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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 95)

Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 April 2013
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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:12pm | IP Logged

Hi Jenny,

Sorry, I couldn't comment on the previous chapter.

It was a lovely update, a positive one and a promise of new beginnings for Arnab, Khushi as well as Prnab too may be?

You know the best thing about this story is the effort you put for setting the mood and mind of readers to pre-freedom days and the detailing, it's commendable. I easily get transported into that era when reading the story.

Arnab indeed is wise and noble and so not like his father. I am glad that he is not pushing Khushi away and is now tuned to her little heart and her emotions. He is being careful not to hurt her and at the same time tell her things that are beyond her age. The best thing he now wants to be patient and wait for this little girl to grow up into a woman. I am sure in Khushi's journey of being a woman and a true wife to Arnab he will play an important role.

I think it's natural for Pranab to see in a different light and may be feel differently about her. It will be interesting to see when those feelings come to forefront how things will be played out and how Khushi will react. 

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 14 September 2013 at 10:12pm

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MEsw Senior Member

Joined: 04 September 2012
Posts: 222

Posted: 14 September 2013 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
This story is so amazing. Read all the five chapter together...but i wish i could read the whole was so was a torture to stop at this juncture in the story.

The way this story is developing...
Arnav's character. His morals. His thoughts. His wish to do something for country, so typical of so many youth of that time.
his relation with his father, mother and Thammi. his involvement with Freedom movement.

change of emotions...the way he first thought about her as a child...and the change, how he was getting used to her. how he started seeing a woman in her. But how she is still a child at heart

How Khushi's character is so stubborn. so strong. how she went to Thammi...when he throws her out of his room...she went straight to Thammi to be a woman, instead of giving up. she waited for him till late in the night. She wants to be liked by him.But in all this she is not attracted to him...can you believe it...he is attracted to her in a way that he went to red light area of the city and she goes and hugs him, saying she is glad he is alright...
she cries if he says he does not like her, even in joke.  but she can't see and understands his actions.
She followed Thammi's directions, and it did gave her some result...

but the way Arnav said...he is saving her childhood from HIM...

he is ready to wait for her to grow up...

I knew her friendship with Pranab was going to bring some twist.
I have my fingers crossed please do not make Arnav jealous or misunderstand her...and please do not make Pranab get in to middle of this...please.

please please update soon...i am so hooked to this one...

you write so is really amazing

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Happytwinkle IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 September 2013 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
beautiful update
thanks for the pm

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Samyxx IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 February 2012
Posts: 2598

Posted: 15 September 2013 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Pranab is falling for Khushi...
I love the way you described Arnav's feeling...

And i love this twist so much.

Now it will be easier for Arnav to recognize his love for her.

But it's sad that it is Arnav's brother who is falling for her...

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sunitikapoor IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged

Beautiful update Jenny,  I hope Pranab and Khushi will be good friends, nothing else.

Loved the Arnab and Khushi conversation...cute moments...

Thanks for the PM.Tongue


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dima_a Goldie

Joined: 26 August 2012
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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 1:47am | IP Logged
just amazing my dear ... loved the sentence  very much..."He liked this child, he liked this child a lot and he was looking forward to loving the woman"... and im waiting with him to see his love for her...

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Neha.AS Goldie

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
hey what with the Pranab now yr plz dont creat any love 3

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fattou Senior Member

Joined: 09 August 2012
Posts: 942

Posted: 15 September 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
really nice story
update soon

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