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Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). (Page 102)

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teaser
excellent...
the khadoos Arnav is back...
hahaha...
Geet has once again become the motormouth of Arnav...
but why is he shouting and what did Geet do?
Arnav dont forget its this Geet who made u see sense and u are back to ur old attitude towards her...
yeh ladka sudhrega nahi...
hehehe...
cont soon dear...

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Originally posted by spvd

teaser
excellent...
the khadoos Arnav is back...
hahaha...
Geet has once again become the motormouth of Arnav...
but why is he shouting and what did Geet do?
Arnav dont forget its this Geet who made u see sense and u are back to ur old attitude towards her...
yeh ladka sudhrega nahi...
hehehe...
cont soon dear...
Do you remember some days back you asked a wish where Geet annoys Arnav and Arnav is tortured by her bak bak? The wish is on Page 18 of this Thread!Big smile I simply fulfilled that wish! That teaser was part of that scene!Wink
Thanks for your comments!

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                                    TEASER FOR TODAY GUYS!


Daadima had the medicines with water and NT got up to walk away when Daadima caught her hand and made her sit beside her. NT worriedly glanced at Dev. Daadima mumbled so sadly that NT had to strain her ears to listen to her, "Mere Maan bete ko kya ho gaya hai? Jab se Soni gayi hai tab se ek dum badal gaye hain!


Next chapter will be up tomorrow! Could not complete it today!

Take care and be patient till tomorrow,
Kalpana


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teaser
nice...
dont worry Daadima ur bahu Geet is smarter than ur khadoos pota...
she has planned how to make him accept her...
u are gonna be entertained at Lucknow now...
cont soon dear...

PS - oh so thats that...well cant wait for that...in teaser i couldnt remember that but in the update would have but now that u have said cant wait for the update...

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CHAPTER 66 (A) TEN DAYS LATER!

 

 

 

Day 1 at Sheeshmahal

Friday

Place - Entrance of Sheeshmahal

 

      Anjali stood on the threshold of Sheeshmahal with tears in her eyes as she took in her childhood home in front of her. She had come here last year too but this year the significance of their visit seemed to make the house more special to her. She saw the hall where her Chote used to play, the balcony overlooking the hall from where her mother used to stand and call for them, the Mandir in the left side where daily whole family used to pray Devi Maiyya. She was brought out of her thoughts by a hand on her shoulder. She turned to see her Chote smiling sadly at her. She hugged him tightly and he kissed her head trying to comfort her. After a while, she pulled away and entered the house holding her Chote's hand. This house had seen nothing but pain but now Anjali was determined to fill it with happiness. Behind Anjali and Arnav, Aakash smiled as he remembered that this was the place, this very hall where he had first met his Miss. Cham-Cham. Will she remember it too? Following Aakash was rest of the family and behind them Daadima, Dev and Naintara entered. Anjali stopped mid hall and turned to smile at the both the clans, "Yeh hai humaara Sheesh mahal jise yahaan ke log pyaar se kothi ya badi kothi bulaate hain! Ab tak is ghar ne sirf dard dekha hai lekin hum chaahte hain ki is ghar mein kuch dino ke liye sirf hasi ki kilkaariyaan gunje! Toh aap sabko humse promise karna hoga ki aap sab in dono shaadiyon ko poori tarah enjoy karenge aur is ghar mein agle aath dus din ke liye khushiyaan hi khushiyaan hogi!" All of them listening to her, smiled and nodded. Anjali continued speaking, "Waise humne yahaan aane se pehle hi yahaan ke naukaron se keh diya tha ki ghar ki saaf safaai karde aur humaare Chote ke assistant Aman ke haathon sabke rehne ke liye kamro ka plan bhi bhijwa diya taaki saare kamre ek dum perfect aur aapke individual tastes ke hisaab se ho! Toh aayiye main aap sabko apna apna kamra dikhaa deti hoon!" She smiled at all of them and walked away with everyone following her. Sheeshmahal resembled a small castle and hence, had many floors each floor having many rooms in them. Anjali had made sure that all the families had their family members in the nearby rooms and Khuranas, Raizadas and Guptas had their own floor to themselves so that everyone would get ready for all the functions without any hassle. She even left some rooms in ground floor for far away relatives and some corporate clients.  

 

    As everyone followed Anjali, Naaniji grabbed Daadima's hand, "Maan Bitwa kahaan hai Savitri?" Geet perked up at the mention of Maan and listened to the conversation carefully. Daadima smiled, "Maan bete Mumbai gaye hain kuch dino se. Aajaayenge Annie aur Arjun ke saath!" Dev heard their conversation and spoke up, "Dadi moms! Aap dono Maan Bro ki tension mat lijiye! Meri abhi unse baat hui hai! Woh do ghante mein pahunch rahe hain Annie aur Arjun ke saath!" Geet grinned eagerly. Aayiye! Aayiye Maan! Aapki Geet aapki raah taak rahi hai!

 

   After reaching their rooms, all took their own time to get fresh and then gathered in the main hall where the elderly sat on the sofas and chairs and the young ones took to the bean bags except Anjali and Naintara who took to the sofas as Anjali could not sit on the bean bags due to her leg and Naintara was pregnant.

 

    While sitting down, Dev made sure he was sitting somewhere out of sight of the elders but near Naintara. As Geet passed by him, he grabbed her hand. Geet turned to look at him and he gestured her to sit near him. Geet sat nearby and NT winked at her. As the elders started chattering about the weddings and Aakash and Arnav discussed their work, Dev gestured Geet to come close and whispered, " You know Bro Mumbai jaane se pehle shaadi ke liye saari packing karke gaye the! Apne saath sirf do teen kapde leke gaye the!" Geet frowned, "Toh?" Dev adopted an innocent face, "Aur woh bag mere paas chod gaye the! Aur main us bag ko apne saath le aaya hoon!" Geet looked at him in confusion. Why was he telling her this? Dev rolled his eyes. Yeh samajh kyun nahi rahi hai? Then he remembered that she did not know everything about Soni and Maan's time together. Dev smirked, "Main yeh sab isliye keh raha hoon kyunki Soni jab humaare ghar pe rehti thi na tab woh hi Bro ka kamra sajaati thi, unke liye kapde choose karti thi, you know vagaira vagaira..." Dev trailed off but Geet got the hint. She grinned eagerly and then Dev spoke, "Toh chalein?" Geet giggled and they got up making sure no one noticed them. Dev squeezed NT's hand as he passed her and NT squeezed back signaling that she would cover for them.

 

    As Dev guided Geet on the arrangement of Maan's wardrobe and room, he told her about how Maan had gotten confused when Soni had started choosing clothes for him because she thought it was her duty. Geet laughed as Dev imitated Maan's anger and both continued doing the work while joking about Soni's antics.

 

 

 

Place - The Gupta House at Lucknow

   

    "Hum dekhte hain Amma!", Khushi hollered when the bell of their house rang. Her Amma, Buaji, Paayal and Lavanya were packing their things as they were to shift to Sheeshmahal in the evening. Amma had wanted to do her daughters' haldi, mehendi and marriage in their house but Raizadas and Khuranas had convinced the family that shifting to Sheeshmahal and doing all the rituals and wedding there would be convenient and less time consuming. After a lot of convincing Amma and Buaji had agreed and but kept a condition that the first thing after the marriage the brides and grooms will do is come to the Gupta House for Bidaai. Everyone had agreed to that and now everyone was packing and making sure nothing was left behind.

 

    Khushi opened the door but there was no one outside. She frowned in confusion and was about to close the door when her eyes fell on a Bouquet on the floor. She picked it up and was shocked to see that it consisted of her favorite flowers, Red roses. She gulped, her mind immediately flashing to Arnav taking her to the rose garden after asking her her favorite flower. She stared at it for a second and then shook her head. Nahi! Yeh Arnavji ka nahi ho sakta! She closed the door when her eyes reached the card attached to the bouquet. She gulped as she recognized that it was Arnav's writing. As she looked closely her eyes widened to impossible proportions. There written on the card was "To the future Mrs. KKGSR!" Khushi gulped. Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh Arnavji ne kya bhej diya! Her eyes filled with tears at the words and her mind went in shock as she mechanically placed the bouquet into her bag and packed it away. When her mother asked who was at the door Khushi lied that it was some kids playing pranks. But as the shock went away, anger rise to fore. How dare he! How dare he send her such a card when after 10 days he was going to marry her sister! Fuming in anger, she continued to pack.

 

 

 

Place - In front of Arnav's room at Sheeshmahal

 

     Lunch had just gotten over and Arnav was about to enter his room for some relaxation before Khushi's arrival. He knew very well that she must be fuming in anger because of the bouquet he had sent. He wanted to take rest before he started his effort to win her over. Just when Arnav was about to step in, his arm was grabbed from behind and he was dragged away to the nearby balcony. He was in shock for a second as it registered that his assaulter was his baby sister, Geet. As Geet sat him down in a wicket chair in the balcony and took the other chair in front of him she excitedly questioned him, "Toh bataayiye! Aapka plan kya hai?" "What plan?", Arnav was genuinely confused. Geet rolled her eyes, "Arre! Khushi ka dil jeetne ka plan!" Arnav frowned, "Woh plan? See it is like this...", suddenly he paused, "Main tumhein kyun bataaun mera plan?" Geet rolled her eyes again, "Arre! Buddhu! Bhool gaye! I am supposed to help you!" Arnav shrugged, "When I will need your help, I will call you!" Geet narrowed her eyes, "Matlab aapke paas koi plan nahi hai!" Arnav glared at her, "When did I say that?" Geet pouted, "Main koi buddhu nahi hoon! Sab samajhti hoon! Aapke paas koi plan nahi hai isliye kuch na bataane ka naatak kar rahe ho!" Arnav scowled, "What? You know what! Forget it! Even if I wanted to tell you my plans, I won't tell you now. I am not going to discuss my plans with you!" He got up when Geet piped up, "Arre! Aapke paas plan nahi hai toh naaraaz kyun ho rahe ho! Nahi hai toh nahi hai! Usmein kya hua? Main hoon na! Don't worry! Mere paas bahut saare ideas hain!" Arnav rolled his eyes and looked at her skeptically, "Oh really?" Geet nodded eagerly, "Infact, here is my perfect idea. Khushi ko kidnap kar lete hain! Aur tum dono ki mandir mein shaadi kara dete hain!" "WHAT?", Arnav roared and Geet shushed him. Arnav looked around making sure no one was listening and angrily whispered, "Tum paagal toh nahi ho gayi ho!" Geet pouted, "Idea pasand nahi aaya? Mere paas aur ek idea hai! Aap na marne ki acting karo! Woh daudti hui aapke paas aayegi!" Arnav shook his head. He prayed to Devi Maiyya to make sure that Maan did not turn insane due to Geet's antics after their marriage. He turned to her and mumbled sarcastically, "Isse bhi jyaada filmy idea nahi hai?" Geet smiled happily, "Haina! Aap na Sheeshmahal ke sab se oonche tower pe chad jaao aur announce kar do ki agar aapki shaadi Khushi se nahi hui toh aap wahin se jump karke apni jaan de denge!" What the! Arnav looked at her scared. Has his baby sister gone crazy? Agar wahaan mera pair phisla toh? I will be a goner before anyone could say ASR! Yeh ladki mujhe marwaake chodegi! Before he could say anymore, Geet continued to chatter about the various other ideas she had. Arnav shook his head and pinched his nose. He was sure he would get a headache soon at this rate. "You know what?", Arnav roared making Geet pause. He glared at her, "I will be able to plan agar tum do minute chup ho jaao toh! Main jaa raha hoon.!" Geet pouted, "Par kahaan?" Arnav growled at her, "Bachpan mein jaise tumhaari bak bak se bachne ke liye apne aapko apne kamre mein lock kar deta tha, waise hi aaj bhi lock hone jaa raha hoon!" He walked away swiftly leaving a confused Geet behind. Maine kya kiya?

 

    Arnav entered his room and locked it. After few minutes, he heard Geet calling him and knocking on the door. "Go away!", Arnav shouted but Geet continued to bang on his door. After few minutes, the knocking stopped and Arnav heaved a sigh of relief. Suddenly, he heard Geet shouting, "Agar abhi aapne yeh darwaaza nahi khola aur mujhe apna plan nahi bataaya toh main... main... haan ... main sabko bata dungi ki aapke dil mein kaun rehti hai!" Arnav's eyed widened. No! She wouldn't!

 

   Geet smirked and waited but the door did not open. She huffed and shouted, "AD! AD zara idhar ...", she was cut off as Arnav opened the door, grabbed her arm and yanked her in.

 

    Arnav glared at Geet while Geet grinned back. Arnav huffed and sat on the bed defeated. Geet grinned excitedly. AB was going to tell her the plan now! Yippee! Arnav took a deep breath, "Mera plan bahut simple hai! Main Khushi par itna pyaar jataaunga, itna pyaar jataaunga ki use haar maankar mere pyaar ko accept karna hi padega!" Geet frowned, "Par AB mujhe ek cheez samajh nahi aati! Aap Khushi ko manaane ke peeche itne kyun pade hain? Gharwaalon se ya AD se bol dete toh sab kuch do minute mein theek ho jaata! Gupta parivaarwaale Khushi se ek second mein haan bulwa lete!" Arnav smiled at her and spoke softly, "Yahi cheez main tumhein pooch sakta hoon! Tum bhi toh Di se kehke Maan se shaadi kar sakti ho, right? Di ke manaane par Maan bhi iss shaadi ke liye tayyaar ho jaata? Hmmm?" Geet smiled hesitantly as she understood the reasoning behind Arnav's decision. Arnav smiled sadly, "Hum dono unka dil jeetna chaahte hain Geet! Un par zabardasti apne aapko thopna nahi chaahte!" Geet patted Arnav' shoulder gesturing that she understood him and walked out of the room.

 

 

 

Place - Daadima's Room at Sheeshmahal

 

      Daadima sighed sadly as she sat on the sofa in the room. NT, who was looking through the medicine box for Daadi's daily after-lunch medicine and Dev, who was lurking around his wife, looked at Daadima worriedly. She had been sad for few days and Dev and NT both had only inkling as to why Daadima was sad. They felt that Maan might have been the reason behind Daadima's sadness. NT took the medicines and the glass of water and walked towards Daadima. She sat beside her and handed over the medicines. Daadima had the medicines with water and NT got up to walk away when Daadima caught her hand and made her sit beside her. NT worriedly glanced at Dev. Daadima mumbled so sadly that NT had to strain her ears to listen to her, "Mere Maan bete ko kya ho gaya hai? Jab se Soni gayi hai tab se ek dum badal gaye hain! Ek dum ghussail, ek dum serious! Muskuraana toh jaise bhool hi gaye hain! Humein Babaji se kuch nahi chaahiye NT! Bas humaara pehle waala Maan humein waapis dila do! Please NT Beta! Hum humaare Maan ko haste hue, khush hote hue dekhna chaahte hain! Hum unki shaadi dekhna chaahte hain! Unki zindagi baste hue dekhna chaahte hain! Humein aur kuch nahi chaahiye! Aur kuch nahi!" Saying this Daadima hugged NT and started weeping softly. Seeing this Dev came running towards them and kneeled in front of Daadima. He shared an alarmed glance with NT and then after a second he nodded to her signaling her that it was time they told her everything.  NT closed her eyes in relief and Dev spoke up, "Daadima! Hum aapse kuch kehna chaahte hain!" Daadima pulled away from NT and focused on Dev. Dev started telling her the story of Geet and Maan. He did not give all the details; just that Geet had fallen for Maan but Maan was not accepting Geet's love. He ended the narration with the fact that NT and Dev were helping Geet in winning Maan's heart back.

 

   At first, Daadima was shocked at the news and then happy that Geet fell for Maan again but was angered at Maan's reaction. It took her a while to understand the reason behind Maan's rejection and when she realized it she took a deep breath and asked Dev to call Geet in. After few minutes, Geet arrived with Dev. In the way, Dev had explained how Daadi knew everything and how she was worried for Maan. As Geet walked into the room, she kneeled in front of Daadima and gathered Daadima's hands in her hands, "Aapne mujhe bulaaya Daadima?" Daadi smiled at her future Daughter in Law. She cupped her face and gave her a kiss on her forehead. "Beta! Aaj hum aapse kuch baatein karna chaahte hain aura apse kuch maangna bhi chaahte hain!" Geet gave a sweet smile to her, "Kahiye Daadima! Aap jo kahengi main woh sunoongi aur aap jo maangegi woh main doongi!" Daadima smiled at her bahu and spoke, "Humaare bete Maan bahut achche insaan hain! Sabse achche bete hain, sabse achche bhai hain! Aur humein poora bharosa hai ki jab unki shaadi hogi tab woh achche pati aur achche pitaah bhi saabit honge!" Geet smiled shyly at her words. Daadima chuckled at her reaction but then grew somber, "Par humein ek hi baat ka darr hai ki kahin woh apne parivaar ke liye apne khushiyon ka tyaag na kar de!" Dev and NT looked at each other sadly while Geet frowned confused at Daadima's words. Daadima smiled sadly at her and spoke slowly, "Humaare Maan ne apni zindagi mein sirf dukh dekhe hain! Jab Maan chote the tab humaari bahu cancer ki wajah se chal basi! Marte marte Maan se kasam le gayi ki woh Dev aur Annie ka khayaal rakhenge! Tab se Maan ne Dev aur Annie ke liye hi jiya hai! Kabhi bhi apne sapne ki ya apne ichchaaon ki fikar nahi ki! Dev aur Annie ne toh kabhi Ma ki kami mehsoos hi nahi ki Maan ke hote hue! Humne bahut koshish ki, ki hum Dev aur Annie ka dhyaan rakh sakein lekin Bahu ke maut ke baad humaare bete ek dum toot gaye aur humein KC ko sambhaalna pada! Aur is wajah se Maan ne apna sab kuch Dev aur Annie pe kurbaan kar diya lekin apne baare mein socha nahi! Phir jab hum NT aur Arjun ko is ghar le aaye unke Ma aur Papaaji ke maut ke baad, toh Maan ne inhein bhi apnaake apne upar aur zimmedaariyaan le li! Phir jab humaare bete ki maut hui woh bhi isliye kyunki woh apni patni ke baghair nahi reh paaye, toh Maan ne poori tarah ghar ka zimma liya aur humne KC ka! In sab mein kisi ne yeh dekha nahi ki Maan ek 15 saal ka bacha tha aur uski umar khelne koodne ki thi, apne bhai beheno ko sambhaalne ke nahi! Aap samajh rahi ho na beta, kyun humaare Maan itne serious aur mature bartaav karte hain? Kyunki bachpan se unhonein yahi seekha hai! Atleast Arnav apne ma papa ke maut se pehle haste the, khelte toh the, humaare Maan ko toh woh bhi karne ka mauka nahi mila! Phir ek do saal baad humaari tabiyat kharaab hui aur Maan ne poori KC apne haath mein le li jab ki tabhi woh college bhi jaa rahe the! Itni sab zimmedaariyaan lete lete woh toh hasna toh kya, jeena bhi bhool gaye! Wahi kiya jo hum sabke liye theek tha, apne baare mein socha hi nahi! Ab toh aapko samajh mein aa hi gaya hoga ki Maan itne strict aur serious kyun hai?" Geet nodded and smiled sadly, "Haan! Daadima! Main samajhti hoon!" Daadima smiled softly, "Phir humne unki shaadi humaari saheli ki poti Sameera se tay kardi!" Geet looked at her in horror. Was her Maan married? Hey Babaji! Yeh kya jhatka de rahe ho mujhe? Daadima looked amused while Dev & NT chuckled at her expression. Daadima smiled, "Aap dariye mat Geet beta! Aapke Maan ki shaadi nahi hui!" Geet heaved a sigh of relief then promptly blushed as she realized that Daadima, Dev and NT could understand her feelings so easily. Daadima continued, "Shaadi ke din Sameera apne sapno peeche bhaag nikli aur humaare Maan ko mandap par akela chod diya. Hum bahut guilty mehsoos kar rahe the us waqt kyunki Sameera humaari pasanad thi. Is guilt ki wajah se humein heart attack hogaya! Us waqt se Maan aisa koi kadam nahi leta jiski wajah se hum mein se kisika dil toote!" Geet looked at her in horror as she connected the dots and realized what impact Soni's forgetting Maan must have had on the whole family, "Aur maine... Maine aap logon ko bhoolkar, Maan ko bhoolkar is ghar ko kitna dukh diya hai! Ab main samjhi ki Maan kyun mujhse door rehna chaahte hain! Maine jo kiya uske baad woh toh mujhse nafrat kar rahe honge!" Geet felt tears well up in her eyes as she realized the consequences of her memory loss. Daadim shook her head and patted Geet's cheek, "Arre Beta!  Aap galat samajh rahe ho! Maan aapse bilkul naaraaz nahi hai! Woh toh bas darte hain apne dil ko kisi ke hawaale karne mein. Aap jab unhein bhoole tab unhein realize hua ki dil tootne se kitna dard hota hai. Ab humaare Maan us dard se darte hain. Kyunki Soni ne jo dard diya usse woh mushkil se ubhar paaye hain." Geet nodded as tears coursed through her cheeks, "Bas Daadima! Main aapka ishaara samajh gayi! Main samajh gayi ki aap nahi chaahte ki main Maan ki zindagi mein phir se aaun. Haina?" NT and Dev looked at Daadima in horror while Daadima chuckled and tapped Geet's cheek lightly, "Kamli hogayi kya aap? Arre! Aap humaare Maan ki zindagi mein aayi tabhi toh Maan hasne lage, pyaar karne lage, jeene lage! Aur sabse badi baat apne liye sochne lage! Apno ke liye jeena chod, aapke aur unke future ke liye jeene lage! Hum aapko kaise Maan ki zindagi se jaane dein? Hum toh yeh bataane ki koshish kar rahe hain ki Maan aapke pyaar ko kyun thukra rahe hain! Haan! Toh hum kahaa the? Oh yes! Maan dil tootne ki darr se aapse door reh rahe hain lekin woh ek baat bhool rahe hain ki is baar unhein darne ki jaroorat nahi hai! Kyunki jab aapko unhein bhoolne ke baad bhi unse pyaar hua toh iska matlab toh yahi hai aap bani hain unke liye! Is baar toh aapko juda karne waala bhi koi nahi haii kyunki khud Babaji ne aapko milaaya hai!Aur humein poora yakeen hai ki aapke parivar waale bhi is rishte se khush ho jaayenge!" Geet smiled at Daadima's words. Daadima grabbed Geet's right hand, "Toh hum yeh kehne ki koshish kar rahe hai ki Maan ka darr bebuniyaad hai lekin woh yeh nahi samajh rahe! Unhein aapko samjhaana hoga!" Geet looked at her wide eyed. Daadima nodded, "Ji Geet beta! Aapko Maan ko samjhaana hoga. Waada kijiye humse ki aap Maan ka haath kabhi nahi chodenge! Jab tak woh aapko apna banaayenge nahi tab tak aap koshish karti rahengi! Iss raaste mein aapko bahut niraasha milengi beta kyunki Maan ek bahut ziddi insaan hai lekin aapko koshish karte rehna hoga! Waada kijiye humse, Geet Beta, ki aap humaare ghar Khurana khaandaan ki bahu bankar jaroor aayengi, humaare Maan ki dulhan banke jaroor aayengi!" Geet smiled through her tears but nodded, "Ji Daadima! Main waada karti hoon! Tab tak koshish karti rahungi jab tak main jeet nahi jaati!" Daadima smiled proudly at her. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door and they turned to see Arnav standing there. He smirked at Geet, "Oye Motor mouth! Tera Mission Mohabbat Sheeshmahal ke darwaaze pe khada hai!" He smiled at others knowingly, showing that he was here for a while and he got a basic gist of what must have happened in the room and walked away. Geet grinned eagerly and then turned to look at Daadima. As she caught Daadima's knowing look, she promptly blushed, "Main jaaun?" Daadima chuckled and nodded. Geet ran away still blushing while Dev got up and walked behind her saying that he wanted to welcome Annie and Arjun. Daadima smiled happily as she realized that soon her Maan's life will be set too. NT smiled, "Daadima!" Daadima turned to look at her. NT spoke eagerly, "Woh ek saal jo bura tha woh chala gaya! Ab achcha waqt aaya hai, haina?" Daadima nodded and they hugged each other happily.

 

 

TRIVIA

 

For those who have forgotten the older chapters (which is possible coz I wrote the first chapter nearly two years back) here are the details about the older chapters I am referring to in the story.

 

1. The scene where Khushi is referring to red rose garden is in Chapter 48!

2. About Dev and Geet's discussion, they were talking about Soni's action in Chapter 21!

 

 

 

WISHES FULFILLED

 

Today I fulfilled a wish! Here is the detail!

 

1. Wish by Spvd (Deepa) on Page 18 of Thread III - To see Arnav and Geet together and Arnav bechara gets tortured by Geet's bak bak. - Fulfilled today!

 

 

 

Ok guys! I am taking a break from DFL writing for one week as I have two exams on this Sunday and both are the toughest! Once it is over, I will get back to my darling DFL! (LJ will continue coz I am using LJ as a stress buster plus I promised myself I will end LJ before this exam) Also it will take me some time to put up next update! So expect an update directly on 16th March! Thank you for understanding and please be patient for a while coz next when I start writing I won't take a break till DFL ends!

 

And the reason this chapter is divided into two parts is because I want the whole first day at Sheeshmahal in one chapter but did not want to put more than 4000 words in one update so had to divide it! The remaining part of the first day at Sheeshmahal will be continued in Chapter 66 (B) on 16th March!

 

Take care and be patient,

Kalpana

 

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Posted: 03 March 2014 at 10:09am | IP Logged
nice update...Big smile

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Posted: 03 March 2014 at 10:26am | IP Logged
Awesome update dear...
so maan and khushi should be ready for their partners pranks... all the best geet n arnav...

daadi explaining maan stubbornness to geet while expressing her love to maan might have to face many difficulties and should be strong to face them was too touchy...

in a way geet was already accepted by maan family and shez getting maans family help to woo maan back... but what abt arnav... nobody is there to help him... so sad...?


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