chapters. Now you must be thinking - Yeh old chapters kyun padh rahi hai? If you remember the diary scene which I put up before the Payash engagement, that scene was used again recently to make Geet realise that she is Soni -  like that there are many scenes in older chapters which when I wrote them, I had planned to use them during the current track. But many of those ideas were not written down so I am going through old chapters and its notes to remember them and put them into my future chapters' plan. So where was I? Oh yes! I was talking about thanking you guys! So while I was reading the old chapters I realised that it took me 15 minutes to read each chapter and I am supposed to be the writer and had read these chapters more than three times two years back while editing it plus these chapters are barely 3000 words. If these chapters took me this much time, how much time it must have took you guys to read it? Especially the later ones which were nearly of 5000 - 6000 words! And yet you read my stories and not only liked them but commented on them. So thank you! Now I know why I dont have too many readers, itne lambe lambe chapters kaun padhega yaar?LOL Jokes apart I really appreciate you guys reading it and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for it. 

    Now that we are talking about my compilation why dont I tell you the progress of my compilation. I have read till Chapter 30 of DFL till now and hope to read till Chapter 53 in next two - three days. I wont read after Chapter 53 coz they dont have scenes I can use in the next few chapters. Hey while I am talking about DFL Old chapters I have to tell all of you that if you are ever bored, go read DFL from Chapter 10 to Chapter 26 for timepass. Coz most of the scenes are comic and it gets you laughing like anything. Believe me! Main writer hokar bhi itna hasi hoon aaj that Parents got worried for me! Ab inhein kaun samjhaaye ki main kyun has rahi hoon? The Chapters have Maaneet and Arhi in nok-jhok and Khushi and Geet's bossiness over their lovers and Maan and Arnav's confusion with the situation is hilarious. So do read it if you are bored and want some timepass. 

    Also while you are reading old chapters, Read Chapter 16 and Chapter 21 coz I will be using scenes from those chapters in the next update! Phew! Enough of me blubbering about my story! Let me give you the teaser for next update (for which I am sure all of you are waiting)! Here it is!

Above on that dressed in black Jeans and black shirt, Maan made her heart beat literally race. Haaye! Kaale rang se itna pyaar kabhi nahi hua jitna aaj ho raha hai! Suddenly, someone nudged her from side and she heard Arnav's voice whispering in her ear, "Motor mouth! Aur thode dair ghoorogi toh Di ko bhi poori kahaani pata chal jaayegi! Blink!"

And as you have taken the pain to read through the bak bak above I will put up another teaser for you guys!Wink Here it is!

He pulled her close and glared at her, "Tumne meri cheezon ko haath lagaane ki himmat kaise ki?" Geet did not react to his anger leaving Maan baffled. She just smiled at him, "Arre! Main nahi karti toh kaun karta? Aap yakeen karo ya na karo par main aapse pyaar karti hoon aur aapki hone waali patni hoon. Aur yeh sab main roj karoongi. Aur yeh mera haq hai. Aap kya khud Babaji bhi Mujhe yeh sab karne se nahi rok sakte. Toh aap is sabki aadat daal lo."

Arre! I gave you two teasers for Maaneet and not a single one for Arhi! Arre re! Yeh toh galat hua! Toh theek hai! Yeh lo! Arnav aur Khushi ka teaser!Big smile

Everyone laughed loudly as Aakash blushed mildly at Geet's words while Paayal hid her face in Khushi's neck. Khushi frowned, "Arre! Humaari Jiji aur Jijaji ko chidhaayiye mat!" Aakash smiled at Khushi, "Dekho Geetto! Yeh hoti hai behnein! Tumhaari tarah nahi jo chidhaane nikle!" Geet's jaw dropped and she glared at him.

Arre! Ismein toh Arnav tha hi nahi! Toh yeh lo! Ek aur teaser!

"Main tumhein apna banaake rahunga Khushi!" Khushi shook her head, "Nahi! Hum aisa kabhi hone nahi denge! Agar aisa hua toh hum apna naam hi badal daalenge!" Arnav shrugged and smiled at her amused, "Good decision. By the way, how is Khushi Arnav Raizada as your new name?

Mazaa aaya kya? Aaya na? Achcha! Chalo! Mazaa aaya toh lambe comments do! Chaar chaar teaser diye hain! Toh lambe comments toh bante haina? Toh chalo! Mujhe achche achche comments do aur mere dil ko khush kardo!Big smile 

Thank you for reading and may God bless you,
Kalpana 

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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 11:42am | IP Logged
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Awesome teasers. Looking forward to the Sunday and the Dhamakas and fireworks in DFL...


Edited by fffan123 - 13 March 2014 at 12:18am

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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
simply waiting for update dear... Day Dreaming
tempting tease... worth watching khushi  n maans face when arnav and geet takes the control of their love life...ROFL

yippeee... waiting with full enthusiasm...
full support to geet n arnav to make maans and khushi life miserable with there nok jhoks... hayyye  ... me blushingBlushing

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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chavvi16

Ahhh so its time for arhi side of things right


Yup! And I finally got some time to reply your review! Sorry for the delay and thanks a lot for the long review! Loving it!


And a lot will happen for them too

But after this one all shall be okay

And lets hope it will be back to normal

Although are our maneet and arhi even normal


LOL


Hmmm that depends on our pov right

After this one things will be fun like you said

And am glad for that

It was hard seeing them so sad and forlorn man


I know!


Time to bring some laughter and mischief back huh

That will be rocking for sure

After all this isn't some rona dhona story is it

No its just opposite of that right


Exactly!


So lets get down to it

And hope will put this up in time for you to view next day

That will be good


Yes! I read it next day and as usual you made my day!Big smile


Ahh so we start with dadi NT and nani convo

Lets see what nani is calling to tell dadi

Arrey haan shaadi toh lucknow mein hogi

After all ladki waale lucknow mein hain

Aur barat le karr raizadas jaayenge naa

I really forgot about that oops


Actually I never thought of it that way!Embarrassed I just wanted all the leads under one roof top so that my future plots goes smoothly. Now as Raizadas and Khuranas have their own mansions, bringing under one rooftop means getting them out of Dilli so brought them to Lucknow to Sheeshmahal!Smile


Well am sure the khuranas shall come to lucknow for the double or maybe more than double wedding right


Nahi! Sirf double hi wedding hogi! You will understand it when I will update the story!Big smile


Parivaar jaise ho nahin nani parivaar hi hain

After all payal aur khushi maan aur dev ki muh boli behne hai


So true!


Toh khuranas ka aana toh taiye hain

See even dadi said the same

That they are from girls side naa

So they shall all be going to lucknow where things will change naa

Hehehehe okay let those games begin okay not yet but soon enough

I know if khuranas wotn be there well that will be sad

Warna geet aur maan ka kya hoga

Plus maan needs to be there to support his sisters naa

Dadi ladke waale baraat le karr jaate hain ladki waale nahin

Though it would be easier if they got married in delhi right

So it wasn't guptas who decided to have wedding in lucknow

But anj okay I think that will work

After all that's was the place where arhi met for the first time and payash too

Gosh I remember their first meeting of these two couples in sheesh mahal

How khushi called arnav a rakshas

And payash cute meeting too


Haila! You remember them? I thought everyone must have forgotten it by now! 2 saal hone ko aaye us chapter ko! Touched that you still remember it!Big smile


Guess anj reasons for getting them married there is right too

After all the bad and sad memories that place has seen time to replace those with new and happier memories right

Okay so they are all set for the wedding

But surely the wedding wont be happening for a while right

That's will be too early

Anyway before the actual wedding we have lots of pre wedding ritual that will happen first

So there is time for actual wedding

And things being the way they were

Hello dadi is not sabko but family member yaar

Toh unhe nahin batayengi toh kisse batayengi

After all dadi and khuranas gotta know about it all

They are family too naa arnav

Yup of course they are family yaar

And after marriage of certain arhi and maneet they shall be family

After all behen de rahe hain ek doosre ko yaar


LOL


Even if they aren't blood sisters but they are sisters nonetheless

Once again I am going off the tangent

Iss ladki ka kuch nahin ho sakta hai ji

Okay so she did tell the same story to others

That's why he was shaking his head

Ufff yaar ek baar agar nani bhi shuru ho jaaye well no stopping her either right

And there nani drops a bomb on arnav

He so didn't see that coming

But dude why would she go with you guys and buaji

After all she has less time to spend with her sisters naa

Once they are married well she cant meet them so frequently

So she will wanna spend some time with them

And help with gupta side of preps too

How much will garima and the brides do on their own right

Another helping hand will be needed and that hand is khushi


So true!


Arrey waah yeh toh khushi ki bat hai

NK bhi aa rahe hain

Matlab samajhte ho haan iska logon

Apni la ke kiye bhi koi aa raha hai

Her love interest is also coming

No wonder you said things will be on track

You have prepared for it all dear

Tussi great ko ji sach mein


Thank you!EmbarrassedBig smile


Chalo things are working out for everyone slowly slowly

Hum bhi excited hain nani that nk is coming


NK will enter in Chapter 67!


What can be better news

Well I can think of some more but for now this is good news for sure

I have realised something arnav aur maan ki zindagi mein kaafi ladies hain who can give other run for their money when it comes to talking

I mean juts take nani for example now right


LOLROFL Now wonder yeh dono itne quiet hain! Koi bolne dega tab bolenge na?LOL


Arnav does it matter when she is going

Of course it does what a silly question am asking right

Hello anything that is to do with khushi is his business

Even though he was trying to show that it isn't

Oh ho so she is leaving this soon huh

Well what else will she do here man

After all for who and what should she stay back no reason she has now


So true! The last statement seems so sad!Cry


Nani kinki shaadi mein

Aap ke hisaab se arnav aur la ki shaadi mein

But that cant happen now can it

Man she dropped another bomb on him

That she is leaving today itself awww

Dude did ya forget she has no rights on you now

After all who aapki ab kya lagti hain

Toh ruk karr apne aap ko aur kyun dukh dengi ji

We all knew that you still loved her

But that damn ego of yours and your anger just made things worse

Dude we never suspected your love for her

But of course no one was happy with his behaviour with khushi either

Her betrayal well am sure soon you shall know it wasn't her betrayal

But all thanx to you that this happened

And since I read last line of this update am sure that he does find out the reason of her supposed betrayal good about time too

No your journey is for much longer and for life but at this moment you guys were together only till here

Later things shall change

But for time being you are her jiju to be like aki man

Aaj jaa ke inhe realise hua ki shaadi mein jyada samay nahin hai

Man he was kinda sleeping till now


ROFL Loved the last two lines!LOL


More like not focusing on the bigger picture right

That in 18 days time he will be her jiju and not saiyyan

About time he woke up to that thought man

Ek nazar se kya hoga arnav

You know it she knows and we sure as hell know it that seeing her one more time wont change anything

But if that makes him happy and if arhi meet for one last time before she goes back who am I to stop him

Waise kya excuse use karne waale hain aap unse milne ke liye

Not that he needs any excuse since he is guptas to be damaad but still


He is ASR! He doesnot need excuses!ROFL


Ahhh dev did see it all

The confrontation between maneet

Well he wanted to make sure all goes well

But he forgot that his brother is such dusht danav

Who is hell bent on ruining his life by letting his love go

Aww poor geet went away crying

But am sure not for long will she be crying

At least I hope not right


of course not! This is new and improved Geet!She does not give up! She fights for what she believes is hers! But yeh sab main tumhein kyun bata rahi hoon? By now you ave already read the further chapters and know what will happen!LOL Main bhi kitni bhullakkad hoon! Bhool hi gayi that I am replying older review!LOL


Okay sorry so he didn't hear it all

But he knows that his bro has done something wrong for sure

And he is spot on for sure

Goes to show he knows his brother pretty well naa

Your bro has done it again hasn't he

Though shouldn't really be surprised that he did what he did naa

Dev is so right in thinking that

Come on MSK will not make life easy for himself or for other to make it easy for them to get his lost happiness back

In fact he will make it hard for others and himself to get his love back naa

I so agree with dev there


LOL


MSK is the most stubborn fella along with of course ASR

 Dono hi ek hi thalli ke chatte batte hain


My reaction to last line!ROFL


Kitna bhi samjhao ya inke liye kuch karo maante hi nahin hain dono

Well he may be the most stubborn but he is still human

Of course rejecting geet love like that cant be easy on him

But he thinks he had to do this

Why because he doesn't wanna go through another heart break if geet left him again

Ufff kya karein inka yaar

Dev you will know when he tells you what happened between your bro and bhabhi

Itna kuch keh diya aur ab ro rahe hain

Guess it just isn't easy for him to risk his heart from being broken again

But then if he doesn't then also he shall be crying

So this situation is just catch 22 aint it


Errr...  what does Catch 22 mean? I forgot!Embarrassed


You might not have the strength to love her but we hope she does

So she can this time support you

Her love will make you fall in love with her

This time she cant afford to lose you either

Dude I don't know why you cant believe it that he gave up on love

Of course he has dude

He may look strong and all but he too is human naa

There is only so much he can take

And I think losing soni was the last straw

But that don't mean you have to give up on them

Or geet gives up on her love

Cause that will bring them nothing but misery for sure

Now all is on geet for sure just as I suspected

And she is his last hope for maan to come back to normalcy

It all depends on geet how she will win her love back and make her love belive in their love

Hain kuch jyada hi love love ho gaya re


LOL


Of course he still loves her

That is one surety my man

You cant just fall outta love just because one decides to give up on the said love mate

Pyaar who sirf inse ki karte the karte hain aur karte rehenge

Who baat aur hai ki iss pyaar parr unka vishwaas uth gaya jab geet unhe bhul gayi parr pyaar abhi bhi kayam hai

Yup like I said only geet can make maan belive in his love again

And that is for certain

It might take a while but it shall happen dev fear not

Although how can he not fear what with his bro breaking down like this

I swear itna toh yeh tab bhi nahin toote the jab geet sorry soni inhe bhool gayi thi

Koi nahin geet hai naa ji inke liye

Ahhh back to arhi I see

Arrey yaar yahan bhi toh dukh hi dukh hain

Both couples aren't having the best time are they but this phase too is temporary

Dukh aaya hai toh jaayega bhi ji

So khushi is getting ready to go back to her amma and sisters

I know that's sad but what can she do either right

There is only so much she could take being near him and not be with him naa

Yeh bhi toh insaan hain ji

I know dear fret not this was supposed to happen

And soon you will get your lost happiness back

Oh dear even thinking that her love is gonna be her jiju well that is just hard

Why did this have to happen

Her love isn't hers anymore is it

Its gonna be her la di's uff the heart ache

Dil toh nahin manega naa ki arnav inke jiju honge saiyyan ye bajaye

Well it's a good thing that wont happen

Warna teen zindagi barbaad ho jayengi and that will be more sad than at moment


I know! I really hate it when in serials someone sacrifices their love to someone else! Kyunki is mein nuksaan teeno ka hai aur koi faayda nahi!Cry Kyun aise stupid decisions lete hain log pata nahi! Par mujhe kya? Aise decisions ki wajah se toh DFL bana!LOL


Even I wonder the same why did this have to happen

But if it didn't happen how else would this story be spiced up


See! Even you think the same thing!


Plus I have said it before if they got their love so easily whats the fun in that right


Agreed!


So this is test of sorts to see how they would cope without one another

That's another matter that they aren't coping so well

But this too is temporary phase naa

Seems even the radio is in agreement with khushi aww


LOL


Iss kyun ka kya jawab dein khushi

Mujhe nahin lagta iss kyun ka koi theek jawab hoga jo aapko rahat de

Aww seeing her like this or any characters I don't like

But this too is part of better things to come so that's fine too

Ahhh one side khushi is sad the other her veerji is sad too

Well more like all four are sad only

Aww all he can think of is geet

She is his love so of course his heart would remember her only naa

How can it forget the reason for its beat man

Ahh yes that vision of hers will haunt if for sure

Making her cry never made him happy

But what could he do he just couldn't get himself to believe that she wont leave him again

Hain yeh bhi radio on karr rahe hain waah kya baat hai

Dono bhai behen apne dukh radio se sang bant rahe hain


LOL Funny line!


Maan don't be shocked dude

I know the song is enrapturing what you are feeling

Well this always happen with songs and this story how the songs are just perfect on any given situation not that one is saying other stories don't have the same oopsies


LOL


Not him too man

Though guess cant blame him for asking that question either

After all dono ki situation ek hi hai ji

Nasha toh who aapka hain maan

Aur uss nashe ko bhulna naamumkin hai maan

That still wont stop him from wanting to forget her though

Ahh the third person in this tragedy is here too arnav

So he finally reached to see his khushi or is it afreen for last time before the whole pre weding ritals start

Can someone tell me how come peeps just come and go from these houses

As in gupta house KM and shantivan koi bhi ghussa chala aata hai and no one knws


My reaction for the last two lines - ROFL I never thought of it that way! When i need someone in the scene i just put that person there not realising how it would seem to the readers! Funny! But then, serials mein bhi toh kai baar yeh hota hai!Wink I am just following them!LOL


Okay I exaggerate there but you know what I mean

And why on earth do peeps leave their doors open that's just asking for trouble

I cant believe am spouting such rubbish when such intense scene is going on


I just love it when you spout - as you call it - rubbishes. LOLThey really make my day and always get me to lighter mood!LOL


Yeh babaji aur DM mera kuch nahin ho sakta

Ahh there is the last of the four who is being miserable at the moment

And no one knows that these guys are so sad which aint true these guys know how sad the others are but cant do anything for it either

Geet jyada fast na drive kari accident ho gaya toh

And with her frame of mind that's even more dangerous aint it

Whats with these guys and wanting to get as far as possible from whom they should be coing closer

But then cant blame them can we

Jab dil toota hai toh jisne dil toda use door hi jaana chahoge naa

Which is what they are doing aint they

So she too is listening to the same time huh

Wow what a connection that is

One song has them all connected with their hearts too

Sorry geet but I think that song will make you think more of maan words instead of making you forget them

This isn't nightmare but reality though no less that nightmare too must add

For not only geet but maan arnav and khushi

OMG could those words be more apt for maan or what yaar


I know! Never did I think i would get such a perfect song for this moment! I did not plan any song in this part earlier but when I heard this song I was like this is perfect for the scene! So had to put it up!


Aww now he is lost in those moments with geet

And of course he wants to move on from those as if that's possible sorry maan no can do

Ahhh so true khushi you have lost him but not forever my dear

Don't be silly geet

You cant stop love from happening

And this was all destiny's game again which brought you face to face with your love again

You couldn't have fought against your fate dear

And nor will your love for him which was already in some corner of heart would have stopped you from loving him truly again

Wow those lines sure depicted her turmoil didn't it yup

Dude time waits for no man and cant be rewound

But it sure can make help you get your loved one back as well

Chalo at least someone saw arnav but it was buaji who saw him not khushi

Not that it matters as she is leaving arhi alone so that's good

They can still have their last meet with one another before she leaves for lucknow

Waah kya baat hai buaji aapne toh yeh aur bhi asaan karr diya arhi ke liye

He came to meet her only now you just gave him reason to see her too

Though how she shall react to his presence is another matter

The one from whom she is running away from has come to see her oh teri

Acha she didn't hear her buaji well she is too lost in her sad sad thoughts naa

And its better she not know that he is here or she will be even sadder

Parantu inka milna bhi hai zaroori

You aint the only one who is gonna lose khushi she too will lose you

And not to forget the other couple

 Though unka matter different hai since they aren't about to marry someone else like arnav

Ahh yes her having an accident is what me worried about too

But then her tears cant stop not today when her love rejected her

And why because he thinks she might leave him again

Of course that aint gonna happen thankfully

Arrey baap re yeh lines toh sach mein match karr rahi hai inke emotions ke saath


Haina? Even I was shocked how each line depicted any one of the four's situation! This song seem to be made just for my DFL!


Don't be silly khushi

How is it all your fault dear not all of it

Some of it and majority is his fault too

Had he not kept your relationship a secret well they wouldn't have chosen la for him

And had he told you his identity things wouldn't have gone this far

Damn I cant help but blame this man here sorry parr kya karun yaar


No No! No need for sorry! You are perfectly right! Sab is gadhe ke karaamaat hain!


Though she is right about one thing three lives are gonna be ruined if this marriage happens

Aww sadness hi sadness hain aaj

Kuch jyada hi parr jald hi khushiyan bhi waapis aayengi naa

Soni forgot you but geet still remembers you dear

So why are you not letting geet soothe you with her love

Wait they are one and the same right

Abb jisne dard diya hai wohi toh uss dard ko mitayega

That's if he gives her a chance naa

Well shutting off the radio will not stop all these thoughts about geet go away either maan

Dude she never heard her buaji so she don't know you are here

And its not like she doesn't wanna see you either

Even though it hurts to see you in front of her

Well love can give you such sweet pain cant it

So he decided to go see her for himself

That I think was good move for sure

Aww there is her room khushi is looking at her love pic since that's all she can do

Since her love don't wanna see her personally after her supposed betrayal

Hmm just in time he came and saw her with his pic

Thank god for a change h was at the right place at right time


LOL


 Think he will find out about the whole reason for her doing what she did

Nahin arnav who aapki picture nahin hain aapke hamshakal ki hai


ROFL Did I ever tell you how much I love your sarcasm? No really! Your sarcastic responses really makes me roll on the floor in laughter! 


The things this dude says man unbelievable

Duh she loves you so it will be your pic she has naa

Ahh she is letting her tears flow for her first love loss

Aww man I feel so bad for them all now

Ahhh now that's the perfect place to have this song of IPK

Acha sab inka karaya hai

Aap ne toh kuch bhi naa kiya arnav


ROFL


Well you will know soon enough if it was all due to her or also due to what you hi mate

Well she is asking for forgiveness for lying to you not betraying you

Dude she never betrayed you but same cant be said about you

Seems the time is here for him to know why she thinks he isn't a liar or betrayed her when in fact he did lie to her

That's where you are all wrong my dear

He toh knew all about your identity and still he didnt tell his to you which is why you guys are in this mess

She thinks he didn't lie hah if only she knew right

Sweetie he knew it all from the beginning only you didn't know the same

He knew who he was falling in love with you didn't my dear

Actually khushi you were bang on right in blaming him you just ddint know it

Dude aab yaad aya ki inhone aapse yeh sab kaha tha

If only he had paid attention then well what to say


I know!


Abbe gadhe (sorry for calling him that but just had to there please don't kill me peeps) of course she believed ya you were lying but she didn't know that did she


No no! Go ahead! Call him gadha! he deserves it!LOL


Well she did all that because she knew that her la di was chosen to be your bride

Jab yeh rishta aaya tha la ke liye unhe nahin pata tha naa ki aap hi la ke hone waale who hain

Had she known she could have told you and you could have sorted it out before things got this far

But then how would she know that when he hid his identity from her

Bade aaye sach jaane waale


LOL for the last line!


Will you be able to hear the truth mate

When she isn't wrong in accusing you for lying to her

Beta sab saamen aa jayega wait kariye

And he will come to know of it all now

He didn't even have to ask her she just told him like that

She was all happy for her sister and also happy that once la and payal got married it would be her turn not knowing that her la di was gonna get married to her love only

And why she didn't know that because a certain someone never told her of his identity

Ab toh inhe solid jhatka lagega hi zaroor

Haiyye kitne aspen dekhe the aur sab choor choor hog aye naa

Waah kya sapne the yaar

So cute and beautiful but all went down the drain didn't they when she came to know of reality of things man

Awww man it wasn't easy for her when she came to know that you were not her groom but that of her sister whom she loves so dearly

So she didn't say anything because she knew he would say no and that they would work it all out

But then nothing like that happened did it

In fact just the opposite happened didn't it man

Hmmm yes that would or could have happened but of course it never got to that

Oh hello where are you lost now

Do you realise she was hoping you would make things alright but that clearly wasn't meant to be

If only that had happened

But once again that would have been too easy for them

Utna mazaa nahin aata if that had actually took place naa


I know!


Uff his proposal came at wrong time

She had hoped he would get the family and ask for her hand

But with his proposal she didn't know what to do

Though she loved him but she couldn't accept after al she cant let la suffer due to her could she which is why she didn't react to your proposal

Hmmm she was in solid dilemma wasn't she

On one hand was her love and the other her parents trust on her which she kinda broke by meeting and falling in love with ya kinda

Ahhh and he finally knows what a mistake he did by flrting with la and ruining his love with his own hands good about time he knew that


I know!FINALLY! Even I was heaving a sigh of relief when I wrote this chappy! Finally!


Abb samjhe la ke saath uss tarah flirt karr ke aapne apne pairon mein khuhadi mari thi

And gave your family the green signal for your and la marriage proposal

Yes due you are the blooming reason for this mess and not her


LOL


Aur impulsive hoyiye josh mein aake aapne kya karr diya ji

Well she is feeling lighter and he just started feeling burdened

Uff arnav what did you do in your hasty decisions man

No way would he do that to take revenge from you but then what else would she think of it he didn't know naa that he was agreeing to marry thee wrong sister

Yes it was mu on both sides too

Her thinking that he is doing it all to make her jealous and revenge

And he didn't know that payal had another sister and agreed to marry who he thought was khushi but was in fact la

She was in right dilemma man she couldn't say about her situation as things could have gone bad for both the families so she did what she thought was right for the family and sacrificed her love

Yup that's the reason why she did all this for you for her sister

And what did you do arnav you demeaned her sacrifice and taunted her for that how could you

Well how could she consult you mate you hadn't left her with any choice

Had you at least told her of your identity then she could have told you about la being her sister and all but you didn't

She broke your trust and you didn't break hers by lying to her

Is he still freaking focusing on her lies and breaking of trust what about his man

Why is it that he still cant see beyond himself there

Though he is right about the ruination of three lives

Well this was one hell of a rollercoaster

With maneet and their heart break

And arhi and the truth of it all coming out

So now its time for some action and that's gonna happen and soon cool man

Cheers for pm kya chapter tha yaar solid


Happy that you liked the chapter so much! I toh totally loved your review and fully enjoyed it!
Hope i am able to reply rest of your reviews faster than this one!
Take care
With lots of hugs and kisses,
Kappa


Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 13 March 2014 at 2:21pm
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Posted: 12 March 2014 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by honeygrape


loved the part...finallyy arnav khushi's truth is also out...
ahh...how did u manage writing nani's language soo welll...the correct slang ... ClapClap do you know to speak like that??Shocked
thanku for the part...do continue sooonBig smile
Thanks for the review!
About writing Naaniji's language, what can I say? I have a gift of subconsciously learning and mimicking languages and accents from childhood and that habit is yet to go! I dont know when I pick it up but few days after listening to people speak in a language I can copy their accent and their style of speaking easily! I can speak two three lines of marwadi, gujarati, punjabi, haryanvi, north style hindi etc all thanks to the serials I have watched in so many years!LOLWink So give me a serial with a regional language similar to Hindi and I can learn the language in maximum a week!LOLBig smile

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