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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 89)

citi Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
I like the sensitivity that a much older Arnav is showing towards the young child bride. The friendship between Pranab and Khushi is so natural, they are growing up together.

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ThanuAditya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Arhi r sooo cute !

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Shaheen17 Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
That was cute!
Bt the sign of pranab's feeling fr khushi...i hope that dsnt creat any prblm in future .

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.Sandal. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Aww Loved Arnav and Khushi's part.
Oh hell now pranab is having feelings for her.
Loved it

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mbibi Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Aww bless her, Khushi is such a sweetheart! Arnav is right that she does hang on to his every word and what he says, his approval, his attitutude, everything matters too much to her for her to let any of it go unnoticed...and Arnab realizing this knows that he cant just say or do anything around her because of how it would affect her...
Its good to see that at least he aknowldges that yes, she is still young but he he still likes her and he is willing to wait for her to discover herself as she grows..

Uh oh pranab poor lad! I hope he doesnt see too much into this feeling for khushi! Khushi could be his first crush but i wouldn't want her to be his first heartache :( But he is still young just as Khushi is, so I think he shouldn't have too much of an issue with this...

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swatim318 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
lovely update...

the arhi moment was beautiful...

but.. whats with pranab now??? he knows she is his bhabhi.. doesnt he?? how can he FALL for HER...ConfusedShocked

no no.. please dont make him bad... let their friendship remain beautiful...

thanks for pm jenny..

please continue soon..

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aura9 Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
well I was just waiting to ask you how does Pranab address Khushi. He should be calling her Boudi (elder brother's wife). But, then refrained from doing so thinking the whole day she roams around with this guy and studies with him there should be some third angle in the story. So, here is it. Pranab felt something for Khushi for a moment. And maybe in future he may fall for Khushi which I'm sure is going to give him a heartache. So Pranab babu better keep your eyes off your elder brother's wife because no matter what even if Arnav doesn't feel it right to be with a woman who is 13 years younger to him, Khushi will never sit back and take the rejection. Arnab is a very integral part of her tiny world which right now she realizes as his wife, but later on things will get better with time when she will fall in love with the man in Arnab. With each update I fall in love with this story, if that's possible.

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shona-li Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Oh dear.
Oh dear oh dear oh dear.
Sweet, reliable, dear Pranab?
I cannot think of a more heartwrenching twist.

You've gutted me, Jenny.

I'll just have a sob party here by myself, for the broken dreams, anguish and sorrow that is bound to eventuate. A part of me wishes to close my eyes but that's no longer an option. I guess I'll just have to brace myself...preferably within a fortress of tissues and armed with a basket in hand - for picking up the pieces when my heart breaks.

Y u so evil? What the-!

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