Destiny, Fate And Love Thread 3. Chapter 54 (C) - 68 (A). - Page 64

datz awesome

simply amazing
loved itx

such a perfect confession.. loved it.. hope Maan accepts it too..

Originally posted by: chavvi16

well you are back
hope you are well
of course you must be
will try to do this today only
just have to try

Well lets see who shall be drunk

I am replying to the review you wrote for Chapter 61!

Thanks for the review!

But does it really matter in the end I should think not

Who so ever is drunk well it just makes the story that much spicier for sure

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Hai naa which is why you added that scene in am sure

Geet's scene was for spice but Arnav scene was there because I wanted Khushi to see his haalat due to her decisions!

Anyway lets get down to this then

Almost falling in love geet and broken hearted khushi beckon me

Whats with men and shouting for their wives

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Sorry more like with Indian men and shouting for their wives

Never got that you know

But once am married am sure I will but that's besides the point

She is right you know if you scream like that you will give her a right heart attack for sure

 Well lets see why dev is so hyper for

And how hius wife can help him with maneet

She is pregnant

Awww bless they will have a baby girl or boy soon enough

More reason not to shout on her mate

The child might get scared

But then again am digressing from topic

Yes am sure your baby by the time he or she is born will have their geet taiji with them

Finger crossed of course you never know with maneet naa

😆

Don't say things like that and jinx it dear

Lets not even think about it shall we

That thought about maan knowing about this is not what you should think of dear

Cause we all know how he would react to it right

Hawww yeh toh besharmi ki hadh hai

Aise koi apni patni ko use karte hai apne bhai ke gusse se bachne ke liye

Though he is right about what he said though

Ahh so they have decided to implement further plans

After all they have only four more months left naaa

And with maneet that's not enough time is it

Really they too huh baby girl or baby boy fight

But then all parents do this after all

And its so cute right this fight

So true!

Hmm so to the next plan

But what is NT gonna tell her

Cant say you are soni so whats in their mind now

 Well if she wanted and could she could tell you all that you wanna know

But unfortunately she cant do that am afraid

Oh yeah she would have done that but guess now her interference is needed

Why else would he let NT talk to geet then right

Well geet apni bahbhi to be and saheli ko gale nahin lagayegi toh aur kya karengi NT

Man she must miss her right

They were pretty close too when she was with them

And seeing her again and getting the chance to talk to her again is bound to overwhelm NT with her situation right

I know! It was only while writing it I remembered that they must have met at Payash engagement and at the naamkaran and must have interacted! So twisted the scene a bit! Before that the plan was for them to behave like strangers!

Of course you know her well she lived with you guys for those months and the two of you had bonded well

She not only forgot the bond between maan and her but reat of the family too which was just as precious

Agar yaad hota toh kya rona tha dear

Ahh yes those days of geet being in KM sure were special for them all and precious too

But she don't remember them soon maybe she will

Ahhh they are bonding once again with one another

Well that's a start right

Ahhh yes his anger hmmm the less said the better

I know dear it seems as his anger is the worst but then his love is just as deadly right

But she don't know of that as he has been using anger as his shiled for way too long

Till of course she came into his life but now that's he isn't there

Well he is back to being the DD that he is and I don't mean dhak dhak of course

For him anger is the best way of keeping you away from him

Not knowing no matter what she will come closer to him again

Well good that she herself gave you a chance to talk about why he is so angry all the time

More perfect situation couldn't have arisen right NT

Well of course ke is very good person but yes since his soni left him he is like this

And just as NT wanted geet wants to know about soni

Haiyye she is telling geet of her own love story with maan

What an irony Sirji!😉

And she don't even know right

What a situation this is right

Ahhh yes they did love each other then but this time when she falls for him she will never ever forget him hopefully

Of course she wont there is only so much memory loss one person can take right

Oh yeah the hings he did for his soni

Some of them are right shocking for maan to do

Parr jab pyaar hota hai naa tab sirf apne pyaar ki khushiyan dekhi jaati hai naa

Ahh they want her memory to be refreshed telling of their lovely moments

Well its good idea I should say

And hopefully even if it isn't working now slowly it will have an impact on her later on

They have to do something after all better than just giving up like a certain someone

You just love to taunt the moment you get the chance, nahi?😉

Good question geet where did she go

Well she didn't go any where she just truned into you my dear

I knew it he must have told his family not to tell geet that she is soni

But he left a loop hole didn't he

He didn't say anything about not telling geet about her soni avatar though

Which is a bonus for NT and dev of course

And will help get them maneet closer again

Give it time NT for her to soak in this information

You didn't think did ya that she would remember it all just like that

If that was the case then this twits would be meaningless which it isn't

Hell yes she will be the only badi bahu and maan wife in the end

You are right in thinking that her wanting to know more about maan is a step towards falling in love with him again

So peeps don't loose hope and just pray for their love to happen again

And watch how maan is back to being the maan he was when with soni

 Hell yes he is capable of loving very fiercely

So much so he can do anything for that love

And he already has done that hasn't he

After all he didn't bind you to him set you free in the hope if you come back to him his love was true

Yeh toh pakka hai!😃

I know he may seem to be such DD but he actually very nice when his love will be back with him

Now you didn't know this or you wouldn't have misunderstood him so much

But you do know now and that's something right dear

Well he will do that but once you fall for him once again

And this time will be different from the last

Thoda toh day dreaming chalti hai geet

But yes you do have some mysteries too solve for sure

And one of them you can figure more easily if you observe arhi closely or ask maan

But he wont say anything will he no way man

Bless she still allowed herself to think of him though

😆

That's something for sure naa

Not him again being drunk

Ktina devdas bana phirta rehta hai yeh chora

That scene was needed to make Khushi realise that he was in pain due to her decision!

Ufff who would have thought huh that the great ASR would turn into such devdas

What else he expects her to do

Carry on being the same as she was when in love and being your GF

She cant do that now can she not when she herself broke her heart for her di

But if she didn't she would have broken more hearts right

 Not him as well what's with anger and these two dudes

😆

But then how can it not be anger right

That's the one thing they know they do best

And so whenever any such situation arises they have habituated to be angry rather than see it calmly right now you cant change so quickly now can ya

 

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Good that she did what she did

Or else he would just keep with anger rather than think about why she did it

As with his anger he cant think straight can he

Not that he is doing that even without the anger

Yes why didn't you stop the engagement if you didn't want it

You know the reason why you didn't do that

Now just for once think of the same from her pov and then only will ya know why she did what she did man

Him and his revenge they aren't gonna get him anywhere

In fact its making bigger mess than the one of her supposed betrayal mate and you know it deep down that this isn't gonna bring you any satisfaction either

Seriously that's why he is drinking again

Whenever he goes drinking it doesn't make much difference

😆 This whole review is making me laugh! Kabse hase jaa rahi hun!😆

In fact after this drunken spell things just get worse for khushi I swear

Oh dear am so right about it being more trouble for her

Hey DM help khushi with this drunk arnie

A sober arnie is for sure hard to handle but a drunk one can be much worse right

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 Oh my as if she doesn't have enough to worry about now this

Hello she is not your pain killer but she soon will need one after you come for sure

Though his thinking sure is right where else can he go than to her right?

After all no matter what has happened she is still his love

But him driving in such condition is not gonna be good either

Hope he makes it to hers in one piece

Devi Maiyya! Raksha karna!😆

That he might but when he gets there khushi ka kya hoga DM hi jaane

Oh teri he is here well at least he is in one piece

Thank god for some small mercies naa

Yes we all remember how you sneaked in her room like that

Would have been better if he did that

Arrey what if instead of khushi buaji opens the door

It was only after writing that Arnav is on Khushi's doorstep I remembered "Haaye Nandkisore! Buaji ghar pe hui toh?" Then changed the lines and made Buaji gaayab!😆 Warna gadbad ho jaati!😆

Inka kya hai he is drunk and might not or wont remember any of this but buaji will naa

Even after all this she is your med arnie

Oh come when you said she is the reason and so she cant be the med

Lets not try to even make sense of a drunk arnie right

Plese let bauji not open the door please pretty please

Thank god buaji isn't at home

Warna how she would be able to explain drunk arnie at their house right

 Hmmm khushi you have bigger things to worry about dear

The hell with the shaadi preps at this moment my dear

Not buaji khushi but the afaat called ASR you will know soon

Aafat???? 😆 Very funny name!

Yup there you go your lover boy is here

And to you it may seem that he has lost it calling you medicine which he has dear

Wow he actually said how is medicine

He is totally drunk for sure khushi and yes good your aunt isn't there

Lets not have more problems shall we with the drunk arnie it is bad enough

Wow even in this state he cant stop being such LG can he

Well once ASR always  ASR right

Shrab ho yah davayi jaisi sharaab its the same dude

But no point in telling him this in his state

Call maan or someone soon to help you out with drunk arnie

Doubt you will be able to handle him by yourself dear

Well this was bound to happen what he keeps hidden from her in his sober state comes out when he is drunk

To see how much hurt he is after your decision but can she do anything about that unfortunately no she cant

Aap ko dekh karr hamein bhi dard ho raha hai

Yes he is major pain in the you know where but its also true his heart was broken too

And just because he chooses to hide it under his anger  don't mean he wouldn't be hurt by her decision

If only she could tell him why she did it would make it easier for him

Or would it make it worse for him to know

Ahhh he told her where it hurts same place it hurts you dear

Well to tell you the truth only your loved ones give pain

If it was any outsider we wouldn't bother so much would we

So true!

Or react the same way someone close to us did the same

Oh boy he sure is shattered and is showing it

But of course the rage makes a come back

At his state it was bound to but hope it isn't too bad this time

Well its best for you to know how she too was broken by her decision

That it wasn't really betrayal but looking out for her family

That one decision though is gonna make a lot of people suffer

Not only arhi but la too right

As she too wont be able to be happy so really that decision isn't right

She knows it too but at that time nothing else could be done naa

Well about time she broke that illusion of yours that hurting her would make you happy

That if you wanted you too could have broken the engagement

That its also your fault too that things went this far

Why should she be the only one to be blamed for this when you both are equally responsible for it getting this far

Its about time he was given a dose of his own medicine right

True!

Waise she can too ask you the same right

But what will she say to that one question

When she herself doesn't know the answer to it man

What can she say to him

Is there anything other than the truth which will make this situation better

And even with that truth does it change anything though

But something has to give here right

Waise he is right but she cant give him that

The one thing that could make it all okay for them and she cant oblige him

No matter how much she wants to just give in once

So sad, nahi?

But if she does once she wont be able to stop again

That's is the best solution to all this heart ache for these two but guess not for now

Ahhh good she is calling maan

Only he can help her out with this now

Well at least maan took arnie away

But what about the pain of what he asked

 Now she can give in to her pain too as no one is there

Is there no end to all their suffering

Arre! Aa raha hai end!! Don't worry!😊

Of course there is right but we gotta wait for it am afraid

Okay I get how arnie got drunk

But that doesn't explain who else will get drunk not maan right

Guess we shall know and soon

 Not again man the repeat of last time

But of course things have changed since then naa

A lot of things have changed between the first time he was drunk and now

Well for one this time she knows that he got drunk somewhere due to khushi

Which means she is gonna ask or know why that's the case

Well your gut is right she is the reason for this

She is the crux of his problems and the only one who is the solution

But how will you get her to talk about it

She isn't just gonna tell you right

But hope geet don't give up either at least there will be someone paying attention to arhi too

They too need help maybe more than maneet do

As geet has already started to fall for maan and his family is hell bent on making sure their love story happens

While the same cant be said about arhi story

So not drunk on same day that's a relief man

Of course she is worried about arnie

But how to ask is bigger issue

She cant call him not now that he is sober right

Well she could ask maan couldn't she

But even he can tell about his condition while he was with her

After that only his family can tell more about it which they probably don't even know about

Well there is someone whom you could ask who might know about it all without getting rest of the family suspicious your parjayiji

But she don't know naa that she saw him like that

Though I think her solution is even better

This way she can see arnie is okay without asking and also don't have to explain why she is here

But how is arnie gonna react after his drunk stint is yet to be seen

 Well now we know how he reacts he is back to being ASR again

Which shouldn't really surprise me either

If he didn't be the way he is then that would be shocking right

I know! My readers will faint!😆

Ahh so she does realise what predicament she has gotten herself into

But then there was no way she wouldn't wanna know how he is doing either

Even if it went listening to his taunts after all that's khushi for you

And there he goes taunting her again

Well any memory related to you she cant forget don't have to remind her

Except that's not what he trying to do right

He ruined that moment too for her

Why arnie just once give it a rest but then how can he

You know very well she wont say what you wanna hear then why arnie

And you also know it that it wasn't fake either

Well you didn't think she wouldn't give it back to you

Dude you must know after the last time she isn't gonna just listen to your taunts and not say anything

Don't know why he is so shocked

😆

Sasha and man will go to this meeting or someone else

And is this how one of the two shall get drunk

I got how arnie got drunk but can see either maan or geet getting drunk

Or even khushi though that one seems less likely right

And guess I was right sasha wont be able to make it

Of course dev is gonna use this for his own benefit right

 Plus he didn't even have to do it himself sasha herself requested that geet go in her place

This suits his plans alright don't they

Dev is surely enjoying these matchmaking sessions!😆😉

I know right babaji is giving you all chances to get maneet back together again

So date it is then kay not really but this will do for now

Am sure maan wont be happy but he wont be able to do much about this either

 See he wasn't happy

Abb dev ki kya galti that sasha cant make it and she herself recommended that geet go instead

Dev has him right where he wanted his big bro right

He knows that maan wouldn't wanna go with geet

But he also cant refuse as of course this meeting is important

That's fun for sure for dev of course torture for poor maan

😆

Not really but you know what I mean I hope

So here it comes the second person to be drunk

Wonder what happens with this one then and who it is

 Her maan huh progress indeed

But why is she wishing that sasha came not her what did he do now

Ahhh that is classic maan too

In fact had he not done that I would have thought something is wrong with him

😃

Poor geet hoping to get maan attention but of course that aint working

Well what to do he wants to keep his sanity naa

So he cant look or talk to you or he will be lost in you only

Give him time dear it wasn't easy last time and now its that much harder dear

Oh so its geet who shall be drunk

Mujhe toh maan ki izzat khatre mein nazar aa rahi hai

😆When I read the above line, I was reminded of the crack fic you mailed me the link of! The second one! Izzat Khatre Mein! Maan Hua Sabse Paraaya!😆

Babaji save maan from drunk geet

Oh teri she had alcohol instead of water and soon will be drunk

Well hopefully this incident will be more fun than arnie one I hope

Maan wont know what hit him with this drunk geet for sure

Yeh toh pakka hai!😆

Well that will be the least of your worries today maan

Heart aur mind ko maaro goli and be ready for a drunk geet mate

Ahhh the drive home is gonna be eventful

Mate she is drunk and well lets see what a drunk geet does

And how she makes it worse for you than sober geet

Nope bilkul theek nahin hai aur naa hi aap hone waale hain theek

Jee inhone pee rakhi hai as if arnie wasn't even that she too got drunk

But to be fair she got drunk without knowing while that wasn't the case for arnie

See told ya she is gonna be tough to handle

And he had same views as me about drunk geet

Wait this is weird right

The day before geet was the one told of arnie being drunk

Now geet is drunk and arnie is gonna come for her

Funny nahi?😆

Waise he didn't answer her question if he can that is

Kahan gayi yeh disaster queen yaar

Uff kya musibat hai naa aapke liye maan

But you should never have left her naa

Mil gayi inko inki geet mil gayi

What will she do to him I wonder or say like arnie

Doing will be more fun right

Ahhh yes of course she was bored without him and yes no point in being mad at her

Why did she say that kuch karengi toh nahin naa

Well it seems soni in her is coming out huh meaning you get glimpses of her when drunk cool

Oh teri kiss waah now she is talking

😆

Just kiss her but then of course it wasn't meant to be

Why cant a kiss happen yaar sheesh man this is sad for sure

Kiss hua toh family show nahi rahega! PG 13 ki rating lagaani padegi DFL ko! 🤣

Well am sure you are frustrated for both reasons

Kiss toh phir bhi miss ho gayi as she fainted

This scene was taken from Mummy. The girl is about to kiss the man after drinking a lot and right at the time of kissing she faints. I love that scene so much that I had to put it here!😆

And this time I agree with maan dono bhai behen are gonna drive him mad like this

But it sure is worth it for sure

Ahhh if only no kiss miss but guess it wont be appropriate for now naa

Later who is gonna stop him right

That was fun filled for sure

And I managed to do it in time woohooo man

Cant wait for more next week

Cheers for pm

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 10 years ago

poor maan and  geet... bth are stubborn... when will they realize they cant stay away from eachother...

part 63
awesome dear...
excellent...

Arnav Khushi
nice...
Arnav teasing Anjali was nice...
oh ho Anjali why are u always trying to make Khushi get into trouble...
poor Khushi...
is it for real?
how come this change in Arnav all of a sudden?
whats happening?
he didnt say anything to Khushi but was teary...
well at least now i felt sorry for him...
but his all those words can never be forgiven not at least now...
poor Khushi...
inspite of everything she got concerned for him and also felt hurt to see him so defeated and hurt...
poor them...

awesome...
Khushi has passed with good marks...
and no one is noticing Arnav's aloofness...
had Geet been there she would have noticed it...
oh she fed Aakash and Anjali has told her to do the same to Arnav too...
what a tight situation...
Arnav saw what was happening down?
butam surprised with this change of his...
he asked to feed him too...
that too without any hurtful words or anger or anything...
they both are hurting...

Maan Geet
seriously Geet's antics are too much...
so lively and jolly...
hahaha so thats her plan...
impress Maan with her hardwork and efficiency...
arey Geet Maan is already in love with u but the thing is some hurdles are there and u have to cross that...
and Maan is amused seeing her antics...

my God Geet is such a kid...
she messed the whole room in her search of her mobile...
and Anjali is surprised...
well poor her all she gets to do is cleaning her siblings' room...
her cribbing was nice...
what her mobile is in the office?
wow...
her antics are so cute...
that kissing Anjali scene was so lovely...

haye Maan is also there in the office...
well Geet will get to see him on sunday too...
wow both stuck in the lift and power chali gayi...
very good...
Maan though wants to stay away is not able to stop himself...
poor him...
OMG he was about to kiss her...
but stopped himself...
oh ho here comes his resolution to stay away and control...
Maan why are u doing that...
and Geet feels Maan likes her...

lovely update dear...

part 64 A
awesome dear...
nice one...

Maan Geet
awesome...
Geet is once again in the plan to tell her feelings to Maan...
and where is Maan?
this guy is too much...
hes hiding himself and also punishing...
but Geet is not the one to give up...
NT and Dev are the new detectives here...
well if not for them Maan and Geet will meet only when they get old...
NT is smart...
Dev called Geet to come to KM...
they understood that Maan is doing this to avoid Geet...
but Dev and NT will never let that happen...
and NT took Daadima with her...
what is their plan  anyways...
what?
this is their plan?
make Geet to get to know about Soni, Maan's Soni...
haila hope this doesnt revert back...
Maan will be furious and also will take the step the other way...
well nothing can be done now...
Geet has seen the pix and started reading the diary...
hope this deosnt go in the wrong way...
one way am happy that Geet has come to know its she who was Soni, Maan's Soni...
and Maan loves her like anything...
and she too did...
the fb was so nice...
i always miss this Soni...
finally she has come to know its she who Maan loved and loves...
and shes not appalled but has understood and is happy...
now how will Maan react?
Maan u have no idea what just happened...
Geet has come to know about ur Soni...
what ever he does ro do he can never stay away from his Geet or Soni...
now that Geet know she wont give up easily, hopefully...
oh ho Maan is hurt and also angry...
oh no he has refused it with so much pain and anger...
now what will they do?
poor Maan...
feel sorry for him...
his pain is too much...
hope he will be clam and think about it...

lovely dear...
this is fully Maan Geet and the next will be Arnav Khushi...
now all of them are in pain...
cont soon dear...

😲wt wz written in tat update...on reading d precap i tot tis week paak dey wld join bt tumne to twist kar diya... my Maneet
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waitin fa d nxt update! still  d update wz awesom!!

Originally posted by: Deelight

😲wt wz written in tat update...on reading d precap i tot tis week paak dey wld join bt tumne to twist kar diya... my Maneet
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waitin fa d nxt update! still  d update wz awesom!!

Originally posted by: Rattyswami

yeh Khushi aur Arnav ka dard toh bardaash se baahar haiitna dard hai ki aasoon bhi kam padh jaye...wht the hell is wrong wid Arnav?? he's still so arrogant...khushi's departure shd have brought him down a peg or two...but NO, not ASR...ab tak LG ka LG hi hai😡 god knows kab akel aayegi usse...and yeh Maan bechara😭 he is stuck taking care of the three tortured and lost soul(G, A & K) par uss bechare ka khayal kaun rakhe ga😕...geet needs to solve these two mysteries fast before I loose my sanity😭