Os: Destiny final part page 1

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This is just an os.No offence to anybody.Just read and enjoy.
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London Medical College:

Ashutosh: Lekin Mallika,abhi kyon?padhai toh puri kar lo.

Mallika:  Ashutosh,muze pata hai ki tum muzse pyaar karte ho aur shadi karna chahte ho.Lekin tumse shadi karke muze kya milega?Ek toh tum ho hi boar.Muze meri zindagi me woh sab Luxury chahiye jo muze sirf rohan hi de sakta hai.

Ashutosh:mallika aisa kuchh nahi hai.Lekin tum pahele apni padhai toh khatam kar lo.

Mallika: Dekho ashu,tumhe Neurosurgeon banana hai na toh tum bano na?Rohan ke papa bahoot bade politician hai aur unka hospital hai bahoot bada.Woh trustee hai waha ke.toh Rohan ko aur muze kuchh karne ki jaroorat nahi hai.Toh humne shadi karne ka soch liya hai.

Ashutosh: Lekin Mallika,tum adhuri padhai...

Woh baat sun ne ke liye Mallika waha nahi thi.

Ashutosh thoda mayoos ho gaya.Mun me woh bola,"Mallika,itna achha career chhodne ki bhool mat karo please.Gujara hua pal lautkar nahi aata.Muzse shadi nahi karni mat karo lekin padhai toh puri karo.


Do din ke mallika aur Rohan Ashutosh se milne aaye.

Rohan: Mr Ashutosh,hum kal shadi kar rahe hai.

Ashutosh: Congrates Rohan and congrates Mallika.

Mallika: aise nahi ashu.Tumhe shadi me aana hai.Ekdum grand wedding hoga.Rohan ke papa ne pura sea hall book kiya hai.pure 15,00 guest aayenge.Sab VIP hai.Aur mera shadi ka joda hi pure sawa lac ka hai aur Jwellary pure 2.50crore ki hai.tum jaroor aana ashu.

Ashutosh: Mllika,main tumhe khush dekhna chahta hoo.

Mallika: Aur ha ashu,hum Honeymoon ke liye Europe ja rahe hai aur woh bhi pure 3 mahine ke liye.I am so excited.

And she turned towards Rohan,"chalo Rohan,hume bahoot sari shopping karni hai chalo."

Aur woh dono wahaa se chale gaye.

Ashu bas sochata raha,"yeh daulat ke peechhe pagal ho gai hai mallika.kash koi use samaza sakta ki paisa aur power se upar hai padhai.Lekin abhi uske aankho par patti hai.Lekin fir bhi chahta hoo ki tu khush rahe.
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After complete ten years.

Mallika landed on Lucknow airport.

Mallika mun me: kaash maine Ashutosh ki baat maan li hoti toh yeh din nahi dekhna padta.Pahle ashu se milti hoo fir sochungi ki aage kya karna hai?

And she entered in KGH gate.And she was shocked to see Ashutosh there.

Mallika: Yeh Ashutosh hai?i can't believe this.Suchmuch yeh ashu hai ya meri aankhe dhokha de rahi hai.


Writing next part too.Hope you will like this os.Hit like button and comments please.

Will post next part in half an hour



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Alkaji,

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Part 2


Ashutosh and one beautiful girl were playing Long tennis in the Tennis court.

Ashutosh looks like model.Fit and fine.

Ha kuchh baal safed ho gaye the.Lekin chashme ki wajah se woh aur bhi handsome lag raha tha.

In the tennis court

Ashutosh: Nidhi,tum fir se cheating karne lagi?dekho ab baar baar aisa nahi chalega.

Nidhi was poting ashu." Kya dr Ashutosh,har baar toh muze khud hi jeeta dete hai aur ab fariyad karte hai.

Ashutosh: ha kya karoo?pyaar joh karta hoo tumse.

Nidhi: Oh ho,muze pata hai ki aap muze harte hue nahi dekh sakte aur na main aapko.

Ashutosh came to hug Nidhi.

Nidhi: yeh kya?koi dekh lega.

Ashutosh: toh dekhne do,main kya darta hoo kya kisise?

Nidhi: ha aap kyon darenge?Lekin chaliye muze chhodiye.Mera lecture bunk ho jayega aaj.

Ashutosh:pouting to nidhi: Le!mera lecture bunk ho jayega.main class me aaoonga tumhare tabhi toh lecture start hoga?

Nidhi: ha muze pata hai aapko meri padhai ki kitni fikar hai?tabhi toh hum sirf engegment se hi kaam chala rahe hai.Shadi ke liye meri padhai khatam karne ka waqt jo diya aapne.I am proud of you,Dr Ashutosh.Lekin chaliye,muze mere ghar par chhod dijiye.Bus ab humara romance time khatam aur ab aap teacher aur main student.
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Ashutosh is in his cabin

And mallika knocked the door of his cabin.

mallika: main i come in?

Ashu: without seeing her: come in

Mallika: hi ashutosh.

Ashuosh now shocked

Ashutosh: sorry Mallika,maine tumhe dekha nahi.please come in.Aur yeh kya?kya haal banaya hai tumne apna?India kab aayi?

Mallika: kya bataoo ashutosh?kitna achha chal raha tha sab ki achanak se Rohan bimaar pada aur pata chala ki chain smoking aur sharab ki wajah se uske dono lever fail ho gaye.Aur 6 mahine tak woh hospital me tha.Aur fir achanak se use behoshi me attack aaya aur woh


And she start weeping.

Ashutosh: mallika,i am sorry.lekin tumhare FIL ke pas toh bahoot property thi na?

Mallika : unhone humari shadi register hi nahi karai thi toh unhone muze kahaa ki tumhari shadi valid nahi hai toh tumhe meri property me se kuchh nahi milega.Ha!tumhe India jane ka ticket aur kuchh paise main de sakta hoo.Aur unhone muze India bhej diya.

Ashutosh was too shocked to hear that.

mallika was observing ashutosh.Black shirt and Blue jeans.And his golden frame glasses.He was looking too handsome.

Uske table par Ashu aur Nidhi ki tasveer rakhi thi.Table par flower pot me fresh flowers sajaye gaye the.

Mallika: Ashutosh tumhe toh flower pasand nahi the na?

Ashutosh: mallika woh sab London ki baat thi.Ab toh meri zindagi khushiyo se bhari padi hai.Meri zindagi Veeran thi lekin meri Nidhi ne unme ful khila diye.Jab main Neurosurgeon banake Lucknow aaya tha toh muze pata hi nahi tha ki meri zindagi yu badal jayegi.

Mallika: Matlab?

Ashutosh: Mere haath neeche intern thi yeh Nidhi.Puri chehekti titli ki tarah.Main heartstone aur qile me rahenewala.Lekin uski hansi aur chulbulepan ne kab mere qile me dastak di aur woh mere dil me utar gai.Bus fir kya tha?hum dono ko ekdusrese pyaar ho gaya aur uske gharwalo ne aur mere baba ne milkar humara rishta pakka kar diya.Lekin maine use kahaa ki hum shadi tab karenge jab Nidhi ki padhai puri hogi.Aur woh maan gai.Bus ab teen mahine baki hai usko dr ki degree milne ko.fir hum shadi kar lenge.

Mallika: Lekin ashutosh!woh toh tumse kitni chhoti hai na?

Nidhi knocked the door and entered in ashu's cabin.

Nidhi: Dr Mallika,main chhoti hoo lekin Balika nahi hoo.Sir muze jabardasti karke nahi laye hai.main sir se pyaar karti hoo aur use nibhane ki taqat bhi rakhti hoo.Aur sir par muze muzse jyada bharosa hai.Pyaar woh nahi jo woh kahe aur main samazoo.Mera pyaar toh woh hai jo unke bina kahe unke dil ka haal main samazti hoo.Unki aankhe udaas ho usse pahele mera dil roye aisa mera pyaar hai.Zindagi me na unhe kisine haraya hai na mere hote hue unhe koi hara payega.nahi sir?

Ashtuosh:Nidhi ke pas jakar:Muskurate hue: Nidhi,ho gaya aapka?meri zansi ki rani.Chalo ab class me jao.Main aata hoo.

Nidhi: ji main jati hoo.

Nidhi was about to go and ashu called her.

Ashutosh: Nidhi?

Nidhi: mudakar : Jee?

Ashutosh: I love you Nidhi.

Nidhi: I love you too sir.

Ashutosh turned to mallika: Mallika,achha hua ki tumne muze na kahaa.Warna muze meri Nidhi is bheed me kaise milti?Pyar ka asli matlab toh muze nidhi ne sikhaya hai.mallika,main destiny me believe nahi karta tha lekin Nidhi ne majboor kiya muze destiny me manane ke liye

Mallika,thank you for saying me No

Hope you will like it.comments are welcome




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Kya mazedaar story hai Alkaben!! Mallika paisa, power, pratishtha, publicity aur politicians ki chaka chaundh mein aaker Rohan se shaadi karne jaa rahi hai... Ashu loves Mallu but she doesnt love him... Upar se unko muuh per bolti hai: Tum toh ho hi boring aur tumse shaadi karke mujhe kya milega 😲 Ashu ka kehna nahi maana aur uss ne apni padhaai bhi Rohan se shaadi ke chakkar mein chhod di aur 10 saal baad she is back to kgh!! Interesting!! Am waiting for next part... Please update asap!! 😃
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res Alka give me a little time 
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Hatke story Alka di ! 👏⭐️ 
Nice to see the characters taking turns !
i will comment more later ! 
Loving it.. both the parts till now are very interesting ! 😊
 
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Part-2 is awesome!! Nidhi ne Mallika ko jo jawab diya woh toh standing ovation ke kaabil hai!! 👏👏👏

Ashu knowingly gets defeated in game coz he wishes his Nidhi to win always... But at the same time, he doesnt leave the opportunity to tease her by telling her not to cheat in game 😃 How sweet is that!!

And AshNi lovestory is amazing in this OS also but wedding will take place only after Nidhi completes her studies!! Superb!!

Loved this OS very much Alkaben!! ❤️❤️❤️ Thank you so much for this cute & sweet lovestory of AshNi 🤗Edited by ttrocks - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayasree.rao


Alkaji,

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congrates Jayshree ji,but where is your comment?
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Originally posted by: ttrocks

Kya mazedaar story hai Alkaben!! Mallika paisa, power, pratishtha, publicity aur politicians ki chaka chaundh mein aaker Rohan se shaadi karne jaa rahi hai... Ashu loves Mallu but she doesnt love him... Upar se unko muuh per bolti hai: Tum toh ho hi boring aur tumse shaadi karke mujhe kya milega 😲 Ashu ka kehna nahi maana aur uss ne apni padhaai bhi Rohan se shaadi ke chakkar mein chhod di aur 10 saal baad she is back to kgh!! Interesting!! Am waiting for next part... Please update asap!! 😃


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