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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 98)

siamesecat IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Awesome progress in story.
Thanks for the pm

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mandy15 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:42am | IP Logged
awesome dear:)

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Chamkili77 Groupbie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:44am | IP Logged
I like the fact that Arnab has progressed in this story and is investing in this relationship. He is ready to wait for Khushi to grow up! I hope Pranab doesn't fall for khushi , will make it awkward. But hoping nature takes its course and 15 year old khushi feels the first stirrings of desire for Arnav and so does he!!

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Anony_mous Goldie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:47am | IP Logged

Where did the Pranab angle came in from??? Having cried out that aloud, that was a freaking master stroke. So many possibilities open up with this twist.

I loved the subtle way that you portrayed Arnab's feelings, his thoughts and his musings throughout the update. Like a mature man would think while dealing with a child. A child who wants to force herself to grow up, as soon as possible, because she thinks that is the key to her acceptance in her husband's room and his heart.

Arnab is right, childishness has nothing to do with age. It's state of mind. So will he accept that the female he is married to is not the serious docile type and whether he waits for a year or five, she will stay the same (incase her personality is not curbed)? 

Also in those days even the most idealistic people have ideals different than what we have today in this age. Social norms were different. Definition of a good husband was different.

I am looking forward to how would Arnab react towards Pranab angle, being THE husband and THE eldest son of the house? And HOW long will he wait before claiming HIS wife?

Update soon :) 

Edited by Anony_mous - 14 September 2013 at 12:58am

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cute_sarun IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Lovely update

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Sweta1495 Groupbie

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 12:55am | IP Logged
i did anticipate something like this- pranab falling for khushi..after all, what's a story w/o some drama...:-D... Is pranab's admiration for Khushi simply admiration, respect, or lust or love? if it's love, his heartbreak would be collateral damage in this love story... :-(
ab ayega asli mazaa... the love story has begun, i presume?

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ashnitaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:07am | IP Logged
With every update i fall in love with this story a little more..
Rabindranath Tegore has a special place in every bengali's heart..rabindra sangeet has a special dance form..the song u used here is very close to my heart..its the first song in which me & my sister performed on Rabindranath Tegore's birthday in our school program..

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gmsk IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged
That sketch of Calcutta was sooo beautiful.. <3
N the update bought us a new nadan parinda in the form of Pranab..i just hope he knws wht having a tinny bit of feelngs for his brothers wife can lead too..
I hope he understands the gravity of the situation he is leading himself into..
But  y y y this pranab noww :( :( :( Now, whn arnab has finally.admitted he likes his wife..whn he's finally taking sme kind of initiatives.. 
Bt i cnt blaim pranab to for  wht he's feeling for khushi.. She's just soo sooo adorable.. its hard nt to fall for her <3 
Bt m scared thinkng wht arnab might do abt it.. i just hope he doesn't give up.. 

eagerly waiting to knw what happens further..

Thanks for this beautiful update diii <3

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