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The Bride With A Doll..Thread#2/ Completed Arshi SS (Page 84)

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
nice one.. glad that Arnav is letting Khushi to grow on her own..

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
Arhi relationship growth was amazing. He patiently explained to her about how she hasn't mature enough for babies.
Taking her to the library and showing her the gramophone.
I'm Glad he realised that his every word meant something to her.
He is slowly accepting her.

Okay pranab and khushi's closeness. Whenever their moments come, I feel that it should have been Arnav. He is getting a crush on her and I don't want to see Arnav sacrificing.

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
that's perfect...
arnab khushi moments were just beautifully written...
lovd the way their relation ix progressing...
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parnab falling 4 khushi...the story has become  more interesting...
plxxx continue soon...
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thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
The innocence you bring about in this delicate love story is amazing.
Every little action of Khushi and how Arnab reacts to them are beautifully portrayed !!

Purab and Khushi are growing up together and this adolescence curiousty is always a very tricky time...looking forward to see how this topic is now dealt with.


Ps : I know not the 1920'sLOL but u get the essence of the pic !!Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
arnie has handled very well.nice yaar

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:18pm | IP Logged
Nice one
Pranab is falling for khushi. Hope there would be no triangular love story.
Loved it when arnav said that he would wait for the child to grow up to a women.

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:54pm | IP Logged

I don't know Jenny, while I was reading this update my heart was filled with concerns. Arnab understood the sweet little girl and wanted to wait for her to grow up. He is really a gentleman.

 

But by the end of this chapter, I was saying Oh No, Oh No, continuously. I hope Pranab does not cause any problems between Arnab and Khushi. Arnab should not feel he is too old for Khushi or Khushi should not think Pranab is of her age and Arnab is too old for her. I hope nothing of this sort happens.

 

Very well written... Enjoyed reading Arnab and Khushi's interaction... so much warmth and innocence...

 

I am glad you will be able to update frequently now. Can we wish for 2 chapters in a week Day Dreaming? Continue soon.



Edited by pinkly - 13 September 2013 at 8:58pm

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
Oh no the younger one is also falling for khushi that means its not gonna be a smooth ride ahead.

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