Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). - Page 17

Awsome update
Geet suffered alot
Feeling bad for maan

You are one diplomatic writer kalpana
you know that none of ur readers will bash you with jotas and chappals still you are ready with your shield as you are an awesome writer and story teller.

Now abt the update ..
One emotional update this is ..
Loved it to the core and waiting for the next update..
Plz don't make maan suffer too much yaar ..
And thanks for the PM

Awesome update.

Poor Geet. Feeling really bad for her 😭 😭 😭

Looking at the scenes, it looks as if ARHI and MAANEET are headed for separation. But please Kalpana, make them separated only for small amount of time...

Some more twists 😕 😕 😕 Yaar ARHI and MAANEET separations are the biggest shockers. Aur kya twists bache hai?

Hmmm...

Looking forward to next update.

hain you are early aint ya
not that i mind
its sure is a surprise for sure#
might have to do this tomorrow
damn why does that happen
on second thoughts lets try to do it today only
so they separate i guess by the end of this
not something i wanna see but what else can we do
judaai bhi toh pyaar ka hissa hoti hai
well lets see how bad it is then
and will try not to loose it on you by the end of it dear

awww the baby is here
and he is here to see his uncle who was stabbed
but of course the child dont know of the same
am sure that no one will forget the birth of this child
after all a lot happened on the day of his birth
of course am sure arnie wants to see the child of his di
what name did geet choose for the baby
man that i really wanna know
yeah was he so scared its not like she will keep something ridiculous name
omg she is gonna have some funny name
well we shall know and soon wont we what she will name him
dont be too worried arnie she has changed now
so chill maar yaar
beta maan geet aur aapke bache toh bahut hi door ki baat hai
first you should be with her naa
and then marry her then only the kids shall come
aur waise bhi aapke bachon ka naam toh annie ya khushi rakhengi naa being the buas so you also chill
yaar these guys sure come with the funniest things to say right
atom hmm sure sounds good no just kidding there dear
but i know it wont be that right
and thank god for kanha hmmm but is he gonna be naughty like his name sake
well probably right but nickname is real cute
i know right good they didnt call him nand kishore warna buaji toh solid confusion karengi
but that will happen with when ever nk comes in right
why good not a girl payal
oh ho what a sense of humour
and yes khushi says hey devi maiyya a lot confusion the child as buaji could have done
ahem ahem payash whats going on
aap log toh lagta hai maneet or arhi se bhi aage hote hain jaise

oh ho arnie dont be so scraed mate
ek geet hai toh duji aapki afreen bhi kam nahin
calm down please at least try to mate
it just doesnt suit you to be afraid of anyone other than khushi
though thats only fair and khushi right
so chillax please dude

oh maaa so she is still in bad shape
thats bad real bad for sure
ahhh she recognises her veere but dont think she shall recognise her maan
and that will be real bad for sure
and heart breaking for maan for sure but it has to be done naa
awww even though she is in such state she still is joking
well at least thats one good thing
sorry maan her memory is back and she dont remember you for sure
she means arnie not you
well that can be dealt with later for sure
lets get rid of that brij naa once and for all
and then focus back on maneet again

well so it begins right
her story of what happened why she was kept like that
why they were out to kill her and all
this wont be pleasant thats for sure naa
so she remembers her past but not her presnt it seems man this is bad right
am glad she at least had raizadas for her or her fate could be even worse for sure
ahhh the reason why she was kept like prisoner is here
so its seems she might have seen something she wasnt meant to
must say she is a brave soul trying to take those goons for the sake of a starnager
many wouldnt have thought same as her
seriously i dont get mentality of some people
its not as if channi was pregnant with no hubby
just because she married someone from lower class from her own they were behind them
why damn man this society which can let people be free even if we are democratic or not
oh god she witnessed such brutality
and she had no one to help those who died
as she alone couldnt have done much
whats with those men killing innocents for no fault of their own
and what they killed for was just pathetic excuse for sure
mann toh karta hai aise logon ko sakt se sakt sazaa milne chahiye
oh dear she told her darji that was the worst thing she did
but then how was she too know that he will not support her but do the opposite of what she hoped
poor girl had no chance after that for sure
its even worse it was her own darji who did this
and leading to her imprisonment crap that was bad
so it was her brother who killed her friend and husband
and then after that they have been behind her
maan you didnt know naa am sure if you did then well the story wouldnt be the same
what happened had to happen for sure mate
you cant change the past or what destiny has decided for you
but you can try to be with the ones you love
except he wont be able to either
yes am sure you guys could have put that vile man behind the bars before he could reach geet but it wasnt meant to be

good on you dear that you didnt bow down in front of them
i am really happy she decided to have the culprits punished but it seemed she never made it
if only her parents had more courage she wouldnt have been in such condition either
but then they didnt have same courage as her it seems which doesnt surprise me
she is right there too if you dont say anything against such things does make you as much culprit
so they used to hit her with hunter man thats brutal
and what kind of parents she had man pathetic yaar aise maa baap kissi ko naa dein
i know it isnt easy fighting against wrong but to let their daughter suffer like that is nothing less than cruel too
she had no one and yet that didnt deter her and all because she wasnt gonna let them get to her bravo my dear bravo
am not surprised that listening to this is making maan mad
after all they did treat her real brutally and she is his geet yaar how can he tolerate it either
ahhh glad he didnt do or say anything in his anger there
am sure arnie knew what he was feeling after all he has to do is think if this happened to khushi and he would react the same

haila who would have thought right
that what maan said to his bros would reach the one he loves
but then fate does have a way of playing with our lives like that
but am glad that due to this she never ever gave up
waah she is good
she it the man with a plate and legged it which is how she came across maan and was saved from more harm
okay not really as there were more attempts on her life but at least she escaped from that prison naa
well she does remember maan
but not as the person she loves but as the person who saved her
oh dear well at least she remembers that much about him
the rest shall come with time
for now lets get that brij into jail for long
well so he dont come back to attack her again
but what now where shall she go raizada mansion with raizadas right

and here comes the blow
oh sweetie maan never called them or knew about your connection with raizadas
there were there for some other reason
waise she not only forgot maan and khuranas but khushi  and the guptas too right
well arnie got knifed in during the fight and the rest came for nani arnie you and anj
well they shall tell you and soon
but before that heartbreak for maan this am not looking forward to much
yup she forgot it all and i can see maan is about to break too
oh dear she forgot the time spent with maan and the khuranas
meeting with khushi falling in love with maan
and all that happened in between these two months
so what he feared did come to be
babaji aapki geet ko toh bacha liya hai parr sath mein unki yadashat se aapko mita bhii diya hai
so all she remembers is you saving her and nothing more
and so one separation for maneet and another for arhi too
oh dear this is what we all feared with maan and its happened
if only maan had told him of his love for geet
how they were gonna get engaged and soon but now its too late
no one other than arnie knew in his family about them and he wont be in any conditon to say anything too after all he will be stuck in his own problem
and like you said becoming bevada too kya yaar yeh hi reh gaya tha
poore ke poore devdas banne waale hain arnie
but that isnt the important thing at moment naa

see people what dadi feared what NT was worried about and what maan was scared for did happen
but who would have thought this day would come
thats  only arnie can tell what maan is going through after listening to this
knowing that geet doesnt the one she loves or the one who loves her
after all arnie is the only one who can understand him more than anyone else
but come it has even worse it seems she will not remember him
so it means he will have to start again huh
that is if he gets the chance
of course guptas and raizadas dont know why it matters to maan as they dont know of his love for geet or for geet love for maan
oh dear it has hit him hard that she wont ever remember him
and we all know what this means he is gonna be back to being what he was before she came in his life
his life just lost its liveliness happiness etc
so this reaction was gonna happen man
oh boy you so feel for him yaar

aww a scene for moi yipee
hey thats so cool me an inspector and by looks of things very strict one who would make the criminals fear her
you are so good dear no really
didnt think this was what you would do too good
woohoo beat that good for nothing man till he is senseless or something like that
iski toh aisi ki taisi
ek toh apni behan ko marne ki koshish phir do pyaar karne waalon ko maaa
aur abb iski wajah se maneet are separated
he needs to be taught a lesson for sure
waaah kya pita gaya hai uppar se gaali bhi di and what a scene
tussi mahan ho ji
aur uss kamine ke saath toh yahi karna chahiye tha
bas chalta toh encounter hi karr deti parr chuki yeh family story hai itna violence theek nahin hoga
but hats off to you dear
dil khus karr diya aap ne ji
wow so every friday huh cool
and new story too me would like to read
even if i didnt see the show would like to read the same
cool you are a dazzler congrats man
and no by the end of this dont hate you
waise i doubt anyone will wanna throw chappals at you
after all the story demands the separation sweetie
and you have done maneet separation tactfully am sure same will be for arhi
but thats his fault for sure
but it seems more twits coming but for whom
maneet or arhi or is it both
that was fantastic even the sad ending
poor maan babu yaar but all shall be well in the end naa so not too sad for now
cheers for pm
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

pls no seperation yaar

finally i see everyone is safe... now i can happily read the previous updates since start of engagement!!! 
Edited by Maaneet099 - 10 years ago

that ws an unexpected twist pls atleast dont make arshi life complicated

awesome update
poor geet she suffered alot...
oh no geet forget her 2 months in delhi n maan too..
poor maan...